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  19:29:51  29 October 2008
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Yeah Yeah sure you can cook my pie while i try to figure out how the hell can i get a good mark in Physics without studying alot (i mean i never study )
  19:50:36  29 October 2008
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---QUOTATION---
Yeah Yeah sure you can cook my pie while i try to figure out how the hell can i get a good mark in Physics without studying alot (i mean i never study )
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I never study and I always pass
  23:10:06  29 October 2008
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yep it worked for me too but now in 7th grade stuff gets stupider by the second I mean so much crap we are studying I mean come on any normal person doesn't study 14 different classes (geography , History , Biology , Maths , Albanian , Macedonian , English , French , Chemistry , Physics , and a ton of other crap like about the KKK which is located about 3 milion km away )

Bye bye gotta sleep
  04:01:54  30 October 2008
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---QUOTATION---
yep it worked for me too but now in 7th grade stuff gets stupider by the second I mean so much crap we are studying I mean come on any normal person doesn't study 14 different classes (geography , History , Biology , Maths , Albanian , Macedonian , English , French , Chemistry , Physics , and a ton of other crap like about the KKK which is located about 3 milion km away )

Bye bye gotta sleep
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sad news children, viruses have stopped me from making stories, you will have to wait until we fix it, I just hope we dont have to system recover...
  07:52:00  30 October 2008
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Idea

ok I had a nice little idea pop up in my head, I was thinking of making kind of mini-stories for some of the major characters, most of the characters are really missing that background and I was thinking it may be a good idea to expand on them, if you think this is a good idea give me the thumbs up or give me a hell yeah!
  12:21:27  2 November 2008
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Lakota Part 26 - The Battle Begins

(ok this was harder to do than normal, so heres the next part, ENJOY)
---Lakota---
They walked on, they shared each others stories as they walked, nothing happened so they really had nothing better to do, Scar's tale was a fascinating one there was a large gap apparently where he couldn't remember anything for almost a year but he explained that he was trapped in some part of the Chernobyl Power plant where the psy emissions almost fried his brain, the only reason he survived was because of another mercenary, one of the casualties of the battle apparently.
“whats going on?” Dime asked
They looked up to see a convoy of trucks driving towards the bar, they seemed to be carrying a large supply of weaponry, more than anyone needed, Lakota thought to himself.
“I dunno” said Lakota “we should hurry up, its getting late”
They headed through, they sat and watched as a large convoy of stalkers drove though the city, they were quickly led out of the city.
“this isn't good” said a voice behind them, it was Snitch, the mysterious man who spends most of the time in the bar trading information.
“what isn't” Granite asked
“the war has begun, apparently some Freedomers disobeyed an order and shot at a couple Dutyers, sparked conflict, and now that the major powers are at total war stalkers around the world are getting hired, some factions are even drafting them right off the streets” he said grimly
“so where does that leave us” Granite asked
“fucked” said Snitch “if you have an allegiance with another faction, and the same if you aren't”
“you get shot or you get drafted” Dime replied
“just hope you aren't their when they come for recruits” Snitch said
The crowd was dispersing, Lakota and Dime headed for the Headquarters, they found Fanatic looking at a map of the world, there were lines and arrows drawn all over it.
“you made it and you brought him back too, how many survived” Fanatic asked
“no one sir” Dime replied “though we almost croaked until we got rescued”
“by who?” Fanatic asked
“Scar” Dime replied
“oh.. him” Fanatic replied
“what do you know about him?” Lakota asked
“a lot, I carried that crazy fuck out of the damn power plant as it exploded” Fanatic replied “I wish I was carrying someone a lot more helpful, he to this day hasn't done anyone any good”
“well at least he helped this reach you” Dime said placing the crate on a table
Fanatic opened it to see a large crystal shard, a lot like the one he recovered for Badger.
“thank you, you have done well” Fanatic replied “now about that offer Lakota”
“when do I start” said Lakota
“well, we need some patrol work, and hopefully this whole war idea will pass” Fanatic replied “if not then we will remain neutral”
“right sir” Lakota replied, he was a little nervous now, war meant that the Ronin would march, it seems they would have to march without him.
They left the Headquarters, Lakota's PDA now marked him as a member of the Stalkers.
“Now you are stuck with them” Dime said laughing “prepare for morning wakeup drills”
“what about you?” Lakota asked
“I joined the Diggers, we go and collect objects, kinda like bandits but less usage of knives and interrogation” Dime answered
“don't forget being taken down by a man with a hunting rifle” Lakota said
“right before he helps me get on my toes and patches me up” Dime replied laughing
“don't rely on that too much, chances are not everyone is that kind” Lakota replied
They turned the corner as a fist hit him in the face dropping him to the floor, Dime went to grab his weapon and was thrown back against the wall, Lakota felt a blade against his chest, he looked up to see a familiar face staring down at him.
“hey Ra, why does everyone I know have to point a weapon at me” Lakota asked
“your too kind and trusting for your own good Lakota” Ra replied laughing as he helped him to his feet “sorry about that” he added to Dime
“don't mention it” Dime said
“so how have you been, havent seen you since Greece” Lakota said half laughing
“well, I went off, explored India and let me tell you there are crazy shit in India” Ra said “I spent some time exploring Poland and then found myself in the Ukraine, thats when you popped up on my PDA, how about you”
“Well my plane to France got hijacked and I crashed in Japan, spent some time there before moving to the Ukraine, and the time I spent here has been hell” Lakota said
“well, thats to be expected, a few years ago this place was known as hell, now the world is” Ra said
“really? I thought it was always the capitol of the country” Lakota said
“which country?” Ra asked
“any country, whichever one has the most Senators and Lawyers” Lakota said laughing, they headed for their apartments, Lakota fell asleep, Scout licking his face.

