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  19:36:44  24 August 2009
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Simbalime
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Horrors of the Zone

This story is about 4 stalkers' lives in the zone. This is my first story, so don't expect it to be really good. Enjoy, comment as you wish. Criticism and ideas are welcome of course also, if you want a character that you have made, to be in this story then I can do it Just remember not to make them unrealistic/weird. So enjoy! I hope you like it


chapter 1: Deep rain.

Vanuska stared at the darkness. He had been in the zone for 2 weeks now. He have been in the rookie village for some time now. But he can't exactly be called a “rookie”. He knows how to handle a gun, and he can tell the difference between a trap or a none-dangerous situation. He had achieved the respect of many stalkers. Wolf had put him on guard duty, because the mutant activity had become more active lately. He could see none mutant's, but it was night so it was pretty dark. He could hear distant screams and howls. Just the thought of what was going on out there scared him. “gloomy weather, eh?” said said Simka Baton.
Simka was Vanuska's best friend. They traveled to the zone together and they have known each other for some years.
Simka had the same background as Vanuska, he was a respected stalker who knows quite something about the zone.

“yes” said Vanuska quite stiff. They where going to rid a dog-lair tomorrow, and all stalkers knew that every day in the zone, might be there last. “come on man! Don't be so scared. You know we are not gonna die. Besides, we got backup.” said Simka to comfort Vanuska. “i know, I know, its just..... I think going to the zone was a mistake” Simka and Vanuska had robbed a bank, but they failed. So they traveled to the zone. “it was either that, or prison, my friend.” replied Simka. At the same time he finished the sentence, a loud thunder sounded. Suddenly after the thunder, it started raining heavily.
It was like Vanuska's heart where filled with sorrow as the rain got stronger. He couldn't sleep, but after some time, his body gave up.

end of chapter 1.
i will make another chapter shortly.
  20:19:33  24 August 2009
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Horrors of the Zone

Chapter 2: Dog hunt

The sun burned in Vanuska's eyes, as Simka woke him up. “Come on Vanuska, its time,” Simka said, and smiled. Vanuska gathered his equipment, and then he joined the other stalkers. Simka was put in charge of the squad. Two other rookie's where in the group. “Alright, you know what to do. We will find the lair and then shoot the bastards down, are we clear?” Simka said to them. “Yes,” replied one of the rookies.

15 minutes after that they where standing 11 meters away from the lair. They could see all the blind dogs from here, there was about 9 of them. The Rookies where nervous. “On my mark” whispered Simka. Vanuska and the others nodded in reply. “1....2...3.. NOW!” whispered Simka. The stalkers opened fire and killed 3 of the dogs, the other dogs where quick to react, and they stormed towards the stalkers. Simka took aim with his AK/74, and fired at the dogs. He wasn't that lucky, though. Two dogs fell to the ground but the others continued. The rookies where too nervous, so none of their shots hit the dogs. One dog leaped towards one of the rookies. He fell down as the dog was on him. He struggled against the dog, but it was no use. Vanuska was quick though. He took his AK/74, and aimed it straight at the dogs stomach. 3 shots where fired, and some pathetic yelps came out of the dog. Vanuska quickly turned around, and he saw a dog leaping towards him. He quickly hit it with his rifle. The dog was knocked back. He pumped it full of bullets and it quickly died. Simka shot the last dog, and finally, there was peace. The one rookie had some scratches, but it was not severe.
  09:07:57  25 August 2009
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Interesting story but it is a bit tarnished by grammar mistakes and the occasional wrong word usage, IE: where -- were

Sorry for the nit-picking but it irritates me.
  16:22:47  25 August 2009
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Interesting story but it is a bit tarnished by grammar mistakes and the occasional wrong word usage, IE: where -- were

Sorry for the nit-picking but it irritates me.
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Thanks for the comment i know that theres lots of mistakes, but my english isnt very good.
  16:25:29  25 August 2009
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---QUOTATION---
Interesting story but it is a bit tarnished by grammar mistakes and the occasional wrong word usage, IE: where -- were

Sorry for the nit-picking but it irritates me.
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and it dosn't bother me, that you are nick-picking. its nice to have your toughs on the story besides, before i can be good at this stalker writing thing, i have to learn it the hard way.
  16:27:48  25 August 2009
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Horros of the zone.

oh, by the way, im not done with the story yet and remember, if you want a character that you have made, to in this story, then i can fit him/her in perfectly.
  21:58:32  25 August 2009
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Horrors of the Zone

Chapter 3: The long road


The stalkers greeted the group with food and vodka. They celebrated that they returned home alive all four men. “you see, we didn't die! So stop being so gloomy and celebrate that we succeeded the task with ease!” Simka said.
Vanuska didn't reply, he just returned to his sleeping bag, and then rested.
He didn't talk with the other stalkers the whole evening. Simka had just collected the reward from Sidovorich, it was an amount of 3000 roubles.
“come on Vanuska! Why haven't you talked with all the other stalkers all day? Anyways, I was thinking......... maybe we should head out for the Bar.”
Simka said. Vanuska looked at Simka with surprised eyes. “you sure you want to go? You know we have to pass the Garbage first. And you know that there is swarming with million bandits there.” Vanuska said a bit curious.
Simka nodded in reply. Vanuska tough of the trip that they were gonna take, if they sat off for the Bar. Finally, after two minutes silence, “okay, I am up
for it. But if we die, I am blaming you.” Vanuska said. “good then, but if we die you cant blame me, hehe.” Simka said while he laughed. The next day, they went to the garbage. When they neared the Bridge outpost, they halted.
The military wasn't there. Only human bodies and dog corpses. The strange thing were, that all the dogs were dead. It was quite literally, a massacre.
Simka went onward, with Vanuska covering his back. Because it could be a trap. When Simka nearly passed the outpost, a Military stalker stepped out of a bush. “Don't move, or I will shoot!” he yelled. The stalker took some steps towards Simka. Simka said nothing though, he just stood still. “Hand over your weapons and leave! This place is restricted for Military personnel only!” the stalker yelled. “look, I don't want any trouble, what if I gave you some roubles and we can....... forget about this.” Simka said calm. “Ha! You think you can bribe your way out? Even if I took the offer, the other soldiers would shoot you on site!” the Stalker yelled yet again. Vanuska noticed that the stalker hadn't seen Him yet. He aimed his AK/74 at the persons head. Suddenly a gun was pointed at Vanuskas head. “Don't even think about it, Scum!” a Military stalker said. Now he realized that there wasn't only one stalker, there was two. Vanuska had no clue what to do. Neither had Simka.
Suddenly, Vanuska took a chance. When the other stalker was scratching his nose, he struck him with his rifle butt. The stalker was knocked out, and while the the first stalker was confused, simka slashed him with his rifle too.
“good thinking, Vanuska!” Simka said while he smiled. “lets disguise us as military stalkers, take their gear!” Vanuska said. They took of the suits of
the stalkers, and they took their weapons. After that, they shot the stalkers, and then they hid their bodies. As they went to the entrance of the garbage, they saw several military camps. Even some choppers and jeeps. Something big must be going on, Vanuska tough. Finally, after an hour of walking. They were at the Garbage. Ahead they saw a barrier, with five stalkers guarding it.
They took a good look on the stalkers, because they didn't look like bandits
nor did they look like loners. They wore standard mercenary armor, but the colors were jet-black and white. Their weapons was an M4A1 rifle, and a desert eagle. One of the strange stalkers spotted Vanuska and Simka. “Hey, you Stalkers! Halt! Why are the military sending two military stalkers up here?” he yelled. “we are not military! We are Loners disguised as military stalkers!” Simka yelled quick. There was a moments silence. “Loners you say? Did you two sneak past the military by your selfs? Come over here, lets have a chat.” the stalker yelled. Vanuska and Simka hesitated at start, but then again, did they have choice? Five armed men were looking at them, ready to blow their head off. They went to the barrier. “Hello stalkers, what is your business here? It must be important, since you sneaked by the military to get here” the stalker said calm. “we are traveling to the bar, to get new assignments and a place to settle down.” Vanuska said quite nervous.
“ah, so your traveling to the Bar, Eh? Well, good luck to you then.”
the stalker nearly finished his sentence, as his radio started.
Vanuska could just hear it was something about some bandits heading here.
“WHAT? Shit! How many bandits are coming? Eight? Damn!” he replied.
“Please stalkers, help us! We are in deep shit! Eight bandits are heading this way! Help us, and you will not regret it!” the stalker said. Some seconds passed, and finally, Vanuska and Simka nodded. “thank you stalkers! We are in dept to you!” he said.

