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  18:58:17  22 January 2010
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Thrashdude
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''Callous''Pt.14

As they carried me,I found myself wondering: ''Was this my destiny? To be betrayed by a friend?'' They stopped,and I found this as an oppurtunity.
I got my pistol,which was still in my hand because the stupids did not disarm me,I got up and shot one in the back,then followed by two quick shots to the eyes. I turned to the driver and blew his head. I understood this was not a nice move,as the truck did not stop. I jumped off,which was an even worse move,as I started to roll down a hill. I finally stopped,and got to the truck's ruins. I took one of the exo's AS VAL,saying ''You won't need this anymore.'' I looked up my PDA,and I saw that I was in Garbage.
''I can still stop this.'' I muttered and started to run to Pripyat. I saw that the base was empty,so It was clear they used the Gate. I ran to Pripyat in three hours. ''What the hell?'' I said. There were 3 Sparkles nearby! I took them an ran as fast as I can. I fell,my wounds taking effect. I got up,hardly.

I got there,and found that UFOTZ was cornered by Monolith and Military made an ambush point. I did not know what to do. I contacted Simka
''Simka,do you hear me?''
''Bug? Rustik told us you were dead!!''
''Rustik is a liar. Come to the hill with the huge tree.'
''Roger.''
In all the carnage,Simka managed to sneak to the hill. I told Simka
''Are you out of your minds? The Zone has it's own consciousness!''
''I do not believe you. Rustik told us you converted to Monolith!''
''No! I Would never do that!''
''Guys,I found the target.''
Suddenly,some guys knocked me out. I was tied to a chair,Simka and Rustik were looking at me.
''Where are your comrades now,lunatic?''
''I did not defect!''
''We will see. Tell me why did you break our pact with Freedom?''
''They were so trigger happy,so-ARGHH!''
I was kicked in the face by Rustik. Simka left the room,to back the west wing. I understood I could not escape this time as Rustik aimed at my head with a Desert Eagle...
  20:45:39  22 January 2010
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anyone going to comment?
  21:29:48  22 January 2010
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its good dont worry two much about comments I Have two on my story

Bug always seems to be up to his neck in trouble
  23:03:52  22 January 2010
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ain't he a naughty boy well your story is good,but there is one good advice: use punctuations.
  23:17:35  22 January 2010
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Chapter nine is out now thrashdude, you've got my FULL permission to write on my story in this weekend, as i am on vacation
BTW, i would like it if you would keep writing on the faction war between
UFOTZ and the UFOTZ loyalists.

have a good one!

Имеющих хороший!
  23:23:02  22 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.15

As we finished killing the captured UFOTZ,a sudden explosion was heard. UFOTZ were counter-attacking!
I got up,swearing to Rustik for what he has done,and trying to get a weapon. I neared the chopper pilot and took a megaphone.
''Wounded soldiers and medics on the chopper.'' I said to the pilot ''Come back here when you drop'em to the LZ!''
''What is LZ?''
''It means Landing Zone!'' I shouted and got back to the combat. There was cover,but we did not know where to go and I got shot. Vanik,one of the nervous rookies that went to Yantar,got me and carried me to a safe zone. I got up and I aimed as I saw Rustik,commanding the UFOTZ troops. I aimed at him and shot him. I missed his chest. I sprinted away,nearby the extraction point. As the chopper came it fell down by a RPG shot. I ran away,as the burning chopper was falling nearby,so I had to enter a building.

I got up,took aim as I traversed the floors.I got in the highest room and I took aim near the window as the RPG user saw me. He aimed at the room I was in,and fired. The sudden rocket salve triggered the combustibles at the building,making a huge explosion. I fell down,trying to hold on,as my room started to collapse down. I threw myself to the hallway,which soon got engulfed in flames. I ran backwards,soon opening another door,which was the emergency staircase. I looked up,as I heard a voice,and I threw myself back. A piece of the building fell down,taking the staircase with it. I tried to find a fire extinguisher. I got into a room,which was luckily janitor's closet and I took the fire extinguisher. I tried to use it,but the using manual was gone. I threw it into the flames,and started shooting it. It started to work,and the sudden concussion blast threw me away. I got up,turned back and got in the last standing room. I started to look amongst things,which one of them was a decoder,and a book. I took them and jumped down the staircase,landing me on hard floor. I looked up as I saw one thing: The staircase started to collapse,and it was collapsing on me...
  11:59:43  23 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.16

