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Question Is this one good?
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Yeah...A bit
Good,good Grasshopper.
This thing sucks!
I LOVE IT!
Not that good.
THIS THING IS THE THING THAT SHOULD NOT BE!!!
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  16:15:35  21 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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The Last Trip Pt.4

I grabbed my diary,and started writing. ''Dear stalker,I am in deep shit this time. If you found this diary,I am probably dead or caught or something like that. From what I heard,you guys are planning to kill me soon. But you cannot. I just say,you cannot kill me. I found a sewer grate to away under my bed,and if you attack,I will barricade the door and get away from there. By the way,I don't have any info,so don't search my PDA.''

I dropped my diary. ''What the fuck am I writing? Deathwish or something?'' I muttered to myself,and I grabbed my stair. I placed it against the door,and I bolted it shut with some ropes and pieces of wood.
''My barricade outside will keep them down for a long time.'' I thought,as I opened the sewer grate. ''Not just yet.''
I tripped a wire between two grenades,and placed them against the door. I could hear the voices of the bandits outside.
''Now I can escape.'' I thought,as I opened the grate,and grabbed my new stalker suit. I walked towards my rifle,and grabbed it. ''This Vintar and PMm will protect me from trouble.'' I thought,and jumped down the grate. I ran towards the exit,and tripped. ''Damn water! It made me slip down!'' I shouted,as I heard voices. ''What the,the bandits could not open it. Who is this?'' I thought,as I saw the bodies,slowly walking,and grunting. I heard a jumping voice,and I slowly crawled towards the exit,trying to get up. ''Stop! STOP!'' I shouted,and I saw one of the sillhouettes get up the grate and attack the bandits. I grabbed my PMm,and started shooting. The being finally showed itself. A melted,shot body with blinded,glass-like eyes,a tentacle which seemed to be his tongue,and blood splattered like reddish ink upon him. ''No,god,no,please,no...'' I thought and I grabbed my Vintar,firing upon him. He fell,and I got up,running towards the exit. ''I had an AK in my rucksack,better look in it.'' I thought,and I dropped my empty Vintar,as the creature teared the rifle into pieces. I ran towards the exit,which seemed to be away,so I jumped. I fell from the exit,and I found myself falling from the grate into a swamp. ''I made it! Hell yeah! I made it!'' I shouted,but I fell on a rock,and I slowly got up. ''What the fuck are those creatures?'' I thought as I grabbed my AK,and I dropped my rucksack. I could see a ship in the distance,and I started to run with the last of my strength. ''Ah,Skadovsk...'' I heard a moan,and I turned back,happily.
I fell as a creature lunged on me. It was the same creature,and it was angry. I saw it's hand coming right on me,and I shouted with the last of my will...
  14:45:24  21 February 2010
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Simbalime
Bacon
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i really liked your description of the dream, and the way you describe his senses is good to! waiting for next chapter.......
  14:37:42  21 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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The Last Trip Pt.3

''Where is everyone? What is this place?''

I was in a city,long dead. No voices,no light,no life. After wandering for a short time,I wandered upon some ruins. A voice started to beep and I saw the light,so bright that it burned everything,and I ran to cover. ''Where am I?'' I thought,as I got in an apartment. ''What is this? I want to hear a voice!'' I thought. I could not speak. I opened a window,and I saw the clouds turn red. A lot of dogs suddenly came into the city from the woods,and they started to run away. I slowly walked down,as I saw the dogs run away. The skies were not clear,and everything had a red hue. A dog barked at me,and ran away. I started to run after them,as dogs had a survival instinct. I started to shout in dead silence,and started to cry,as everything turned black,and red started to burn my eyes. ''No,no,no!'' My eyes came into sense again,and I opened a watch. 01:22,26 April 1986.
''What the-''
Red suddenly embraced me with it's cold flames,and a beeping voice was the last thing I heard...

