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  21:30:55  21 October 2009
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Strelok22
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Soldier in Hell

This is my first story...hurray

17th December 2012 14:54

Harsh Russian Cold.A truck is moving to the so caled outpost 57.Located at Zaton.It is snowing.There isnt a permanent snow cover but it will be there soon.The truck cargo is millitary equipment,food,water and medical materials.The radio is on.The driver just listens it when it stopt.
-Shiort.Everything fails in this devil place.
Afther that the radio started again and stopped secondd later.White noise emerged.The driver hitted it few times....
Then the engine exploded and the truck flew five metres off the road.

16:10 Outpost 57 (lumber mill)

Kuznetzov walked in the room
-Where is "Sterlyad".It was supposed to be an hour ago.
-I dont know Sire.The radio is not responding.
-Hmm.We will wait few more minutes.That equipment is important for us.We need food...
He stopped...thought something and continiued
-Miloshevsky assemble a squad we will se where this truck is.
-Yes komandyr.
The Soldier left the room

16:21

-Leutanant we are ready to leave.-the same soldier said.
-Good.Move by the road.
Most of the soldirs were glad that they are in the squad so they can move and generate some heat.They just passed the gate and entered the unknown.
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End of Part one

P.S.:This one is very short.The next will be longer.
  14:08:10  22 October 2009
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Soldier in Hell

This is my first story...hurray
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It's not bad for the start. However, it's still needed a lot of your care.
Keep it up.


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P.S.:This one is very short.The next will be longer.
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It's not necessary. The short bits are easier to write, read, and edit. IMO.
  18:46:07  22 October 2009
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Thanks....There are spelling mistakes bacause my hands are freezing...this is how I got the Idea for the story .The heating system is currently malfunctioning so there are two blankets on me now.
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16:22

The squad was moving in a mix of run and walk.They were armed with AK 74/U's even the officers were carrying it.Kuznetzov was leading.
-So whats that "Sterlyad" thing.-a soldier asked his buddy quietly.
-It is a truck.
-A truck
-Yes..it...
"Quiet there" Kuznetsov shouted.
The soldiers passed the Bridge and continiued moving with caution.

16:34

Just behind the turn of the road,the soldiers witnessed the "Burned village".Most of the troops were still unexpirienced and they saw such a thing for a first time.
-What happened here.-a young Corporal asked
-Burner anomaly...-said Kuznetsov standing aside from the squad.
In this time a strange loud noise emerged.It turned that the more experienced soldiers have told some "things" to the "rabbits".And now all were warming around the nearest anomaly.
-What is going on there.Squad back in formation-Kuznetsov almost shouted-Miloshevsky....come with me.
-Yes sir.
They walked forward and the officer said that "Emil" (this is how his friend call him) knows how to pass trogh such "things".Miloshevsky without sayng a word took out few shotguns shels and begin to throw them around....
-Squad on me.
-Yes Leutanant.
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End of part two

NOTE:Kuznetsov here is still Leutanant
  11:12:22  23 October 2009
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Thanks....There are spelling mistakes bacause my hands are freezing...this is how I got the Idea for the story .The heating system is currently malfunctioning so there are two blankets on me now.
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NOTE:Kuznetsov here is still Leutanant
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Do you mean you're writing a prequel of Town-32 by Danlo?

edit: No, it cannot be. Your stories run in different years.
  15:39:56  23 October 2009
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WTF ??? I haven read "Town 32".It is...I dont know...stand alone version...no link with that town..
  16:00:20  23 October 2009
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WTF ??? I haven read "Town 32".It is...I dont know...stand alone version...no link with that town..
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Don't get angry with that, buddy. That was just wrong guessing.
Keep it up.
  16:01:15  23 October 2009
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16:42

The whole squad passed succesfully.They continiued to move by the road.No one was saying nothing.Dead silense...only their footsteps and "hard" breathing was heard.Someone noticed that the snowing has stopped...

16:56

Kuznetzov checked the horizon with his binoculars and saw the truck further down near ''Izumrudenoe".Some soldiers noticed cracks at the ground surface...Miloshevsky just said to them "Dont think you wanna to go there".The squad continiued moving.
Afther a minute they passed below a pipeline.One of the soldiers named
Feodor remembered that that was the same "pipe" that starts from the Lumber mill.

17:09

Finaly the squad reached the truck.
-The engine is torn appart.The driver cabin is...is...crushed with the driver.The good s are all over the place.-Miloshevsky said
-Anomaly-responded Kuznetsov standing near an Springboard anomaly.-Squad collect the goods and we will head to the main camp.
Everybody started to collect whatever they can.Feodor aproached one AK 74,dissasembled it with caution and putted it in his backpack.
-Feodor what are doing there ?Stand up and continiue to collect goods.-the Leutanant said.
-Yes..yes sir

17:13

-Sire..all collected we are ready to move-Corporal Miloshevsky reported.
-Ok..Squad move !!-the commander shouted and the squad continiued to move to the camp.
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End of part 3
  16:11:54  23 October 2009
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So, the squad could carry all that stuff which was being moved by the truck, couldn't it?
  20:12:30  23 October 2009
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Actually..yes.The equipment wasnt much..and it was small on size...sme of it has been destroyed soo...
  21:34:14  25 October 2009
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By the way the squad is from six men..with Kuznetsov 7 so there won't bemuch trouble on the carrying
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17:16

The squad continiued moving by the road.Most of them were already warmed so they were more "agile".
-Sire...how is it possible "Sterlyad" to lose itself.The quickest and safest way is from north...it is really close.So why the truck somehow fooled.How do you think sire.-Miloshevsky asked.
-I am wondering the same thing Corporal.-the Leutanant said and by his voice Miloshevsky decided that he has stop here.

17:36

The squad returned safely to the outpost.They began to unload the equipment.And how was the oupost "constructed".....The main building was a HQ and on the "attic" was the mechanic-Vlad.He repairs the weapons and other kind of equipment.The Southern region works as a sleeping ground for the 16 men located in the outpost (The mechanic ,Miloshevsky and Kuznetsov sleep at the HQ)There are always patrols around the main building and the camp.

17:43

-This is all sire.-Miloshevsky reported.
-Allright.The troopers may rest.I will call the main quarters and see what we will do
Everything got back to normal...the patrols...the soldiers...everything.
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End of part 4
 
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