It was calling for me. It was calling. I heard weird things,like: ''Only one will be rewarded.''As I fell,a voice still talking. Still calling. I blacked out for long,maybe for two weeks. I woke up. I was in dark,trying to see. I tried to move,as I felt paralyzing. I tried to speak,my mouth trying to move. It was black,cold as ice. ''Enough!'' I thought. ''Enough of this!''
I saw a light,calling to me. I came closer,and closer. It all faded to white.


''AAAARRGGHH!'' I yelled,waking up in a bed. I happily lifted my legs. It had been three years since I got in The Zone. I took my PDA. I looked at it. A huge crack. ''Beautiful. My only meaning of communication is gone!''
I got up,looking around. Two guys entered the room. I was not in our base,that was for sure. They wore trench coats,which quickly told me their faction: ''Bandit.'' I muttered. ''No,sir. We are not bandits.''
''Then who the hell are you?''
''We are two informants. You have a death sentence back in UK. And we are here to take you home. A reward is placed on your head,alive.''
''What the fuck!'' I yelled,turning back. ''Guys,do you know what I do to thugs like you?''
''If you move a single step,we will blow you. You are cornered. And my SPAS never misses.''
So he had a SPAS. I turned to him,emotionless. The other guy had a L85. I tripped. He pressed my stomach with the cold barrel,while the other guy searched me for weapons.
''Safety on.'' I muttered.
''What?''
I kicked the guy with the assault rifle,and grabbed his L85. I hit the SPAS guy with the butt end,and got up. ''That's what I do.'' I said,and blew one of the thug's head off. ''You will get another execution.'' I said.
''Fuck you.''He shouted. I grabbed his head,got his knife,which was a Bowie Knife. I pressed it to his eye in cold blood,then knifed his throat repeatedly. Suddenly,his head flew off.
''Decapitation?'' I muttered. ''Never seen one of these in months.''
I got out,my clothes looking like if I had been bathing in blood. I had no PDA,and no thought of where I was. I was in a swamp,full of ships. I went to a ship,slowly. I opened the door as I saw stalkers. A barkeep was sitting on his chair.
''Excuse me,but where the hell am I?''
That barkeeping guy turned at me.
''Welcome to Zaton,stalker.''
''Zaton?''
''Nearby Jupiter.''
I found a guide,and asked him to get me to Agroprom...
  12:28:48  23 January 2010
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guys just comment!
  16:21:41  23 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.17

I finally came to a familiar place. I walked a bit,trying to clear my vision. It was still calling for me. I handed the guide 6000 roubles and went away. I saw the rookie village,as I looked around. I started to walk to Garbage,as I saw two bandits. I ran to Garbage,and found a Vintar. I took it and walked on. I attacked the bandit camp,aimed and shot the leader. They turned to me,and started to shoot. I was probably 200 meters away,so I landed another shot on the machinegunner's head. I tried to hold my breath,but I got shot. I fell,got my PMm,and tried to shoot.
''Empty mag.''I muttered. The attacker ran away and got a Desert Eagle out,but thanks to my Vintar,his brains flew out. I turned and made a last stand against the bandits. They shot me three times in the leg. I fell,trying to crawl away. One of them walked to me. I changed the magazine and aimed at his head. ''Boom.'' I said,as a hole in his neck threw him away. I aimed again,to the other ones,and started to shoot. I saw one preparing a grenade,and shot the grenade. I aimed at the other one,as I suddenly coughed up blood. I lowered the weapon,and tried to get up.
I fell,and the bandits started to get nearby. I threw my pistol to them,and I started to swear. One of them came nearby,took a PMm,and aimed at me,emotionless.
''Do it.'' I said.
''DO IT!''
As he saw my wounds,he neared me and pressed the weapon between my eyes. I closed my eyes,waiting. He got his finger near the trigger and BANG.
 
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