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  02:24:35  13 February 2010
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The legend of the stalker named Death

Prologe
My small faimily is fixing to leave for our most
exciting trip of our lives for it was to be our last one
together.My son and daughter wer going off to colleage
when we got back.

Few hours before we leave for the airport while they are getting their bag pack Iam out in my little shop putting the finising touches to my sons present for getting into Medical school .Its a colt 1911 hes wanted since I took him to work with me many years ago. I am ingraving his name into it and a saying he always uses when he gets scared.About thirty miniets later
Iam done on the right side says’ Mathew Evenoff” on the other “semper fortis”

I get the gun and put it into a airpor aproved container as my wife comes threw the door to my shop

“You ready to go” I smile at how lucky I am to have such a good and caring wife as she has been to me over the years wev been together.

“Yes dear just finishing up matts gife” I grab the case and put it with my other one so my son wont expect anything as I go threw the door
I kiss my wife on the forehead
“Iall pull the car around you go get them ok hun” .She smile her sweet
smile and gos in to the house. I head around to the gararge and get into our families old suv and pull it out to the driveway. I see my wife and kids come out the door and I smile again at how lucky I am to have a family like this and Iam only twinty eight sure seams like I should be so much older.

We load the car with our bags I go threw the house making sure everythings off and locked. We then head to the airport few minets later where standing in line to board are airline to England for our first of two plained stops in our trip. The airport is amizingly crowded
for this time of the morning I see many pepole coming from difrent european countries. We borad the plain and find our seats in 2nd class several hours of flying we arive in London its late so we go straight to our hotel. We arrive to see that the hotel as a unusaly high number of cops petorling it.

I ask one of the officers in the loby while they go check in.
“Excuse me Sir but why is their so many police officers at this hotel”
he looks at me with a look of slight anonyanus “Theres a gang in the area that likes to attack tourious in these hotels so we are rotating these men around the hotels around the area to try and stop them”

I feel a uneasy feeling grow in my stomach but I surpress for surly nothing would happen here with all them around “thank you sir” I go and meet them at the elevator my daugter Jessica ask “Why are the cops around dad.”

I lie to her so she wont get worried “Theres been a few thefts in the area and there here to keep them from robbing any touriest Jes”
We reach our room and put away our cloths and get ready to go to bed when...

my other story isnt dead if its still interesting to anyone just that this story's been getting in the way of that one so I figured id get it out of the way.

hope this one interesting
  07:47:59  16 February 2010
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theres a knock at the door something awakes in me at this point “I have seen this before’

I go over to the door and open it.Five men knock me from the door and rush in Iam knocked over a small table by the door.
When I get up one of them kick me in the face. I hear a scream from Jessica I stumble to my feet and threw the door to the bedrooms and see the sight that turned me into what Iam.

On the floor is my son with a pool of blood under him on the bed is my daughter and wife both half naked and thier throats cut. I break a lamp over the guy infont of me I run at a guy next to the bed as I get close a guy in the door way to the bathroom shoots me I fall to the ground I roll over as he comes over me and shoots me again.

I awake in my hideout in Cordon I feel a tear come down my face I wipe it off and look at it on my finger ”I haven't cried since that day” I get up out of my cot I hear a storm going on outside .I can see rain dripping on the other side of the door to my room and down to the ground floor. I stand in front of a old mirror I found I frown at the body I see in the mirrior From a simple man in his mid twenty's full of life never would of harmed a fly.

To a man who's become a emotionless heartless killer I look over my body and see many scars from many a gun fight and mutant from my years in the zone.I stop at two one on stomach the other at the bottom of my left rib cage. I look at a worn faded picture of my faimily on the crate thats my table. My eyes start to tear up “Why didnt I die with you
I have been praying all these years that I would so I can finally be with you again ”.

end of prologe will start on the first chapter tomorrow expect it Wednesday maybe late tomorrow depends on how much time I get to work on it.

as always with my storys any coment good or bad I thank you
  06:44:25  18 February 2010
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Chapter 1 Friend in need

About thirty minutes from Death’s home a group of three young stalkers and a experienced stalker are siting around a crackling fire in the auto park.Hawk the only one in the group who has any experience in the zone is on watch while the others chat it up ,cook food while they block up the door and the windows to their second story saturary.

The howl of a pack of blind dogs near the complex over the now raging thunderstorm stops a rookie mid sentence in the joke he telling.One of the stalkers starts to laugh “Quit being a wuss Alex you know they want attack us up here” Alex grinds his teeth “Shut up you fat ass Iam not scared I just wanted to hear where they were at” The other one just sits in the cornor eating laughing at the useless bickering between his mates.

Few yards from the complex a large band of about twenty bandits are moving into the building directly across from the stalkers.The large doors to the area around the now soaked fire pit are pulled closed as a few proceade to try and build a fire.