The next morning he donned the new suit he was given, it was a modified version of the Sunrise suit but with the colors and symbols of the Stalkers, he also had an upgraded night vision and a filtration system that changed his voice, he just had to spend the next few minutes after putting it on doing Darth Vader impressions before he went for his patrols. Patrols were long and dull, after his five hour patrol he got the rest of the day to himself, well until his next five hour patrol hit, after ten or so hours, so he spent those times at the bar or with his friends, he did fairly well for the first few weeks, it seems like he was meant to help people and by guarding and guiding the people in Rostok, he seemed to be doing just that.

---Two Months Later---
Night Patrols always had an almost boring nature to them, the only reason they gave their guards better night vision was to make sure it was possible to make night patrols even more dull, Lakota stared off, a couple other guards near him, they chatted silently as they ate their meals, watching the fields outside of Rostok, after spending a month and a half patroling and the rest of the time helping in West Rostok they managed to secure it, the mutants were pushed out and the perimeter was set up, East Rostok construction was complete and the Western area was under construction, that meant that Patrols were longer and night time had more to watch, he stared off, in about ten minutes they would move to the next guard post. He didn't know what happened until it was too late, a large explosion knocked him off his chair and he heard the clatter of Tupperware and the sound of footsteps, he looked around but all he could see was blood, he heard shouts and felt himself get dragged along the perimeter wall, he heard machine gun fire and the ricochets of bullets, he was in pain, there was another explosion and the pain ceased...
  12:50:19  2 November 2008
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Now it's better me thinks the new world order are behind this and not the Red Menace
  13:08:17  2 November 2008
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Lakota Part 27 - Urban Frenzy

