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Question is this story better than horrors of the Zone and horrors of the Zone 2?
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heck yeah!
yup
a little bit....
nope
worse.....
hell no!
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  13:13:54  21 February 2010
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Tales of Nik Boa

Hey guys, this is my new story. i will maybe continue on Horrors of the Zone later on, but i am not certain. comments are as always, welcomed!
i don't care if its negative or positive! Enjoy

Tales of Nik Boa
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Nik's eyes burned as glimpses of the sun reached his vision. he sat up with a clumsy and tired movement. the year was 2011, and it was summer. it was Nik's favorite season, because he likes the wildlife and the birds flying around. of course, there was not many birds in the Zone nor any normal wildlife. the only thing you can find in the zone is death, as many stalkers say, and thats for a good reason. Nik grew up on a farm. he had always liked nature and its wildlife, but there was nothing he liked about the zone. he came to the zone five months ago,
and at that time it had seemed like a good idea. he thought that the zone was a place filled with adventure and fortune, but when he came there he only found death and sorrow. Nik reached out for his lump of bread in his backpack, finding nothing. after a thorough search, he gave up. "Ah Dammit! that was my last piece of bread!" he muttered to himself, angry about the fact that he ate the last piece of bread last night. there was plenty of vodka tough, and that's always good. he took a bottle and started drinking. "damn this is good stuff...." he once again muttered to himself. he packed his bottle down his backpack, and then grabbed his TOZ 34 and started to walk. he slept in a little shed with no roof right beside the rookie camp. his pistol holstered at his hip, but it was a little loose so he could quickly draw it if any trouble were to come around. he saw a bunch of military guys talking to a stalker up in the camp. Nik ignored them and walked over to wolf.
"Good morning wolf! any orders from Sidovorich?" he asked. Wolf turned his attention against Nik and said "good morning Nik. yeah, he left an order for a jellyfish... a real milk run if you ask me. i wish i could join you but i have to look out for these rookies". Nik grinned in reply and then said "somebody's gonna look after them, right? maybe another time then". he turned around, setting course for the nearby forest. he saw that the military guys was still asking stalkers questions and then he quickly turned around to wolf again. "hey by the way, what are the military goons doing here?" he asked curiously. Wolf raised an eyebrow and then said. "haven't you heard? as from the look on your face i can see you haven't. some soldiers are missing and they are asking us for help. yeah, US. pretty weird, huh?" Wolf replied. Nik nodded in reply. every time the military was here it was because of a "Health" check, which included confiscating artifacts and harassing the stalkers. or because some stalker had shot one of their guys and then they would march in here asking anyone if they knew the stalker.
"Well, i hope they give a good reward then. i do hope that there IS a reward" Nik said, laying extra pressure on IS, because the army usually don't give rewards. he left the camp, searching for any nearby springboard anomalies.

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end of the prologue. i hope you liked it
  13:34:51  21 February 2010
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Good! It's always good to be a rookie. Continue,my friend. Continue.
  14:05:54  21 February 2010
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Good! It's always good to be a rookie. Continue,my friend. Continue.
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i am glad you like it, my friend. whens your next chapter coming out?
and are you sure that "the last trip" is gonna be your last? come on, you are good at this stalker writing stuff. why would you stop? i will be drinking seventeen bears in sorrow the day you stop! and thats gonna mess up my brain big time!
  14:13:43  21 February 2010
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What I meant with ''last story'' is that I won't write for a long time. That's why it is called the ''Last Trip''
  14:20:32  21 February 2010
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What I meant with ''last story'' is that I won't write for a long time. That's why it is called the ''Last Trip''
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ahhhhh..... okay. thats better. so..... that means that i don't have to ruin my brain?
  14:33:52  21 February 2010
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heres chapter one

Tales of Nik Boa
chapter one
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"grrr... thats the third springboard and no jellyfish in sight..." Nik mumbled to himself. he scouted the region of artifacts but found none.
he got scared when a dog suddenly appeared from a bush and jumped on him. its large teeth constantly snapping together reaching out for Nik's throat. he could see the dog's horrifying face, he could see the scars of former battles. he could see the dry blood around its mouth, and if he didn't do something about the dog soon then it would be his blood around the dog's mouth. he had encountered worse critters, but to underestimate it would be foolish. he managed to kick it off him, buying him some breathing time. he quickly pulled his Fort-12 pistol and fired two rounds, forcing the dog to a stop. the dog yelped and licked its wounds. Nik wasn't sure if he should kill it. he loved dogs, and he would never do anything to hurt one. even not mutated killing machines like this one. sure, he had killed blind dogs before, but this one was lonely and had no pack. he thought about not killing it, but then again, if he didn't it would properly just kill another stalker.
Nik walked over to the dog without further thought. he holstered his pistol, and pulled out some bandages. he took a ragged piece of cloth
and tied it around the dog's mouth, making sure that it would not bite him. he had no idea how he was going to travel back to camp with this dog, and he couldn't imagine the other stalkers reaction. he stopped the dogs blood loss with the bandages, and then picked the dog up on his shoulders. while he was walking, he suddenly remembered why he came out here in the first place. the artifact! he thought about what to do but then thought "ehh, fuck it!" and dropped the assignment.
the rookies looked at him if like he was crazy. the dog had been silent most of the trip, properly because of the pain. he lay the dog down on his mattress in his shed, and then walked out to Wolf, who were like many times, raising an eyebrow. "errr..... are you crazy or what? that dog is still alive! what are you gonna do about it?" Wolf asked. "look,look its not dangerous. its wounded and it needs shelter. it won't harm the rookies" Nik explained. "yes yes thats all fine and that, but what are you gonna do when its fine again?" Wolf asked again.
it came like a bullet to the brain for Nik. yes, he had taken the dog to shelter, but what should he do when its fine again?. "i don't know. maybe i will it tame" Nik finally replied. "pfff.... good luck with that!" Wolf said quickly. "anyways, did you get the artifact?" Wolf continued.
"no" it sounded from Nik. he went back to his shed and treated the dog's wounds.