”Damn it Bear these stalkers better make this setup worth coming here” one of the leaders of the group angerly proclaims as he shakes the water off his gear.A towering brute of a man grabs the man who just spoke out and slams him againts the wall nearly putting him threw it “YOU EVER SPEAK OUT AGAINST ME AGAIN I WILL PULL YOUR TONG OUT OF YOU HEAD WITH MY BARE HANDS” Creeper has a look of utter terror grow across his face.

The tension of the moment is broken by the victory of the other bandits getting the fire lit.All of the higher ranking bandits pushed all the new guys out of the way to get to the fire.Bear yells at the new guys to stop standing around and get to clearing the other buildings.

A low grumble is heard as they move out about five minuets latter one come running back in “Bear theres some stalkers in the building right next door”
A evil grin comes across his face “You three go with them and take care of those rodents”Five minuets of a stand off end in the four men being brought in front of Bear as the storm begins to die a way and the first sight of the morning sun begin to come over the horizon.

At Death home he begins to stir again the sound of gear being gather together.He shoulders his bag and grabs his worn m16 and heads out closeing a huge steel hatch to the second story behind him it makes a sound like a old casket being closed.I check my traps around and head out to the road I take a deep breath of the air and smile as it dosent haves its usual smell to it but the sweet smell of a fresh summer rain.

I look at my watch 6:00am Wolf should be up by the time I get down to the camp. I head arcoss the road for the old tunnel as I see that sometime during the night the old box car that was hanging off the bridge had fallen and now mostly block the path under it. I reach the tunnel and smile as I see it had changed as there use to be electric and gravitational anomalies in it now its full fruit puch. I take my gas mask off the side of my bag and put on and head into the green glow of the tunnel as a heard of boars trot by me.

I reach the other side with little effort and head straight for the rookie camp across the open ground.I reach the entrence by Sidorovich’s bunker I walk up to the half a sleep sentry he flips and nearly takes my head of with his shotgun “EASY BOY damn didnt intend to frighten you haha” he just stand there in shock. I walk by him and head to the fire to warm up and wait for Wolf to come out of his den of sorts.

comments on if quality has improved would be helpful as Iam trying to improve it
  16:21:19  18 February 2010
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I like it, not bland at all,atleast to me it isnt.
  22:09:23  22 February 2010
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Wolf come out of his basement about thirty minuets later he eye around the camp as the light hue of the rising sun baths the area with a peaceful orange glow.He spots me by the fire I see a smile come across his worn face as he come over to me thats rarely seen.

"Hello Death surprise to see you this far south you get tired of killing those bandits in Agroprom."
He says with some sarcasm. "No I av come to see if you still had any contacts up north" I say dryly he looks at me with a look of confusion or worry. "A few why" "I am thank about going to the center"

This bring a look of fear and anger "Why the hell do you of all people want to go to the center need I remind you what you told me was your reason for coming here in the first place many years ago you said you didn't come here like the other for fame or fortune" he says nearly yelling.

" I know I know Wolf but I am so tired of killing , torturing every bandit I get my hands on just to find out the last time he seen one of the men I was after was months before or he never even heard of them I thank if I go to the center all of this can end for me " Then why dont you just drop your gear right here and go walk in to a fucking anomaly" he says yelling at this point " Its not like that Wolf I am talking about the Wish Granter if its real maybe I can wish for my family back" I feel my eyes tear up a little Wolf see this and sighs " I forgot about your family he takes a deep breath" I will see what I can do but you have too.." he's stopped there by a group of stalkers coming in with a couple bandits held hostage.

"These three pieces of shit tried to rob us at the bridge" the leader of the small group says when he finally get them to Wolf and me.
"They kill anyone I remember sending more that you three out hunting " Yes they got Dog with a shotgun in the back
A very evil look grows on Wolf face "For killing one of us you three should know the punishment is death but seeing as you there is a higher rank of those scum we have a treat for you pointing at me we have a expert interrogator in a presence we need some information from you" with that the one in a trench coat and respirator is drag over to a house across from us as the other are taken to the house by Sidorovich's bunker and shot. Wolf turns and looks at me with a evil smile "You care to help us get some information"

I set my bag down and start to walk to the house the bandit was dragged to.

end of chapter 1 start on the next one probably wensday
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  22:40:45  22 February 2010
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one word; COOL! awesome story dude! i can't wait for the next chapter
  06:47:04  24 February 2010
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Thanks Simbalime

Chapter 2 Killing a Man

When I reached the house I was hit my the unmistakable spell of death coming from the house.I stop at the door way and see three guys in what was probably the family room hooking up what looked like a generator to cords going through the house.They start it and a ere yellow glow comes from a light above the bandit strapped to what looked like a old electric chair.