(Ha ha heres the next part)
---Lakota---
There was a painful clunk and that peacefulness was silenced by endless pain, Lakota opened his eyes , he quickly pulled off his mask, he looked around to see fires and explosions, the fighting had finally started, he quickly looked for his gun, he pulled out the Mateba Autorevolvers and looked around, he heard a lot of chatter on the PDA.
“AND WHERE THE HELL IS LAKOTA” said a gruff voice
“right here Madcap” Lakota said “whats our status”
“bad guys storming the north and east gate” Madcap said, head to the nearest
“this is Fireball, I am reporting a tank at the north gate” said a youthful voice
“Fireball this is Scorcher, I see it, I already have the RPGs ready” said a Scorchers stern voice
“Where the hell is Oddball?” Madcap asked
“hes getting his weapons” Fireball replied
“he already was seen with a bloody G36 at his guardpost” Madcap said
“thats not what he classifies as a weapon” Fireball said laughing
Lakota ran to the north gate, he saw a large amount of troops, he saw his fellows set up behind sandbags.
“EAT LEAD MOTHER FUCKERS!!!” said the unusual voice of Oddball
The stalkers turned around, Lakota had to look himself, and so did all the enemies. They all stopped what they were doing, Oddball had come out with what looked like an exoskeleton with several layers of Kevlar and Steelplating randomly placed around it, he was also carrying two drum barreled Tommy Guns, Lakota just stared in disbelief at the sight, he quickly returned to his senses as Oddball opened fire at the enemies, the fighting restarted, Lakota fired his Matebas as enemies surrounded, he fired off blindly at the enemies, he saw the tank speeding towards him, he heard his Matebas click and he threw them aside, he jumped through a nearby window and jumped out the other window, he turned to see some men dropping down from the walls, they were not like the others.
“what is Oddball doing this time” Madcap said in response to the hundreds of what the fucks that filled the radios.
“he is wearing what looks like a tank and is shooting them with prehistoric guns” Fireball replied laughing
“I guess we shouldn't expect anything else from him, it took the enemy by surprise” Scorcher said “he distracted the tank long enough for us to fire the RPGs”
“this is Long Shot” said Long Shot “sorry to use your channels but I got an excellent shot from where I am”
“welcome to the squad Long Shot” said Madcap “take the shot if its good”
Lakota stared at these intruders, he was unarmed, other than his long knife he kept in his sleeve. They walked slowly almost limping, they walked right up to him, some were mumbling.
“who are you?” Lakota asked
“the shaaaaards” the leader moaned, he grabbed Lakota by the neck, Lakota just noticed he was in an Exoskeleton, he could feel his bones crunching together. A shotgun blast hit him in the side of the head, the man dropped Lakota, he turned towards his attacker.
“fuck you” Odysseus said firing off the rest of his shots, he then began to reload, the men raised their light machineguns “FUCK” and with that Odysseus dived behind a dumpster, Lakota took this distraction to stab the leader in the eye with his long knife, the attack would normally kill an enemy but this one turned and punched him in the chest, he flew into a dumpster, he felt as if all his bones had shattered. He heard shouting and gunfire, Lakota noticed a pistol lying in the dumpster, there were a few shots in it, the murder weapon that he was searching for a few days ago, he grabbed it and got up, he fired off at the attackers, one of them fired his pistol, it flew straight through Lakota's visor, he fell backwards, blood all over his visor, he collapsed in a heap and felt no more...
  13:45:14  2 November 2008
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Lakota Part 28 - Strawberry Fields Forever

---Odysseus---
He saw the shot go straight through Lakota's head, blood sprayed as he collapsed.
“NOOOO” he screamed, he turned and fired off his rounds, he dived behind another dumpster, he saw several stalkers run out of a nearby building, they were quickly mowed down by the attackers, he saw one of them dropped a blade, a falchion, in these times people resorted to any weapon they can think of. Odysseus dived towards the blade, he grabbed it and swung up, he chopped the arm right off one of them.
“FUCK YOU” he screamed as he swung the sharp blade through the group, blood and limbs flying as they tried to resist.