Vanuska and Simka took position with Sgt.Stryglok. That was the stalker they were talking to. They hid in the bushes and behind some trees, were the bandits did not expect them. The other group hid them selfs in a bus.
They could hear foot steps. “are you ready?” Stryglok whispered. “yeah”
was the reply from Simka. When the bandits were at 6 meters distance, they
began to shoot. Already from the first burst of shots, five bandits fell to the ground, some squirming in pain, other laying dead still. They made short work of the rest of the bandits, Vanuska couldn't even understand why they had needed His and Vanuska's help.
  16:43:34  26 August 2009
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Horrors of the zone

im posting the character sheet, if you want a character in this story ;D


.Gender
.eye color
.hair color
.appearence
.status (like rookie,experinced,expert and so on )
.prefered weapon class (marksman,scout,assault and so on )
.Current weapon
.personality
.describtion/zone story
.Faction. the Choices are: duty,freedom,bandit,loner,military,mercenary,monolith, and my own faction called UFOTZ (united federation of the zone)

have fun! im looking forward to see your characters! just remember not to make them weird/unrealistic. okay, are we all set?
  18:55:56  26 August 2009
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Horrors of the Zone

Chapter 4: Fields of radiation

Vanuska and Simka sat around a camp fire with the other stalkers.
”you did a good job, stalkers.” Sgt.Stryglok said to them. It was getting dark, and suddenly it began to thunder. The weather was hazy and dark. Vanuska and Simka stayed with the strange stalkers until morning. “sorry for not telling you that much, but things were in a hurry. We are members of the United Federation Of The Zone, or in short, UFOTZ. Our goals is basically
Duty's and Freedom's combined. We fight the zone, to make it a better place.
When our goal is finally complete, there will be no mutants in the zone, and it will be open to everybody. I mean just think about it, a zone with no mutants, and the area will finally be livable again.” Stryglok told them. Vanuska tough of a livable zone, but he couldn't imagine it. As he saw the zone, there will always be mutants and other horrors in the Zone. “well, as said, heres your reward.” Stryglok said, while reaching out for something in his pocket. He his PDA out, and transferred 2700 roubles to Vanuska and Simka's PDA. “there you go, as promised.” Stryglok said while smiling.
A short“Thanks Stryglok” came out from Vanuska's lips. Then suddenly, Stryglok looked at Vanuska and Simka, as he had forgotten something. “hey, by any chance you, do you want to join us? We are recruiting experienced stalkers. You will get good weapons and armor, and really good armor too.
And, you will be fighting for a good cause.” Stryglok said. Simka and Vanuska looked at each other quite confused. “sorry, but we just want to get to the bar for now, if we see you again, maybe we will join.” Simka said.
Stryglok gave a little Sigh. “of course. But I doubt that we will see each other again. You know that every day in the zone, could be your last. Well, anyways, if you are keeping on the road, then you will walk by a ruined building. We call it the “Flea Market”. We got a small base there, its our foothold in the garbage. If you are ever to get north, then our main base is in
The red Forrest. We also got a base in Pripyat, in the center actually. But we
lost connection to the base in Pripyat, we don't have a clue whats happening up there. When you reach the bar, you will be sure to find some of our men,
They are recruiting stalkers up there. Oh, by the way, you better want to take those military suits off, because many factions, like freedom,will shoot you
on sight.” Stryglok told them. The next day, they traveled further to the Bar.
As they walked up to the Bar, they understood why people call this place the “garbage”. There was scrap and metal pieces everywhere, it was a really big junkyard. It had a strange effect on stalkers, a feeling of decay,ruin, and sorrow. They didn't encounter any bandits on the way, they only saw some dogs running across the road a few times. They saw fields of pure radiation in the distance, and they could only imagine who would venture out there.
Nearly at the end, they heard a Terrifying roar, it woke fear in their hearts.
The sound was close, and it was like they couldn't move. Another roar sounded. The horror they saw was unbearable. It stood four meters away from them, its mouth was horrifying, it had tentacles where its mouth should have been. It was a tall, fearsome sight. It looked humanoid, but they knew it wasn't Human. Its red eyes stirring at them with hatred, and hunger. Some places were covered with wild,black, beast-like fur. It was Horror.
Suddenly, it started to turn invisible. They head another roar, and they could hear that it was running towards them................

To be continued........
  23:27:29  26 August 2009
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Chapter 5: The Horrors of the Zone

Vanuska was stunned in fear. It was like his heart stopped beating. He draw his AK/74, but he fumbled. The gun fell to the ground. Vanuska and Simka was petrified in horror. Suddenly, it became visible, a half meter away from Simka. It grabbed Simka, then it jumped back to the wilderness with him.
A final roar sounded. The last roar, was somehow more terrifying than the others. He heard Simka scream, and he knew he had to find him. He followed the direction the monster had headed. He pushed the leafs from a bush aside, and then, he saw a little opening. The monster sad on simka, it was about to clutch its tentacle mouth around Simka neck. Now Vanuska replaced his fear with hatred, hatred that was pointed at the monster. He draw his pistol, quickly, shot one bullet at its head, and suddenly, the beast-like sounds stopped. The shot didn't miss. Simka quickly pushed the monster aside.
“OH GOD! WHAT WAS THAT THING!” Simka yelled. he was terrified.
After ten minutes, they came to sense again. “i think I know what it is....I've
heard about a creature, that sucked blood out of its prey....... I think its..........
a blood sucker.” Vanuska said, scared of that thing to get up again. Simka
looked at Vanuska, and tough of what would had happened if Vanuska hadn't
been there. “thank you friend, you saved my life.” simka said calm.
There was silence. Vanuska lifted the “blood sucker” up on his shoulders. They could tell good stories about their clash with this semi-legendary beast.
And they could make good money, if they sold the body to scientists.

