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  16:41:26  18 January 2010
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Horrors Of The Zone 2

Horrors Of The Zone 2
Chapter 1

Bug woke up after two hours. The monolith stone was still there. The monolith had shown Simka what he Wanted to see, and what he wanted to think. Simka was nowhere to be seen. Bug could hear the gunfire from in the building. The battle still continued. Then, a Duty patrol entered the Room.“You there, Stalker!” a Dutier yelled. Bug had a Terrible headache,
and he was very thirsty. He saw the duty patrol, but he hadn't quite come to
his senses yet. Just as the Duty patrol rushed to help Bug, a giant emission
occurred, Killing all that were in Pripyat and the Power plant. Except a few......


The bar was filled with laughter and joy. The stalkers were enjoying the fact that the zone had gone quite weaker over the past few days.
Gary stood in a dark corner of the bar, where most people couldn't even see him. He had ordered three vodka bottles. He used it to “think” things through. He took a seat near some other stalkers. They were all rookies,
and you could see the smiles on their faces. One of the rookies bragged about when he had killed three snorks alone, and got out without a scratch.
“You think that's something? Wow, you must be one of the greenest rookies I've ever seen.” Gary interrupted their talk. “uhh excuse me, but just who the hell are you?” the rookie said cocky. “now hows that a way
to treat a guy that have been in the zone longer than you” Gary replied.
“well, you didn't answer my question.” the rookie said now, with a lowered
voice. “Ahh, that's the question, you see I got many names. But, that is without importance” Gary said. He then continued. “I am the master of junk, the collector of trash, now, these names might not be so glorious, but they are right.” the rookie then looked at him, and said “Ha! And why should I listen to a guy like you then” he said while he laughed. Just as Gary was about to continue, a mysterious man entered. He wore a Long coat, covering his armor. A SVD was holstered at his back. He briefly looked at Gary, then within a second looked away again. Gary wondered who he could be. At the brief moment that they saw each other, something came up in his memory. He had seen him before, a while ago. Maybe it was someone he owe a dept to, or just a normal stalker. No, he HAD seen him around before, he had just forgot who he was. “Hello!” the rookie shouted. They had tried to ask what Gary's name was, but he had been to busy remembering who that stalker was. “oh yes, You can call me, Bug”
Gary said.

end of chapter 1
the story lives one!
  16:59:42  18 January 2010
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that is very cool mate. You have impressed me more than the first horrors of the zone
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that is very cool mate. You have impressed me more than the first horrors of the zone
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thanks mate hey by the way, did bug ever join UFOTZ?
  17:27:25  18 January 2010
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nope,he just got friends with them. and seeing UFOTZ is just a group of loyal stalkers now,I highly doubt he will.
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nope,he just got friends with them. and seeing UFOTZ is just a group of loyal stalkers now,I highly doubt he will.
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okay, gotya
  17:37:46  18 January 2010
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maybe he will,who knows
  17:39:23  18 January 2010
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okay hehe. i was also wandering what to do with the UFOTZ, provided that only few of the faction is still alive.
  18:20:57  18 January 2010
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CHAPTER 2


“Wow, have you been to Pripyat?” the rookie said, as like he didn't
believe it. “yeah, its true alright” Bug said. He liked when rookies like these guys was in awe of his achievements. “well guys, I am off. Gotta catch up with a guy I know.” he then moved over to the mysterious stalker.
He could see that the stalker had painted flames that had the color like blood on the SVD. The armor was like the ones Spetznas soldiers were carrying. the stalker had hardened several spots on the armor with Kevlar
plates. He didn't wore any helmet though. He had a gas-mask covering the lower part of his face, and a thin rain-coat like hood that was painted black and white like the rest of his armor. Although, dirt and mud was blurring the colors of his armor and his hood. He wore a black,long trench coat , that also were quite dirty. As he took a seat beside the stalker, the stalker looked away. As he looked away, Bug saw a badge on his arm. It was a logo of a, artifact standing in an green field, in other words, the UFOTZ logo. “So, what brings you here, Rustik?” Bug asked with a low voice.
There had gone about half a year, since the Brain scorcher had been deactivated. As soon as the great emission occurred, a Psi field appeared all over the road to Pripyat. Just like before the brain scorcher was deactivated. “uhh.. not much. I am just so tired. I've been trying to find
some members of the faction. But either are they dead, or just simply
vanished, like Simka.” Rustik explained, with a gloomy and a low voice.
“any luck finding them?” Bug then asked, hoping to receive good news.
“I found Stryglok. Well, he wasn't quite at his best. He moaned, and when he saw me, he just walked in circles. He were trying to say my name, but the Scorcher had completely fried his brain. I let him out of his misery, and shot him.” Rustik said, with an empty look in his eyes. Rustik had known
Stryglok for many years, and they were close friends. “that's sad to hear.”
Bug quietly replied. Bug felt like his heart became heavy and sharp.
He remembered Simka. He was his only friend back then. Now, he was gone. Everything had changed since then. Bug had gone on solo-missions
from the Barman or the Scientists. The zone got weaker for every day that had passed. Maybe Simka's effort to destroy the zone had taken its toll on the Monolith stone. Less mutants were appearing, less stalkers were gone missing too. The mutant floods at Agroprom had decreased, so it was much more safe to wander there now. It was getting dark outside, and you
could hear the howls of the dogs. “well, I have to go. See you soon”
Rustik said, as he left the bar.
  19:30:11  18 January 2010
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mate,I have to say something. Can you tell me when you are going to write something? Because if we write this without knowing what did other do,timeline contradicts. And I hate contradiction.
  19:33:49  18 January 2010
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mate,I have to say something. Can you tell me when you are going to write something? Because if we write this without knowing what did other do,timeline contradicts. And I hate contradiction.
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yeah, me too mate. i am writing a chapter for another guy right now, i cant say who he is but you will know in time
  20:27:21  18 January 2010
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when will the next chapter come?
  20:53:22  18 January 2010
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mate? I cannot wait when will the next chapter come?
  21:47:52  18 January 2010
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dont worry mate, i am working on it

i was watching a movie so i couldn't write. but i will begin now
  21:57:39  18 January 2010
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CHAPTER 3
A LONG SLEEP


Where was he? And more importantly, WHO was he? He couldn't remember. He found himself in a basement of some sorts. He was thirsty and hungry, and he couldn't remember anything. There was a foul stench, smelling of rotten corpses and sewer water. The only thing he remembered, was that he was in the zone. In other words, Hell. He turned on his Flash light, to see where he was. Now, he found out why the basement had smelled so much. In the other side of the basement, a stack of corpses were stacked up. Both dead stalkers and rotten old corpses. He quickly got out of the basement, and ran outside. He Breathed heavily, getting the foul smell out of his nose.
First then, he looked at were he was. According to his PDA, he was in a village far from Rostok.
He wore a Battered and dirty PSZ-9Md Universal Protection suit, but the colors were black and white. His weapon was an AK/74 with a mounted scope. There was written “Dead-eye” on it. As soon as he saw the text, he got some weird flashbacks. He only remembered looking at a wooden cross, where there was written “Dead eye-Vanuska Uklavon” on it. The AK/74 was also tied to the
center of the cross. What could this mean? Who was Vanuska Uklavon? He couldn't remember.
Suddenly it came across him, that someone was watching him. A Large blood sucker jumped right
in front of him, Roaring at him. He was petrified for a brief moment, but just as it lashed out for
him with its one arm, he ducked and rolled away. The blood sucker was confused for a moment,
and he used that moment to pull out his AK/74. The blood sucker was quick, it turned around
and reached out for the gun. It ripped the gun out of his hand, and jumped forward. It knocked
him down without warning. Now, the blood sucker was sitting on him. It threw its head back, as it made
a another roar. He took the time to punch the blood sucker in the throat, knocking it off him.
He quickly got on his legs, and picked up the AK/74 . Again, the blood sucker was quick. It ripped
the gun out of his hands once again. With a big kick to the chest, he got knocked down. He quickly got up again, as he realized that the blood sucker was playing with him. The blood sucker made a giant leap through the air, but fortunately, he rolled away again. While the blood sucker was turning around, the stalker quickly placed his boot right in the blood suckers face. It was a risky move, but it bought him time. While the blood sucker was getting on its feet, the stalker then took his AK/74
and shot the blood sucker. There it was, a giant beast, just lying dead on the ground. He came to his senses, and he started walking again.
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I wonder who is he?
  22:28:53  18 January 2010
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I wonder who is he?
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hehehehe
  22:43:41  18 January 2010
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CHAPTER 4
Memories



on the way to Rostok, he met a Duty patrol. “Hey there!” he shouted eagerly. He hadn't seen any stalkers around for a long time now. “hey there stalker, why are you out here?” the lead Dutier
asked. “i don't know exactly, I just woke up in a basement about nine kilometers away from here. I think it was a blood sucker lair” the Stalker replied. He followed the duty patrol, they were heading to the bar. On the way to the bar, they met a group of four rookie stalkers heading to Agroprom.
One of the stalkers were having trouble walking. “whats wrong with your leg?” the stalker asked.
The rookie then said “some stupid son of a bitch broke my leg. We were in a fight. If you see the bastard, tell me where he is.” the lone stalker continued to the bar. He heard gunfire a couple of kilometers away. It must have been that rookie group, the stalker said to himself. When he arrived at the bar, people looked at him like he was some strange creature. Most of the people looked at the armor, like if it was a rare artifact. He went to the bar, to catch up with the locals. His PDA said
that it was the December the 21st as the stalker remembered it, it was the July the 14th. He got rather
confused, and asked another stalker what date it was. The answer; December the 21st. He didn't believe it. What had he done for half a year? He couldn't have been been sleeping for half a year.
He would have died by hunger by that. Oddly, the PDA didn't show his name, or any of his contacts.
There was simply no way to find out who he were. He didn't exist. What got him thinking though, was that he wore a armor in a faction named UFOTZ's Colors. Maybe he was a member of the faction. He ordered a vodka, and he drank it while he thought about who he was. He didn't ask around in the bar if that someone could recognize him, but that would only make him seem crazy.
The stalkers around him still looked at him, as the colors of the armor were something long forgotten, something you don't speak of anymore. He hurled the rest of the strong vodka down,
and just sat and took a brief moments peace.
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MINI CHAPTER
Recognition



as the stalker just sat down, and thought about things , a stalker entered. He wore a Hoodie,
with exosuit parts on it. He sat down beside him, and ordered two vodkas. Something was
hot in his backpack, and he pulled it out. It was a battered but still usable modified G36 automatic rifle. The stalker beside him, had first noticed weapon now, and shouted out loud “SIMKA!”

