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Question is this story better than horrors of the Zone and horrors of the Zone 2?
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heck yeah!
yup
a little bit....
nope
worse.....
hell no!
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  23:30:07  9 March 2010
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Simbalime
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heres chapter six

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Nik's vision was blurry, and he could hear a faint voice in the distance. things cleared up, and he could see a man wearing a spetsnaz suit, reloading his AK/94. Nik could see his face, remembering who it was.
he reached out for the stalker, yelling "VIKTOR!". everything became blurry, and then darkness came. Nik awoke with a quick movement, trying to calm himself down. he was sweating, and he could see the sun over the hill tops. "it was....just a dream...." he mumbled to himself, picking himself up. what he just dreamed, was about the last time he saw Viktor. he could remember that it was in lab X6, and Viktor was with him. they were finding some documents about the zone,
and they discovered an underground path leading to the CNPP. Viktor went into the underground, while Nik stayed away. he insisted that Viktor should go with him, but Viktor had a burning desire to get north.
after a long discussion about whether to go there or not, Viktor cocked his gun and just said "maybe i will see you one day, friend". finishing his sentence, Viktor boarded the elevator that led deeper underground into the CNPP, and Nik never saw him again. the dog was sitting right next beside him, looking with curious eyes. he petted the dog, then slung his backpack up on his shoulders, grabbed his gun and started to walk. the weather was hazy, the birds not even appearing on the sky yet. it was just like another day in the zone, everything was gray and dead. a couple of dogs ran in the distance, roaring. he suddenly stopped up on the road, looking at an artifact just five meters ahead of him.
he ordered the dog to stop with a quick command, scouting the area.
this was simply to good to be true. a crystal artifact, laying on the ground five meters ahead of him. it was simply to obvious, it was a trap. he sharpened his eyes, looking for any nearby enemies. a tripped over car was placed three meters ahead of the artifact, almost like a big sign telling "this is a trap, be prepared". he heard movement behind the car, figuring out that some stalker were sitting behind it.
he acted like he didn't hear the noise, and went over to the artifact. he dropped his backpack on the ground, pretending that he was about to pick up the artifact. he was aiming at the car instead, as the person behind it thought that he had dropped his gun and was picking up the artifact. as expected, a stalker appeared from behind the car, aiming his weapon at Nik, only to find out that Nik had figured his plan out.
"too bad that i am not retarded, because you might have got me if i were" Nik said cold, pointing his gun at the stalker. three "Pops" sounded, sending the stalker tripping backwards landing on the ground stone dead. he heard footsteps from behind him, and he quickly turned around holding his gun tight in his hands. another stalker was nearing with his pistol, trying to shoot Nik. Nik was quick, and double tapped the guy with his AK/105. the guy fell backwards too, screaming in pain before he died. another three "pops" sounded, but this time not from Nik's rifle. Nik landed on his knees, and crossed his arms around his stomach screaming in pain. another guy appeared from behind a tree. "how could i be so stupid not notice the other guys!" he thought to himself. "time to die, fucker! you killed two of my friends, and now you shall pay!" he yelled, sticking his gun up to Nik's face. For Nik's surprise, his brains flew all over the place, splattering blood and brain mass all over Nik's face. having no idea about what had just happened, Nik halted over to a tree and treated his wounds. he saw a stalker wearing a customized exosuit holding an Dragunov SVD. "you owe me one, stalker! but right now, lets focus on your wounds shouldn't we?" he said to Nik, although it wasn't very clear through the helmet.

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end of chapter six! oh and Zug, what should i call your character? just Zug or do you want some other name for your character? i will get to you thrash, don't you worry!
  00:24:34  10 March 2010
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Zugbarrh
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you can use Zug, its simpiler to use, so I dont have to explain a bunch of stuff out, since you already know stuff about me or "Zug".(quick character bio, hes a ex Navy seal scout sniper , and has never been to the garbage or cordon, since he didnt start as a rookie. then became a loner)

thanks, I already like my characters appearence in the story, though just so you know his suit isnt very bulky like normal exos,
also has a http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Franchi_SPAS-12 on his backwith a sig suacer and a ka-bar

sorry if this post was a bit redundent, anyway

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  16:32:10  10 March 2010
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Simbalime
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okay, thanks for the information

oh, and thrash, what character should i include in the story?
  16:41:28  10 March 2010
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I.

The All Powerful,Allmighty thrashdude himself.

Or should I say the rookie thrash in the last trip.

Yea,my last tripper.
  16:50:01  10 March 2010
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Simbalime
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I.

The All Powerful,Allmighty thrashdude himself.

Or should I say the rookie thrash in the last trip.

Yea,my last tripper.
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okay, now when thats settled, of to the writing mobile!
  22:13:31  23 April 2010
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Zugbarrh
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I wonder when he gonna write more?

Zug
  22:13:56  23 April 2010
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He stopped.
  22:20:40  23 April 2010
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He stopped.
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do you know why?

Zug
  23:50:15  23 April 2010
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-=Grunt=-
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Too bad, this story is pretty good.
  16:13:33  24 April 2010
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He did the worst thing to do.

He compared.


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yeah about the story..... i stopped. for good. i ain't gonna write any stories anymore.

its just that interest in the story are just too....low. i mean, in all the three stories I've written, i just feel like its.....well the stories was in wain. with all the Major stories going on, (like snorkbait) i am nothing. i will admit, Snorkbait deserves all his readers, he is about like 1000 times better than me, and he does a really good job. but, if you look at snorkbait and then my story, you will see that his story is 10000 times better than mine. heck, i myself is a huge Snorkbait fan, and with good reason. the guy is like a god when it comes to writing. so i stopped, for good. i decided to let the writing go on to those who are good at it. but i am still hanging around the forums, and i think i will spend a lot of time on the general thread.
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Sad but true,I liked this story.
 
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