I woke up,sweating,and my clock beeping. I looked up to it,and saw the time. 01:24.
I sighed,and started to cry. ''What kind of dream was that?'' I shouted. It was real,I felt the pain. I grabbed my old rifle,and got out without my bulletproof vest,and I looked around. There was no one around,not even crows. ''Are you fucking kidding me?'' I shouted,and I ran towards Cordon. I saw no one,and I got in Sidorovich's room. He was not around. ''Enough! ENOUGH!!!'' I shouted,my brain was burning. I grabbed a radio,and shouted: ''WHERE'S EVERYONE?'' Suddenly Wolf came into the room,and said: ''Why the fuck are you shouting? We are sleeping you maniac!''
I sighed,and started to laugh. ''Sleeping,heh. Sleeping! Sleeping!''
''Thrash,what the fuck is wrong with you?'' Wolf shouted. ''SLEEPING!''
I aimed towards his head,and I shouted again. ''SLEEPING!''
He punched me,and I fell,my gun fired as Sidorovich's light got broken. I ran away,crying and laughing...
''Sleeping...Sleeping...''
I crushed open Striker's room in the rookie camp,and grabbed him. ''What the fuck did you give to me?''
He tried to grab something from the table,and muttered: ''A new drug,it has a very long effect,might make dreams,and,it damages brain. Please leave me alone Thrash,I am leaving this place.''
I grabbed my pistol,and whispered: ''Now you will leave you bastard.''
The gun fired,and he fell,splattering his brains all over his table.
''What did I do? I killed a friend...?!!''
My hands were shaking,so I grabbed his new pills and took them with some water. I grabbed his bulletproof vest,and I fell. ''What the fuck is happening to me?'' I shouted,and I ran away to the households,getting in my basement,locking and barring the door.
''I need to leave. Maybe I can move to Zaton after a few weeks.''
Grabbing a piece of bread,I started eating it while look around.
''Will do. I can hold my own for a few months with this food.'' I thought...
  12:26:46  20 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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my friend,if you don't like it,you can make another story. Or stick to the general thread. I started The Last Trip because it is my last story,and I wanted to get away of Bug-UFOTZ-Vasili Storyline. There's always a second chance,and I generally wait for someone to post something in Stalker Stories. Don't lose hope grasshopper.
  12:21:24  20 February 2010
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Simbalime
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When's your next story coming?
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well, properly never. I've givin up on stalker writing. i just felt that i wrote
Horrors of the Zone and Horrors of the Zone 2 for nothing. so i figured that i wasn't good at it. well back to your story, When are your next chapter coming out? i can't wait
  12:15:17  20 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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When's your next story coming?
  12:05:26  20 February 2010
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Simbalime
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woah! nice story thrash this is good stuff keep it up!
  11:59:28  20 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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The Last Trip Pt.2

I grabbed my vodka bottle,and left the group,hoping to get to my Base safely. ''Green is unlucky.'' I thought. ''His girlfriend got dismembered by a grenade,and fell into a whirligig because of the blast.'' I sighed,and started to look around. ''Well,whatever. She was not with us when we first wandered in The Zone,Green found her in a camp.'' I muttered. I took a sip,and started to stagger. ''Damn,this vodka is not good for me.'' I started to see bad,and I slowly grabbed a tree branch and ripped it. ''Will serve.'' I slowly walked towards my base,and entered the abandoned home. ''I need to sleep.'' I thought,as I looked around. ''Damn,somebody entered this place!'' My shotgun and ammo was gone. ''I will blow his head off if I find him.''