To be continued..........
  18:06:18  19 January 2010
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CHAPTER 5
A NEW ADVENTURE

They sat all night, drinking vodka and telling each other what they had been doing in the past. Rustik told tales about his UFOTZ days, and what he have been doing over the past months.
Bug told Simka that he had went to Agroprom, and how he broke a rookies leg. Simka couldn't
remember a thing. He had been gone for half a year now. Like he just didn't exist, until he was
summoned by the zone once again. “what happened to UFOTZ?” Simka asked curiously. Seconds
passed and then Rustik said “i don't know. I guess we just got separated at Pripyat. Stryglok was
Zombified, Rayoji had been shot in Pripyat, General Puscka has vanished just like you.” replied Rustik. They traveled back to the bar, where they rested. “wake up man, its time to go hunting artifacts.” Bug said, as he tried to get Simka on his feet. Simka mumbled something, and then finally got on his feet. “Where are we going, and where is Rustik?” Simka asked, with a tired, low
voice. “We are going to the Garbage to find some artifacts. Rustik left early this morning, he was heading to red forest.” Bug replied, with a happy and eager voice. They arrived at the garbage,
continuing down the road. They heard gunfire close by, and they threw themselves to the ground.
A squad of three Exosuit mercenarys ran down a hill beside them, and sometimes stopped to shoot .
A huge squad of bandits were approaching, and they took cover. Simka and Bug quickly took cover at a bus stop, where the mercs also took cover. They said nothing to each other, but just shot at the bandits. The bandits died one by one, but there was still many left. Three bandits were trying to flank the bus stop, and Bug saw that. He shot all the bandits, killing them all three. One of the mercs Threw a grenade, killing several bandits. “What should we do, Commander?” another merc asked. “Keep firing!” the lead merc replied with a tough voice. Now, a grenade landed right beside Bug. “WATCH OUT BUG!” Simka shouted. He quickly kicked the grenade away, exploding eight
meters away from the bus stop. “What the hell do these guys want?” Simka asked loudly, trying to
get some sense out of this situation. He didn't get any answer though. One of the mercenarys got shot, leaving his lifeless body on the ground. “AH SHIT!” the lead merc yelled. There was something familiar about that voice, Simka thought. “RETREAT TO THE DEPOT!” the lead merc yelled. The mercenarys quickly ran away, with Bug and Simka right in their heels. Bullets were whistling in the air, while they were cutting themselves through the air. They had to stop and take cover, or else they would die. The Bandits were following them, and they were hellbent on killing the mercenarys. Simka and Bug both took aim, and fired controlled bursts at the bandits, killing
five bandits. Now, the lead mercenary emptied his clip on the bandits, killing dozens of them with his Tunder-S14. Simka saw a signature mark on the Tunder -S14. They killed the rest of the bandits,
and gathered up. Only the lead mercenary had survived. “Thanks for your help, stalkers. Without
you I would have been dead by now. Here, take this artifact. Its very valuable, that's what the bandits were out for.” the merc said. Yes, there was definitely something about his voice. He pulled
of his helmet, and Simka saw who it was. “RAYOJI?” Bug yelled. “hehe, yes its me.” Rayoji replied. “i thought you died at Pripyat!, how did you survive?” Simka asked. “Well, so did I. But I woke up in a cabin at red forest, some guy named forester had saved my life.” Rayoji said. “Well, how did you become a mercenary?” Bug curiously asked. “i saw the ruins at the base, and I knew that UFOTZ was no more. So, I met a couple of guys who hired me.” Rayoji explained.
“i would like to see the look on Rustik's face, when I tell him that you are alive” Simka said, while laughing.
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next chapter?
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next chapter?
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working on it. my computer is quite buggy right now, so it crashes sometimes when i wright. but i will do my best.
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good story seems like more than one idea going on but that could just be me good story anyways
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good story seems like more than one idea going on but that could just be me good story anyways
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thanks for the comment
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CHAPTER 6
RECONSTRUCTION

Simka,Rustik, and Rayoji were sitting in the bar, while Bug went out on a mission.
They were talking about how to recreate UFOTZ, which was very unlikely. “Damn it! Those fucking bandits have looted our base!” Rustik said, for the third time. He was frustrated over the whole destruction of the UFOTZ, he had actually not even gone on his occasionally artifact hunt. “maybe we can ask Duty for help, they got the resources and the guns to provide us.” Simka
asked with a low voice, trying to calm Rustik down. “no, Duty can not spare that resource at the moment.” Rustik said, with an angry voice. Then suddenly, a stalker walked towards them. “Hey there, I heard that you were the last remaining UFOTZ members. I just heard that your helicopter
has been seen in the garbage. Apparently some bandits are taking it down to god-knows where, but its still intact.” the stalker told them. “WHAT? How did they manage to drag that thing?” Rayoji asked. The stalker then looked at Rayoji. “well, I heard that they are transporting it with a large truck.” the stalker then said. “where are they now?” Simka asked. The stalker got a little smile on his face. “well..... that information will cost you 500 Rubles.” he said, with a strange, calm voice.
“Okay fine! Here you go! Now, tell us their damn location!” Rustik said, while he transferred 500
rubles to the stalkers PDA. “okay, I heard that they are on their way to Agroprom. If you are fast, then you could surprise them. Although you should beware that there are a huge group of bandits protecting it.” the stalker then said. They arrived at the Garbage, where they asked the duty patrol where the bandits could be, but they didn't know. Then they saw a huge caravan, dragging the UFOTZ helicopter with it. The truck were slow and old, so there chance of surprise were high.
Although the mysterious stalker were right. There was twenty-three men guarding the caravan, all
well armed but the most of them were rookies. “This doesn't look good at all, we are three against
twenty bandits!” Simka exclaimed. “Just shut up, and follow my orders. A well placed grenade could make that eleven against three.” Rustik said. They took place behind some bushes, and they all got ready to fire. “one...two....three! FIRE!” Rayoji whispered. They all fired at the bandits, killing two of them. The confused bandits took cover behind some trees or barriers. The truck came to an hold, and two bandits exited the truck. Rustik was like a blood sucker among rookie stalkers, as he killed five bandits just like that with his SVD. Rayoji also followed Rustik's kill-count, by tearing three bandits apart, with his Tunder-S14. The group then realized that they were outnumbered. The bandits were still thirteen in numbers. Just for Rayoji,Simka and Rustik's
luck, a group of four loners appeared. They quickly rushed to the UFOTZ members, coming to their
aid. One of the loners was a veteran. You could see it on him. He wore a Exosuit, that was battered.
There were many holes in his exosuit, and he had covered them with Kevlar plates. He held a GP37,
with a mounted scope and a grenade launcher. The other stalkers wore the standard Sunrise suits, the common stalker suit in the zone. But they all held different weapons. They killed the rest of the bandits together. “That was some nice shooting there. Stalkers. Thanks for your help.” Rayoji
said to the stalkers. “your welcome, Rayoji” the lead stalker then replied. Rayoji was wondering about the fact, that the stalker knew his name. But then, things became clearer. “Istvan, is it you?”
Rayoji asked, with a surprised face. “yeah. I thought you were all dead!” Istvan replied, with a large grin on his face. “I see you tracked down our helicopter!” he said. “yeah, some idiot stalker knew where it was, but he demanded 500 rubles to give us the location of it.” Rustik said. “ahh, okay.
Oh, allow me to introduce my guys. They were all former UFOTZ soldiers that I knew well.
This is Gustav, Dmitri, and Yurko” he then said.


