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Question Erm,excuse me,is it good?
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Yup
No
Kinda
Hell yes
No!!!! NO!
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  22:46:29  25 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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I know...

I don't have much time for writing.

Also Quantum,I realized I sit nearby you.

I am actually Albanian too
  22:36:36  25 March 2010
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QuaNTuMbenxh
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Yea but still, make it a little more vivid in a sense.

Make the posts a little bit "longer" you know, it seems too sped up, it should flow more slowly, but thats just my opinion.

Have Fun
  22:11:35  25 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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Thanks,good to hear from a veteran.

Stepan would die anyway.

Probably my best story,but you know,the rookie is a rookie,not the marked one
  20:14:49  25 March 2010
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QuaNTuMbenxh
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Go on !

Rock and Roll \m/

and, don't make everyone die so soon, let them live a little bit, and kill the god damn bloodsuckers, ingame i could drop the fools easily, in here it seems like hell. I'd love to see a fight with a Pseudogiant, it'd be crazy.
  18:50:09  25 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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Should I continue?

I have a good plan,but I want to have votes
  01:14:27  23 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Walking to nowhere,mourning the fresh death of Leighman,I muttered myself some stupid things. ‘’Why did he die? What if I die?’’ Were some of the questions. Leighman was a good man,he generally helped me in the training days. ‘’Bloody hell.’’ I thought. Sitting on a nearby rock,watching the hole generate smog,I sighed.
‘’He gave me some of his cigarettes.’’ I thought to myself,and opened my ‘extra stuff’ pack on my pants. Inside were some cigarettes,a pen and some papers,and a bullet. ‘’Why the fuck did I carry a bullet?’’ I thought to myself,and I grabbed a cigarette,lighting it. I had to get somewhere fast,and knowing I could get in a fight,I started to check my armor. I checked my gloves. They were exact compatibles of my green armor,they were black,and they could protect my fingers from little burns or scratches. Looking to my chestplate,which Leighman called ‘Berill,’something I never understood,I placed my fingers against it and I scratched it a bit. I was not shot,but the place hurt like hell. It was good for firefights,it saved my arse before. I pushed my bag away from my shoulders and I started checking what should I use for ‘missions,’something that I was in. There was a PDA placed diagonally,some magazines that were not for my gun at all.
‘’Enough equipment check.’’ I muttered to myself,and I got up,grabbing my L85.
Walking towards a ship that was probably 4000 meters away,I opened my PDA.

‘’Meet Beard’’ was the only task,as I could not do anything else,my whole team was fucked up and killed in an accident.
‘’Beard? What kind of name is that?’’ I thought to myself,as I detected two stalkers. They were not hostile,from what I could tell. Slowly nearing them,I could hear their conversation from above,the guys did not detect me. I would call this ‘stupidness’ as being in a place where ‘every step can be your death’ being careless would get you into a mutant hole. The duo seemed like friends,although the guy in the white jacket seemed...shady,and the other in ‘armor’ seemed like a stupid ‘trigger-happy’ maniac. They started talking,giving me the time to go nearby,talk and learn something,or shoot them if I had to.
‘’Hey,dude,you have a PDA?’’
‘’Yeah man,why did you ask?’’
‘’I feel like we are being watched,and I can’t learn who the fuck is that guy ‘cuz my PDA got broken.’’
The ‘stupid’ stopped,and opened his pocket. ‘’Okay,I found it.’’
He handed the PDA towards the shady one,and the guy started looking in the PDA. ‘’Stepan! BEHIND US!’’ He shouted,and turned towards me. They were aware of me,so I was probably fucked. ‘’What do you want?’’ I said to them,slowly,and started getting my hand towards my holster. They were rookies,from what I could tell,so they did not realize I was going for my gun.