I walk over two him as two guys come out with a small cart of assorted medical tools "must of done this before " I thank to my self. I look at the ground under the chair and see that the floor is pretty much covered with blood.I check that hes strapped tight and take a deep breath " Well Mr bandit you going to have a loose tung or do you need a little persuasion the guy next to me pulls the hood of his head and ask him about some attack thing there planing usual stuff like troop placements. The bandit just smiles at me " You thank I am afraid of some loner scum like you three"

I smile at this statement " You may not be afraid of these two but you should be shitting your self if you knew who I am"I say stepping into the light fully.The bandit looks at me "Well I am sorry mister high and mighty but all I see is another piece of shit loner who's probably never been out side this shit hole of a camp' hes smiling from ear to ear I punch him right in the nose with a satisfying sound of the bone breaking

"Listen you piece of shit if you don't start talking I am going to start working on you and believe me if any of the many bandits I have interrogated before were still alive they would be begging you to talk and save you from the pain" He just looks at me and smiles threw the blood coming from his nose "I am not saying anything to you" hes says then spits on me "Good good keep you spirit up you need all the will you can get" I walk out side and tell Wolf to get someone to light the fire in the fireplace and put a iron in it. While I did this the other stalker asked him one more time but gets no answer but a blank stare.

I go back inside and take my jacket off so no blood will get on it. Stand in from of him he just stares in to my eyes.I smile a very evil smile at him and I see fear grow in his eyes. I take a hammer from the cart and proceed to break his fingers. He holds back his screams very well but I see a tear go down his cheek. I ask him to talk he shakes his head I take his boots off and break his toes. This time he lets out a piercing scream with every hit that could probably be heard at the military post.

I look at him and see that hes in tears and drooling a little I smile "You going to tell him what he wants" he keeps crying I hit him across the face "hey! answer me" he take a deep breath thanks then signs shaking his head."Foolish foolish man you thank your loyalty or what ever you thank your showing me will save you"I set the now bloody hammer back on the cart and get a pair of pliers I stand there for a minuet thanking what to take from him then I see his finger nails are pretty long so I pull each one off slowly when I am done in between cries and gasp for air he beg me to stop."You going to answer the question" he says a near in audible no.

I shake my head and toss the pilers back on the cart and go get the piece of iron from the fire go over to him and see the most fear I had seen in him I stick it in to his neck just enough for him to get a lot of pain but not much of a wound.This makes him crack he tells them every thing he knows about the Cordon operation even about the leader in the car park.

This man who the stalker called Bear seamed like the man who was standing next to the bed my family died in I thank to my self. With my job done I get my coat and walk back out to the fire with the leader of the squad. He tells Wolf about what we learned from the bandit Wolf tells us about the plan to set up a more determined defense of cordon he will go over it with us this evening. I go over to the fire to sit and think about the man named Bear.

After staring into the fire for while the leader of the loner squad comes up to me "You the man they call Death" takes a minuet for me to register "Yes" I say coldly still staring at the fire like it was the last fire on earth.He starts laughing "Man I cant believe Iam talking to a legend of the zone I mean Wolf probably one but come on it Wolf I mean damn I don't thank he left this camp in years" I laugh at this comment for its probably true as I cant remember the last time I saw Wolf outside this camp other than his few "teaching" trips he dos.

He continuous "Wolf wants two of us to go scout the car park and now I cant thank of another person I want to go with" I smile {poor kid theres far more honorable men here in the zone than I probably ever will be} I stand up"What do they call you" he laugh a little Kid for obvious reasons I see them as hes probably barely in his twenty's "Go get your stuff I will meet you up at the road" like a kid running to the Christmas tree on Christmas morning He heads to a house two down from the torture room nearly tripping over what left of the fence beside it.

I go to my bag and take my survival pack as I call it off the bottom of the bag and strap it around my waist. My pda goes off I see it Wolf showing me the places we were to scout I start to laugh "Damn him he must of told the rook who I was" I grab my M16 start to head up the road I laugh again as I see the rook already at the top. I reach the top and see the kids pretty poorly equipped for a squad leader he got a ak74u couple of mag stuffed in to his belt and with a pair of binoculars that probably were out dated back in WWII around his neck thats pretty much it.