They all went to the Agroprom research institute, were they finally came to a stop with the helicopter. They cleaned one of the institutes, and made it their new outpost. As time went,
they recruited many new stalkers. Rayoji and Simka were in charge of training and supplying the new recruits. Istvan and Rustik gathered resources, and established connections to the traders of the zone. Things were going well, and they made a new base out of the institute buildings.
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very good job,when's the next chapter?
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good cool to see a sort of faction story instead stories like mine wheres its about a guy or just a group of stalkers not that there over done too much its just probably more natural to wright like it
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thanks for the comment guys. i thought it would be interesting to write a
faction story, so i did it
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CHAPTER 7
ROOKIES

Simka hadn't seen Bug in a while now. He heard that Bug had been accepted into the UFOTZ ranks, as a High commander just like Simka,Rustik,Rayoji, and Istvan. But then he had left off to the army warehouses for some reason. Simka was sent on a Mission to Yantar. The mission objectives were to deliver some artifacts to the scientists. Rayoji had dispatched six rookies to his backup, although Simka could do it better alone. Rayoji had thought that it could have been some nice training for the rookies. Simka on the other hand, thought it was annoying. The rookies wore Standard issue XK1 armors ( a sunrise suit in the UFOTZ colors, with a added mercenary like gas-mask). All of them also held a M16A1.“Excuse me sir, but.... when are we there?” one of the rookies asked. Simka sighted, and then yelled. “For the last fucking time, I DONT KNOW!”
“okay sir.... I was just asking.” the rookie then replied, with a nervous low voice. “okay, according to my map, we should be about five kilometers away from Yantar.” Simka then said, trying to calm himself down. Some time went, and it was getting dark. Some of the rookies got scared for every mutant howl that sounded. “For gods sake, its just fucking dogs man!” Simka yelled. They finally
arrived at Yantar, which made the Rookies even more nervous. Now, they heard moans and groans
in the distance, which obliviously came from the Zombies, and the Rookies knew that. It was foggy and dark. Yantar was always one of the creepiest places in the zone, and definitely not a place for
rookies. Then suddenly, Simka stopped them. “Hold!” he whispered. All the rookies crouched, and waited for further orders. The moans were getting closer and closer. They could see dark silhouettes
in fog, and the silhouettes slowly became clearer. “SHOOT!” Simka yelled. All the rookies blind fired, and some of the dark silhouettes fell to the ground, only to get back up. “SHOOT THE FUCKERS!” Simka shouted. The battle continued, and the dark silhouettes disappeared. But one of them were lying on the ground, it was twitching and turning itself in pain. Simka briefly ordered one of his men to execute it. The rookie pulled out his pistol, then he said “rest in peace” as he shot the zombie right in the head. They continued to the science bunker at night. Many of the rookies were scared and nervous, and they wanted a break. “oh Jesus, of all the rookies in the zone, I had to get you guys. Look, if we sleep here, some fucking thing is gotta kill us and eat us. Now, do you want that to happen?” Simka told the rookies. They made it to the bunker, where they delivered
the artifacts. “listen up, Rookies. We have got permission to sleep in the bunker, so all of you better take the opportunity, because we have to get back to base tomorrow,” Simka said, to calm down the
soldiers.


Meanwhile, Bug had went to the warehouses, and he came back with some interesting files.
He had been at the freedom base, where he stole some documents from them. “You did WHAT? We have an alliance with freedom, and you just broke it!” Rustik yelled. “ahh, don't worry, they couldn't tell the difference between me, and a monolithian” Bug said to calm the angry and frustrated Rustik. “okay....okay... I guess that's okay. So, what was these files you were talking about?” Rustik asked. Bug pulled out a briefcase, and opened it. Minutes past, as Rustik read the documents. “what?, it looks like freedom has discovered a new artifact. They call it “Gate”. It says that you can teleport a stalker, or even groups of stalkers with this artifact. Its located in the garbage, I think that 's where that freedom squad you told me about were supposed to go.
If we get this artifact, then things would be a lot easier for us!” Rustik told bug, with a large smile
on his face. Bug was beginning to fade. “that's....that's great, Rustik.... I think... I think I need to.. to get some sleep now.” Bug said, as he dumped to the floor. “MEDIC!” Rustik yelled.


To be continued.....
  14:36:08  22 January 2010
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when's the next chapter? BTW what is endorphin wrestling?
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i am working on the next chapter. oh yeah.... endorphin is an animation program. so, some people make wrestling animations like i do
thats pretty much it... BTW, how did you found out that i animate?
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youtube,and when is the next chapter? cannot wait,as UFOTZ is rising again
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hehe, don't worry mate, i am working on it
BTW, did you see some of my videos
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when is the next chapter? did your computer got broken again?
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naaw, i am just typing very slow i guess
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CHAPTER 8
GATE

“attention all soldiers, we have discovered a new artifact, that can get us into Pripyat!
We need three squads of soldiers, we are going to the garbage to get the artifact!” it sounded over the radio. Two days had passed, and Simka and his squad was stuck in Yantar. Apparently something had disturbed the zombies, and now the bunker got attacked all day long by them.
“Ah, fuck it. We are stuck in this hell-hole, while the others go to Pripyat” said a soldier named Valik. “Cut the crap Valik! We are gonna get to the base soon enough. Besides, Pripyat is not the place you wanna be.” Simka replied, with an harsh,angry and tired voice. They had fought off the zombies for two days now, and they were only sleeping in shifts. Simka heard gunfire from all over the place. Small burst, or single shots whistled in the wind. Three zombies were advancing, and Simka took his XM8 carbine and killed them. Soon the squad was gonna run out of ammo, but that wasn't a problem. The scientists had plenty of ammo to give to them. It was dawn, and the fog was running out. Fortunately, the group hadn't suffered any casualties yet. “we got to move general.
The zombies numbers are increasing every day.” Valik said. “I've got a plan.” Simka replied shortly
after. They killed all the remaining zombies, and placed some landmines for the next wave of zombies. They waited about one hour, and then they heard the moaning and groaning, and shortly after, they heard multiple explosions all over the place. “RUN TO AGROPROM!” Simka shouted.
They ran as far as they could, and they finally got out of Yantar. After five hours of walking, they then returned to Agroprom.

“Good to see you here, Simka. What took you so long?” Rustik asked. Simka then Replied
“a fucking army of zombies were holding us back. Fortunately, there were no casualties.”. The base had gotten really big and strong, with several guard posts, and APCs and the MI-17. In the courtyard, three squads of UFOTZ soldiers were gathering. In each squad was six men, so all together there were eighteen Soldiers that was getting ready to raid the Garbage. Simka and Rayoji
were put in charge of the operation, while Rustik and Istvan was giving them orders over the radio.
They arrived at the Garbage, were all hell was loose. A huge squad of bandits had gotten the Artifact, while several Duty,Freedom, and loner squads were shooting at the bandits while they were fighting each other. While all the stalkers were fighting, a helicopter appeared from the skies.
It fired its mini-guns that were mounted on the side of it, killing loads of the stalkers. The helicopter
landed when all the stalkers were dead, and out came eighteen UFOTZ soldiers. They got the “Gate”, and they swiftly took off. “Good job lads!” Rayoji shouted. At the depot, a bandit aimed at the helicopter with am RPG. Simka noticed this, and he jumped on the mini-gun, and blew the bandit to pieces with it.


The squads returned to Agroprom, with the “Gate” in their hands. Simka stood in the courtyard, in front of him, there stood twenty soldiers. “now that we have the gate, our chances of
making it to Pripyat is much better. Once we get there, I want no one to back down or desert, you got me?” Simka was giving a moral speech to the soldiers, but something was troubling him. He hadn't seen Bug in a month now, and he was worried. “If we don't kill the monolithians up there,
who will?” He continued. “So when that day comes, I want each and every of you to be brave, and have courage. Okay?”. “YES SIR” sounded from all the soldiers, and shortly after Simka said “Dismissed.”


to be continued........
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when's the next chapter?
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man,where's the next chapter? Don't type slow,c'mon
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haha, yeah i guess you are right i am working as fast as i can now!
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MINI CHAPTER
PAY-BACK

Bug closed his eyes, and he thought he were going to die. “Fuck you, you cock sucking bastard!” Bug snapped. “You are going to regret this, Deserter!” Rustik replied. He took aim with his desert eagle, and he was about to shoot. A loud bang sounded, and a body fell to the floor. But it wasn't Bug. “You have fallen too low Rustik, and you have become deeply deranged by the Zone” Simka whispered. He had shot Rustik in the back. “Come on friend, its time we get out of here” Simka muttered, as he tied Bug loose.



To be continued........
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CHAPTER 9
BROKEN IN TWO

“come on friend, hurry up!” Simka whispered to Bug, who slowly faded away. He half carried Bug, who was so tired, that he couldn't even walk straight. They got out to the Streets of Pripyat, were there lay loads of corpses on the streets. Few UFOTZ soldiers were looting around,
while others were looking at Simka and Bug. Somehow, the UFOTZ had survived the attack.
“ATTENTION ALL SOLDIERS! I AM ORDERING YOU TO SHOOT THE FORMER HIGH COMMANDERS BUG AND SIMKA ON SIGHT!” it sounded over the radio. “that's bloody perfect!” Bug whispered. “how the heck could Rustik have survived?” Simka asked himself. They ran down the abandoned streets, running from all the UFOTZ soldiers. They met Istvan and Rayoji at the entrance to Pripyat. “WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE?” Istvan asked. “Rustik have... Rustik have gone mad” Simka replied. “Ah fuck it! Come on guys, I don't want to shoot some of my good friends just because a lunatic says so” Rayoji replied. Istvan and Rayoji and their squads mounted two APCs and drove away with Simka and Bug. They drove all the way to the bar, where they rested at the Duty base. “So, you are saying that Rustik, the Supreme commander of UFOTZ, have gone mad? How?” Voronin asked. “I don't know, Voronin. I guess he just got too obsessed with the monolith stone” Simka replied. “Okay, you and your men can stay over. Get some rest.” Voronin said, and nodded lightly, and then he gave an Informal salute.