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  15:39:21  21 February 2010
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heres chapter two

Tales of Nik Boa
chapter two
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the dog had fallen asleep, and Nik went outside. it was getting dark and the screams of distant souls filled the night. he went over to Wolf, who were sitting around the camp fire alone. the other rookies had fallen asleep, and there was only three rookies still awake and they were on guard post. "So, hows the dog?" Wolf asked quietly, without even looking at Nik. Nik sat down beside him and pulled out a bottle of vodka and started to drink little by little. "its fallen asleep" Nik replied. he handed the bottle over to wolf who took it and also started drinking.
the warmth of the vodka filled the body, leaving out the cold chill.
Wolf gave Nik the bottle back, leaving only little vodka left.
"why so gloomy, friend?" Nik asked after some time. he could see that Wolf had something on his mind. Wolf looked at the fire, not even looking at Nik. "Why would you ask me that?" he replied after few seconds. now, it was Nik's turn to raise an eyebrow. "hmmm... lets see,
first of all you haven't even looked at me. you always do that when you are gloomy or sad. second, you emptied half of my bottle!" Nik explained. Wolf then turned his attention to Nik, with a little smile on his face. "ehh, you got me there. i don't know why i am sad. its just this feeling..... you know the one you get when you are in the zone"
wolf replied. his smile faded away within seconds, leaving only his serious look. "hmmm.... you mean when you feel lonely even if you are surrounded by people and you are getting the feeling of being here forever? sure, thats just the zone for ya" Nik said in a more joking mood, hoping to cheer Wolf up. he didn't though. "yeah... thats the one..." Wolf replied once again. "whats the matter, friend? you know that vodka always helps in that case. here, let me get some. this one is on me" Nik said quick, while he got up and got his backpack and pulled out two bottles of vodka. the bottles shined in the moonlight, and it sounded like glass being rubbed against glass as he carried them over wolf. "Thanks friend" wolf said as he reached out for one of the bottles and grabbed it. he hurled the warm fluid down his throat, throwing his head back and laughing. "its always good to have a friend in the zone. Cheers!" he said while they raised their bottles and then started to drink again. "where do get this stuff, anyway? i mean, they are expensive as hell!" Wolf asked with a rough and loud voice.
"ehh, what do you think i use all my money from the artifacts for?" Nik replied with a weird drunk voice. Wolf raised the bottle once again, and it nearly fell out of his grasp because of his fumbling hand "for...for vodka!" he said, while Nik raised his bottle too. Wolf had a terrible headache after he woke up, not a big surprise though. he saw a man wearing a long black trench coat in front of him. the man had a gas mask covering his face, and his armor looked like the ones the army guys wore. although it was painted black. it was Nik. "come on, you lazy bum! i have got a replacement for your duty. lets go artifact hunting!" Nik said with a clear and happy voice.

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  20:56:21  21 February 2010
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soo...... any comments guys?
  23:41:23  22 February 2010
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Heres chapter three