‘’Tolik? What should I do? Should we shoot him?’’ The maniac with the name ‘Stepan’ said to ‘Tolik’ who was just aiming towards me with his gun and walking towards me. He grabbed my shoulder,checking me.
‘’Hold on.’’ Tolik muttered,and made a move with his arm,probably telling ‘Stepan’ to stop. ‘’No need to get trouble. Just shoot-‘’
I fired my M9 into his abdomen,thankfully he was near me. He fell on the ground,splattering the stones with blood. The other suddenly grabbed his AK. I was actually shocked,as he was more of a ‘quickdraw’ than I am. I did not know what he was using,I was not into AK shit,although I was going to learn what was that soon. I threw myself towards left,and I fired some blind shots. They missed,and he ran towards a sturdy albeit ruined truck. He took cover behind it,and I lied in the tall grass. I fired three shots,all of them missed,whizzing through the air and hitting the truck. He seemed to do something near his pocket. I lied on the ground,waiting him. He grabbed a grenade,and threw it nearby my direction.
‘’OH FUCK!’’I shouted,the grenade did not land near me,but I knew a trick to do.
‘’MY ARM! MY FUCKING ARM!’’ I shouted,hoping to give the effect of ‘dismembered arm.’
He looked towards my direction,and got out.
‘’What did you think,stalker? Did you think Stepan was stupid?’’ He did not know that I was fine,that was obvious.
‘’Yes.’’ I thought to myself. The idiot made a mistake by leaving his cover. Grabbing my L85,I readied it and looked towards him. He raised his hands,probably indicating surrender in an old-fashioned way. He then kneeled slowly.

‘’So,you surrender?’’ I asked,pointing my gun towards his head. He was sweating like hell,that was obvious.
‘’YES! I beg you,don’t kill me!’’ He shouted,as I grabbed his shoulder. ‘’You are not coming with me.’’
He gulped,and closed his eyes. I grabbed my pistol,and slowly raised it towards his head. He opened his eyes,just as I expected.
‘’Are you going to kill...me?’’
I nodded.
He started praying,and I slowly cocked the hammer.
‘’NO! NO-‘’
I stopped,and I sighed. This guy was probably a bandit,although. I had to do it,he would have been taking my money from my deadbeat corpse right now. I looked over to him.
‘’Look at me. I think you can get me to places,yes?’’
He nodded,his eyes still shining with the fear of a six year old child. ‘’Good. To Skadovsk.’’ I replied.
I got him on his feet,and slowly pushed him. ‘’You are on the front.’’ I muttered,and I started walking,following him. He was walking like a complete coward,bolt on hand,and always the other hand near his knife. Leighman,may he rest in peace,if he can,told me once that you had to hold one of them only. I reminded why I said ‘’Why?’’ in a stupid fashion. I remember his reply very well.

‘’What the fuck are you going to do when you run out of your fucking ammo or when you drop it?’’

I sighed. Leighman was a good man,but ironically,he was killed by me,his friend.

‘’Halt!’’ Stepan shouted,and I stopped,a bit afraid of his harsh voice. ‘’Why the fuck are you shouting?’’ I asked to Stepan. This guy was a probable ‘hippie’ back then,he knew nothing about stealth.
‘’There might be some mutants!’’
I was shocked.

‘’Mutants? What are you talking about,something like invisible things or a deformed pig?’’

‘’They are fucking mutants. In the end,they are mutants.’’
I nodded.

‘’You see,this is not a pig...’’
‘’What is it then?!’’ I replied,afraid of the tales that have been told to me. There have been bloodsucking beings,things that are corporeal in The Zone.
‘’No need to be afraid,the bad ones live underground.’’ Stepan replied. ‘’Still,we should go the other way. This is a fucking bloodsucker.’’
I got shocked. ‘’Blood what?’’
‘’These things are fucking bloodsuckers. They will suck your blood,and they can go invisible.’’
‘’It spotted us! Open fire!’’
Stepan did not have a firearm right now,so I just leaned and started firing. The lambent being jumped nearby,and grabbed Stepan. It hissed towards Stepan,and started walking back.
‘’NO! NO!’’
I watched...
The thing...
Drain all of Stepan’s blood.
It drained his fucking blood in fifteen seconds,and left like nothing happened.
Still,I sometimes hear Stepan’s wild screams for help,and the creature’s voice.


That goddamn voice.
  12:23:05  20 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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Bug was my old hero.

Read my old stories...

  12:22:31  20 March 2010
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I like what you did with Bug. Seems very Zone-like.
-David The Novice
  12:07:19  20 March 2010
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Thrashdude
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He is burning.

  06:50:37  20 March 2010
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-=Grunt=-
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Pretty good. I just don't understand why Bug would want to kill himself.
 
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