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The Rookie Life

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  12:42:29  2 July 2007
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Jakeo
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On forum: 07/01/2007
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The Rookie Life

We start our tale in the middle of the night, in a town on the outskirts of the zone, in Cordon. Karlos Grandite is asleep in his sleeping bag and suddenly wakes up hearing the sound of gunshots.

"Wtf was that!?!?" exclaimed Karlos. "The army is coming to kill us all!! Run for your lives!" shouted someone outside. Karlos had known this day was coming, so he had prepared. He picked up his survival bag, it contained 10 bandages, 3 medical kits, spare shotgun shells for his sawn-off shotgun and 20 bottles of vodka. He heard the screams of friend dieing outside and the constant machine gun fire and a helicopter's whirring.

Karlos ran outside and walked over a pile of corpses and headed for his car, it was a Niva Explorer, a small car that had all its windows and doors intact. Fuel was expensive in the zone but Karlos had found the car and would never part with it. Karlos saw a private run out from a bush naked. "Uhh...Hello army dude?" Karlos was very scared. The private looked at Karlos and screamed, he then ran off toward the army outpost down the road.

Karlos hopped into the Niva finally and started it up and roared off down the road. As he zoomed down the road he realised which way he was heading...the army outpost. "Oh sh*t" Karlos exclaimed. The military posted at the outpost saw a car coming and panicked. The general phoned for reinforcements immediately. Karlos tried to make a u-turn but the steering wheel jammed. He was hurtling toward the gate of the outpost. When suddenly the jeep was thrown into the air and flipped over and over untill landing in a tree.

"Phew close one" Karlos looked around and to his dismay, he was right next to the outpost and 6 soldiers where pointing weapons at him. "Oh sh"t..." was all he could say.

The General watched the soldiers take the prisoner down from the tree and handcuff him. All was going according to plan. "Seargent please go and bring the prisoner to my office, i have to speak to him". "Right away sir" replied the seargent.

Later in the General's Office...

"So Mr...Grandite can i ask you why you came driving towards my outpost and then somehow get stuck in tree?". "Uhh i thought this was a McDonalds" replied Karlos. "Well im afraid its not and you are in big trouble, i can have you killed right here on the spot Stalker. But i am choosing not to, so you will have to do a few jobs for me". Wasnt much choice then Karlos thought. "Well...what kind of jobs are we talking about?" asked Karlos. "Well first of all we need a corrupt commander killed. He's been taking bribes to allow people through the railroad escarpment". The General took a machine gun from the wall and handed it to Karlos.

"That should help you take care of him. Its the MA5 Tactical Assault Rifle, one of the latest rifles, can hit a flea on a dogs back at 50 miles. Now go kill him, and dont try to run away, my soldiers have put a device on your back that has a very poweful explosive in it. Lets say...you wont exists in matter or soul if it goes off..."

Karlos was wondering wtf was going on, he decided to kill the General and be gone. Karlos aimed the gun at the general and blew his head off. He realised the gun was silent, so no one should have heard his shots. Now to escape, first Karlos ripped the explosive device off his back and attached it to the general. He ran outside the office and killed the three officers standing guard. Karlos looked around and saw his Niva had been fixed and refuelled. He jumped in and started the engine and then roared off out of the army base. For the second time that day he had escaped danger.

As Karlos roared off down the road 3 Tactical Assault Helicopters followed the vehicle and launched several missles at the car. Karlos felt the explosions behind him. He quickly turned off the road and headed towards a road he handnt seen ever before. It was overgrown with grass and there were boars everywhere. Suddenly the car was thrown into the air. Karlos looked around and he was in a whirlwind. "Oh crap..." screamed Karlos. The Niva exploded into millions of tiny pieces as did Karlos...

A few hundred metres away a cloaked figure watched Karlos explode through his binoculars. "Excellent, all according to plan then. Only a few more left. Now lets see...the next ones name is...Strelok. A veteran hmm, this one may take more planning." The cloaked figure turned around and walked through a portal and he, and the portal, disappeared.

To be continued...
  13:31:38  30 July 2007
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Pukeman3
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Great story, but one thing I didn't understand is the private coming naked out of a bush? Mehehehe...
  08:26:04  9 December 2007
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SternLC
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LOL!!! Funny. Tongue in cheek like even.
  12:02:09  2 February 2008
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Maiman
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Great story, but one thing I didn't understand is the private coming naked out of a bush? Mehehehe...
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well if i remember correctly, the russians havent always been best equipped in war, remember the whole WW1 problem, not even shoes... or guns for that matter, so i guess they stopped issuing combat jackets, and clothes and send privates out unarmed and completely naked into high radiation battlegrounds... i never really understood russian logic...
  18:33:28  8 May 2008
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flibble
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to weed out the weak one.
  06:13:25  10 May 2008
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BB_Berserk
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---QUOTATION---
Great story, but one thing I didn't understand is the private coming naked out of a bush? Mehehehe...
well if i remember correctly, the russians havent always been best equipped in war, remember the whole WW1 problem, not even shoes... or guns for that matter, so i guess they stopped issuing combat jackets, and clothes and send privates out unarmed and completely naked into high radiation battlegrounds... i never really understood russian logic...
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AHAHAHAA, mate i bloody lolled hahaha.
  09:20:51  10 July 2008
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LuLu
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Write a good

I reprint your article to our forums, good evaluation.
You look forward to the follow-up.


