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  20:26:43  18 January 2010
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''Callous'' Pt.4

I was getting worse every day,getting emotionless,feelingless,hell,I could not even feel silenced bullets. I was getting schizophrenic,and minor amnesiac. I wondered to myself: ''What the hell am I going to do now?''
As I walked down the road. ''Fuck,no artifacts? Damnit!'' I shouted,as I understood this was a big mistake,I was shot by a sniper,who neared me and said something in ukrainian. I could not understand what he said,but in was obvious;to kill me,or worse.


I woke up,tied up to a chair,a bandit coming nearby. He started yelling at me,saying: ''How dare you come to OUR territory? Are you one of the spies the Military sended?'' I said:''No,I was just artifact hunting!''
The bandit punched me,and made me fall by kicking my chest.
''Stop lying! Who are you working for?''
I said: ''No one! I am just an artifac-''
He kicked me in the face,getting me easily fading out.

I woke up in a damp cell,surrounded by bodies. I was thinking of what to do. As I sat,I saw dozens of mutants attacking! ''Oh god,what the fuck am I going to do now?!!'' I shouted. The guardian patrolling my cell was killed by dogs,dropping his keys to my cell. As I opened the gate,mutants got killed one by one by an anomalous force. I saw a man,who emitted psychic signatures. I found my gear and started to run away as I was shaken by a tremor. They found out I was escaping!
I fell down a hill,sending me to a tree. ''HOLY SHI-''

I hit my head hard. I started to run even clumsier,falling,rolling,and usually falling by the tremors. ''That guy emitted something psychic. ''Could it be the legend of the walking anomaly?'' I muttered. It was something new,when an exoskeleton veteran told us ''Beware of him''in his dying breath,we all got curious about it. I did not care,and I was cursing myself,saying: ''I did not get any artifacts! Damnit!''

As I ran to The Bar,there were lot of mutants attacking The Bar.
I could do nothing but to run inside,as Simka borrowed my rifle half a year ago,that day. I prayed that I would find my rifle,and Simka,If he is still alive...
  22:32:53  18 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.5

''Give me another bottle.''I said at The Barkeep. ''Here my friend,I hope you can drown your sorrows with this one.'' He did not care,obviously. He was just hoping to get another 80 roubles. I drank the bottle as I thought of ''Should I take another one?'' I turned to The Barkeep,this time he did not ask what I wanted,he already knew it. ''My friend,can you pay this bottle?'' I looked at my wallet. There were only 80. I bought another one with the last of my money,drinking it. Rookies were talking about the guy who shot Pyotr the Snork killer dead.
''He must have been a crack shot,three bullets,three kills!''
''I wonder who did it?''
Bug interrupted the conversation,saying: ''If you kiddos buy me a bottle of booze,I will tell you how it happened!''
A rookie accepted it,and he started to tell,while drinking his vodka.
''As I walked through the woods,your that guy attacked me and he hit me with the butt end of his rifle. I knocked a pistol out of his hand and grabbed it,shooting with quick effectiveness.''
I finished my sentence as one of the rookies told me: ''We will raid an abandoned village near here. Can you come with us?''
I accepted it,without thinking. As we walked through the village,the kid who called himself ''Jockey'' was covered in blood,thanks to the bloodsucker who disemboweled him. ''Should I leave the other kid alone? I took my sum,that was my job.''
''No,that kid needs help out here.''
I shot my way across the bloodsuckers,finishing the bloodsucker who grabbed him with a quick draw.
''I owe you one!''
''No,you don't.'' I answered the excited kid.
They swarmed on us,getting us stuck on a lumber mill.
''Kid,what should we do?''
''Just shoo-OH FUCK!''a bloodsucker grabbed him,and I blew its head once again.
I heard a noise as I turned around and I blew all of my magazine.
''They have destroyed the barricade!''
I threw all of my grenades down,blowing them up. Unforunately, the lumber mill started to collapse.''WHAT THE HE-''
I could not finish my sentence.

I woke up,the kid woke up too,and we shot two of them,and ran away.
''DAMN! Jockey is dead!''
''It happens a lot kid.''
''You got anything?''
I showed him the Soul artifact I found in a chimney.
As we got in The Bar,I sold the artifact to Barkeep,who gave me a fair price. I gave the kid half of the money,keeping the rest.
I entered The Bar once again,to drown my sorrows...
  23:20:39  18 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.6

''I was still thinking of what happened to my comrades. Stryglok was dead,Simka vanished,and Rustik,who I thought dead,was still alive.''
some stalker got my attention,as he seemed very familiar. As I got closer,I found an old friend. ''SIMKA?You are alive!''I told him. He did not understand. I hit him jokingly on his shoulder,which he replied: ''What the hell are you doing,stalker?''
''My friend,do not you remember what happened?''I asked him,suprised.
''Who are you? What are you talking about?'' he shouted at me.
''If you both won't stop yelling,get OUT!'' Barkeep shouted.
I got him out,with him still looking as if nothing happened.
''Oh no,I told at myself,oh,no,no! Friend,open your right forearm!''
He did nothing,so I ripped that part of suit open.
I saw the writing.
S.T.A.L.K.E.R.
I was shocked. How did that easy-going lil dude became a callous marked?
''My friend,you will remember something.''

I took him to the Dark Valley,showing him Vanuska's grave.
He turned at me as if he was in a trance.
I was not happy. My comrade was found amnesiac! I would not give up.
He woke up,and turned to me,saying:''Bug?''
''Yes! You remembered me,my friend!''
''No,that's what I heard. Someone calling Bug.''