I quickly left the place,running towards a bandit camp. I grabbed my PMm,and started shooting towards them. One of them heard my shots,and got up with my TOZ-34. ''Damn you!'' I shouted,as I started shooting him. He fell after shots to his arm,neck and lungs. The two others started fleeing and I fired my PMm again,hoping to shoot one of them. The bullet entered one of them,and I started pot-shotting. A bullet entered his torso,and he fell. I aimed at the other one,but he escaped. I grabbed my TOZ-34,and luckily,a Vintar. I grabbed the Vintar,and aimed at the guy who tried to escape. He fell,and I stopped aiming. ''I did not fire a shot.'' Suddenly,I started to look around,as a bullet whizzed past me. I started to run,and I fell. ''Damn corpse!'' I shouted as men in blue neared me. I grabbed my TOZ-34 and started firing. One of them fell,and the others wandered away. I slowly walked up to the mercenary,and opened his back-pack. There was a Merc Suit,much better than my old CS-3a. I grabbed it,and wore it. ''Fitting.'' I grabbed one of the kevlars of them,and wore the bullet marked suit. ''Okay,now I am good.'' I started walking,and I wore the respirator,making me look like a mercenary. ''I wonder what will they say.'' I muttered as I walked. I finally neared my camp,and entered. I bolted the door,and threw my TOZ on the table. I hanged my Vintar,and slowly went towards the bed...
  23:48:14  18 February 2010
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Zugbarrh
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nice, seems im your only audience.
  22:30:22  18 February 2010
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Thrashdude
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The Last Trip Pt.1

''Shag,what happened?'' I asked,as I took a sip from the bottle,thinking of things. I added: ''He had an exoskeleton. How did he die?''
Shag sighed,and started to talk: ''Thrash,you know exoskeleton wearers can't run fast.''
I was surprised.
''And an exo can't protect you from a pseudogiant fist crushing you.''
Shag sighed again,and took a cigarette,placing it between his lips,and lighting it up with an old lighter. He took a deep breath,and left it soon after,coughing. ''As you can see...'' He muttered,as I sighed.
''Damnit.'' I thought,as I opened my pack,and I grabbed a cigarette. ''If I don't die here in The Zone,this cigar will kill me,I swear.''
Shag,Green and Striker looked at me weirdly,as I started to cough.
''Thrash,you okay?'' Striker grabbed my shoulder,as I fell,coughing.
''Get me up!!'' I shouted as I thought ''What if my wish came true?''
I grabbed my cigar,and threw it in the campfire. ''Claw... He had no enemies at all...'' I opened my recorder. I think I was the only guy in The Zone to have a MP3. I took a random amongst the songs. ''Thrash,let's get you to your base-ment. You had too much...'' Green said,as I turned to him. ''I am fine.'' I got up,grabbed the vodka near a rookie,and sat back. ''Dancing on the ashes of the earth...'' I muttered,hoping that something would happen. Suddenly,Striker got up some pills. ''Thrash,take these. They are painkillers.''
I popped them,and suddenly fell...
''Striker,what did you do?'' Shag asked. ''Nothing! I gave him painkillers.'' He suddenly opened his backpack,and looked inside. ''Fuck! I gave him LSD!''
My head was turning,and I faded out into white. Children were walking nearby this place,a kid falling from a tree. Suddenly,an explosion happened,and buried me in red...
''What the...''
I woke up,Striker drooling water on my face. ''Thank God! I thought you got tranced!'' He suddenly got me up. ''You took an experimental drug,which has a prolonged effect,but I said: It is experimental.''
I punched Striker.
''I went to that moment you idiot!''
He punched me in the shoulder...
''Damn. Guys,none of you die anymore. Deal?''
Everyone laughed,as I dropped a single tear. ''Damn,I still feel bad for Claw.''

I looked up to them. They were my friends,we ventured here together. I then took the voice up,opening ''Bohemian Rhapsody'' from my MP3.
''Reality,or this is fantasy?'' I shouted,and everyone laughed,as I looked up to a tree. ''Damn,do you see that kid?'' A kid fell from the tree,and the night suddenly lighted everywhere in a red light. ''BLOWOUT!'' I shouted,and I jumped in the basement of the house we were sitting in,saying: ''That drug feels bad man...'' I laughed at Striker,and I stopped,as I said: ''Guys,what makes a blowout?''
Shag asked: ''What makes it?''
''If Zone gets a good girl!'' I shouted.
''Okay,that was not funny.'' Green said,as his girlfriend died near him in a whirligig.
He started to cry,as I gave him my vodka. ''I lost a friend today too. Let's drown our sorrows...'' I muttered,as I took another sip...
 
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