They neared a duty barrier, blocking the entrance to Rostok. “Halt Stalkers! You are on duty territory, no shooting here, or we will put you down.” one of the duty guards said. “what is your business in Rostok?” asked the same dutier. “the same reason that every other stalker are coming here for, we are heading to the Bar.” Simka said polite. The dutier looked at Simka and Vanuska, then he said “alright, we will let you through.” The dutier said.
“oh, wait! Be careful, I heard that some new mutants appeared at the outskirts of Rostok. Hey...... is that.... a Blood Sucker that you are carrying? How did you to manage to..... ah, never mind. You know it requires both wil and Courage to take down a blood sucker, well it looks like you got that courage and wil.”


Chapter 5 part 2

the weather was foggy and dark, as they wondered to Rostok. Ahead, they saw a truck and some stalkers. They Held weapons ready, and it looks like they were attacked by something. They heard them shout, and sometimes they actually shot at nothing. Suddenly, they heard a Lion-like raw, and they saw the silhouette of a crawling,human body, that actually was pretty fast.
They saw five more silhouette's like these, and they were all circling the stalker group of four men. Simka and Vanuska ran over to the stalkers to help them. It was four loners like them selfs. They looked experienced, because they got good weapons and armor. When Simka and Vanuska joined them, they didn't even talk to them. Then, out of the darkness, a thing that looked like a stalker jumped out of the darkness. It landed on one of the stalkers, and it actually took a bite of his throat. The stalker was dead on an instant. Before any of the other stalkers could react, it jumped away. One of those monsters jumped on Simka, but Simka was ready. He quickly shot its chest-area, and only a dead carcass landed on Simka, although it knocked him down. Vanuska shot one of those things in the head, as it was about to jump on another stalker, it fell to the ground with a big bump. Suddenly, out of no where a snork jumped on Vanuska. It felt like all the air was pressed out of his lungs. The snork clawed Vanuska's chest, and Vanuska felt a massive
pain. He managed to punch the snork with a Clumsy but powerful fist.
The snork just continued to claw away, but this time at his face. Before its sharp nails could come in contact with his face, Vanuska head-butted the snork. He didn't knew if it helped, but he got to push it away. The snork were stunned for some seconds. He took his pistol and shot its side. A big scream of pain sounded, as the bullets teared through the snorks flesh. He pushed it aside, so he was able to get to his feet. The snork lied down, but it was not dead. Vanuska took his rifle, and hammered the rifle-butt in the snorks face several times, then it stopped moving. While his desperate struggle against the snork was going on, the others were finishing the rest of the snorks.

“Thank you stalkers, without you we couldn't have made it. Well, Benarchi didn't anyway...... poor guy. We will take him back to the bar, for a proper
burial. It looks like you need some bandages too, friend.” one of the stalker's said. Vanuska commanded Simka to take one of the snork bodies as well.
They were glad that they finally made it to the bar. The pain in his chest was
getting stronger. He needed some medical attention quick.

Every people in the bar was shocked to see a bloodied stalker and his buddy dragging both a blood sucker and snork carcass's. “what happened? Did you get attacked by snorks?” the barkeep asked. They rid a table and placed Vanuska on it. “we were attacked by a bunch of snorks just outside Rostok.”
Simka answered stiff. He was tired, and he was battered after the combat against the snorks. Vanuska started to cough blood. “don't worry, your gonna make it, buddy” said Simka to calm Vanuska down. Vanuska made a weak nod, but he knew that he could die right here and now. The wound was deep, the snork had Clawed his whole chest, it was all bloodied and bruised. The light gazed fast for his eyes, and his vision was blurry. Then came Darkness........

To be continued.........
  17:29:05  27 August 2009
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Character sheet edit


---QUOTATION---
Horrors of the zone

im posting the character sheet, if you want a character in this story ;D


.Gender
.eye color
.hair color
.appearence
.status (like rookie,experinced,expert and so on )
.prefered weapon class (marksman,scout,assault and so on )
.Current weapon
.personality
.describtion/zone story
.Faction. the Choices are: duty,freedom,bandit,loner,military,mercenary,monolith, and my own faction called UFOTZ (united federation of the zone)

have fun! im looking forward to see your characters! just remember not to make them weird/unrealistic. okay, are we all set?
---END QUOTATION---




*EDIT*

heres the list of weapons and armor thats available .

.PMm
.Fort-15
.Sawn-off duble-barrel
.Akm 74/2U
.Viper 5
.Akm 74/2
.Chaser 13
.Abakan
.IL 86
.TRs 301
.SGI 5k
.Tunder S14
.RPG-7u
.SVUmk2
.Dragonov
.FT 200M
.GP 37
.Gauss gun
.mp5
.M4A1
.M16
.Kriss super smg
.mac 10
.colt
.desert eagle
.HK 417
.HK 417 sniper
.AK 101
.HK ump
.Benelli M3 shotgun
.Benelli M3 short shotgun
.SPAS 12
.MP7
.MP5k
.USAS shotgun
.Saiga 12 shotgun
.X8
.X8 heavy machinegun
.AK 47
.FAMAS F1
.Steyr AUG
.FN FNC
.HK G36C
.IMI Galil
.HK MG36
.RPK 74

Pistols
.APS
.Beretta 92
.CZ.52
.Glock 18C
.Colt Government M1911A1
.FN Browning M1935 High-Power Mk.III
.MP-444 "Bagira"
.ОЦ-33 "Pernach"
.Walther P.38
.SIG P220


Armor
.Leather Jacket
.Leather Jacket (with gasmask)
.Leather Jacket (with gasmask) (UFOTZ)
.Monolith suit
.Stalker suit
.Stalker suit (with gasmask)
.Ecologist suit
.Ecologist (UFOTZ)
.SEVA suit
.SEVA suit (UFOTZ)
.SEVA suit (Duty
.SEVA suit (Freedom)
.Exoskeleton (loner)
.Exoskeleton (duty)
.Exoskeleton (freedom)
.Exoskeleton (Monolith
.Exoskeleton (mercenary)
.Exoskeleton (UFOTZ)
.Bandit Armor
.Merc Suit
.Merc Suit (UFOTZ)
.Reinforced Suit
.PSZ-9d Duty Armor
.Kombez Freedom M2
.PSZ-9Md Universal Protection (duty)
.PSZ-9Md Universal Protection (UFOTZ)
.Guardian of Freedom suit
.Wind of Freedom suit
.SSP-99M
.SSP-99M (UFOTZ)
.Military private armor
.Spetznas armor
  17:55:04  27 August 2009
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---QUOTATION---
Character sheet edit

Horrors of the zone

im posting the character sheet, if you want a character in this story ;D


.Gender
.eye color
.hair color
.appearence
.status (like rookie,experinced,expert and so on )
.prefered weapon class (marksman,scout,assault and so on )
.Current weapon
.personality
.describtion/zone story
.Faction. the Choices are: duty,freedom,bandit,loner,military,mercenary,monolith, and my own faction called UFOTZ (united federation of the zone)

have fun! im looking forward to see your characters! just remember not to make them weird/unrealistic. okay, are we all set?


*EDIT*

heres the list of weapons and armor thats available .