"are you sure that the rookies will be okay?" Wolf asked for the third time.
Nik turned around and said "YES! for god's sake, YES! this is the third time you ask me that question! now come on, we've got some artifacts to find!". they continued up the dirt road but then stopped when they saw a body laying on the middle of the road. there were bite marks all over the corpse, and its arm was missing. it was a rookie, that was for sure. in his remaining hand he held a PMm. he wore a black hoodie with a balaclava covering the lower part of his face. Wolf stood still for a few moments, but then walked over to the body. "DAMN! i know this guy! i sent him out for a jellyfish just the other day!" Wolf shouted. as they was closer to the body, they could see that bullets had pierced his body, so it was obviously not the work of the local wildlife. the torn off arm, however was torn off by a creature of some kind. of course when you live in the zone stuff like this is common but its not something you get used to. "Hmmm..... this was obviously caused by bandits... or just a REALLY desperate stalker" Nik muttered while he thought about where the bandits could have gone. there was no traces of them, so he thought that the bandits had shot him at a distance and then moved on, but that was not something the bandits do. they act like vultures, picking off everything thats on the stalker,money,artifacts,weapons,body armor and maybe even clothes if they are worth it. no, this must have been something else. the corpse was only one day old, and it was nearly eaten up. but as Nik always says to himself, "thats just the zone for you". the dog was still sleeping and he had asked one of the rookies to look after it.
"who could have done this?" Nik asked silently. moments passed but then Wolf finally answered "i have no clue. it could have been the army, but we have a non-aggression pact right now". Nik started to think again but he couldn't really come up with an explanation. Wolf was sitting on his knees, studying the corpse. "hmmmm.... it could have been a zombie" Nik said, hoping to find an explanation for this weird murder. "no. the zombies usually don't walk down to the cordon. plus, if i know rookies right, which i do, then he would have ran for hills if he just as much heard a zombie" Wolf replied, with the same serious tone that he always spoke in. "leave the corpse. lets head back to camp and warn the other stalkers. may he rest in peace" Nik said silently after some seconds. Wolf nodded in reply, and started to walk.
they arrived at the camp, where they heard some stalkers shouting and discussing something. four stalkers had gathered around a camp fire,
and the two of them were apparently holding one of the stalkers back.
"ITS JUST A DOG MAN! NOW CALM THE FUCK DOWN!" a stalker yelled.
Nik saw that the stalker that was held back was wounded. a bandage was tied around his lower leg, and it was covered with red dye, properly blood. the stalker got loose and punched the other stalker right in the face, sending him down on the ground. he pulled his knife and threatened the other stalkers. "whoa! calm down man! it was just a dog bite!" one of the stalkers yelled. "JUST A DOG BITE? WHO THE FUCK WAS SO STUPID TO EVEN LOCK A FUCKING DOG IN A SHED!"
the stalker with the bandage shouted angrily. the stalkers hadn't noticed Nik and Wolf approaching them. Nik stood right behind the stalker with the knife, and the made a fake cough. "hmmm.... you must be looking for me, right?" Nik said with a gruff tone. the stalker turned around and yelled "WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU? IS THAT YOUR FUCKING DOG?". Nik kept a calm face, unaffected by the rookie stalkers words.
"yes, its my dog. why?" Nik continued calmly. "A SMART-ASS ARE WE?
I WILL TEACH YOU NOT TO MESS WITH..." his sentence was disturbed
by a kick right to the stomach, followed by a punch hammering into the rookie's face, causing his nose to bleed. Nik disarmed him by placing a quick punch to his jaw, and then kicked the stalker's hand which caused the knife to fall out of his hands. the rookie were still coming to his senses, having no idea about what had just happened. Nik pulled his
pistol and hammered the pistol's grip right down on the rookies back head, causing the rookie to fall down unconscious.
  05:28:50  23 February 2010
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like it dude Nik a bit of a badass in CQ ant he
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like it dude Nik a bit of a badass in CQ ant he
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yeah he pwned that rookie didn't he anyways, next chapter coming soon!
  00:24:50  8 March 2010
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heres chapter four

CHAPTER FOUR
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"what an idiot...." Nik muttered while he looked at the unconscious rookie.
"wheres the dog?" Nik asked, as if nothing had ever happened. the rookies stood, nearly losing their jaw in awe. "its.... its in the shed..." said one of the rookies. Wolf, however had seen Nik do this to cocky rookies before. it was just as common for him as the dangers that lived in the zone. Nik went to Sidovorich and ordered some tourist's delights.
"have you brought the artifact yet?" Sidovorich asked as soon as Nik appeared in the doorway. "no, not yet. how much will it cost for three cans of tourist's delights?" Nik replied shortly after. Sidovorich raised an eyebrow. every time Nik came down here it was because of he had an artifact, or looking for a new weapon. "hmmm..... that will be about 300 rubles" Sidovorich said after some time. Nik handed the money over, and took the three cans and then exited the bunker. he went over to the shed, and unlocked it. the dog was sitting in a corner, and it
looked at Nik as he entered. somehow, the dog didn't attack him. he positioned himself at a distance, and then started to open one of the cans. he slided it over to the dog with a careful movement. the dog rushed over to the can and it started eating it. it hurled the meat down it's throat, nearly choking it self. it was hungry, that was for sure. the can was empty after some seconds. the dog looked at Nik, with a begging glare in its eyes. Nik opened another can, and threw it over to the dog, who sat down and enjoyed the meal. he opened the last can and left the room, locking it as he exited. "how's the rookie doing?" he asked Wolf, who as always stood at his usual spot. "ehh, you knocked him out good. he will wake about an hour or two. how about the dog?" Wolf replied gruff. "its fine. it was pretty hungry though" it sounded from Nik who took a seat near some other rookie stalkers. an hour went by, and a grumpy stalker neared the camp fire, scouting everyone that was sitting there. he saw Nik, and started to draw his pistol. "YOU SON OF A BITCH! I WILL MAKE YOU PAY!" he yelled, waving the pistol in Nik's face. Nik was calm though. he just looked at all the other rookies, with the same expression in his eyes. the kinda expression that said "don't worry guys, I've got this under control". he took yet another sip of his vodka, not even looking at the angry stalker.
"HEY! ARE YOU DEAF OR WHAT? LOOK AT ME!" the pissed off stalker yelled once again. Nik, still unaffected of the shouting, stood up and packed his bottle in his backpack. he turned around to the rookie, and a loud "BANG" sounded. Nik fell to the ground, screaming in pain. "ARG FUCK!" he yelled. the rookie had shot Nik in the foot, and an evil,sadistic smirk now emerged from his grim face. "HAH! DOESN'T FEEL VERY GOOD, DOES IT?" he yelled. "SCREAM ALL YOU WANT BITCH! NO ONE WILL HELP YOU!" it sounded from the stalker. it was true. none of the rookies had the guts to help him, and Wolf had gone out for a walk. the stalker rushed forward to Nik, placing his boot in his stomach with much force. the air was pressed out of Nik's lungs, and he turned around screaming in pain. the stalker laughed, and kicked him once more. "who is this psychopath?" Nik thought to himself. Nik stood up on his knees, maintaining the balance. "KISS MY FEET, BITCH!" the stalker yelled angrily, pointing down at his shoes. Nik didn't move, as he sent the rookie a look that can pretty much be summed up as "fuck you". the rookie hammered the pistol grip into Nik's face, causing his nose to bleed. Nik fell backwards, but quickly got up on his knees again. he stood up proudly, sending the rookie another look, but this time, with a following "fuck you". the stalker ran towards Nik to kick him, but Nik jumped away, grabbing the stalker's arm and twisted it around. the stalker screamed in pain in reply, and tried to get out of Nik's tight hold, but it was for in vain. Nik was simply too strong. Nik released the arm, and kicked the stalker in the groin with strong force. the stalker was now on the ground, protecting his groin for any further pain. Nik kicked the stalker multiple times, sometimes stomping on his face. the stalker was bleeding out of his mouth, and he was defenseless. Nik sat on the stalker, laying his knees on his arms so he couldn't fight back. he punched the stalker in the face repeatedly, causing one hell of a mess. after about two minutes of beating the guy to a bloody pulp, Nik finally stopped. "I hope this will make you understand that you don't screw around with Nik Boa!" Nik shouted, staring at the stalker. the guy was nearly breathing at all, and the rookies dragged him down to the cellar and treated him.