I was shocked. I thought that I could show him things from the past,so he would remember. I got him to Rustik,who hanged out near Army Warehouses. When he saw Rustik,he went into a trance again.
''Who is that?''Rustik asked me.
''It is Simka,I found him!''
Rustik was,weirdly,happy.
I asked Simka: ''Do you remember us?''
''BUG! MY FRIEND! AND RUSTIK! YOU ARE ALL HERE!!''
He shouted.
We drank vodka all night.
He still had holes in his memory,though they were not so important.
''What did you have been through?''I asked.
''I woke up in a basement,full of bodies. There was a bloodsucker....

To Be Continued
  12:53:20  20 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.7

I started to stutter this morning. The Sun was shrouded by clouds,as usual. I realized it when I heard a transmission and tried to answer it.
''Seriy talking, we need help. Our scavenger is dead and we accept to buy a NVG,a sunrise suit,and a gas mask.''
I was lucky. I could finally sell that blasted NVG! ''Co-coming'' I told at the radio,walking to Garbage.

As I finally entered the place,I saw that the place was full of military goons,shooting where Seriy's group was placed. I tried to run away,as one of them knifed me in the shoulder,knocking me out.I woke up as I saw that they were carrying me into a truck.

''Who are you?''asked a strange voice.''What were you doing,outside of The Zone.''
''Sergeant Gary Leighman,30th SAS Regiment,callsign: Papa 8.''
'Ok,Gary Leighman,where are you from?''
''Britain''I muttered.
''Well,what are you doing in The Zone?''
''I was here on a covert op mission,and my team got slaughtered by bloodsuckers.''
''Let's see Sergeant Leighman,let's see...''
I was afraid of them,what if my country found out I was a deserter?
I had no idea. I was not tied,weirdly. I reached out for my sawn-off TOZ and I pointed the barrel at that guy.
''No offense,just who are you gals?''
''We are the Military. We are here to send you back home.''
He turned to me and shot me.
''Burn the corpse.''they said.

I woke up.
  23:32:21  20 January 2010
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''Callous''Pt.8

''Hey,Ba-Barkeep,wha-what's up?'' I stuttered.
''As usual,although I have a job for you.''
''Yes? What is the job?''
''Deliver these documents to Sidorovich.''
I took it without thought. I started walking as I saw a Freedom patrol,shooting their way out of Duty defenses. ''Whoa,hey,stalker! Come help us over here!'' a dutyer shouted. ''Okay,wha-what should I do?''
''Shoot them! What else can you do?''
I readied my G36 and started to shoot them. One of them was down after a single clip. I tried to shoot another one,as the dutyer in front of me shouted ''GRENADE!'' which blew him to pieces,and got me shell-shocked. I was looking at his pieces,which consisted of an arm and a torso. ''RETREAT!''one of the dutyers shouted,making me run fast as I can to Agroprom. I was chased by some guys of Freedom,as I tried to lose them,I fell off a trapdoor. I was probably in Agroprom Underground. I got myself up,and readied my rifle. A controller was looking at me,as I tried to take aim,I fell onto my rifle,making it shoot numerous times. I saw the controller getting shot,I found that as an oppurtunity to get out.

I got out,ran to Garbage,and from there to Cordon. I went to Sidorovich,whom gave me 3000 roubles for bringing the documents. I arrived at The bar in horribly shape,my skin resembling crazed zombies. I got out and went to Red Forest,as I saw an old enemy: Red.
He was the one who planned the attack on the UFOTZ base. I readied my rifle,pointing to his head. I pulled the trigger. ''Jam-jammed? Oh fuck!'' I ran away,as some Freedom guys aimed at me. I ran to Father Diodor's camp,which quickly got destroyed by the trigger-happy Freedomers. I took a guy's bomb and prepared to throw it as the sky got red. ''BLOWOUT!'' the Freedomers shouted as they got away. I ran into a village before time ran out,as a bloodsucker threw me into a basement.

I came to senses as the bloodsucker grabbed me,making me use my ''Clumsy Fist'' move to take him out. I grabbed my rifle and double-tapped it to no effect. I took out my knife and threw it right in the eye. Still no effect,I got my reliable double-barrel and blew its head off. ''Bitch.'' I muttered,as I saw a grenade launcher,not an undermounted one. I quickly went off for The Bar,as Dutyers looked for it.

''Stalker? Where did you find that Bulldog?''
''Ne-near army ware-wa-warehouses,sir.''
''We were looking for it. You came just in time.''
I took a reward of 10000 roubles,which made me a lot happy as I could buy vodka.
I entered The Bar,asking: ''Two vodk-vodkas,please.'' I was given another mission,to enter now ruined X18. I left drunk,making me think of my journeys as I fell to the ground.

I woke up in The Bunker in Yantar,which made me think of ''How the hell did I get here?''
Sakharov said: ''Lucky for you,stalker,you lived.''
''I don-I don't understand.''
''You will. You will...''
  09:58:55  21 January 2010
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guys I don't care if it is positive or negative just comment!
  14:22:48  21 January 2010
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as always, i think its good but i am a little confused that so much stuff is happening all the time. oh, by the way, are you still writing for Bug's perspective? or did he get home to england?
  14:40:28  21 January 2010
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still bug,that was just a dream and,he usually ends up in deep shit so that's why things get confusing.
Stuttering,captive by bandits and sudden freedom attacks make it like a web of trouble.
also every story is one week later form the previous one,that's why he ends up being shot many times
  14:53:57  21 January 2010
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ahh okay

still........ SAS for the win
  15:07:26  21 January 2010
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does simka have a military background? and when's the next chapter?
 
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