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  11:46:53  25 March 2009
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BB_Berserk
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Awesome story! I liked the loop at the end
  21:49:25  16 March 2009
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HoboRebellion
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I don't think they like the Military, almost all of them are former soldiers but the Military sent them into an impossible mission and didn't care.

They hated the Military for that, the first survivors in those missions formed the Duty faction.

Also, if you talk to the shooting range guy in Clear Sky, he'll say that their leader (Forgot the name) hates the Military to the guts.

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Keep writing.

So it's a Cordon outpost attack?
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I realize that part, but the fact is that Duty has ties to the military that it isnt willing to loose (this is shown as Duty is still neutral with the military in SHoC). Considering this, I doubt they would ever make an open raid against them.

However, atm it seems like Petrenko met up with loners, not Duty, so thats a whole different story.
  19:48:35  16 March 2009
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Eager Amphibion
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Glad you liked it, but that was only one part of a trilogy. Petreno will join the Loners and find out why the military assassinated him.
  16:31:20  16 March 2009
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I don't think they like the Military, almost all of them are former soldiers but the Military sent them into an impossible mission and didn't care.

They hated the Military for that, the first survivors in those missions formed the Duty faction.

Also, if you talk to the shooting range guy in Clear Sky, he'll say that their leader (Forgot the name) hates the Military to the guts.

EDIT

Keep writing.

So it's a Cordon outpost attack?
  05:13:12  16 March 2009
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HoboRebellion
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Great story

Too bad it ended, but it was a good story, and I liek how it tells the backstory of an existing character.



Only thing I'd point out is that most Duty members wereon reasonably good terms with the army, and wouldn't seek direct revenge, but who knows.

Great read
  03:13:59  16 March 2009
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Eager Amphibion
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A Soldiers Story

*Sorry it took long, I have been playing FEAR 2, great game btw*


Epilogue


Petrenko slowly opened his eyes, he grabbed his painful side and looked around, he was piled by dozens of dead bodies, from recently dead, to rotting. Petrenko stood up and limped away from the dead, not caring that it was probably full of disease and radiation.
"H-Hello?!" Petrenko cried into the barren field of death.
No one answered, only the eyes of the dead stared back.

Petrenko limped for what seemed like hours, and he had not seen anything but grass and dead. Why was he here anyway? He kept thinking to himself. At last, after a long hike over the dead, he came to a small camp. Petrenko snuck inside and looked around the corner, several Loners sat around a fire. Petrenko came around the corner and gasped, just before falling down on the dirt.


Petrenko awoke on a bed, he looked around and saw a man in the corner, he approached Petrenko.
"Well, I see you were also betrayed....Well, we're going to get payback. Today."
  08:52:03  13 March 2009
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Oh noes!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2nded.


EDIT This can't be the end, Duty should go and save him.
  02:18:06  13 March 2009
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Oh noes!!!!!!!!!!!!
  01:54:37  13 March 2009
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Eager Amphibion
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A Soldiers Story

Chapter 11


Petrenko rose his weapon and looked in the direction of the noise. A small human sat in a corner, sobbing and growling, tearing something apart and putting the shiny, wet matter into his mouth. He stopped moving as Petrenkos light moved over the matter....Bloody flesh. The man looked up slowly and looked at Petrenko....Except it was far from human. The gas mask was hanging around its neck, and the military combat armour was torn to pieces.....But the eyes.....Petrenko had seen the eyes before. Hrskiy.
"Jesus Christ...." Petrenko said to himself, looking at the creature which was once Hrskiy, it roared and dove into a hole, taking a large chunk of meat with it.
Petrenko felt the hair raise on the back of his neck. He ran up the stairs and kicked the door open, placing some C4 on the way out. He set the timer for twenty seconds before slamming the door shut and running for the nearby outpost which lead to Rostok. He hid behind a wall as a large explosion shook the garbage, and rubble into the air. Petrenko rose and took his hood off before approaching the building. On the other side the basement was destroyed, all that remained was a pile of rubble, and a hand twitching from a small crack. He rose his MP5 and fired at the twitching hand, forcing it back into the rubble.
"I'm sorry..." Petrenko said.

5 Hours Later, 9:59 PM

With the darkness came rain. It poured down on the zone like a mortar strike.
Petrenko sat in a trailer by the outpost to Rostok, keeping his MP5 aimed at the entrance. He had been awake for hours, without water or food, all the MREs were on Hrskiy. Petrenko felt tired, his vision grew blurry as he fell asleep in the trailer.

7:05 AM

Petrenko woke to a light mist and dusty sun rays shining through the windows. He stood up and stretched before moving outside, outside he tossed his ghillie suit to the ground and tightened his combat armour before pulling on his gas mask. He moved Southward and passed several trash heaps before seeing a large detatchment of soldiers by the vehicle scrap yard.
"Hey! Over here!" Petrenko yelled, waving his hand above his head.
He saw several soldiers look over and call for their team leader, Petrenko couldn't hear what he said put he pointed towards him.
"Fire!" The Team leader yelled.
The team opened fire on Petrenko. He dove behind a large tractor and yelled, "Hold your god damn fire!" But the team wouldn't stop firing on him. Petrenko stood up and crouch ran behind the nearest trash heap.
"What the hell!?" Petrenko yelled, running from the Trash Heap to the large hangar in the center of the Garbage. He ran inside and hid under a large crane. Sure enough a squad of soldiers ran in....Searching for him.
"Take the left flank, I'll take the right. Yaram, stay here."
Petrenko pulled out his knife as the other two soldiers dissapeared behind him. He crawled out and behind the soldier, he rose the knife and slit the mans throat, silently lying him on the ground and sprinting out of the Hangar towards Rostok. He heard the soldiers yelling and firing in Petrenkos general direction. Petrenko thought he was home free as he reached the outpost to Rostok....Only to be ambushed by a squad of soldiers. They opened fire and shot Petrenko down, he fell to the earth and looked at his wounds. They bled, and bled. He was becoming cold.
The squad leader looked over Petrenko, "Target down." He said under his gas mask, "Returning to base. Over and out."
Petrenko coughed before fading into darkness.
  01:43:58  13 March 2009
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The man eating apple pie is in the basement!! Jk.

I think it's the controller, or a bloodsucker.
 
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