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end of chapter four
  03:56:58  8 March 2010
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wow!, real nice, that guys a bad ass, dont get in a fist fight with him, keep righting, if you want you can include me in your story.

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wow!, real nice, that guys a bad ass, dont get in a fist fight with him, keep righting, if you want you can include me in your story.

Zug
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thanks dude yeah, Nik's pretty bad ass in this story. i will gladly see if i can fit your character in my story it would be an honor
  16:34:02  8 March 2010
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I'll think of entering too.

Just like old times.
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I'll think of entering too.

Just like old times.
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hehe just like old times thrash good to hear from you!
looks like i have to make a group of these guys
  20:06:33  8 March 2010
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heres chapter five
Chapter five
Nik's story
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"that son of a bitch, damn my foot is hurting!" Nik mumbled to himself, while stitching his wounds. "arg fuck! i am gonna kill that bastard when he awakes!" he mumbled angrily, ignoring the pain that was spreading in his foot. after minutes of treating his foot, Wolf appeared. "so, why did you beat the crap out of that rookie again?" he asked, sitting down next to Nik. Nik sighed, and took a long,deep breath. "the bastard shot me in the foot!" he exclaimed in his defense. "ahh, i see. you are aware of that the rookie needs some serious treatment. you broke his nose and punched a lot of teeth out,he needs some stitches" Wolf explained in a serious tone. "heck if i care, the guy is a psychopath! i wish i would have killed him when i had the chance...." Nik replied with an loud and angry voice. "whoa, calm down friend. the guy deserved it anyways, hes a real bastard you know that. i heard that he came to the zone because of gambling, and he killed his own wife. a good recipe for a bandit, don't you think?" Wolf continued, ending the sentence with a calm voice. Nik nodded in reply. he went over to his shed, getting the dog. the dog weirdly followed him with ease, acting neutral over for Wolf and the other rookies. Nik packed his bag, and pulled out his AK/105 with a mounted scope. Nik stared at the weapon with a weird,calm look in his eyes. "this gun have seen many mutants and scum alike...." he mumbled to himself. he swung his backpack up on his shoulders, and took his gas-mask on. the dog, sitting next to Nik swinging its tail around eagerly as it was waiting for something to happen. he exited the camp, not even looking back, with the dog following him. he turned his head back just as he were to leave, looking at wolf. "maybe i will see you one day, friend" Nik said, with a low but clear voice. he turned around and started to walk, with the dog close to him. Wolf didn't understand anything, and he was very confused. he was unclear about the situation, but one thing was for sure, Nik was leaving and he was never coming back. the thing that made him do it was unknown. there are few stalkers who know the zone better than Nik. Nik have been in the zone three times before, and he had grown up on a farm not far from Pripyat. officially known as Spetsnaz Colonel Nik Boa, Kiev division. he first came to the zone five years ago, on a mission to stop a group of smugglers from reaching the center of the zone. the group itself was dead long ago, but the spetsnaz didn't know that. they were receiving broadcast messages from the Jupiter plant, so they thought that the smugglers were still alive. the signal contained a call for help from the smugglers, revealing there position to the Spetsnaz chopper. the smugglers were ripped to shreds by a large pack of wild dogs when they got there, and the same thing happened to the spetsnaz squad. three soldiers survived, including Nik and his two good friends, Viktor Novikov and Alik Pavlov. rescue never came, trapping the three soldiers in pripyat for three years. then, after the great emission, more and more stalkers appeared, crowding the zone one by one. Nik got out of the zone while Alik and Viktor's fate is unknown. Nik was sent on another mission to the zone, where he was supposed to drop into pripyat and reinforce the military's position in the city. the chopper crashed because of an anomaly, causing Nik to be trapped in the zone once again. Nik got out one year later, only to return the year after that.
he was sent on another mission to the zone, and as all the other times his chopper crashed. he alone survived, traveling to the cordon. a sudden desire to find his old friends came up, and he decided not to exit the zone this time. he hided his identity and painted his Berill-5M special forces suit black. only few know him as Nik Boa, that includes Wolf and a few loners and rookies. he always wears his gas-mask when the military are near, so that they can't identify him. he wears a black trench coat too, which combined with his black body armor and gas-mask only contributes to his nickname "Reaper".