.PMm
.Fort-15
.Sawn-off duble-barrel
.Akm 74/2U
.Viper 5
.Akm 74/2
.Chaser 13
.Abakan
.IL 86
.TRs 301
.SGI 5k
.Tunder S14
.RPG-7u
.SVUmk2
.Dragonov
.FT 200M
.GP 37
.Gauss gun
.mp5
.M4A1
.M16
.Kriss super smg
.mac 10
.colt
.desert eagle
.HK 417
.HK 417 sniper
.AK 101
.HK ump
.Benelli M3 shotgun
.Benelli M3 short shotgun
.SPAS 12
.MP7
.MP5k
.USAS shotgun
.Saiga 12 shotgun
.X8
.X8 heavy machinegun
.AK 47
.FAMAS F1
.Steyr AUG
.FN FNC
.HK G36C
.IMI Galil
.HK MG36
.RPK 74

Pistols
.APS
.Beretta 92
.CZ.52
.Glock 18C
.Colt Government M1911A1
.FN Browning M1935 High-Power Mk.III
.MP-444 "Bagira"
.ОЦ-33 "Pernach"
.Walther P.38
.SIG P220


Armor
.Leather Jacket
.Leather Jacket (with gasmask)
.Leather Jacket (with gasmask) (UFOTZ)
.Monolith suit
.Stalker suit
.Stalker suit (with gasmask)
.Ecologist suit
.Ecologist (UFOTZ)
.SEVA suit
.SEVA suit (UFOTZ)
.SEVA suit (Duty
.SEVA suit (Freedom)
.Exoskeleton (loner)
.Exoskeleton (duty)
.Exoskeleton (freedom)
.Exoskeleton (Monolith
.Exoskeleton (mercenary)
.Exoskeleton (UFOTZ)
.Bandit Armor
.Merc Suit
.Merc Suit (UFOTZ)
.Reinforced Suit
.PSZ-9d Duty Armor
.Kombez Freedom M2
.PSZ-9Md Universal Protection (duty)
.PSZ-9Md Universal Protection (UFOTZ)
.Guardian of Freedom suit
.Wind of Freedom suit
.SSP-99M
.SSP-99M (UFOTZ)
.Military private armor
.Spetznas armor
---END QUOTATION---




*EDIT*
here are some other armors

.Berill-M5 (military)
.Berill-M5 (UFOTZ)
.Military stalker suit (Military)
.Military stalker suit (UFOTZ)
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Horrors of the Zone

Chapter 6: Lone avenger

Simka saw the life disappear in Vanuska's eyes. The stalkers around them were nervous and anxious. When they took off the suit, they saw why Vanuska faded away. The wounds were Very deep, the snork had punctured
his lungs. “Simka..... revenge me......” was the last words of Vanuska.
Simka's heart was filled with sorrow, but it was also filled with Hatred for the Zone. “i am sorry...” said the barman. “DAMN IT!” Simka interrupted. He had tears in his eyes. He slammed the door and walked away from the bar. He slept in a old shack, where he was undisturbed. The next morning, when he was walking over to the bar, he walked past the burial place. He stopped by a place, where a wooden cross was placed. “Dead eye-Vanuska Uklavon-R.I.P” was carved on the cross. On the top, his gas mask was tied around. His AK/74 was also tied to the center of the cross. Silently, Simka cried.
The bar was filled with laughter and joy, right until Simka arrived.
“some Vodka please.” Simka said gloomy. The barkeep gave him a bottle of vodka, and Simka was drinking it, like it was the last drink on earth. He hurled the strong vodka down his throat. He saw a member from the UFOTZ in the bar. He was talking to another stalker, properly trying to recruit him.
He joined their conversation. “Excuse me, but I heard you are recruiting? I want to sign up.” Simka said rough. The UFOTZ member looked at him with joy. “thats great, buddy! Sign up here, and we will figure something out.” the Federation soldier said. He gave him a clipboard and a pencil. Simka writ his
name on the “sign-up list”. “okay, report to general.Puscka, he will give you the necessary equipment, and an assignment. Good luck!” the soldier said.
Simka went to the UFOTZ office in Rostok. Nearby the duty base, he saw a little encampment. Two soldiers were carrying a Stretcher, with a wounded soldier lying on it. They ran out of his site, in haste. At the encampment, he saw a Man wearing a Berill-M5 suit in UFOTZ's colors. He guessed it was General.Puscka. “uhh, excuse me, are you General.Puscka? My name is Simka, I've signed up for recruit.” simka said. The man took a look at Simka, then he made a slight nod. “there you are! One of my men mentioned you were coming. If you want to survive out there, then you better take this. Its a
Standard UFOTZ suit, it provides a little better protection than the standard mercenary armor. You will also need this, its an X8 carbine, it will protect you out there. Oh, and your side-arm of course, its an Glock 18. use these items with bravery and courage, Simka.” Puscka said. He then made a informal salute. Simka could hear some gibberish from Puscka's radio.
“what? Merc's in the wild territory? Did they ambush Rayoji's squad?
Damn!” Puscka replied. “Listen up, Simka. I've got an assignment for you.
Our squad in the wild territory, was ambushed by Merc's. We don't know
what they want. Simka, I need you to backup our squad. When you meet them, talk to Sgt.Rayoji. He's the squad commander. Good luck! Hey, also,
I am sending two guys to assist you. Meet them at the entrance to the wild territory.” Puscka told him.

Chapter 6 part two

Simka was named group leader of the three-man group. They wondered through the wild territory. They heard gun shots and shouting far away. They were running to get there fast, but suddenly, a shot flew right beside them. They threw them selfs to cover. Simka and his squad was pinned, because the Merc's had snipers up in a building. More shots were fired, and they couldn't
move out side of the concrete block, where they hid. Simka gave sign to the other two soldiers to stay where they are. He then swiftly ran to a building.
He positioned him self at the third floor. He could see the sniper's perfectly from up there. He took aim, and shot one of the snipers. He could see on the reactions of the other Merc's, that they didn't expect counter-fire. He then fired several bursts at the Merc's. He saw two other Merc's dump to the floor.
The last Merc then fled. Then suddenly, he heard a Roar that he had heard before.... he turned around, and there stood, a Blood sucker. Although he had seen a blood sucker before, he was still petrified of fear. It stormed towards him, And it was ready to kill him. He fumbled after his knife. He took a hard grip on the knife handle, and stormed against the blood sucker. It was a suicide, indeed. The blood sucker slammed simka to the ground, and he lost his knife. The Blood sucker made a Viscous roar, it was preparing to feast.
It looked at Simka with the same eyes, as the last one. Then suddenly, a little scream of pain sounded from the blood sucker. A bullet hit the blood sucker in the back. Simka's group were trying to rescue him. The blood sucker turned around, and it was looking at the soldiers with hatred. It turned invisible, and it started to run to them.
The soldiers could not see it, and there for blind fired at it. It invaded the bullets, and it clawed one of the soldiers face's. A loud scream of pain sounded from the stalker, before he fell to the ground. Simka didn't knew if he were dead. The other soldier were petrified like Simka, as he looked the
Beast right in the eyes. He tried to shoot, but the blood sucker were just to fast. It ripped the gun right out of the soldiers hands. Then a clean swipe with its claws were directed at the soldiers chest. The soldier Screamed in agony and pain, as the blood sucker stood over him. Simka managed to pull his Glock, and he fired several bullets at the Blood sucker. Only three bullets
hit the blood sucker. The blood sucker was now wounded, and it ran forward
to Simka. He had also regained his knife, and that was something the Blood sucker didn't know. He fired again at the blood sucker, and it made it slower.
Then he aimed for for the throat with his knife. He struck when it was close enough, and he placed the knife edge right inside its throat. Another roar sounded, but this time, it was a roar of pain. The blood sucker dumped to the floor. Simka Checked to his men. Both men were wounded, but they could walk. He turned around when he heard a voice. “aye, Stalker!” he saw a Merc standing before him, and the Merc slammed the rifle butt in Simka's face.

