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  20:55:19  4 March 2010
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Nice keep 'em coming
That is if you can get time of from COP that is
  23:45:02  7 March 2010
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Zugbarrh
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I like , keep writing.
  13:49:13  21 March 2010
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Jump bumping the thread here

Any news on the next chapter.....waiting eagerly
  18:16:05  21 March 2010
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Yep, good stuff here.
  19:34:33  10 April 2010
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Sorry for the very long time between chapters it was only by reading some of the other stories I was able to get my spark back so hopefully something like this doesn't happen again. anyway here's chapter 8

Chapter 8

The first bandit walked into the tunnel and was met with a volley of fire from the weapon Package was holding, his chest erupted in an explosion of red. Package waited for the second bandit to enter, nothing happened, no bandit, no nothing. A crack resounded at the other end of the tunnel and quick as a flash Package did a one eighty and ended the second bandits life with the same result.

Alexi looked at Package stunned. “Where did you learn to move like that” Alexi breathed in surprise.
“My friend, when you have been in the zone as long as I have, you have to learn to move quickly or die” Package replied seriously. “Seeing as they won’t be bothering us anymore we can move on.”
“Okay package you lead the way, but where are we going?”
“Past the 100 rads bar…”
“Wait what the hell is the 100 rads bar?” Alexi exclaimed his voice resonating off the concrete walls of the tunnel.
“It is a place run by Duty, Loners from all over the zone gather there for a drink and to exchange rumours. Now Alexi if you don’t mind we…”
“Who the hell are Duty?” Alexi cut in again.
“Alexi I’ll explain everything to you when we get to the science lab in Yantar. We have to move now however, this rain will provide us with cover from the bandit sentries, because I don’t feel like another encounter.”
“Alright Package, I understand.” Just as Alexi finished he noticed Package rummaging through the two freshly deceased bandits’ pockets.
“Alexi, can you walk?” Package asked questioningly.
“Yes, why do you ask?”
“Good, take this Makarov and this ammo.” With that, Package tossed two small boxes at Alexi and placed a pistol down by his side.

The rain hammered down on Alexi drenching his torn T-shirt and faded jeans. The thunder boomed over head and lightning cracked in the sky. The sloshing of mud was nearly inaudible over the thunder which played into Package’s plan. Alexi was looking out over the water logged landscape and noticed a small building in the distance with a tin fence surrounding it.
“Package what’s that?” Alexi yelled hoping his voice would carry. Package held up a hand signalling to keep moving, before they came to a halt at an old abandoned farm house.
“That structure Alexi is the quickest way to get to the garbage from here and if we’re lucky it will only be inhabited by a few bandits today.” Package said cheerfully seeming to have regained his usual demeanour.
“I thought we were heading to Yantar not the garbage?” said Alexi puzzled.
“We have to through the garbage to get to Yantar Alexi. Keep your wits about you there I can’t guarantee your safety.”
“Why, what’s there?”
“Alexi I’m starting to get sick of your curious nature” Package said sarcastically. “However the Garbage is full of bandits, I have a friend there named Bes who tries to keep it clean from the scum. He is low on fighters and decent equipment. After taking you to Yantar I hope to help him out for a bit. Now eat whatever provisions you may have it is going to be a long trek from here and I won’t be stopping for long.” With that Package walked away to scan the structure ahead, while Alexi rummaged through his pockets hoping to find a morsel of food. The last meal he had eaten was yesterday when he was attacked in the orchard. He was only able to find a stick of slimy gum and some soaking wet scraps of paper. He threw the items away with a sigh and joined Package.

Package didn’t even acknowledge Alexi’s existence when he stood by his side he was intently looking through the scope on his rifle. “This is not good Alexi” he said despondently “we have roughly seven bandits guarding our exit and the closest detour is two hours away and that’s to long, I want to be in Yantar by 2200 hours.”
“Well looks like we’ll just have to shoot our way through, i’m pretty sure we can with your kick ass gun, what is it by the way?” Alexi said confidently.
“Firstly” Package said seriously, his cheery demeanour all but gone. “Don’t call them guns they are rifles you understand me, secondly this here is my VSS Vintorez you are to never touch it and lastly an attitude like that will get you killed quickly, we are going to sneak past them this storm should cover our movements they all seem to be inside anyway, only sticking their heads out every so often to see what is going on.”
Alexi was stunned package had never spoken to him so seriously before all he could manage was “Ok”.

Alexi could hear the rain hitting the tin roof of the structure he was breathing heavy and it was turning to mist. They reached the fence and Package held a finger to his mouth before signalling for him to move to the corner. Alexi did so but tripped up and fell face first into the mud. Package held his breath the noise was loud enough to wake the dead but the bandits stayed in the structure not even alarmed by the noise they were instead cracking jokes “How many bandits does it take to get an artefact?” asked a husky voiced bandit.
“How many?” the rest replied in unison.
“One, he just robs the loner carrying it” This was met with raucous laughter. Package just put a palm to his face and kept moving helping Alexi up along the way. After 5 minutes of silently placing there feet down the two arrived at the wire fence and cut a hole in it. When they were clear of the structure Package looked at Alexi and said with a smile “Do something like that again and you’ll wish you hadn’t”
  11:06:07  17 April 2010
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Nice another chapter, a bit short, but nice to see the story going again

Looking forward to see what happens to Alexi, and Package
  20:11:48  13 May 2010
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Hi BillyBob721, any news on the story? does it end here?
Or do we at some point get more ..?
  22:32:37  13 May 2010
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Haha, gotta love the last part of that chapter. A pretty nice joke too.
  05:28:18  15 May 2010
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billybob721
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@Lobotheman: There will be an update, although i'm not sure when, that's the problem with my story, it's updates will be irregular.

@Grunt: that joke is a result of a late night, what was I thinking
  15:39:33  16 May 2010
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---QUOTATION---
@Lobotheman: There will be an update, although i'm not sure when, that's the problem with my story, it's updates will be irregular.

@Grunt: that joke is a result of a late night, what was I thinking
---END QUOTATION---



Thanks

No need to rush, good to know that the story is not dead and buried.

I would rather wait for a good chapter, than one just rushed through for the sake of shutting us up
 
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