I start to head for a old com trailer by the bridge rookie right on my hills like a little kid fallowing his dad or something a smile comes across my face as my mind drifts to a long long forgotten memory of my boy when he was little. I come out of my memory as crack of a Dragnov rifle booming somewhere straight a head as the bullet hits well shot of me hitting a pile of concert slabs with a pop. I yell for the kid to get behind the trailer right as he get behind it a bullet hits right by his head.I run behind it as well I stand there for a moment "Alright heres the plan we make a run down to the tunnel there alot of brush in front of it so he should see us "

He agrees but I see the fear in hes eyes I peak around the corner and see that the brush is only about waist high "Shit look like were going same time you ready" He shaking nods "Your be find if hes got half a brain he will go for me instead of you easier target" I hit him on the shoulder One two three we run around the corner the kid out runs me by a mile I stumble in some hole right as I right my self I feel the heavy punch of a round nailing me right in the top of the chest just short of my right shoulder. I stumble to my knees then back to my feet as another round hits my on in my left lung just below my ballistic plate. I stumble down to the entrance of the tunnel "Damn kid that fucker's a better shot than I thought" I say spiting up some blood.The kid starts to freak out "Easy kid come down ital be dark soon call Wolf and tell him what happen he will send some one two get us as soon as it gets dark" I say as I fall over on my side I craw over to the old wreak of a jeep and sit up ageist it 'All we have to do his hold hold out till dark" I say as I start to pass out...
  11:19:26  25 February 2010
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Ghost I love your attention to detail I feel as though I can imagine myself in the zone.

The gruesome details of the torture was also very well done I think I actually cringed in parts.

I love the fact that 'Death' still has time to take his jacket off 'so no blood will get on it' bit of comic relief (I thought it was funny anyway) before a gruesome event is always good.
  08:03:17  26 February 2010
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I open my eyes to a beautiful clear sky with not a cloud in sight.I look around and see well cut grass trimmed trees I hear birds singing I look down and see that I am laying on top of a picnic table."Where the hell am I" I get up off the table and see that I am still in my stalker suit.I reach for the bullet wounds but theres nothing there I here someone talking threw a thicket of trees in front of me I start walking down a winding trail threw the thicket.

I come out on top of a cliff over looking a beautiful scene of a lake with boats , people fishing kids playing I still can hear the voices some where to my right down the cliff.I climb down to a beach of the cleanses sand I have ever seen there not a rock or single bit of trash.I start walking down this beach for what seems like forever still hearing the voices but never getting close enough to figure out what their saying.

I come around a bend at start to hear the voices more clear I walk for a like bit more when I stop dead as I realize one of the voice "Sara?"At this I start to run as fast as I can I get closer and closer then I here Jessica and matt's voices my lungs are on fire at this point but I keep going I come around wide turn in the beach at what I see make me start crying up the hill is our old house before I got my job in the city it not the house thats making me cry in the yard playing in my wife and kids.

I run and run but I begin to notice something "Why the hell am I not getting closer" I stop and look at the house then back at the path behind me and see that I am only maybe a hundred yards from where I first saw them.I start to jog up the hill again finally I begin to get closer after what seems like a eternity I make to the fence I drop to my knees exhausted I crawl to a bench facing the house I sit they keep on playing "Why haven't they noticed be They looked right at me twice"I start to get up but I am stopped as I see something move behind them I look close and see its a bloodsucker just circling them run at it and try to tackle it but I go right threw it and smash a table "What the hell" I start yelling at them but they just keep playing.

All of sudden I hit with horrific pain from my sides like some one
crushing the life from me I fall to the ground I look at my hands and see that there covered in blood I try to wipe them but they just stay covered
I feel something coming from my eyes I see what it is when it drips on to the walk way that I am laying by that its blood I look at my family and see that they stopped playing and the sky no longer clear blue it know turned blood red covered in clouds just like the sky in the zone looks like before a blowout. The trees are all dead my house behind me falls in on its self I look back at my family and see that they are starting to change it to some horrific mutated creature. A massive man appears to my right he speak in a booming voice that sounds as if it coming from all around me "John man have you falling from you high horse" I recognize the voice it was of one of my best friends in the zone last I had heard of him he died in the center he was one the only man I had ever told my real name too.

"WHAT IS THIS FUCKING PLACE" I yell at him "Don't you recognize your own personal hell" he says with a boom a deep laughter that couldn't be more demonic if it came from the pits of hell.He walks over two me "But
its not your time yet so back you go" and he hits me in the face with his boot.

I awake all of a sudden by the jeep I look around and see that the kids still on watch and that there was another man near the fire. He see's and smiles I recognize it that its Wolf " Good your awake the way you were flopping around there a little bit ago I was about to shoot you I thought you were turning into a zombie or something" he says with a laugh I sit up and see my shoulders raped and theres a really big bruise on my left ribs where the round hit "You were luck he says holding up my metal case for my radiation detector that the sniper wasn't firing ap rounds or it wouldn't of just broke some ribs" He looks in my eyes and see that theres a unusual look of fear in them "What wrong" "I just had the weirdest dream if you could call it that" he laughs shaking his head "Your in the zone everyone has nightmares in this place" "Yeah I know but this one was weirdest one I have ever had and I have slept near the fucking brain scorcher" I look out of the tunnel and see its raining I stand up gingerly " lets get back to the camp I al tell you about it along the way" he grabs my stuff hands me my jacket and stalker suit top and we head off to the rookie camp.
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