Simka woke up, in some kind of basement. There was one light in the middle
of the room. There was also a table in the room. “aye, captain! The UFOTZ soldier is awake.” a voice sounded. His vision was blurry, and he had a tremendous headache. He saw a Merc stepping in front of him. “good, you are awake. How was your nap? Hehehe... well, anyways, you are gonna tell
us the location of Sgt.Rayoji, and we are gonna let you and your friends go, okay?” the Merc said.

To be continued........
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please guys, im begging you to comment my story! if you have any idea of a person to be in this story, then post him/her! i have made the character sheet. once again, please comment! i dont care if its negative or possitive, just comment!
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horros of the zone chapter 6 part 3 to chapter 7 part 1

Chapter 6 part 3

”I am not telling you anything, you mercenary scum!” Simka said while he spat the mercenary in the face. The mercenary punched Simka right in the face in return. “look, we can do this the easy way, or the hard way. Now, tell me Rayoji's Position, and I will let you go.” The mercenary said with a calm voice. Simka looked at the mercenary with a cold face. Simka wasn't telling anything. “Look, three of my men died when we ambushed Rayoji's
Squad. I am not going to let those soldiers die for nothing. Now, TELL ME
HIS POSITION!” yelled the mercenary. Few seconds passed, then Simka looked at the Mercenary. “Who are you guys really? And who do work for?” Simka asked without Hesitation. “excuse me for not introducing myself earlier. My name is Wolfhound. I cant tell you who gave us this mission. But, you can tell me where Rayoji is hiding.” Wolfhound said with a gentle voice. “Fuck you mercenary!” Simka snapped. “very well, if it has to like that. Get him in!” Wolfhound yelled. A door opened, and a mercenary entered. With him, one of Simka's squad members. “Get on your knees!” the mercenary yelled. The UFOTZ soldier didn't obey him.
The Mercenary kicked the soldier, so he landed on his knees. He drew his gun, and aimed it at the back of the soldier's head. A loud “BANG” sounded, and Simka closed his eyes. The Soldier collapsed, and landed on the floor. “YOU BARSTARDS!” Simka yelled. “now, tell us Rayoji's Position!” Wolfhound replied. As soon as his sentence finished, a loud thunder sounded. The earth started to shake, and a foul wind was spreading
throughout the Zone. Now, the ground shook heavily. More thunders sounded, and it sounded like earth was tearing itself apart. “SHIT! Another blowout!” Wolfhound yelled. He picked up his radio, and began to talk. “attention all units! Find cover! A Blowout has occurred!”. Eleven terrifying minutes passed, and the Blowout stopped. “now, where were we....” wolfhound couldn't finish his sentence because the door were slammed aside. “Sir! A horde of mutants are attacking us! We have to move quickly to get out of here!.” said the mercenary that opened the door.
“SHIT!” wolfhound yelled. “well, I got to go stalker. Have a good time....Hehehehe.”

Chapter 7 part 1

some time had passed since Wolfhound and his company had left.
Fortunately, no mutants had discovered him. Finally, the door opened again. A UFOTZ soldier entered. He wore a PSZ-9d armor in the UFOTZ colors. “hello there, Soldier. My name is Rayoji. We don't have much time.
Grab your gear and get ready to go.” Rayoji said. After some minutes, Simka was ready to go. “may I ask what your plan is, Sergeant?” Simka asked. Rayoji looked at Simka and said “my plan? My plan is about revenge. We are going to track down Wolfhound and his company to find out who set them up to this.” Rayoji then said “Simka, Stryglok have talked about you. I hear that you are good with a shooter. That's good, because we need all shooters we can get right now. Wolfhound's company are not easy foes.” Now it was Simka's turn to speak. “yes sir. I will help you out with the mission.”. Rayoji had gathered a nine man squad, and he
was setting out to find Wolfhound. They walked a long road until they finally met some of wolfhound's company. He had left a guard post up the road. Fortunately, Rayoji's squad had the benefit of stealth on there side.
“Rustik, Take out the sniper” Rayoji whispered. “with pleasure” Rustik replied. He took aim with his SVD, and shot the sniper. The sniper was dead on the spot. After that, both sides traded blows. The Mercenary s' were slaughtered after few minutes. The squad continued up the road.
They came to a open spot. There were few concrete slobs and ruined walls
here and there. At the end of the road, a huge building was placed. There was too quiet, and Simka Soon realized it. “ITS AN AMBUSH!” Simka yelled. Just as he had finished his sentence, one of the squad members got hit by a bullet. The other eight people took cover. They were pinned, because the enemy got both snipers and heavy machine guns in the building. Bullets were flying everywhere, and the bullets were closely followed by screams of pain. “Simka! Distract them! I am gonna take out that Heavy machine gun nest!” Rustik whispered. Simka quickly ran to another concrete slob, distracting the sniper and the machine gunner. Simka got hit in the leg. He fell, fortunately behind a concrete slob.
He screamed in pain. He was helpless. Meanwhile, Rustik took aim and killed the Machine gunner. Shortly after that, the sniper died. Now, the squad had a clear field ow view. The squad gave the people in the building
another salve of bullets, killing three soldiers instant. Simka got back up, and shot another Mercenary. But there were still many mercenary s' left.
“They got Gusarov!” Rustik yelled. “Damn it! Simka's Hit too!” Rayoji replied. A squad of four mercenary s' emerged from the entrance. Simka was quick, he took aim and fired a Salve. One of the mercenary s' was killed, and another mercenary was wounded. The other two mercenary s' ran to cover, while the third one was squirming in pain. “SHIT! They've got an RPG! Rustik, take him out!” Rayoji yelled. Rustik took aim, and fired. But, his gun jammed. “OH SHIT!” he yelled. The mercenary Fired the RPG. It lunched through the Air, and a big smoke trail was following the Rocket. The RPG hit one of the concrete slobs, the one Simka was behind. There was also another soldier with him. Simka quickly threw himself to the ground. The other soldier got hit by one of the shrapnel's of the RPG. Afterward came the shock-wave. The soldier were dead in an instant. “SHIT! THEY GOT ADRICK!” Simka yelled. Simka got up, and shot the Mercenary who had killed Adrick Multiple times. The last mercenary who had exited the building got killed by Rustik. Simka ran forward to the nearest concrete slob. He grabbed the RPG, and reloaded it.
There were still some remaining Mercenary s' left in the building. He launched the RPG. The rocket tore its way through the air, and made it to the building. A large explosion occurred. The last mercenary was torn out of the building because of the explosion. “Simka, Whats your status?” Rayoji yelled. “I am alright sir!. Although, my leg is hurt badly.” Simka replied. “Gusarov,Adrick and Sdepanov are down sir!” Rustik stated.
“Damn it! Those were good soldiers. May they rest in peace.” Rayoji said.

They searched for Wolfhound, but he had escaped. Although, they found one of the Mercenary's PDA s'. they had been payed by an unknown source. But the price was good. 30.000 rubles for every mercenary.


End of Chapter 7 part 1. I will write part 2 tomorrow.