setting out for the 100 rads bar, he and his dog walks across the Garbage and the Cordon.

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end of chapter five i hope you enjoyed it. don't worry guys, your characters will soon be met in the story
  20:19:04  8 March 2010
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Vasili's cousin,Viktor was a friend of Nik?

Wow.

Family meeting.

In hell....

MUHAHAHAHA

Whatever,note that I use an AS VAL.

And Simbalime,stick to the general thread sometime. Will be good to see you 'round!
  20:32:28  8 March 2010
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Vasili's cousin,Viktor was a friend of Nik?

Wow.

Family meeting.

In hell....

MUHAHAHAHA

Whatever,note that I use an AS VAL.

And Simbalime,stick to the general thread sometime. Will be good to see you 'round!
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in hell indeed hahaha okay, AS VAL noted. yeah, i guess i will stick around for a bit in the general forum
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wow!, real nice, that guys a bad ass, dont get in a fist fight with him, keep righting, if you want you can include me in your story.

Zug

thanks dude yeah, Nik's pretty bad ass in this story. i will gladly see if i can fit your character in my story it would be an honor
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if you want character information just check my profile page.

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heres chapter six

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Nik's vision was blurry, and he could hear a faint voice in the distance. things cleared up, and he could see a man wearing a spetsnaz suit, reloading his AK/94. Nik could see his face, remembering who it was.
he reached out for the stalker, yelling "VIKTOR!". everything became blurry, and then darkness came. Nik awoke with a quick movement, trying to calm himself down. he was sweating, and he could see the sun over the hill tops. "it was....just a dream...." he mumbled to himself, picking himself up. what he just dreamed, was about the last time he saw Viktor. he could remember that it was in lab X6, and Viktor was with him. they were finding some documents about the zone,
and they discovered an underground path leading to the CNPP. Viktor went into the underground, while Nik stayed away. he insisted that Viktor should go with him, but Viktor had a burning desire to get north.
after a long discussion about whether to go there or not, Viktor cocked his gun and just said "maybe i will see you one day, friend". finishing his sentence, Viktor boarded the elevator that led deeper underground into the CNPP, and Nik never saw him again. the dog was sitting right next beside him, looking with curious eyes. he petted the dog, then slung his backpack up on his shoulders, grabbed his gun and started to walk. the weather was hazy, the birds not even appearing on the sky yet. it was just like another day in the zone, everything was gray and dead. a couple of dogs ran in the distance, roaring. he suddenly stopped up on the road, looking at an artifact just five meters ahead of him.
he ordered the dog to stop with a quick command, scouting the area.
this was simply to good to be true. a crystal artifact, laying on the ground five meters ahead of him. it was simply to obvious, it was a trap. he sharpened his eyes, looking for any nearby enemies. a tripped over car was placed three meters ahead of the artifact, almost like a big sign telling "this is a trap, be prepared". he heard movement behind the car, figuring out that some stalker were sitting behind it.
he acted like he didn't hear the noise, and went over to the artifact. he dropped his backpack on the ground, pretending that he was about to pick up the artifact. he was aiming at the car instead, as the person behind it thought that he had dropped his gun and was picking up the artifact. as expected, a stalker appeared from behind the car, aiming his weapon at Nik, only to find out that Nik had figured his plan out.
"too bad that i am not retarded, because you might have got me if i were" Nik said cold, pointing his gun at the stalker. three "Pops" sounded, sending the stalker tripping backwards landing on the ground stone dead. he heard footsteps from behind him, and he quickly turned around holding his gun tight in his hands. another stalker was nearing with his pistol, trying to shoot Nik. Nik was quick, and double tapped the guy with his AK/105. the guy fell backwards too, screaming in pain before he died. another three "pops" sounded, but this time not from Nik's rifle. Nik landed on his knees, and crossed his arms around his stomach screaming in pain. another guy appeared from behind a tree. "how could i be so stupid not notice the other guys!" he thought to himself. "time to die, fucker! you killed two of my friends, and now you shall pay!" he yelled, sticking his gun up to Nik's face. For Nik's surprise, his brains flew all over the place, splattering blood and brain mass all over Nik's face. having no idea about what had just happened, Nik halted over to a tree and treated his wounds. he saw a stalker wearing a customized exosuit holding an Dragunov SVD. "you owe me one, stalker! but right now, lets focus on your wounds shouldn't we?" he said to Nik, although it wasn't very clear through the helmet.