“uhh, its time to get moving again” Bug said to himself. The Duty medics had patched him up good. Istvan and Rayoji and there squads, had painted there armors pitch black, and the trim including the chest guard was colored deep blue. They called themselves; The UFOTZ Loyalists.
The squads were moving down to the still empty Agroprom base, where they gathered as much resource as they could get, including the MI-17. They made a new base out of the Ruined construction site, also called the “Flea Market”. “What are we going to do now? Simka asked.
“The only thing we can do; Stopping Rustik from doing something Really stupid.” Istvan replied.
They had gathered or bought some new Exosuits, and they were arming all there soldiers with them.
They had armed all the soldiers with XM8 carbine rifles, that later became the Faction's trademark weapon. The UFOTZ loyalists roamed thirty men, and three high commanders. “Listen up folks, I have just heard from Voronin, that a convoy has been sent down here from Pripyat. And can you guess who's in it? That's right, out old friends from UFOTZ. So get ready, and assume ambush positions" Rayoji said. They hid behind some concrete slobs and trees, waiting for the convoy to show up, and it did. Two APCs neared them. Bug could see that they had mounted machine guns on the roofs of the APCs. As soon as the first APC had drove passed them, Bug then swiftly threw a grenade under the second APC. A large explosion sounded, and the APC were brought to a stop.
The rear end of the APC was completely teared apart, so it couldn't move anymore. The second APC stopped, and opened. But as soon as the soldiers were to exit the APC, the UFOTZ loyalists then surrounded the APC. They did the same thing with the other APC.


They had traveled to red forest at there old base, where they had gathered all of the captured
UFOTZ soldiers. They stood with the back facing the wall, while looking at the UFOTZ loyalists
firing squad. “Let this be a message to Rustik, That we will not back down!” Istvan shouted.
“Attention Soldiers!” Bug then shouted. “one......two.....three!!! FIRE!” he then yelled.
The firing squad fired a salve, killing all of the UFOTZ soldiers. Brains and guts and blood were scattered all over the wall. That would send a nice message to Rustik, Rayoji thought.

To be continued........
  23:13:37  22 January 2010
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that will properly be the last chapter for this weekend.
i give Thrashdude FULL permission to write on my story as long as i am gone. although i would like it if you were writing on the faction war between UFOTZ and The UFOTZ Loyalists.

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loyalists? and c'mon,you are good at writing faction stories,why you will stop writing?
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naaw, i am not stopping i am just taking a break this weekend
  23:35:41  22 January 2010
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oh...okay. but there is one weird thing: Isn't it weird to get all UFOTZ loyalists exosuits? I mean even Monolith can't do that
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yeah i know, but i had to make the Loyalists powerful in someway, because the UFOTZ got all the man power and resources
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CHAPTER 10
MAD MEN

Simka took cover nearby one of the APC's,shooting all UFOTZ he saw. He aimed,and fired a salve that shot three UFOTZ. ''Running dry!''He shouted,and got a mag from Istvan. Bug was last seen entering a building. ''Rayoji! Lay down covering fire!'' Simka yelled,as he saw the downed chopper. ''Fuck! Our chopper blew up!''he yelled. He turned back as he saw a big explosion. The building Bug was in was collapsing!
''Find some cover!'' Rayoji shouted,and ran for cover. Simka entered the building's first floor,looking for Bug. He saw Bug under rubble. He had no response,as if he died. ''NO!''Simka shouted,as his friend was dead. Suddenly,a coughing voice started saying something: ''Why the fuck are you yelling?'' Bug shouted.
''Bug?''
''Yeah,I know,I spit in the face of death.'' He laughed. He got out of the rubble,and saw the UFOTZ retreating.
''What the hell can we do?'' Bug asked.
''We will get back. Thankfully,we got little casualties.''
''Ok...''

Bug was not in good shape after that UFOTZ counter attack. He just sat in his room,mumbling things. One day,Simka went to his room. The room was full of weird writings,and Bug was sitting in middle of the room,saying: ''It calls for me...It calls for me...''

Please know that ''Horrors Of The Zone''is a story of simbalime,and I am just replacing his absence for the next weekend.
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we got pure courage! Their warmachines powerless,against the sheer will of our men!
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Bug is MIA (Missing In Action) and possibly KIA (Killed In Action) so when your break is over I would suggest not to write about Bug.
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Man where the hell are you? I cannot wait for the next chapter,or did you stop?
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i am back now, and i didn't have in mind to stop now so, i will start writing now
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CHAPTER 11
“Empty Soul”

“Have anybody seen Bug?” Simka asked, storming into the barracks were all the soldiers were still sleeping. “What the fuck are you doing man? Its six-o-clock! We are sleeping!” one of the soldiers mumbled loudly, as he tried to get up from his bed. “Shut the hell up and answer my question!” Simka yelled in reply. “No we haven't! Now fuck off, we are trying to sleep here!” one of the soldiers yelled. He asked Rayoji and Istvan, but they didn't know either. He had looked for Bug all morning, and he couldn't find him anywhere. He remembered that he hadn't even looked in Bugs room. “god I am an idiot!” he thought. He neared Bugs room, were he started to hear someone mutter from inside. “Bug!” he yelled, while he opened the door. Bug was there, just sitting on his bed, muttering strange things. Simka noticed some weird writings on the walls, on some of them was written “It calls me” or “Must go north”. Bug was weirdly armed already. He wore his armor,
and his Pmm was holstered tight in his hands. “Bug?” Simka asked. Bug was just sitting on his bed,
as if nothing had happened. He didn't even notice Simka. “Must go north, must go north.....” Bug mumbled. Then Simka had realized what had happened. Bug was being called by the monolith. Bug
got up from his bed, and he started to walk towards the door where Simka stood. Simka quickly rushed to him, grabbing his arms while yelling. “I AM ORDERING YOU TO STOP” Simka yelled, but without reply. “Please Bug, don't you remember me? I am Simka! Your best friend! STOP!” Simka yelled once again, but Bug still continued towards the door. “Bug, STOP! The monolith is trying to get you! Can't you see it! You will get yourself killed!” Simka yelled, This time, with a reply from Bug. “You can't stop me from reaching out to the lights” Bug muttered. Simka pushed Bug backwards, bringing him to a stop. “You can't stop the monolith!” Bug yelled, with a angry, weird voice. He draw his pistol, and aimed it at Simka's chest. “NO! Bug, YOU CANT DO THIS!
I AM YOUR FRE...” Simka yelled. Then, Simka was interrupted by a loud “BANG”. Simka dumped to the floor, screaming in pain. Bug continued out of the room. Several minutes passed,
and then Rayoji entered the room. He looked at Simka with surprised eyes. “Simka! What happened!” he said, while he got Simka on his feet. “I.....i..i don't... know......b..b.b.Bug.....” Simka muttered, as he Faded away. The last thing he could hear was “MEDIC!”. He woke up in the Base's
clinic,where he were greeted by Istvan and Rayoji. Simka quickly got up. “BUG!” he yelled. He then felt a massive pain screaming inside his Body, and he quickly lay down again. “Relax Simka!
What happened?” Istvan asked. Simka hurled down a glass of water, and then continued to speak
“I don't know. I found Bug in his room. He were mumbling strange things, I bet you saw the writings on the wall. Well, he was heading to the monolith, and I tried to stop him! But he then shot me in the chest, and then continued. He had a empty look in his eyes, like if he had no soul. He didn't even remember me!” Simka explained. He felt something else, something that wasn't pain.
A weird,empty feeling grabbed his heart, and tore it out. He knew Bug was gone forever. He had went to a place where no one could save him. Several days passed since then, and Simka was left with the same feeling that he had felt some days ago. “Listen up Simka! We are going on an trip to the red forest. I thought it would maybe clear your head a little:” Rayoji said. Simka didn't really care, but he went on the trip with some other soldiers. The APC came to a stop when several bullets and a RPG round hit it. The engine was torn apart, so it couldn't move anywhere. The squad quickly ran out of the APC, seeking cover. They didn't even know who they were fighting, but they just blind fired. Simka quickly saw one of the opponents and shot him. It was one of Rustik's men.
He shot the Soldier several times in the head. The soldier fell to the ground, only to get up again, shooting at Simka. “What the heck?” Simka asked himself. He emptied his clip on the soldier,
but It just continued. “What the fuck is these guys?” one of Simka's soldiers asked. “ I don't know!
They will just not die! I just emptied a whole fucking clip on one of these guys, and he is still walking!” Simka yelled in reply. Simka lobbed a grenade at the lines, sending many of the renegade soldiers flying. This time, they didn't get up again. “They are vulnerable to explosives!” Simka yelled. One of Simka's soldiers shot the enemy group with an RPG, blasting them all to smithereens. “Nice shooting Yurkoji!” Simka yelled. “Now, lets see who these bastards are” Simka muttered. He tore the gas-mask off one of the renegade soldiers, but he later wish he hadn't. The soldiers face was mutated and he looked like a corpse. With deep,infected cuts in his face, and
several bloats sticking out all over his face. Half of his face were missing, so you could see the bones and the flesh sticking out. “What in the world......” Simka muttered. The renegade soldier's body looked like the face. With deep wounds and rotten flesh. Not a pretty sight, and definitely
not a nice smell. Simka saw, that where the bullets had landed, the Flesh had simply just absorbed the bullet. “What the fuck are we dealing with?” Yurkoji asked. “I don't know, but I am almost certain that it has something to do with the monolith and Rustik” Simka replied.