Below are my friends and I translated the article:

这个故事要从一个午夜说起,在Zone的边境警戒线的一个小镇里.卡洛斯·格兰迪特在他的睡袋中睡的正香,突然他听到枪声而醒了过来.

"那是什么鬼声音!?!?" 卡洛斯叫道. "军队正朝我们过来!! 快逃命啊!" 外面有人喊道. 卡洛斯知道这一天总会来的, 所以早已有所准备. 他捡起生存袋,里面有10个绷带, 3个医疗包, 猎枪弹药和他锯短了的猎枪和20瓶伏特加.他听到外面朋友死亡瞬间发出的尖叫,持续发出的机关枪响和直升机的呼喊声.

卡洛斯利用堆起的尸体跑出去并发动他的汽车, 这是一辆Niva Explorer,车门与车窗都完好无损.燃料在Zone中很昂贵,但卡洛斯不愿把车里的燃料取出来卖.卡洛斯看到一个士兵从毫无遮拦的矮树丛中跑了出来. "恩...你好啊,军队小子?" 卡洛斯很紧张.这个士兵看见卡洛斯后大叫了一声并跑向了军队哨卡的方向.

卡洛斯跳进Niva Explorer里,发动引擎并咆哮于公路之上. 当他近距离观察的时候他才发现他所选择的路通向军方的哨站. "哦,可恶!..."卡洛斯叫道. 哨兵看见一辆车冲了过来,将军立刻打电话叫帮手,卡洛斯想玩个特技可惜轮子卡住了. 他向哨卡大门飞驰而去.这时吉普车突然被'旋转'扔到了空中,直到撞到了一棵树才掉下来.
"快结束这一切吧" 卡洛斯沮丧的看了看周围, 他靠着哨岗,6个士兵用枪指着他."哦,可恶!..."他说倒.

将军看着士兵们将犯人从树上弄下来并给他带上了手铐,一切都与计划相同.中士,请将犯人带到我的办公室,我有话对他说."马上照办,长官"中士回答道.

不久之后,在将军的办公室里...

"那么将军...先生可以问问你你是如何驾车穿过了我的哨站却撞到树上去的呢?".. "这位是麦克唐纳斯吗?"卡洛斯回答道. "首先我不害怕那么做,其次你有大麻烦了.我可以现在就杀了你,但我不会那么做,为此你得为我做点事". 卡洛斯认为自己没有什么选择. "看来我别无选择了将军...你有几分工作要交给我?"卡洛斯问道. "第一个任务我们需要一个腐败的指挥官从这个世界上消失.他接受贿赂来让人们通过铁路断桥". 将军从墙上去下机关枪并交给卡洛斯.

"这个玩意儿能帮上你忙---MA5战术攻击来复枪,这是最新款式的来复枪,它能从五十英里外从一只狗身上打死一只跳蚤. "现在去杀了他.还有,你给我记住不许逃跑,因为我的人在你的背上放了一个"小"炸弹.我告诉你:一旦这个东西停止了,那么你也将不复存在,不论精神或是肉体..."

卡洛斯正在疑惑发生什么了,他打算杀了将军然后离开.卡洛斯用枪瞄准了将军的脑袋,他知道这枪很安静,所以不应该有人听到他在射击.行动开始!首先,卡洛斯把他背上的爆炸装置取下来,安置在将军的身上.他跑到外面并干掉了三个站岗的军官.卡洛斯环顾四周并确认了车子的燃料充足.他跳进车子,发动引擎咆哮着离开了军队基地.这已经是一天中他第二次逃离危险.

卡洛斯冲下了车,三架战略武装直升机对着他的小车发射了数枚导弹. 卡洛斯感觉到他身后的爆炸,于是他迅速的趴在路上,同时把头扭向之前没有看到的那边.眼前是簇叶从生的草和三只闲逛的野猪. 突然车子被卷到了空中. 卡洛斯看到了"旋风"变异点. "废物..." Karlos尖叫道.Niva exploded被"旋风"撕成了数百万个碎片......

几百米外一个批斗篷的人影用望远镜看着卡洛斯被炸飞. "太好了, 一切按原计划执行中. 就剩一点就完成了. 现在让我看看下一个目标的名字...史特列洛克. 是个老兵, 这次要制定更多计划了." 披着斗篷的人影穿过了传送门,之后便和传送门一起消失了.

未完待续...
  10:12:48  10 July 2008
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Tejas Stalker
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The Rookie Life

Good Story Jakeo

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