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The Creature In the Warehouse

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...The fear swept through him like a wildfire, he felt cold chills running down his spine. He couldn't move. He was frozen in terror at what could be awaiting them inside this building.

Why am I so scared? There's nothing there that can hurt me, not after I shoot it full of holes anyway. Why can't I move? It does look very dark in there. I have faced worse things than the dark before now. It is very dark in there. I haven't been afraid of the dark since I was ten. It's just a childish thing.

Do you really think someone could think so calmly, logically, and clearly if he got terrified like that?

...He looked back at Luka, 'look Luka I'm sorry. Something here is getting to us all. Can you please tell us what you saw?' His voice had lost nearly all of its bluster now.

Probably, Yuri was really strong men, if he could overcome this psychosis in a moment.

...It increased its speed and jumped off the cat-walk and kept running for the door....

Hey, dude, why did you make the controller be able to run? It's pretty amusing thing.

The rest is pretty good.

When writing scary stories they say you should write about what scares you - tbh I'm on scared of open water and needles (oh and my ex-wife) nothing in that to scare you in the zone.

I'd like to add some to it.

The most scary things come from our mind, our imagination. If it has time, and "food" - just couple of hints, it'll make the rest.

Like here:

Sanyok suddenly stopped; something had caught his eye. He raised his arms slowly to... ...Sanyok let his breath out as he realised he had been holding it since he thought he had seen movement.



really wish I could read all that

Would you like me to translate it? I could try.
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