To be continued.....
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Next chapter?
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CHAPTER 12
“Simka Baton”

Simka had walked for three days now. He had only slept few times, and that was only when he faded away. He have had blackouts for some days now, and they appeared just out of the blue.
He only wore a long black Trench coat, with a mounted gas-mask and he had body armor under the coat. He had no goal anymore, and he felt that he was totally useless. Still, he hadn't regret his choice about leaving UFOTZ. He had forgot about his early UFOTZ stalker life. He carried his good old trusty AK/74 with him. He had walked in the zone between the Garbage, Agroprom,Yantar,and the military warehouses. He had helped other stalkers in need, but then he had simply disappeared again. It had rained almost all day now, and it was freezing cold. Snow was falling, covering the ground more and more. As the snow fell, he thought about his Stalker life.
He had been in the Zone for two years now, and he remembered all of what he had done. He had been to Pripyat, he had helped UFOTZ, just to finally be High commander and then leave.
He remembered something, that was blurry and he hadn't thought about it for some time now.
He had a hard time just remembering what it was, but then, it came to him. Vanuska. He sat down in the snow, the wind was chilly but calm. He cried silently. He fell asleep, and woke up the next day.
It was still early morning, and it was still dark. He ventured forward to god knows where, hoping to find peace from his thoughts.


CHAPTER 12 PART 2
“Valentina Baton”


“Wake up Valentina! We are there!” Oleg said while he was waking Valentina. Valentina woke up, looking at the bright sun-shine. Oleg and Valentina, and a few others had been smuggled into the Zone, as the same reason as all of the other stalkers. But Valentina had one specific reason.
Oleg was Valentina's close friend, and he had ventured into the zone with her. She was tired, and she wasn't quite at her senses. “I thought the Zone would be gloomier” Valentina muttered, as she looked at the bright sun. it was cold, and it was early morning. Valentina felt the hair on her neck raise, as she heard a horrifying scream from far,far away. Of course, Valentina wasn't that strong or had good marksman skills, but then again, there wasn't many stalkers in the zone that were strong or had good marksman skills. They arrived at the rookie village, with all kinds of people looking at them. It was the same procedure for every rookie who had just arrived to the Zone, Wolf will tell them stuff about the Zone, while Sidorovich would provide them with gear if they had the money to pay for it. Sure, there was many female stalkers in the zone, but their were about twice as much male stalkers. She was the only woman in the rookie village, and the other stalkers noticed that.
She felt the many eyes looking at her, and it was an uncomfortable feeling. It was of course not just because she was a woman, but Valentina had always had a beautiful face and body. She was kind and always open minded, and she couldn't even hurt a fly. “aye, rookies, come over here” Wolf yelled. Oleg and Valentina walked over to wolf, who started talking. “So, you are new here, right?”
he asked. Oleg and Valentina nodded in reply. “okay, here's the deal. This, is the Zone. There's not one place in the zone that's safe. You would do good remembering that. Second, watch out for all of the deadly anomalies. They can rip you to shreds in no time. Third, and this is even worse, the mutants. Those are the real danger here in the zone.” Wolf explained. Valentina had heard about the mutants down here, but she had never believed it. “number four, Only trust your comrades or people from your own faction. Number five, Artifacts. The main reason people travel down here. I bet you guys heard that the artifacts are worth millions of rubles, right? Well the sad truth is, they aren't worth anything. Maybe you can get five hundred rubles, maybe five thousand if you are lucky.
But it ain't worth risking your lives for” Wolf then said. “Wow, are there really factions down here? I thought it was everyman for themselves down here, or just few groups of people” Valentina asked
curiously. Wolf then nodded. “Yeah, ¨there are some major factions down here. First of all there is Duty, a large militarized faction. They want to destroy the zone. Then there's Freedom. They are all happy fellas on drugs, but they are fine. Their goal is to open the zone, making it a more free place. Then, there's monolith. A group of nutcases living in Pripyat. They are all crazy, so stay away from them. Although, nobody have seen them for a while now. Then there's the bandits, but they are not really a faction. They are criminal scum, that steals other stalkers artifacts and sell the stalkers as slaves. Then there is UFOTZ, a once big group, that Is focused on containing the zone. I heard they are sticking around at the garbage. They are open to help free stalkers, and they are recruiting as much stalkers as they can get. That's about it. Go see sidorovich for new weapons or suits” wolf explained. “Okay, thanks wolf” Oleg replied.

End of chapter 12.

please note, that to fully understand the story then you must read “Tales of Vasili Novikov"
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“CHAPTER 13”


“So, did you think about Sidorovich's offer?” Oleg asked. “Hell no! I wouldn't sleep with a fat pig like him even if I got one million rubles for it!” Valentina replied angrily. “Why would you even ask me that? You know me better than that...” Valentina said. “No no! I just thought it would be funny to see how you would react!” Oleg laughed. “why did I even travel to the zone with you!” Valentina said, which made Oleg laugh even more. “i don't know, why did you?” he then replied. “You are such an idiot!” Valentina laughed. They sat around the bonfire in the rookie village. They had been in the zone for two weeks now. The two most important things that Wolf had told Valentina was “never say no when you get the opportunity of having fun, because “fun” didn't come cheap around the zone” and the other thing was “you need to mind your surroundings, because there's a lot of stalkers out there that would do anything to have a woman's “Service” out there”. Valentina and Oleg had encountered a guy some few days ago, that was eager to meet Valentina. He had threatened Oleg and Valentina with his rifle. Oleg was quick tough, as he punched the bastard in the face and shot him with his pistol. “So, Valentina I have been willing to ask you this, and....” Oleg asked. Valentina got her hopes up and started smiling, but she got very disappointed about Oleg's next words. “should we move to the bar at Rostok?”. Valentina's smile blended, and faded away.
“Oh yeah.... lets do that!” she said, trying not to sound disappointed. “Okay, lets go then” Oleg said.
They neared the entrance to Rostok, but they encountered a group of bandits. They were all armed with MP5s, and there were three of them. “Well hello there, stalkers” the lead bandit said.
“What do we have here? Hmm.. a normal stalker scum... and... oh my, we have got ourselves a catch guys!” the lead bandit then said. The other bandits laughed. “What do say, you give us the lady, and we will let you go without any problems, Deal?” the lead bandit asked. “NEVER!” Oleg yelled. The bandit kicked Oleg in the stomach, sending him landing on the floor. The bandits laughed. “Okay, then we will just have to execute you, then take the lady. Sounds like a good deal, Eh boys?” the bandit said. He took out his pistol, and aimed it at Oleg. “PLEASE STOP IT!” Valentina screamed. The bandit ignored it, and cocked his pistol. “You are gonna regret this, you pathetic bastard...” the bandit said no more, as he fell dead on the spot. Two stalkers wearing Exosuits jumped out from a bush, and shot the bandits. Valentina quickly got Oleg on his feet.
“Are you okay, Oleg?” she asked. “Yeah, I am fine” he replied. “Thank you so much for the help!”
Valentina said to the stalkers. “You are welcome. Killing bandits always gets us in a good mood anyways.” one of the stalkers said. The Exosuits colors were deep blue as trim, and the rest of the armor black. “Come with us to our base. Its not far from here” one of the stalkers said. Valentina and Oleg didn't have much choice. The stalkers were armed to the teeth. They followed the stalkers to a large construction site. They saw soldiers exercising in the court yard. Some of them patrolled the area, some others guarded some places. There wasn't many of them tough. One of the soldiers wore a complete black armor. It was polished lately, as it shined very much. He was watching the training of the soldiers. “Commander, we found these stalker outside the base. They were ambushed by bandits” one of the soldiers said. “Good job, Gustav” he gave a Salute and then dismissed the soldiers. “hello stalkers, who are you?” The soldier asked. “My name is Valentina Baton, and this is my friend Oleg Gesttov. You?” Valentina asked. “My name is Rayoji. I am the High commander of the UFOTZ. Your name was Valentina Baton,right?” Rayoji asked. Valentina nodded. “You shouldn't know anyone named Simka in your family?” Rayoji asked. Valentina looked at Rayoji with surprised eyes. “Yeah! That's my brother! Do you know him?” she asked, hoping that Simka was still alive. “I don't know.... he was the former High commander of UFOTZ.. then he just disappeared. We were close friends...” Rayoji said. Valentina's heart became heavy. It was certain that Simka wasn't alive.
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so..... any comments? I've been waiting for some comments for a long time now.....
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good,waiting for the next chapter,as always.

Don't think about it. People get comments when they get a bit more readers. Readers mean attention,attention means comment.
Just wait. Patience. Patience grasshopper.
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Yeah, you are right. patience is the way

i just fixed my computer, and now i can finally write without my computer crashing
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Thank god... So,get to work!

-starts to shout-

Go,go,go!
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i am on it!

properly gonna write for Simka for the next chapter

i am looking forward to the next chapter of "Tales of Vasili Novikov"
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The sergeant says:

''Go on! We will continue!''
''Need it in ASAP!''
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OH COME ON! i am about to eat my computer..... IT CRASHED AGAIN!!!!!! damn it..... i thought it was okay again.....

looks like i need a new computer.... i will see to the problem and try to fix it one last time.... if it doesn't work, then i will buy a new one.....
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Tough luck,but the sergeant needs it ASAP! I already completed the next chapter.

WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!!?
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CHAPTER 14
”Snow”


Simka walked across the empty snowy field. He was hungry, and he hadn't had anything to eat in a day. Some weird creature was keeping him inside his cabin. He thought it was a controller, so he had blocked the doors and waited a whole day for it to go away. “Damn.... I only have two cans of meat and some bottled water... only enough to keep me alive for two days..” Simka muttered. He was tired and hungry, and that was not a good combination. Simka searched the ground for any type of food. Then, his eye spotted something. “Ahh, there we go!” he said, while he reached out for a dead crow. “Eww, not my favorite food, but it will do” as he finished his sentence, a loud moan scattered threw the field. The hair on Simka's neck raised up, and he felt a cold chill running down his back. “Ah, Fuck it!” he yelled. He had heard a moan like that before, and he knew that the controller had come back. He quickly ran over to his cabin, which laid on the other side of the field.
He fell, and tried to get back up, but he couldn't. His nerves just simply gave up. There he was, laying on the ground defenseless. He knew that the controller had used its powers on him, and now he was only seconds away from death. A silhouette neared him, but his vision was blurry so he couldn't see what it was. Deep sounds of feet hammering on the grounds got larger, and then, the controller stood beside him. It mumbled something, and Simka could only watch as it was about to kill him. But then, he could move again. He didn't look at it, as he knew that it would only paralyze
him again. He picked up his AK/74 and emptied his magazine on the controller. It groaned in pain, and stepped back. Simka reloaded his rifle, and he was about to deal the finishing blow to the controller. But then, as he looked it in the eyes, he saw something. Flashbacks of Vanuska and Bug appeared, lightning fast as they passed his eyes. Then, he saw his little sister Valentina. Simka fell on his knees, and he started to cry, like something forced him to do it. It wasn't the controller who forced him to do it, it was himself. Several minutes passed, and he just sat there, alone in the snow, crying. He didn't even notice that the controller had disappeared. He woke up from his trance,
and realized where he was. He was sitting in the middle of a field. The wind was cold, and it teared threw his clothes. Simka felt a sudden chill, and then heard one last moan. The controller was now gone. He went back to his cabin, with the dead crow in his hands. He grilled the crow on a bonfire,
and then started to eat it. It didn't taste very well, but it was food none the less. He hadn't seen any stalkers around for weeks now, and he definitely needed company. He was suddenly tired, and then he just blacked out. He woke up in his cabin next day, and it was early morning. The sky was still dark blue, which indicated that it was morning. He had slept a whole day, and his mouth was dry like sand. He emptied his water bottle, and started to move out of the cabin. Had the controller just stopped by to show him the flashbacks? He had no clue at all. He took a little picture of Valentina with him, before he left. There was nothing in this world that would make Simka more upset than
Valentina's death. He loved his little sister, and he would protect her from everything in this world,
even the Zone's horrifying mutants. He was just happy about the fact that Valentina wasn't in the Zone. Then, he left, setting off to Pripyat. The road was long and devious. He walked through red forest, ignoring as much mutants as possible. He didn't even know why he had set off to Pripyat,
he just felt it was the right thing to do. After a days walk, he then stopped at the empty streets of Pripyat. It was weirdly silent, and the wind was calm. The snow had covered all of the ground, making the place much more beautiful than it normally was. There he stood, and he had no clue about where to go, or what to do. He entered the streets, and suddenly, a bullet hit him. Blood was pouring from his leg, and another bullet hit him in the chest shortly after. He gasped for air, as he fell backwards. He couldn't move, as he was in shock. He crawled his way to a bus, where he was
in cover. He tried to get up on his feet, but he couldn't. He sat up against a wall, where he waited for the unknown soldiers to come. He heard several boots touching the ground, and the stalkers were coming closer. As soon as he could see them, he started to open fire. He emptied his magazine on the stalkers, sending three of them to the ground. “COME ON! COME AND GET ME!” Simka yelled. He fired once again, sending several more soldiers to the ground. Then suddenly, a silent
“Click” sounded. He was out of ammo. He threw his rifle away, and took his Beretta 92. he fired several rounds on the grounded stalkers, who were slowly getting up on their feet again. “DIE YOU FUCKERS!” he shouted, while emptying his clip. Then, he ran out of ammo for his pistol.
A stalker ran over to him, and knocked him out with his rifle butt.




CHAPTER 14 part 2
“them”

Rayoji raised an eyebrow when he heard the news. “Sir, that scientist Vasili have captured one of the UFOTZ renegades. He says he is bringing him in today” Gustav told Rayoji. “Vasili? The same guy who killed Istvan and one of our medics?” Rayoji asked. “yes sir” Gustav added quickly.
“Okay, bring him in” Rayoji said. Some time passed, and then Vasili turned up. It was a short visit, he just appeared and delivered the hostage, and then disappeared again. They had taken the renegade in to the “Black room”. Also called the interrogation room. The stalker was tied to a chair, and Rayoji asked him some questions, while he also “politely” made the stalker remember.
“So, what are you dickheads up to now, Eh?” Rayoji asked. “My men have been attacked by your
mutated freaks all month. Whats going on up there anyway?” Rayoji asked. “what are you talking about? I only remembered a bright,shining blue light, and some voices telling me what to do” the stalker answered with a low voice. Rayoji kicked the stalker in the face, and said “Cocky are we?”.
“Now, tell me the damn truth!” he then yelled, while punching the stalker in the face. “I swear to god, I don't know anythin...” he was interrupted by a loud bang, followed by smoke. Rayoji had shot the stalker with his magnum. “god damn it! Always the same bullshit they are talking about!” Rayoji said to himself. He then said “Guys, we might need some cleaning done in the black room..”
over the radio.
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CHAPTER 15
”Fading Away”


Simka woke up in a dark and dirty room. A foul stench spread in the room, making Simka cough.
Several minutes passed, and nothing happened. He had no idea where he was, and why. He couldn't remember. Then the door opened. Glimpse of lights reached into the room, and then faded away when the door got closed. A familiar stalker entered the room, reaching out for a lamp. He turned it
it on, and then walked over to Simka. Now, Simka could see the room clearly. The stalker walked over to Simka slowly. “R....R..Rustik?” Simka muttered lowly. “Yes Simka, its me. You know, I never really got the chance to pay you back for when you shot me” Rustik said, with a low soothing
voice. Rustik hadn't changed at all. He wasn't zombified like his mutated soldiers. Simka could see his Face clearly, and it hadn't changed either. “You see Simka, for the past year, I've been studying
the zone. I chose not to damage it, like you, instead, I chose to study the Zone, helping it” Rustik explained. How could a stalker help the zone? And even more important, why?. Simka could feel the pain of his wounds now, as it tore through the body. “why...why are you helping the Zone? Our goal was to contain the zone, not to help it!” Simka asked. Rustik laughed a little and then said “To much for your little brain, I fear. You see, I got a vision when I got here. The monolith saw that, and we made a deal. You have no idea what I am capable of now!” Rustik said with an angry voice.
“Rustik! Cant you see what its doing to you? Its manipulating you! You of all should know that! You have been in the zone for fifteen years god-dammit!” Simka yelled. “Hehehe, I thought you would say that. You see, instead of just staring in awe at the monolith and making stupid wishes, I actually talk to it. As I said before, that information is to big for your tiny brain. You've got no idea what I am capable of, or what the zone is capable of. I could ask the monolith to send a pack of mutants to any direction I want! I could even send them after your little sister!” Rustik yelled. “WHAT? Is Valentina here? YOU ARE LYING!” Simka yelled in reply. Rustik laughed again, and then said “Look for yourself”. As soon as he finished his sentence, Simka got visions of Valentina wandering around at the garbage. As all the visions went passed his eyes, he got a strong headache .
“ENOUGH! STOP IT!” he shouted. Then, all the visions stopped. “why...why have you come to the zone Valentina?” Simka muttered. Rustik laughed yet again, and then said “for you. You are the reason for Valentina's death!” Rustik yelled. Simka started crying lowly. “How pathetic...” Rustik muttered. “NO!.... you are pathetic. At least someone cares for me. I can actually love, not like you! What have you got? Mutants? Zombies? A big blue stone? You have got it all wrong Rustik, YOU are pathetic” Simka shouted in reply. Rustik was silent for few moments. “ENOUGH!” he then yelled. “now, I will send you to hell, Simka!” Rustik yelled while he pulled out his desert eagle. “Fuck you, Rustik!” Simka yelled. A loud bang sounded, and blood scattered around the room. The chair was knocked back, with Simka's lifeless corpse tied to it. Simka was alive for a few more seconds, as he used them to think about his life. Flashback quickly ran through his eyes, and the last thing he did was crying a single tear, then he died, and his vision became dark.