I hope you have enjoyed my story so far. Oh and I am begging you to comment! I don't care if its negative or positive just tell me what you
think oh, remember if there is any character you want to be in this story , then just tell me. I will fit him in perfectly
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Chapter 7 part 2

Chapter 7 part 2

“The guy that hired these mercenary s' sure wanted us dead” Rustik said. “yeah, 30.000 for every mercenary. I wish had that amount of money.” Simka replied. Rayoji then said “whats more important, who hired them? I mean, we are not at war with any faction. My bet would be on the Bandits. But they would take care of it themselves. Who could it be?”.
Some time passed as they continued onward. “where are we going, Rayoji?” Simka asked. “we are going to our main base in the red forest. We are going to tell the commander what happened.” Rayoji replied. “why did you guys set up your main base in the red forest. I mean, I heard that there a hordes of mutants there.” Simka then asked. “exactly. That way, we can see what they are up to, or if they are preparing for a raid.” Rustik quickly replied.
Rustik was a respected member of the UFOTZ. He was known for his legendary skills with a sniper. There were tales about Rustik taking out two blood suckers on the same time. Or stories about his courage when he charged alone and killed several men on his own. He called his SVD Blood-rain. He had been in the Zone for twelve years now, so he was an semi-legendary stalker. Rayoji was an experienced stalker too. Rayoji was
one of the High commanders of UFOTZ. He had spent his early years in Duty. Rayoji deserted Duty, and joined UFOTZ. There, he worked his way to the top. One of his most admirable achievements in his stalker life, was when he Saved his squad during the great scourge of Pripyat. Although, he has a bad relationship with duty, because he Deserted. If he weren't in the UFOTZ then Duty soldiers would have shot him on sight..The great scourge of Pripyat was an assault on Pripyat by UFOTZ and Duty in 1999. the goal of the assault was to cleanse the center of Pripyat of Mutants and Monolith soldiers, so they could establish a base in Pripyat. The Operation was an success. Although, the base is constantly under attack by Monolith and the mutants. In the late 2004, UFOTZ lost connection to the base. Rumor goes, that some of the Members are still alive, and they are still fighting against Monolith every day. They entered the army warehouses, where they met a Freedom group protecting the entrance. “Hello Ivan!”
Rayoji yelled. Ivan was the leader of the group. And since UFOTZ and Freedom had a good relationship with each other, so had the soldiers. “Good to see you here, Rayoji! What have you come for?” Ivan yelled.
“we are making our way to our base at the red forest. You?” Rayoji replied. “eh, we are holding the barrier. Shit is going to hit he Fan soon.
I heard that a big group of Monolith is coming our way. Care to help?” Ivan said. “of course. Got any idea how many there are in the monolith group?” Rayoji said. “about eleven men” Ivan Replied. Ivan and his squad of six people were stationed here to hold the barrier. If any monolith groups are to pass, then its there job to hold them back. As time went, they could see a Monolith group, heading there way. Ivan and Rayoji's squad had hid themselves behind creates,boxes, and bushes. When the monolith
squad was near, Ivan and Rayoji's squad would ambush them. Ivan and Rayoji's squad opened fire, and they killed about three monolith soldier at the first salve. The monolith soldiers quickly ran to cover. One of them
emptied his clip on one of the Freedom soldiers. The Freedom soldier fell
to the ground with a scream of pain. Another Freedom soldier fell to the
ground, as his arm were torn off. He had been hit by a sniper. Simka took aim with his X8 carbine, and fired several bursts, sending the sniper to the ground. Rustik quickly shot two of the monolith soldiers, ending there lives right on the spot. Rayoji threw a grenade and it landed right beside
a monolith soldier. The monolith soldier were torn apart, as the grenade exploded. A red mist quickly appeared. One of the Monolith soldiers charged forward. He wore a exosuit, and he held a Tunder-s14 in his hands. He shot one of the UFOTZ soldiers multiple times, sending him backwards landing on the ground. Three more “BANG”'s sounded, and another Freedom soldier died. The Monolith soldier were close to Simka, without even knowing it. Simka jumped forward with his knife, slitting
the Exosuit soldier's throat. Rustik made a quick comment. “Show off!”.
Ivan pumped one of the remaining Monolith soldiers with bullets, and
he fell backwards. The remaining Monolith soldier were captured by the group. Ivan shot him in the leg, so he fell down on his knees. “say a prayer,
Freak!” Ivan yelled. The Monolith soldier were as silent as a tree. Ivan
Pulled out his MP-444 "Bagira", and shot the Monolith soldier in the head.
“thanks for the help, Rayoji” Ivan said. “ah, your welcome. Although we lost some good soldiers.” Rayoji replied. The UFOTZ group went further
up to the Red forest. Under the way, they saw a Military Chopper flying across them. They could hear gunfire and explosions from a distance.
They met a group of three stalkers on the way to the red forest. “hey stalkers, do you know whats going on? We are seeing military helicopters
and we are hearing explosions and gunfire all the time.” Rustik asked.
“yeah, apparently, a military convoy was ambushed by hordes of monolith soldiers. I don't know about you, but we are getting out of here before
the firefight comes to us” the stalker replied. “okay, thanks for the heads up” Rustik said. The group continued up the road, where they saw a
squad of military soldiers fight some monolith soldiers. They quickly ran
to cover behind an APC, where the squad leader were sitting. “Whats your
situation, general?” Simka asked. “pretty bad. We just lost five of our men
to those damn monolith bastards! Are you guys a part of the UFOTZ?”
the general said. “indeed we are. What happened here?” Rayoji replied.
“we were on our way to red forest, when suddenly one of those freaks
destroyed one of our APCs. We stopped and exited the rest of the APCs, when suddenly more of these guys showed up. Its like they are gathering a
giant group to raid the barrier. I counted about twenty of the freaks. Please,
help us.” the general said. Suddenly, the military Chopper was shot down by one of the monolith soldiers. It crash-landed near the APC, Killing one
monolith soldier and two military soldiers. A massive explosion occurred,
and a trail of smoke followed it. “AH, SHIT!” yelled the General. One of
the nearby military soldiers took aim with his AK/74, and saw that
the monolith soldiers were advancing. He fired several bursts, killing two
of the Monolith soldiers. Now, Rustik quickly shot two more Monolith
with his SVD. Rayoji quickly Shot one of the monolith soldiers down with
his X8 carbine. The monolith forces returned the fire, by killing another military soldier. Now, Simka gave suppressing fire, by emptying his clip
on the monolith forces. Killing one of them, and wounding two other monolith soldiers. The firefight continued for a couple of minutes.
After the dust had settled, only the UFOTZ group were standing. They
continued to the red forest, and finally, they arrived

End of chapter 7
I hope you like the story, and as always, please comment!

