Yes, it will be a while before i get the next part done. Ive been very busy and am still busy. But thanks, yes they are green, that was the whole point when i started. If i wrote about a bunch of teens going into the zone and Pwning everything that would be a bad and unrealistic story and noone would like it.
Yea, im probably not going to continue this story. I'm no longer in the class where i had so much free time to write it in school, and two of my friends died in a car accident, one of them sat next to me in that class. I remember one time while writing this i turned to him and randomly asked "Should they be attacked or not attacked?" he just sat there confused and said "Not attacked?" so thats what i went with (It was going to be the part in the gabage where Vadik checked the body of the Stalker in the morning whether he would be attacked by the blood sucker or not)