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end of chapter six! oh and Zug, what should i call your character? just Zug or do you want some other name for your character? i will get to you thrash, don't you worry!
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you can use Zug, its simpiler to use, so I dont have to explain a bunch of stuff out, since you already know stuff about me or "Zug".(quick character bio, hes a ex Navy seal scout sniper , and has never been to the garbage or cordon, since he didnt start as a rookie. then became a loner)

thanks, I already like my characters appearence in the story, though just so you know his suit isnt very bulky like normal exos,
also has a http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Franchi_SPAS-12 on his backwith a sig suacer and a ka-bar

sorry if this post was a bit redundent, anyway

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okay, thanks for the information

oh, and thrash, what character should i include in the story?
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I.

The All Powerful,Allmighty thrashdude himself.

Or should I say the rookie thrash in the last trip.

Yea,my last tripper.
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---QUOTATION---
I.

The All Powerful,Allmighty thrashdude himself.

Or should I say the rookie thrash in the last trip.

Yea,my last tripper.
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okay, now when thats settled, of to the writing mobile!
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I wonder when he gonna write more?

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He stopped.
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---QUOTATION---
He stopped.
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do you know why?

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Too bad, this story is pretty good.
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He did the worst thing to do.

He compared.


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yeah about the story..... i stopped. for good. i ain't gonna write any stories anymore.

its just that interest in the story are just too....low. i mean, in all the three stories I've written, i just feel like its.....well the stories was in wain. with all the Major stories going on, (like snorkbait) i am nothing. i will admit, Snorkbait deserves all his readers, he is about like 1000 times better than me, and he does a really good job. but, if you look at snorkbait and then my story, you will see that his story is 10000 times better than mine. heck, i myself is a huge Snorkbait fan, and with good reason. the guy is like a god when it comes to writing. so i stopped, for good. i decided to let the writing go on to those who are good at it. but i am still hanging around the forums, and i think i will spend a lot of time on the general thread.
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Sad but true,I liked this story.
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i liked this story aswell
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Yeah, keep writing! You were great!
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I do not like to be the messenger of ill news...

But as I said before,all hope is futile,he is not returning...

Damnit...

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yeah, ol well,still was a great story even if he didnt think it was good as Snorks.

Zug
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An update on the story as well as myself, Simbalime

Hey you guys! i am Really glad that you posted! really, i am! i know its been a terribly long time since i last posted on the forums, but now i am back! the reason for my long absence was my computer, which has been FUBAR in the last two months. it could run games and Etc but my Internet was quite fucked up. but now it is fixed! i meant to update the story last month, but i couldn't because of my fucked up Internet! anyways, its nice to see that somebody liked my story, which i am VERY happy about! so a huge thanks to you guys for making me continuing my story and giving me new hope!
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Woot!

Man we are glad you are back.

It's like Picasso...

When you are gone people understand you did a good job.

Keep on rising!

BOOYAH!
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Thats AWESOMe, glad to see your back Sim

Vehement, dont belieive we've met[puts and out for him to shake, then takes his nano suit helmet off
good to meet you.

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You met me man!

I am thrashdude!
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And it IS good to be back, man! so, as soon as I've got a little more inspiration, i will continue writing!
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---QUOTATION---
You met me man!

I am thrashdude!
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oh..., anyway, like my nano suit
hey Sim when can we expect the next part?

zug
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---QUOTATION---
You met me man!

I am thrashdude!

oh..., anyway, like my nano suit
hey Sim when can we expect the next part?

zug
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Today, i think. should be up soon, so wait just a little longer!
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CHAPTER 7
--A new friend--

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"Thanks for the help, your timing was perfect....." Nik mumbled quietly, treating his wounds at the same time. "Ahh Shit! out of bandages!" Nik shouted, still holding the massive pain back. The other stalker quickly threw him a package of Bandages and quickly said "Here, take this". Nik patched up his wounds, easing the pain just by a little bit.
Nik struggled to get on his feet, but the stalker helped him up. "Thanks. whats your name anyways?" Nik asked looking at the stalker who sat down and looted the dead bodies, emptying their backpacks and pockets but without any luck. few seconds went by, but then the stalker finally spoke. "Whoa, would you look at this! its a Stone Flower! now thats what i call lucky!..... Oh yeah, you can call me Zug" he said, while he took the stone flower and slipped it down his backpack. "Well, thanks Zug. anyways, where are you headed?" Nik asked, hoping to tag along. "well, I am heading for the Army warehouses. i hear that theres many artifacts over there. you can tag along if you want" Zug replied, while checking his SVD for any damage. He then nodded happily, probably because it wasn't damaged. "i would be glad to" it sounded from Nik, who was arming up.