CHAPTER 15 part 2
“Searching”

“Come on Valentina!” Oleg exclaimed. “we haven't done anything but walking for a whole day, and we haven't found this “Bug” guy!” Oleg continued. Valentina turned around, and then said “Okay okay!”. They stopped by a ruined house, where they spent the nigh on the top floor, which you could only get up to by a ladder, so they were mutant secure. “Goodnight” Oleg muttered.
“Goodnight” Valentina said in reply. They woke up during the night, because they heard someone in the house. “Shh!” Oleg whispered. He took his AK/47, and checked the house. “QUICK! Hide!” Oleg whispered. Oleg took position behind a box, and waited for the stalker to come. The stalker wore a brown trench coat, and his face was covered with a balaclava, like the outfits bandits use.
He held a Pmm in his hand, ready to shoot. Oleg jumped forward and shot the guy three times. The stalker fell backwards, trying to get his pistol which fell out of hands. He covered his stomach with his hands, because that's where he was hit. Another bandit came, and Oleg was quick and he shot him, making him fall down from the ladder with a loud “Bump”. The grounded bandit fumbled for his weapon, but Oleg saw that. He placed his one foot on the bandits arm, making sure that he was not going to get his pistol. “WHO ARE YOU?” Oleg shouted. The bandit screamed in pain, and then said “i...i..i” he couldn't say more because of his wounds. Oleg double tabbed the bandit, and said “Dammit!”. Suddenly, a grenade landed few meters away. It exploded, and Oleg was knocked back. “Arhgg...” he muttered. Some splinters had pierced his skin, making him bleed all over the place. Oleg lay on the ground, screaming in pain. Another bandit entered, and he held an SPAS. “Die, you cock sucking bastard!” he yelled. He aimed with his SPAS, and was about to shoot, if it weren't for Valentina. She had walked up behind him, and stabbed the bandit multiple times with her knife. “OLEG!” she shouted. She quickly ran over to him, and pulled out some bandage. She patched up his wounds, but he was still in pain. “are you okay?” Valentina asked. Oleg moaned in pain, and then said “yeah, I am okay” although he was not. He was bleeding several places, and he had a major wound. He couldn't hear much, as bells sounded in his head. He screamed in pain again, as Valentina pulled some of the fragments out. “Shh...” she whispered, calming him down.
Eventually, Oleg fell asleep. Valentina, on the other hand, didn't. She had a weird feeling of sorrow and emptiness. She couldn't fall asleep, so she stayed up all night. Finally, Oleg woke up.
He sat up, but then quickly got down again because of the pain. “ouch!” he muttered.
Valentina walked up to Oleg, and got him on his feet. “Come on you lazy bum!” she laughed.
They continued their search for Bug, and came to an abandoned factory. They heard several gunshots and explosions, and they checked it out. They took cover behind a container, where they scouted the court yard of the factory. “its bandits....” Oleg muttered. “yeah, but what are they shooting at?” Valentina asked. They saw three bandits advancing, nearing the container.
They hadn't seen Oleg or Valentina yet, so they had the element of surprise. They shot all the bandits, killing them on the spot. now, the other bandits were aware of them. The six remaining
bandits now changed focus, and fired at Oleg and Valentina. Oleg and Valentina were now suppressed, and they couldn't move anywhere. Then, behind the bandits, a silhouette neared them.
It was a loner, that was for sure. He quickly ran towards the bandits while shooting with his pistol, killing three of the bandits and wounding one. He then took his knife, and slit the second bandit's throat. Just as the last bandit turned around, the stalker kicked him in the stomach an pressed his knife between the eyes of the bandit. “wow...” Valentina muttered. Oleg and Valentina walked over to the stalker who were finishing the wounded bandit. “WHERES THE ARTIFACT!” the stalker yelled. “i..i..i don't know... please don't kill me!” the bandit said while he was gasping for air.
“to late for that, cock-sucker!” the stalker yelled, as he shot the bandit with his pistol. Seconds passed as the stalker said nothing. “ehh... hello” Oleg said, trying to get the stalkers attention.
“hello there. Is there something you want or what?” the stalker replied with a harsh voice.
“yeah, I just wanted to know something. Do you know a stalker that goes by the name Bug?”
Oleg asked nervously. “yeah, you are looking at him” the stalker replied. “wait, you are Bug? Do you know a guy named Simka?” Valentina asked eagerly. Bug sighed, and got a empty look in his eyes. “yeah, I do. What? Are you looking after him? You wont succeed...” Bug said. “Listen, I am
Simka's little sister. My name is Valentina, and this is Oleg. Is there anything you could tell us about him? Or do you know where he is?” Valentina asked, hoping to find more information about Simka.
“yeah, there's a lot that I can tell. I didn't even know he had a little sister. Come on, follow me to
my cabin” Bug said. After half an hour, they arrived at Bugs cabin. They sat down in the cabin,
and they started talking. “I've known Simka for a long time now. We were close friends, until
some weeks ago... anyways, what do you want to know?” Bug asked. “i just want to know where he is” Valentina replied. “okay, here's what i know. There's been a lot of people saying that a stalker that lives up north sometimes appears to help other stalkers, but then he just disappeared again.
People never really gets the chance of talking to him. Its said that he lives in a cabin up north in the red forest, but no one knows for sure. That's all I can tell you.” Bug explained. “okay, thanks for the information Bug” Valentina replied. As Oleg Valentina was about to exit the cabin, Bug said “oh, and if you do find him, say hi from me”.


probably the last chapter for a few days. i hope you guys enjoyed it
comments is, as always, welcomed!
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Simka is dead? You are to make a chapter which Doc finds him and gets him back. Or are you sticking with 'Valentina' now?
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no spoilers..........MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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When's your next chapter?
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Damnit,when's the next chapter?
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sorry for not responding! and i am starting to write again tomorrow. the next chapter will properly be out tomorrow. sorry, but i still got the computer problems so i am writing really slow you got to hang out until tomorrow i am afraid. sorry again!
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-crashes computer,then throws it into a whirligig-

Mate,write it on a paper.
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CHAPTER 16
“Advancing”


