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  14:27:33  11 June 2007
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ComradeLopez
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On forum: 04/16/2007
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Death occurred even to the inanimate on this day...
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I particularly liked this line; and overall a very well writen short story.

The end came rather suddenly, however - I can't help but feel that those last moments with the artifact could have been drawn out; to give the transformation that was taking place more space in which to develop and become real.

But the style was very competent; and not overly verbose or flowery, unlike alot of writing on the internet.
  06:15:46  12 June 2007
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Hellwege
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On forum: 04/02/2007
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nice story kinda creepy at some points overall great story though
  08:55:01  12 June 2007
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Zero-One-Alpha
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On forum: 03/31/2007
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i agree this is quite a good story
  04:17:36  22 June 2007
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Kayne
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On forum: 05/13/2007
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6/10

I didn't really have a good idea of what was going on until the third section, and I couldn't visualize what was happening. An upstairs room in a chapel? what was in it? How did the other soldier get there before him?
Despite the fact that there is only one location in the story it wasn't very well described.
  09:07:11  26 October 2007
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Siro
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On forum: 03/02/2005
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Excellent!
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If I have to delete one more of your goddamn posts with that same one word, I might just hit the "ban" button by accident.
  07:29:36  29 December 2008
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AlaskanKnight
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On forum: 02/20/2008
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Bumped because I thought all ya'll might like reading this.

Bumped because I thought all ya'll might like reading this.

Ahahahaha

The mad bumper strikes again.
 
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