--Part two--
--Unthinkable--
They came to an opening, where it was to their surprise, Quiet. They both knelled and scouted the area. Seeing nothing, they moved yet again. then suddenly, a stalker Ran through a pair of bushes, then he fell only to get back up. "What the-" Nik mumbled to himself, as they saw the stalker's condition. The stalker had been shot several times in the back and in the shoulder, Blood leaking out and covering parts of his suit. Nik and Zug aimed at the stalker with their weapons, ready to shoot if he were to try anything. "Help me...... Help..." The stalker gasped. Zug quickly moved over to the stalker, catching him as he faded out. "Christ, what has happened to him?" Zug asked. "I don't know. it could be zombies, just look at the bullet hits. randomly scattered throughout the body." Nik suggested. Then, they both turned around as they heard movement behind them, at the same bush the wounded stalker came from. they saw another wounded stalker, but this guy got blood stains all over his body, and he was walking in a strange way, like he was possessed or something. "HALT!" Nik shouted, but the stalker just continued, making his way to Nik and Zug. Nik Pointed his AK/105 up in the air, and shot two rounds as warning shots, that apparently had no effect on the stalker. Nik then Pointed his AK/105 at the stalker's kneecap, firing one round, piercing the stalkers knee. The stalker screamed in pain, but weirdly just continued walking like nothing ever happened to his knee. Zug took his SPAS-12 and Shot the stalker, sending him off his feet. the stalker didn't move at all for some time. Then, suddenly, it stood up again, now rushing towards Nik, launching at him grabbing his throat. Nik landed on the ground with a big "Bump", struggling with the insane stalker that was now trying to choke him. "BEHOLD, MONOLITH IS HERE!" the insane stalker yelled, just before getting head-butted by Nik, who now stood on his feet. the insane stalker also stood up, sending fist after fist at Nik, but he dodged the clumsy strikes with ease. Zug tackled the stalker with brute force, Hammering his fist against the Visor of the Stalkers gas-mask.
The visor cracked with a loud noise that cannot be mistaken. but the stalker continued, rolling away, and counter attacked Zug with a Fist with incredible force, that sent Zug staggering around, trying to not to fall. Nik tried to find their weapons, but they lay behind the madman.
Now, Zug stroke the madman with furry, nearly sending him to the ground. then, he launched at the madman, Hammering his fist in the stalkers face, repeating the action again and again. The madman pushed Zug off his chest, still standing. its a wonder that hes still alive, Broken glass had pierced his one eye and caused huge wounds around his face. he should have been dead along time ago, but somehow he is still alive. Zug pulled up his SPAS-12, aiming at the madman but then saw something else. a huge mutated boar were charging against Zug, but not for long. Zug Blasted the boar while it was charging, causing it to trip over and slow down. the bullets had definitely forced its way through the incredible thick skull. The madman picked up his knife that were dangling from his belt, and was charging towards Nik. the stalker truly is possessed. Nik evaded the first strike with the knife, placing a kick in the stalkers gut, sending him back a few paces. Nik now took out his own knife, striking towards the madman, while Zug was fighting off the huge boar. The madman evaded his strike just in time, and swung his knife at Nik, just barely cutting a long rift in his cheek. Nik jumped back, preparing for his next attack. "DAMN!" he yelled to himself, seeing the blood from his cheek running down his face.
now, it was the madman's turn to go offensive. he swung his knife yet again, but Nik parried his strike with his own knife just in time. Nik then noticed a fast right hand hammering into his face quickly. the punch caused Nik to back down and jump away from the madman. blood was flowing from Nik's mouth now, and while he was distracted by the blood dripping down from his mouth. Nik noticed quickly, but it was too late. a screaming pain spread through his body, as the madman placed his knife deep into Nik's shoulder, blood leaking out from the wound. "MONOLITH IS HERE!" the madman Cackled Loudly. Nik tightened his grip around his knife, and decided that the battle wasn't over just yet.
"MONOLITH IS DONE!" Nik shouted in furry. he placed the knife's edge against the madman's chest quickly, the blade sitting deep inside of him. the madman Wavered, letting go of his own knife, which still remained transfixed through Nik's shoulder. "Monolith..." The madman gasped in his dying breath. Nik wrenched his knife out. the madman staggered and swayed, the blood leaking out of the gash in his chest, diluting as soon as it appeared and mixing with the color of the old blood on his armor, covering his stomach with a crimson stain. he toppled backwards, crashing over, landing in a small pool of blood.
"its...its over..." Nik quietly whispered to himself. he didn't notice the huge boar that was behind him, and it was ready to lash out with its huge hoof. it raised its hoof, just before getting blasted to pieces by Zug, who walked slowly over to it while firing shot after shot with his SPAS-12. After making sure the boar was dead, he rushed over to Nik who had collapsed.

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End of chapter 7!
i hope you enjoyed!
and a huge thank you to all of my readers who made me continue this story.

working on chapter eight, so either it will come out tomorrow or today, who knows?
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Where is the Tripper bro?

The Last Tripper AKA Rookie Thrash.

Fine post btw.
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glade to see your back writing Simbalime
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Thrash: I am planning to introduce him in the next chapter, so don't worry


Ghost: Thanks dude, i am glad to see you too
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UPDATE!

