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  18:51:05  3 May 2010
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QuaNTuMbenxh
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It flows too fast for my taste, and it is not structured properly, hard to follow at certain places, p.s. use microsoft word for writing the story, that way you can spellcheck and use thesaurus to make it more enjoyable! best of luck.
  16:33:29  5 May 2010
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Runo
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It flows too fast for my taste, and it is not structured properly, hard to follow at certain places, p.s. use microsoft word for writing the story, that way you can spellcheck and use thesaurus to make it more enjoyable! best of luck.
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Good idea. Also i have made a plan. I will wright one chapter each Saturday.
  23:40:57  8 May 2010
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Runo
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Well here it goes. This is about Vladimir going to the bar, for another assignment for the Barkeep. Also i did not use office word cause i cant find it.

Enjoy.

15 august

Vladimir' s Dairy.
"Well, well, well. Back already," say' d the Barkeep to me while i walked inside the bar. "Barkeep, this was some though shit," I say' d to him.
"Well my boy, this is the future. Soon we will be rolling in money."
"Barkeep i don' t have time for this," I say' d angry to Barkeep. " I have to go meet whit Lukas, so just give me the cash." Barkeep looked at me strangely. "No, no, no Vladimir my friend. I don' t got the cash."
"WHAT!!!???" I yelled, so everybody looked at me. "Vladimir, my boy. Sit down and have a drink on the house. I' l explain everything."
I sat down, while Barkeep found a glass and some vodka for me. "Now listen here. This artifact is wanted. The scientists will pay me so much, that i will have vodka for one year. I need to get this to the scientists first though. I am no fighter, and getting through to Yantar, where the only active scientist base is located, will mean for me to get through the wild territory."
I looked at him strangely. "What!!! I cant go through to Yantar alone. I am only 34. I don' t deserve to die."
"Die. No one say' d you had to die. Of course you cant get through alone. That' s why i hired some mercenaries to help you out. They are going to camp at one place in Rostok, and clearing the area, so you can get through." Barkeep say' d while looking for another bottle of vodka. "How much money is it to me?" I asked. "Well, i had to pay for the mercenaries, and for the artifact, so what about 10%?"
"Well that sounds like a far deal, assuming that the artifact is worth all the trouble. Agreed." Barkeep gave me "THE LOOK" and say' d:" Far enough."

I knew i should pay Lukas a visit, so i could get something for what i did. I walked to the place where we had establish a base, when i saw that the guards had some weird armors. Petrenko was one of the guards. "Petrenko, hoes it going. What armor is that?" I asked him.
"Its sergent Petrenko, and this is duty armor." He say' d.
"Duty?" I looked at him strangely. "You don' t know duty?"
" Uh, no. I came to see Lukas." Petrenko Looked at me like if i was a retard. "Lukas is no longer in charge. General Voronin rules the bar now." Voronin. What was going on. Well Lukas disappeared, but duty???
"O.K, then let me talk to Voronin." Petrenko told the other guards to move, and let me pass.


That was chapter 1 of this day. I will wright again as soon as i can.
  23:11:57  9 May 2010
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Runo
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Please tell me how you like the new version. Now its part 2 of 15 august.

15 august 4 pm

Vladimir' s dairy.
Well i slowly understood what had happened. When i came inside the base Voronin looked at me. "Vladimir. Petrenko told me all about what you did,"
He say' d. "But its to bad that Boar got away." I looked at him carefully.
"Voronin, what the hell happened? Is Lukas died?"
"Died. No. We repelled Lukas, as you can see, and made our own little faction. Lukas escaped whit many experts to the village." I did not understand anything." Where did you get those armors?"
"These are designs from the scientists. Its top secret. Anyway, you have done a great service, and you deserve a reward. Here take one of our uniforms. Vladimir, you are now a duty member, that is if you want to." How could i reject that offer. "I accept." Voronin took some vodka." Why don' t we celebrate?"
"I rather not. I had to much vodka at the bar," I say' d, while i was almost puking. "Vladimir. We have made a deal whit the scientists. They are waiting for a delivery of artifacts from us. How would you like to take 3 of our men, and go to yantar?" Well of course i accepted. I told Voronin about my deal whit barkeep. He told me to leave as soon as i was ready. I had to get my strength up.
  19:02:43  15 May 2010
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Runo
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16 august 2009.

Vladimir' s dairy.
Well. Claw had orders to come whit us and be our guide, whit Boris and John as guards, helping us break through. I told them that there was one of Barkeeps contacts in Rostok, that was ordered to help us break through.

When we got through the "Duty" controlled area, we saw a building, that had 3 men stationed. They told us to come. We walked inside the building. "Vladimir"? say' d one of them, that looked like the leader. "Yes". I say' d.
"Great. Jack told us you were supposed to come today." He say' d.
"Is Jack Barkeeps friend?" I asked. He looked at me strangely." Our leader. Told us you had a package to the eggheads."
"Great." I say' d," Have there been any big problems?" Suddenly we heard a dog bark. "Not whit the dogs, but we could not have make it, if it was not for all those dead Ecologists. 2 days ago, the Bloodsuckers raided our supply chamber. Well lets head to the HQ. Be ready, there may be some creatures on the way."

We walked for a long time, through the empty town, until we came to a unfinished building. "By the way," I asked." Whats your name?"
"I' m Fang. That's my Stalker name. I don't use my real name here."
"Nice name", say' d Claw. "Thanks," say' d Fang, "By the way, we found a survivor here not long ago. He told us that he came from the other side of Rostok." Claw began to shake. I thought about it, and came to a solution. Either Death or Sergie had survived. Inside the unfinished building, there were about 10 men, and we saw one wounded. "Death, i shouted." he looked at us."Claw, you son of a bitch." Death say' d whit a strange voice."Why did you leave me for dead?"We all looked at Claw. He raised hes pistol at Death, and at the same time everyone took there guns, and pointed them at Claw. "I never thought it would come to this," he say' d." I thought you were dead, man. I' m sorry." Death took up a gun that was in hes belt. " You liar." He say' d pointing the gun at Claw. Every one was either pointing at Claw, or at Death. "Drop the guns," I say' d. "I' l give you 10 seconds." I began counting backwards from 10. When i was about to say 5, i saw Death shot Claw. Then everyone pointed the guns at me, Boris and John. Suddenly someone came downstairs to us.
"Welcome Vladimir. We have been expecting you."
  22:50:16  18 May 2010
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Runo
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Next saturday i will add something special. I think that before we move on, that Vladimir should get some background, like how he came to the zone. This also involves some other characters in this story that were whit him when he came to the zone.

AND PLEASE TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE THE NEW VLADIMIR' S DAIRY!!!
  17:24:46  19 May 2010
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Runo
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I cant wright next Saturday. I will wright as soon as i can.
 
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