I will be writing more tomorrow
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Mate,I liked your story,and I want to make a character,although my character's armor consists of a balaclava,some exoskeleton parts and a hoodie.Can you put him in the story?
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sure mate I've waited for ages for someone to comment

besides, the character sheet was just to get you ideas and such

oh yeah, what kind of weapon does your character have?
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my character

Nickname: Bug
Real name: Gary Leighman
Age: 36
Status: Alive
Armor: modified stalker suit
Weapon: G36 with some ACR parts
Rank: Experienced
History: One of the first thrashmen,he quickly made his name by scavenging rare weapons.Right now he is just a drunk Loner.
Afilliation: Loners
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okay dude, i can fit him in just fine
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thanks

Well,so when's the next chapter? and mate,your story is very good but you should control your mistakes.
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yeah i know, but my English sucks. i am working on the next chapter now
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another tip

mate,zone became the zone in 2011.so,i am not trying to discourage you,but how can rustik be in the zone for 12 years?
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well, because i edited a bit in the zone story.

my zone became the zone in 1986. thats why
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Chapter 8
Arrival

The group arrived at the red forest. In front of them was the UFOTZ
base. They saw soldiers exercising, or guarding places. Some of them were
heading out as patrols in the red forest. There were APCs and jeeps stationed in the courtyard. But one particular stalker sat on a bench.
He didn't wear any UFOTZ armor. He wore a standard Hoodie,
with exosuit parts on it. His head was covered in a Balaclava, so you couldn't see his face. Next to him was a G36 rifle. You could that see the armor was battered, like if he were thrown in an Wirligig anomaly.
The group approached a UFOTZ Sargent, and Simka recognized
his face. It was Stryglok. “hehe, I see you made it, Rayoji.” Stryglok said.
“yeah, and we have walked through anything to get here. Monolith,Mercenarys,mutants, you name it.” Rayoji replied.
“and I see you have a new member. Simka, am I right? Wheres Vanuska?”
Stryglok said with a heartily voice. Simka then got a sad glare in his eyes.
“Vanuska died” he quietly said. “its very sad to hear that, my friend. May he rest in peace.” Stryglok replied. “hey anyways, how did you get here this fast? Last time I saw you, you were at the entrance at the garbage.”
Simka asked. Stryglok then smiled and said “with a helicopter, of course”
first then did Simka notice the MI-17 (a transport helicopter) in the courtyard. “anyways, take some rest, you sure earned it.” Stryglok laughed. Simka took the time to learn more about the UFOTZ.
The Red forest base were created in 1995. there were many tales of legendary members of the faction, one of them including Rustik.
It was said that the founder of the faction, Isaac Petrovich, had seen the
heart of the zone. The so called “monolith”. It was also there, where he turned into a Controller. The faction were created back in 1992, were the first hordes of mutants were sighted. He also learned about operation “Flea market”. Its goal were to storm the garbage and station a base at
a construction site. The operation was successful. As time went, Stryglok
gathered a group of three UFOTZ soldiers, including Simka and Rustik.
The group needed one more man, and when the odd stalker that Simka had seen before heard about it, then grabbed the opportunity.
“I will join” the odd stalker said quickly. “uhh, okay. Name?” Stryglok asked. “stalkers call me Bug. Whats the pay?” Bug asked.
Stryglok raised an eyebrow “pay? Well, since you volunteered, then I will say.... 6000 rubles. Is that good enough?” Stryglok replied. Without further thought, Bug accepted.

end of chapter 8 part 1

i hope you like your character, trashdude
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keep up the good work

Thanks for putting my character in the storyline.Although my balaclava is only worn in battles,he gets it out in normal times
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keep up the good work

Thanks for putting my character in the storyline.Although my balaclava is only worn in battles,he gets it out in normal times
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no proplem dude. appearance noted
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i am working on chapter 8 part 2. it will be up in a couple of hours
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Chapter 8 part 2

“so, whats your story, Bug?” Simka asked while they were walking through the forest. There were put on a perimeter patrol. “my story? Well that's a long one. For a couple of days ago, I was in dept to a Bandit scum
named Segment. One day, I wondered into Yantar. I found a stash that contained some exoskeleton parts. I sold some of them to pay off my dept.
I kept some of the parts, as you can see. But then the bastard and his gang
attacked me during the night.” Bug told them. Rustik nodded, and said
“go on”. Bug continued “they captured me, and left me for dead in an anomaly field. I escaped, and got the hell out of there. Then, I decided to
give segment a little payback. I killed him and his gang, and then I traveled
to the bar. I did some jobs for the barkeep, and one day, I decided to go here for some more assignments.” as Bug finished his story, Rustik whispered “halt!”. They heard a foul roar, and they all crouched and looked around. They could see nothing. Then, something in the bushes moved. It was so quick that you couldn't even imagine it. A large wolf like creature with no fur, and two heads jumped over the group with a large leap. “SHIT! What was that?” Simka yelled.
It then quickly returned. It was charging towards Bug, who evaded it with a quick jump to the left. Simka blind fired, but hit nothing. Just like when it had come, it disappeared. Then suddenly, it jumped out of a bush, and Clawed Simka with its giant paw. Simka jumped backwards just in time, and kicked it in the stomach. It was then, Simka made a mistake. The huge
beast evaded the kick with a smooth jump to the right. It charged against
Simka. It was too late for Simka to do anything. He got knocked backwards, sending him right into a tree, pressing the air out of his lungs.
Bug was quick, though. He shot the beast multiple times, and it ran away. For now. Bug got Simka on his feet. “thanks man, I owe you one” Simka said. “it was a chimera” Rustik said. Both Simka and Bug looked at Rustik. “i have encountered a thing like that some time ago. It will be back. You can be sure of that.” Rustik said. They were on the lookout
for a while. But then they moved on.

End of Chapter 8
  21:29:37  16 January 2010
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wow

that's one hell of a thing my character does there! keep up the good work.
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wow

that's one hell of a thing my character does there! keep up the good work.
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hehe. i am writing Chapter 9 now its called The Hunt
  21:33:47  16 January 2010
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of the chimera?
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of the chimera?
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yup.
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Chapter 9
The Hunt

They contacted the base via radio, and reported that there were a Chimera on the Hunt. The group got a new mission. They were to hunt down the Chimera. Simka and Bug had talked with each other as they
hunted the Chimera. “And then the stalker said to the bloodsucker...” Bug
was interrupted by Rustik, who told them to be silent. He scouted with his binoculars and saw the Chimera. But there was not only one, but three. It was a pack. He silently told Bug and Simka to sneak up on them, and
flank them, while Rustik would distract them. “1....2....3..GO!” Rustik whispered. Rustik quickly shot one of the Chimeras. A weird roar sounded,
like it was screaming in pain but at the same time sounded like a roar that
was supposed to frighten its opponent. The three Chimeras was Charging
towards Rustik who stood about 15 meters away from them. Bug and Simka quickly ran up past the Chimeras, who were to busy looking at Rustik. Bug took aim, and shot the wounded Chimera several times in the legs. The Chimera fell to the ground, it couldn't move, but it wasn't dead yet. Simka were less lucky, as he fired several bursts, but failed to kill any of the Chimeras. Now, one of the Chimeras charged towards Bug.
Bug was about to shoot, but then he heard a click. He was out of ammo.
“AH SHIT!” he yelled. Bug quickly jumped aside as the Chimera Charged towards him. He reloaded as it turned around. The Beast had red eyes, and
they were filled with hatred. It charged toward him once again, but without
luck. Bug quickly jumped aside again, and the beast ran right into a tree.
While it was stunned, Bug grabbed the opportunity. He emptied his clip on
the Beast's head. The beast's skull cracked open as all the bullets tore it apart. A large red mist spread from its head. It was stone dead. Rustik tore the leg off of the remaining running Chimera with his sniper. The Chimera
that Bug had Critically wounded tried to get up on its legs. Bug took aim with his G36, and shot the Chimera multiple times in the head. The last Chimera was now dead. “this is Rustik to base, the Chimeras is dead.” he just Finished his sentence, when a loud roar sounded. Simka turned around, and saw another Chimera. Except this one, was about twice as big as the normal ones. It Charged towards Simka, who quickly Took aim and
shot the beast multiple times. It looked like the bullets had no effect on the Chimera. Now Bug came to Aid, but no matter how many bullets hit it, it
still charged towards them. Simka was not quick enough. Simka was send flying two meters backwards. He was knocked out for a short period of time. Then it Slashed Bug with its giant Claws. Bug fell backwards, screaming in pain. He pulled his Sawn-off and shot the Beast two times in the chest. Still no effect. Now Rustik Shot the beast right in the back head. A Loud Scream of pain sounded and the beast now struggled not to collapse on its legs. It came to its senses, and charged towards Rustik. It was about
seven meters away from Rustik, when a explosion send it flying one meter above the ground, and bumped into a tree. It was Simka that had thrown a
grenade, and it fortunately landed right under its feet