Gustav was looking at his men exorcizing in the courtyard. He had become the new leader of UFOTZ since Rayoji had been killed. They were moving out to Pripyat soon, so Gustav had recruited a lot new members. Not much had happened lately, which made things even better for the UFOTZ loyalists. Every time they had planned to move out, then either the the renegade UFOTZ or as the UFOTZ loyalists call them; “the Zealots” had attacked them, or like when Rayoji had been killed by a stalker named Vasili. “Sir, I've gathered a group of special soldiers to investigate how we can get to Pripyat with out getting the Zealots attention” a soldier said. “very well. Tell them that I will join them.” Gustav stated. “are you sure you want to do that? I mean, they are traveling underground, and who knows what creatures lives down there.” the soldier then replied. Gustav nodded with out further thought, and then walked out to the group. The group consisted of five soldiers heavily armed in exosuits, each with different weapons and professions. Alex Dupree, a specialist in explosives. Genka Sinizky, a heavy assault specialist. Senka Ibrakan, the group's technician. Andrei Bogdanov, the groups marksman. Then, there's Diniska Smirvov, the group leader. Gustav saluted them, and then said “Attention! All of you have been gathered to do a special mission. The mission is vital for our future, and not to mention every other stalker's future. Rustik have gathered a new army of mutated soldiers, and they are increasing by the minute. Scout reports tell us that the mutants doesn't want to attack the Zealots, but instead, the Zealots are using them as
guard dogs or using them in the field, usually by following the Zealots. The reason for this is unclear, but what is even more strange is that they are not communicating with each other at all.
Its like that the zone controls them, and tells them what to do. As far as we know, Rustik could be dead. So, the mission goals are to clear a path to Pripyat that's secure and where the Zealots can't
see us. After that, then we will contact HQ and they will send in the troops. Then we will back-stab
the Zealots and kill them once and for all!” he finished his sentence while yelling, and the soldiers
yelled “HOORAH!” in reply. The group took off in an APC, traveling to Duty to tell them their plans. When they arrived at the bar, there was flames raising from buildings and they could hear gunfire and explosions near them. Gustav saw a dark silhouette crouching up in a tower with an RPG. Gustav tried to warn the other soldiers in the APC, but it was too late. The missile sliced its way through the air and hit the APC's rear end, tearing the engine to shreds. Gustav jumped away from the APC just in time, as did Alex. After the dust had settled, Gustav shouted “Guys, you there?” there was no response from the team, only the smell of burning rubber and the loud sounds of gunfire. Gustav took cover as another missile landed right beside him. His ears was bleeding, and a fragment had teared its way through his leg. “ARG FUCK!” he yelled, as he was unable to move on the ground. Then suddenly, Andrei appeared and rushed over to Gustav. He quickly fired several rounds at the tower with his Steyr scout sniper rifle. He bandaged Gustav's wounds and got him up on his feet. He half carried Gustav over the street and placed him in cover. “GENKA! GET ME SOME MED KITS NOW!” Andrei yelled while he was giving them covering fire. Genka rushed over to Gustav and gave him morphine. A squadron of three soldiers moved down the street, all
armed and ready to kill. Andrei saw them and shot several rounds, each bullet taking a life.
Gustav saw that each member of the team survived, and they were now building cover with sandbags or other kinds of trash. Gustav now saw who the enemy was. It was the Zealots.
Diniska pulled out his M60-SAW machine gun and started to fire multiple salves of bullets.
A group of five soldiers moved down the street, but not for very long. Alex fired a missile with his RPG, blowing them to pieces. Senka pulled out his Steyr AUG and started to fire on a soldier that
was moving through the streets. The soldier stumbled and finally fell, leaving one hell of a mess of blood. A helicopter appeared, apparently colored in the Zealots colors. (black and white).
“WHAT? I THOUGHT THAT THE ARMY ONLY HAD THOSE!” Senka shouted. The chopper
fired several missiles, devastating the line of cover that the squad just had placed. Alex got blown back because of the explosion, hammering him into a wall. The helicopter then fired with all its machine guns, making sure that nothing on the street was moving. Senka had pulled Alex in cover just in time, and the rest of the squad also took cover in a building. They reached the top floor, and they all aimed at the helicopter that wasn't aware of their presence. Alex was knocked out, so Gustav picked up his RPG and fired at the helicopter, blowing its tale off. The helicopter started swinging and sinking to the ground with high speed. They saw the crew that fell out of the helicopter, falling fifty meters to the ground. The helicopter crashed head first down in the street, its propels still swinging around. A massive explosion occurred, followed by smoke and flames.
Then, a message appeared on the radio. “Listen! Rostok is under heavy attack by the Zealots!
Every stalker is welcome to join us in the fight. We are heavily outnumbered by them, and they have APCs. Please help!”. The message was sent from Voronin, who currently was sitting in the Duty base. “Come on guys, lets give Duty a helping hand!” Gustav shouted to the group. They moved down the street, grouping up with several Duty soldiers on the way. They reached the Duty base, where they were planning on how to destroy the Zealots forces. “I am telling you, they are not running out of troops! They just keep coming!” Voronin exclaimed. “You saw the helicopter with your own eyes! They are properly sending in more troops as we speak!” he continued. “Listen, if we just get somebody to take out their snipers, then our troops would have the advantage!” Gustav replied. “Alright, we will do it your way.... I hope you are right Gustav. Send some of your men, and my men will cover you” Voronin said finally. Gustav nodded in reply and rounded up his men.
“okay listen up... Andrei and Senka, you will stay hidden in the buildings and sneak up on the enemy soldiers, while the rest of the squad will cover you. If you see any wounded Duty members on the way, help them and send them back to base. Got it?” Gustav asked. “Yes sir!” Andrei and Senka said in reply. They moved up in the open again, where the Duty soldiers were holding off the Zealots. Diniska placed his M60-SAW machine gun at a sand bag and started to fire, and soon the rest of the squad joined him. Gustav ran over to the other side of the street, then gave Andrei and Senka orders to to enter the the office building. He gave covering fire as they ran to the building, and then entered it. It was foggy and dark, and they could still hear gunfire and explosions from outside. They continued up the building to the third floor, where they looked for any unaware snipers. Several “pops” sounded from Andrei's rifle, followed by gun smoke. Senka covered the door if any zealots were to enter. Then, Senka heard deep foot steps from the other room. He counted to three and then jumped in the room while shooting everything in the room. Three Zealot
soldiers fell to the ground, squirming in pain. Senka reloaded as they were about to get up on their feet again, and then shot each soldier in the head two times, making sure that the brain was destroyed. Then, an RPG missile hit the other side of the room, blasting the wall to pieces and knocking Senka down with a huge explosion. Andrei entered the room and got Senka on his feet and then carried him out of the room. “Come on lad, you are gonna make it!” he yelled while he was hurrying out of the room with Senka on his shoulders. Two soldiers entered the end of the room, quickly jumping to cover while shooting at Andrei and Senka. Andrei dropped Senka gently down on the floor and picked up his Steyr AUG. he made one of the soldiers to Swiss cheese with
it, using a whole magazine, splattering blood and guts all over the room. Senka pulled his pistol and
shot the remaining soldier three times in the head, making sure that he was dead. “Listen, Andrei and Senka, GET OUT OF THE BUILDING! ITS RIGGED WITH EXPLOSIVES AND IT COULD
GO OFF ANY MINUTE NOW!” Gustav shouted over the radio. “Roger that commander, we are on our way. Andrei picked up Senka, and started to run again. Andrei just exited the building with Senka on his shoulders as the building exploded and started flaming, sending debris and bricks
flying all over the place. Andrei sat Senka down just outside the building, where he was in cover.
He saw that the Zealots were retreating, and he shot as many as he could while they were running.
“This is Andrei to Gustav, do you read?” Andrei asked over the radio. “Loud and clear, Andrei. Whats your status?” Gustav replied. “i am okay, but I don't know about Senka. I think his leg is hurt, because he can't walk” Andrei told Gustav. Seconds of silence passed, then Gustav said “Roger. Be there soon to pick him up”.
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Mate,that is VERY Good.
I might plan a suicide attack to the zealot base...
  23:30:51  12 February 2010
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thanks for the comment mate
i am still waiting for the next chapter of "tales of Vasili Novikov" and i hope its coming out soon!
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Please note that i am planning to stop the story soon, because i feel like I've written this for nothing. i am also out of inspiration and i don't know what to do about the current plots that i am running (the plots about Valentina,Gustav and the UFOTZ).

Enjoy!
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CHAPTER 17
ROAD TO PRIPYAT

Andrei measured the distance between the group and the Jupiter Plant.
there was a long way between them, and it would take at least one day to get there. it would have been much easier if they still had the APC, but it got blown up at Rostok.
-so, when are we there?
Genka asked eager as a little child waiting for a candy store to open.
not weird that he was eager. he wanted to get out of the Jupiter region. it was full of weird stuff, mainly the many zombies walking around. not to mention the many anomalies and the occasional Zealot raid.


-well not soon anyways. properly a days walk. not to mention that we have to go the last part of the way underground. and you know what that means.

Andrei replied shortly after. the underground was filled with every kind of mutant that lives in the zone, but worse, sometimes new mutants that no one had ever seen. The underground was also heavily guarded
by the Zealots, as the underground was the only way to get to Pripyat without having to do a suicide attack on the city, because the City was filled with hordes of Zealot soldiers.

they continued their trip to the Jupiter Plant in silence. but sometimes the soldiers would chat with each other, talking about their adventures in the Zone, or just joking or catching up with each other. a sudden explosion occurred right beside them, scattering them with the blast.

-Casualties?
Gustav shouted.

-no, we're good
Diniska shouted in reply.

they quickly got on their feet and ran over to cover behind the rest of a little shed.

-Who's the enemy?
Genka asked.

Andrei quickly scouted the place, but then turned around with a lightning fast movement. shortly after that, several bullets flew beside them.

-Zealots. and lots of them. but there are also a Duty squad fighting them. should we help?

Andrei replied, while looking at Gustav, seeking permission to blast the Zealots to oblivion. Gustav nodded shortly, and Andrei turned around yet again with his rifle, firing multiple rounds, each of them sending a zealot to the ground, forcing a scream of pain out of them. Genka rushed to a tree,pulling out his XM8 LMG, and started to tear apart the Zealots soldiers. the five men Duty squad moved down to the shed, seeking cover while the UFOTZ loyalists covered them. the last remaining Zealot soldiers continued in a group, all ready to unleash hell on the UFOTZ loyalists. Alex was quick, and launched his RPG missile at them, blowing them to pieces, sending guts and meat chunks flying everywhere.

-Woah.... that was some nice shooting their Alex.
Gustav muttered.

Alex grinned in reply and then looked at the Duty soldiers.

-So, what are you guys doing out here?
Alex then asked one of the Dutiers.

-we're heading to the Jupiter Plant. some of our squads are having constant skirmishes with the Zealots up there. you?

the lead dutier said.

-well, we are heading up there too. we are going to Pripyat, to launch an assault on their base. so we are heading underground.

Gustav replied. he saw that the Duty squad traveled with an APC. he then asked that if the UFOTZ loyalists could join them on the way. hours went by as the two groups were heading up to the Jupiter Plant, and then finally arrived. an RPG round smashed through the cockpit, killing the driver and lighting the APC on fire. the two squads quickly rushed out before the APC blew up in a massive explosion. "Fuck! stepan is down!" one of the Dutiers yelled.

they rushed to cover behind another APC, where the the Dutier that was in charge of the operation was standing.

-Whats the situation?
Gustav asked.

-Well, we have killed all of the Zealots ground troops but they've got us pinned down here. they have a whole bunch of snipers positioned at a tower, and we can't shoot them because they are to far away. you don't happen to have an RPG do ya?

the lead dutier asked.

-yeah we got one. we will take out that sniper nest, don't you worry
Gustav replied.

Gustav ordered Alex to take out the snipers. Alex jumped away from the APC with his RPG. he quickly took aim, and launched the missile. then, a bullet hit him in the chest. he fell backwards, gasping for air. the missile on the other hand, continued up and blew the tower to pieces. the snipers fell thirty meters to the ground, smashing them with a very strong force, killing them in an instant. hours passed and they patched up Alex. the Squad stood in a large hangar, waiting to get underground. the ground before them opened up, and an elevator appeared.

-okay guys, this is it. there is no going back once we go into the place.
Gustav told the squad.

-hey, say "hi" to the UFOTZ loyalists army when they get here.
he yelled to the lead Dutier.

he nodded in reply, and then activated the elevator, slowly pulling the squad down in the darkness of the underground......

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END OF CHAPTER 17.
i hope you enjoyed it
  13:31:07  20 February 2010
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my friend,everybody writes these stories for nothing. My advice: New storyline,without factions. I hope you would not lose hope.
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yeah, maybe i should write a new story..... but i just can't finish this story in a proper way. in other words, i don't know HOW i should end the story, or if i just should leave it at its current state and start a new one.
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Dunno,you can kill the main characters. It worked for me.
 
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