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  18:38:10  16 January 2010
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Thrashdude
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thanks

Well,so when's the next chapter? and mate,your story is very good but you should control your mistakes.
  18:45:39  16 January 2010
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Simbalime
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yeah i know, but my English sucks. i am working on the next chapter now
  19:09:28  16 January 2010
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Thrashdude
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another tip

mate,zone became the zone in 2011.so,i am not trying to discourage you,but how can rustik be in the zone for 12 years?
  19:34:19  16 January 2010
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Simbalime
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well, because i edited a bit in the zone story.

my zone became the zone in 1986. thats why
  19:46:14  16 January 2010
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Simbalime
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Chapter 8
Arrival

The group arrived at the red forest. In front of them was the UFOTZ
base. They saw soldiers exercising, or guarding places. Some of them were
heading out as patrols in the red forest. There were APCs and jeeps stationed in the courtyard. But one particular stalker sat on a bench.
He didn't wear any UFOTZ armor. He wore a standard Hoodie,
with exosuit parts on it. His head was covered in a Balaclava, so you couldn't see his face. Next to him was a G36 rifle. You could that see the armor was battered, like if he were thrown in an Wirligig anomaly.
The group approached a UFOTZ Sargent, and Simka recognized
his face. It was Stryglok. “hehe, I see you made it, Rayoji.” Stryglok said.
“yeah, and we have walked through anything to get here. Monolith,Mercenarys,mutants, you name it.” Rayoji replied.
“and I see you have a new member. Simka, am I right? Wheres Vanuska?”
Stryglok said with a heartily voice. Simka then got a sad glare in his eyes.
“Vanuska died” he quietly said. “its very sad to hear that, my friend. May he rest in peace.” Stryglok replied. “hey anyways, how did you get here this fast? Last time I saw you, you were at the entrance at the garbage.”
Simka asked. Stryglok then smiled and said “with a helicopter, of course”
first then did Simka notice the MI-17 (a transport helicopter) in the courtyard. “anyways, take some rest, you sure earned it.” Stryglok laughed. Simka took the time to learn more about the UFOTZ.
The Red forest base were created in 1995. there were many tales of legendary members of the faction, one of them including Rustik.
It was said that the founder of the faction, Isaac Petrovich, had seen the
heart of the zone. The so called “monolith”. It was also there, where he turned into a Controller. The faction were created back in 1992, were the first hordes of mutants were sighted. He also learned about operation “Flea market”. Its goal were to storm the garbage and station a base at
a construction site. The operation was successful. As time went, Stryglok
gathered a group of three UFOTZ soldiers, including Simka and Rustik.
The group needed one more man, and when the odd stalker that Simka had seen before heard about it, then grabbed the opportunity.
“I will join” the odd stalker said quickly. “uhh, okay. Name?” Stryglok asked. “stalkers call me Bug. Whats the pay?” Bug asked.
Stryglok raised an eyebrow “pay? Well, since you volunteered, then I will say.... 6000 rubles. Is that good enough?” Stryglok replied. Without further thought, Bug accepted.

end of chapter 8 part 1

i hope you like your character, trashdude
  19:51:32  16 January 2010
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Thrashdude
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keep up the good work

Thanks for putting my character in the storyline.Although my balaclava is only worn in battles,he gets it out in normal times
  19:54:27  16 January 2010
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Simbalime
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keep up the good work

Thanks for putting my character in the storyline.Although my balaclava is only worn in battles,he gets it out in normal times
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no proplem dude. appearance noted
  19:55:54  16 January 2010
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i am working on chapter 8 part 2. it will be up in a couple of hours
  21:20:48  16 January 2010
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Chapter 8 part 2

“so, whats your story, Bug?” Simka asked while they were walking through the forest. There were put on a perimeter patrol. “my story? Well that's a long one. For a couple of days ago, I was in dept to a Bandit scum
named Segment. One day, I wondered into Yantar. I found a stash that contained some exoskeleton parts. I sold some of them to pay off my dept.
I kept some of the parts, as you can see. But then the bastard and his gang
attacked me during the night.” Bug told them. Rustik nodded, and said
“go on”. Bug continued “they captured me, and left me for dead in an anomaly field. I escaped, and got the hell out of there. Then, I decided to
give segment a little payback. I killed him and his gang, and then I traveled
to the bar. I did some jobs for the barkeep, and one day, I decided to go here for some more assignments.” as Bug finished his story, Rustik whispered “halt!”. They heard a foul roar, and they all crouched and looked around. They could see nothing. Then, something in the bushes moved. It was so quick that you couldn't even imagine it. A large wolf like creature with no fur, and two heads jumped over the group with a large leap. “SHIT! What was that?” Simka yelled.
It then quickly returned. It was charging towards Bug, who evaded it with a quick jump to the left. Simka blind fired, but hit nothing. Just like when it had come, it disappeared. Then suddenly, it jumped out of a bush, and Clawed Simka with its giant paw. Simka jumped backwards just in time, and kicked it in the stomach. It was then, Simka made a mistake. The huge
beast evaded the kick with a smooth jump to the right. It charged against
Simka. It was too late for Simka to do anything. He got knocked backwards, sending him right into a tree, pressing the air out of his lungs.
Bug was quick, though. He shot the beast multiple times, and it ran away. For now. Bug got Simka on his feet. “thanks man, I owe you one” Simka said. “it was a chimera” Rustik said. Both Simka and Bug looked at Rustik. “i have encountered a thing like that some time ago. It will be back. You can be sure of that.” Rustik said. They were on the lookout
for a while. But then they moved on.

End of Chapter 8
  21:29:37  16 January 2010
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Thrashdude
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wow

that's one hell of a thing my character does there! keep up the good work.
 
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