New chapter coming out sometime in the weekend. sorry for big delay, but i am Planning the story to its end meanwhile gathering more inspiration.

As always, have an awesome day
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So...

You gonna finish?
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Keep going.
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I like it, keep writing

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Thrash: Yeah, i'm gonna finish it. but first after i write a few 10 more chapters


Grunt: Thanks man!

Zug: I will keep writing! thanks for the comments guys!
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Isn't this goin' on?
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Of Course it is! the delay is just bigger than expected -Granted that i am still "researching" and gathering inspiration!


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STORY IS NOT DEAD

Hi guys, just a short update on the story
i know that the story has been delayed for a while now,
and its my fault. My interest for Warhammer 40k has been resurrected,
so i've been busy painting and playing, and i am also working on a Warhammer 40k novel at the same time. so, the story will continue,
(i just dont know when), and its not dead!


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You play WH40k?

Finally someone I can talk to about it!

C'Mon,next chapter.

FOR THE EMPEROOOOORRR!!!!!
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Chapter 8

Chapter 8 is finally out!

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"Nik!" Zug rushed over to the fallen Nik, blood gushing out from several wounds to his abdomen. Zug placed his arm under Nik's head, providing as much comfort as possible for the wounded stalker. a sudden stillness fell over the two stalkers, only the sound of the howling wind could be heard in the background. Nik's eyelids closed down for a second, but soon his eyes peeled wide open as he coughed continuously. a slow stream of blood strayed down from Nik's mouth to his chin, the crimson fluid dripping down on his dirty tench coat. "Hang in there, Nik!" Zug pulled a ragged roll of bandage out of this massive backpack, and wrapped it around Nik's Abdomen. Nik covered his right shoulder with his hand, the blood leaking out between the dirty and muddy fingers. Nik sat up, to the surprise of Zug. like no damage done, Nik reached for his weapon and checked its condition. after nodding in approval, he turned to Zug with a slow movement. "Thanks buddy, i owe you one" he said through ragged breath. Nik tried to stand up, but couldn't stand on his left knee, Zug quickly grabbed Nik with a swift movement. "You need to lie down, my friend, you are in no condition to walk at all" Zug advised Nik with a serious tone in his voice.
"You need a doctor, and in a hurry!" Zug continued. he scouted the area, and saw a couple of bushes and trees, no stalkers in sight. as he
moved near the end of the little opening between the bushes and trees, he saw something in the corner of his eye. he thought he saw something moving, but everything stood still as he looked at the bush where he had seen the movement. he turned to Nik, who had also seen something. suddenly, three stalkers jumped out from the bushes around Nik and Zug. Zug quickly analyzed the three stalkers, identifying them as military soldiers. before he could even move, one of the soldiers snook behind him and pointed his rifle at Zug's backhead. Zug could feel the cold iron gun barrel press lightly on his backhead, and stood completely still. the soldier behind him kicked Zug's left knee, forcing him to kneel down. the other two rushed over to Nik and took his AK/105 away from him, and grounded him as well. Zug was about to speak, but was interrupted by one of the soldiers.
"My name is Luka. my friends here is Igor and Kirill. as you can see, we work for the military. if you do as told, then there is no need for violence. if you try to do anything, you will be shot in the leg. understood?" Luka said, staring at Zug. Zug was silent for a moment, they had no choice. they had taken them by the balls! Nik was wounded, and Zug was grounded and weaponless. Zug nodded slowly after a few seconds. "What do you want?" Zug said with a hostile tone.
"we need your help, and we must take you to our Captain, Sergei Yefim" Luka replied. "Piss off, we're not helping you bastards!" Nik snapped. Igor smacked Nik with his rifle in reply.
"Calm down, my friend. after all, you don't have a choice, do you?"
Luka Said, while kneeling beside the grounded Nik. "Hes right Nik, its no use" Zug muttered. Nik exchanged glances with Luka and Igor, and finally subdued to the soldiers. the Soldiers got Nik and Zug to their feet, and pushed them onwards, following the soldiers with Luka in the lead.

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Nik collapsed while walking, so the soldiers made a makeshift stretcher and carried him the rest of the way. his wounds were still causing a lot of pain, and he needed a doctor quickly. They arrived at an old house, presumably the base of operations for the soldiers. the house looked empty and abandoned. "Captain?" Luka said, scouting the old building.
an ummasked soldier emerged from the house a few seconds later. he had several scars scattered across his face. "Luka? you were successful i see! come on in!" the soldier made a hand gesture pointing at the house, and after that the soldiers made salute and entered the building. "I assume you are the captain?" Zug asked the scarred soldier. a hard punch to the face followed soon after. Zug took a step back and tightened his fists. "Don't you dare speak to me without permission, scum!" The soldier snapped. Zug launched forward but was stopped by Igor and Kirill, who could barely hold him back. Luka carried Nik into the house, and another soldier immediately started to look after him and gave him morphine. Luka neared the scarred soldier and saluted him quickly. "Sergei, we found these two wandering around at the garbage" Luka reported to Sergei, the scarred soldier.
"Excellent" Sergei replied with a grim smirk.

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