---Lakota---
{Let me take you down, 'cause I'm going to Strawberry Fields.}
{Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.}
{Strawberry Fields forever.}
Lakota was in a bright place, so bright he couldnt make out anything but himself, he heard the song.
“fuck if this is heaven the Church really has it wrong” Lakota said to himself “then again if this is hell its not too bad”
{Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see.}
{It's getting hard to be someone but it all works out.}
{It doesn't matter much to me.}
A shape emerged from the blinding light.
“hello son” said the voice
“dad?” Lakota said, his father died years ago
“yes” said the voice
“where am I” Lakota asked, he felt like a child again, that day when his father didn't return.
{Let me take you down, 'cause I'm going to Strawberry Fields.}
{Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.}
{Strawberry Fields forever.}
“you are in a place before beyond” he said “I am proud of you and what you have done with your life”
“I never thought you ever cared about my choices” Lakota said
{No one I think is in my tree, I mean it must be high or low.}
{That is you can't you know tune in but it's all right.}
{That is I think it's not too bad.}
“I always did, and this is the most important part of your life” he replied
“but, I just... died” Lakota said
{Let me take you down, 'cause I'm going to Strawberry Fields.}
{Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.}
{Strawberry Fields forever. }
“you did, and I am proud you aren't bothered too much about it” he replied
“but, I just don't know why we are talking” Lakota said
{Always no sometimes think it's me, but you know I know when it's a dream.}
{I think, er No, I mean, er Yes but it's all wrong.}
{That is I think I disagree.}
“you died, but there is more to your story, it will go on” he said “you will face a decision unlike anything you have ever been faced with”
“what decision?” Lakota asked
{Let me take you down, 'cause I'm going to Strawberry Fields.}
{Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.}
{Strawberry Fields forever.}
{Strawberry Fields forever.}
{Strawberry Fields forever.}
“I cannot tell you” he said “but its time for you to wake up, your story is not over, you are needed at the moment, we will see each other again”
“but dad what...” Lakota began but he felt a hand grab his heart and pull, he found himself in the alley, he lifted himself up, he saw Odysseus staring at a pile of bodies, one of the attackers was behind him, missing an arm and aiming a pistol at Odysseus's head, Lakota fired off his clip into the the man, who fell over onto the ground.
“Lakota? I.. wha... You were dead?” Odysseus stammered
“yeah but I am not dead enough” Lakota replied, he climbed out of the dumpster and dropped the pistol, he replaced it with a colt 1911 one of the attackers was carrying “nice job”
“what you think I wasn't paying attention all those months in Japan?” said Odyseus laughing
They walked out of the alley to find a bloody mess by the gates, the battle seemed to be over and the medics were running through the streets.
“you should get that check out” Odysseus said
“what?” Lakota asked
“the big fucking bullet hole in your head, the one that should have killed you” Odysseus replied
“this is Madcap, gunshots heard in the Headquarters” Madcap said through the radio
“lets go” Lakota said running for the Headquarters.
They ran down the steps to find a pile of bodies, blood all over the wall, Lakota saw Fanatic up against the wall.
“sir you okay?” Lakota asked him
“I'm fine, they took the bloody shards, damned Monolith bastards” Fanatic shouted
“Odysseus, got any bandages?” Lakota asked
“yeah I got some” he replied, he quickly pulled them out
“you seem to need them yourself” Fanatic said pointing to the bullet hole
“I'm fine, now its the Monolith you say?” Lakota asked
“these ones were, they and the attackers weren't the same clans though” Fanatic said coughing up some blood
“I fought about a dozen of them a few minutes ago” Lakota said
“yeah before you got fucking killed” Odysseus replied
“what?” Fanatic asked completely confused
“he got shot straight in the head, the bullet went straight through and he collapsed, dead” Odysseus said bandaging Fanatic's wounds “and then he got up a few minutes later and hasn't said anything about it”
“yeah and I don't plan to” Lakota replied “hurry up we have to see to the damage”
A few hours passed, they helped Fanatic around the city, it was badly damaged, apparently the enemy used artillery, they reviewed the dead, Madcap spent most of the time informing him about the attackers.
“red and gold armor, many spoke Russian” Madcap said “well who doesn't these days”
“Red Flag” Fanatic said “I thought we killed those scumbags”
“not dead enough sir” Madcap replied
They patched each other up, to everyones surprise and confusion the bullet had gone straight through his head but it didn't harm anything inside, it was impossible to do but it had somehow managed.
Guards were posted everywhere afterwards, and after a five hour shift he was ordered to return home, he fought enough already and managed to argue another five hours but they had enough now, he went home and patted Scout on the head, his father gave him that dog, he laid down in his bed, placing the Matebas he recovered on a chair beside it, he thought of what had happened, he heard the song in his head, he never really spent much time listening to the Beatles, why the hell was it playing then...
  13:47:36  2 November 2008
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Heh took me forever to come up with the song for the last part, I searched and I searched, I checked through Beatles songs because I got a stroke of inspiration, for some reason I kept saying "Beatles is the answer" and as I was looking through it I almost decided on another song (which probably wouldnt have turned out as good ) when I noticed Strawberry Fields Forever, I checked it and in the comments I saw a comment that sealed the deal with this one. Anyways, I hope you enjoyed so far!
 
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