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that will be all for today i think
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BOOM! that's very cool mate. Although my character's pistol is just a lucky charm,he uses a sawn-off hunting rifle instead (clear sky one-TOZ-34 I think)
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BOOM! that's very cool mate. Although my character's pistol is just a lucky charm,he uses a sawn-off hunting rifle instead (clear sky one-TOZ-34 I think)
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okay, i will edit it now
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when will the next one come? cannot wait
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i am working on it mate

when will your next chapter come out
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it comes NOW!
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where is the next chapter mate?and I wonder something,what is simka's appearance,equipment?
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where is the next chapter mate?and I wonder something,what is simka's appearance,equipment?
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im writing it now

Simka wears a PSZ-9Md Universal Protection amor in the UFOTZ colors.
he uses a X8 carbne, but sometimes he pulls out his old friend Vanuska's
Ak/74 with a mounted scope
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and mate,I looked up the internet,there is no X8 gun. you sure it is not XM8?
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and mate,I looked up the internet,there is no X8 gun. you sure it is not XM8?
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oh yeah, thats what it was lol. i completly forgot
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Chapter 10
The Second Great Scourge of Pripyat, and the end of the Zone

“Attention all UFOTZ members! The brain Scorcher has been Deactivated! All remaining units, Gather up, We are going to war!” it sounded from the Radio. The Monolith had recently destroyed the UFOTZ
main base. All the Remaining forces had fled to the Army warehouses.
Simka gathered his gear. He was put in a group including Rayoji,Stryglok,Bug,Rustik and himself. They all wore Exosuits, but each of them carried their signature weapon. Rustik had the SVD, Rayoji his Tunder-S14, Stryglok had his M4 carbine. Bug was carrying his G36, and Simka took Vanuska's old AK/74 with a mounted scope. Along with six
other groups, they Stormed Pripyat. They fought their way through the Barrier, Killing hordes of Mutants and monolithians. “Shit, more monolithians is coming by the minute!” Stryglok yelled. The group were
sitting behind a bus, at the entrance to Pripyat. “we are sitting ducks here
Rayoji!” Simka yelled. A horde of monolithians were advancing through the street. Simka and Bug quickly ran to the other side of the street, while bullets were whistling around there ears. “Suck on this you Freaks!” Simka
yelled, while he threw a grenade. Several monolithians were sent flying
two meters up in the air. Bug Fired a Salve, killing three monolithians in the process. Rustik quickly Shot four advancing monolithians. “LETS GO PEOPLE!” Rayoji yelled. They advanced while shooting at the monolithians at the end of the street. Other Faction groups were now appearing. Both from Duty and freedom, there was also several groups
of loners. A Stalker named Marked one joined the UFOTZ group, helping
them through the Streets. They saw a group of Military choppers fly above them, when suddenly they crashed. A emission was coming. “OH FUCK!”
Rustik yelled. The group along with the other faction groups took cover
in some abandoned buildings. When the emission passed, the groups ran out on the streets again. “WHERE THE FUCK DO THESE MONOLITHIANS COME FROM!” Stryglok yelled,as they saw a group
thirty Exosuit monolithians march down the street. Strange thing was, that
all the Faction Groups cooperated to Destroy the monolithians. Even Duty
and Freedom. “Now this is what I call United Federation of the Zone”
Bug laughed. All the Faction groups, Fire several salves, Killing about
eleven monolithians. The Monolithians returned the fire, Killing
lots of people from the Groups. A Dutier launched an RPG round, hitting
a Gas tank that stood beside of the monolithians, creating a Massive Explosion. The explosion Killed the rest of the Monolithians, allowing the
Groups to continue. But then Duty and Freedom started shooting at each other again, and some loner groups were caught in the middle. The UFOTZ group advanced, and made it to the power plant. “This is it, People!” Stryglok yelled. They walked their way to the Sight where
the Monolith was placed. The group were separated on the way, as the hall
way they were walking in collapsed. Simka and a UFOTZ member named
Petya was separated from the group. “Simka, do you read?” Rustik asked over the radio. “loud and clear Rustik.” Simka replied over the radio. The other part of the group met heavy resistance from the monolithians
in the power plant. Simka and Petya continued. They came to a large
control room. Suddenly, Simka heard a Loud,Fearsome roar that he had heard before. Suddenly, Petya disappeared. “Petya, Where are you?”
Simka Yelled. He Continued through the building, and on the way he met Bug. “Bug!” Simka yelled as soon as he saw him. “Where is Petya?” Asked Bug. “I don't know. He just disappeared.” said Simka. “where are the rest of the group?” Simka asked. “They are holding off the Monolithians.” Bug replied. They Made their way to a large,open spot.
At the end of the spot, They saw a Large, Glowing Rock.
“Its the Monolith” Bug said in awe. A Stalker was standing near the
Monolith. It was marked one, He was mumbling something. “Don't wish for anything!” Bug yelled. The marked one turned around, as he heard Bug. “Why?” Marked one asked. “it will kill you” Bug then said.
“Liar! You just want the wish granter for yourself!” marked one said.
He quickly draw his AN/94, and Fired multiple rounds. Bug jumped aside,
but Simka Got hit. Simka fell on the ground, moaning in pain. Marked one
Then Emptied his clip on Bug, but didn't hit anything. Simka Draw his pistol as he were laying on the ground. He Shot the Marked one, hitting
him several times in the chest. Marked one fell, as he died. “SIMKA! ARE YOU OKAY?” Bug yelled. He helped Simka on his feet. He was in a real
bad shape. He was dying. Then Simka remembered something Vanuska had said to him a long time ago. “Revenge me” was Vanuska's last words. Simka asked Bug to gather any explosive material that he could find. Then they placed it around the Monolith stone. Simka picked up a RPG from a Dead monolithian. He constantly heard voices telling him to drop the RPG, but he ignored them. He fired directly at the monolith stone, Making a huge blast, Destroying the Monolith stone. As soon as the Monolith exploded, a massive Emission occurred, Killing everyone that was near it. A half year later, The Zone was no more.

It would then be chronicled, that Bug And Simka was two of the most legendary stalkers in Zone history, because they ended the Zone


End of the Story.

Special thanks to Thrashdude for being the Co-writer of the story

I hope you enjoyed it.
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where are you mate? I thought we would write new stories
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where are you mate? I thought we would write new stories
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Of course we should write more stories! also, i got time to write now
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IMPORTANT!!!


To fully understand this story,
then you will need to read "The Drunk Thrashman"
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