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  13:45:35  6 April 2010
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Strelok22
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7:26 Millitary outpost

-Come on..movement people..we are off the skedjual...it was supposed that we were going to be almost there by now.-Miloshevsky was on the edge of the madness...he really didnt wanted to screw something in front of the leutanant.The men werent really happy of their condidtion...but nobody dared to say something...Miloshevsky and Kuznetsov were watching...

7:49 Not far from VZNS Krug

-Corporal...
-Yes Sergeyevych.
-Those dogs...arent they coming straight at us.
-Uhh...perhaps...you do have a point.But it is too early to take any unnessesary risks...just keep walking.
-Okay.No prob.

Same time VZNS Krug Drainage system

-Hey Stamen look...there are some people on the road.
-Yeah...let me see.-He took out his binoculars,loooked,and stated: Millitary.I guess we should stay away from them.Or we will join your friend...you want a bread.
-Yes...wont be bad if i have some.Wait where is Lenya...
-Ah...he is somwhere here...dont worry about him....
"You said something about me Stamen" an echoing voice came down from the tunnel.
-You see...I told you he was around here...hehe.Here is your bread.
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End of part 13
  14:10:38  6 April 2010
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8:25 Gas Station

-Ok men 10 minutes rest and then we are back on the road.-Miloshevsky informed.The leutanant didnt said almost anything since the "trip" began.Now he was just standing there...waching the lower parts of the Zaton area....Miloshevsky calmly asked:

-What is wrong sir ?
-I got a bad feeling about this.
-Well...I dont know...I have no idea what to expect there...just...
-Well if you dont know...I KNOW Corporal.It is hell in there...last time somebody visited it-five monts ago...we heard only gunshots,roars and screams on the radio...And we never heard nothing from them since that moment.
-I...I dont know what to say...
-Say nothing Corporal...just...just prepare the men and lets finish this...
-Ok sire...just...oh never mind.

And the squad left the gas station...

Same time VZNS Krug Drainage system

-Are you ready with your little snack Gregor ?
-Mmm...yeah.
-Ok now to find Lenya...come get up you lazy kid...LENYAAA where are youu.

"Here"

-Yeah right I almost pinponted your location...now come here we are definetly NOT going to search for you !
"Ok..will be back in no time"

One minute later Lenya appeared...

-Jesus...you smell like a pig damn it where have you been !!!
-Screw my smell Stamen.Check what I found.
-What is this ? "Русенско Варено" Well...an most ordinary canned food.
-No you stupid son of a bitch...it is one of the best canned foods we can find here...it is better than a pork pate.
-Really.Then I am Harry Potter...now get your stupid can and lets get out of here !!!
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  13:49:21  7 April 2010
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9:07 Iron Forest (Jelezny Les)

-Ok.That is it.Lets get the job done and to get to the outpost for some hot soup.-Miloshevsky loudly said to the squad,and continiued:
The entrance to the underground should be somewhere on the southern side,split up on pairs of two and find it.Wath for anomalies and mutants.
-Corporal...come here for a second.-Kuznetsov said standing aside and watching the horizon as Miloshevsky aproached him.
-What is it sir ?
-I really have the feeling that something is definetly not right.
-Well...I feel it too...just...just it is doesnt feels right.
-Exactly...By the way,try to contact with Boris.See what are they doing.
-I already tried a minute ago.
-And what ?
-I couldnt establish a contact.Maybe the hills are breaking up the connection or the weather...I dont know what it is.
-Ok Corporal...any questions.
-Actually yes sire...I know that there is something in that underground.And we are not closing it just because of the mutants.There must be something else ? I hope I am not asking for too much...but...
-I am not supposed to tell you that...but yes.We are not closing it because of the mutants.There is located a prototype of a new weapon...You ever heard of Nicola Tesla.
-Yes...and his magnetic and electric weapons and stuff.
-Weel...in the underground there is a weapon or something like it...but It is not functional...but somebody may steal the plans and he may use them to make a functional one..so we'd better close the door...By the way...what is taking them so long to find the entrance...Miloshevsky go and help them...
-Yes sire.

Miloshevsky walked to the men that were gathered at the middle of the....lests call it "square"...walking slowly and throwing things in front of them.

-I said on pairs of two...
-Corporal LOOK OUT !!!

Then Miloshevsky heard a loud noise and saw a bright light...he stepped in an Electro anomaly.

"Get a medkit...fast" Somebody shouted.The only person that was out of the anomaly field was the Leutanant...He rushed to Miloshevky,which was a bit aside of the anomaly...The medic threw a medkit to Kuznetsov who was now just next to the Corporal now.There was not much he could do...that was an electric shock...not a fire wound.But he injected him some stimulants and bandaged the burns.The Corporal was in councisness "Now what Leutanant" Feodor asked....he was at the centre of the anomaly field along with the other soldiers.

-Take this card*...lock the door with it...and return back.You are in Charge.I will stay here and guard the Corporal till he is OK.Got it
-Roger that sire.

And Feodor and his felows continiued cautiosly through the anomaly field.

*-Kuznetzov throws the card
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End of part 15
  16:15:55  8 April 2010
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Same time...not far from "Топь" anomaly

-So Gregor...tell me about yourself.-Stamen kindly asked.
-Well.There isn't much to tell.
-Come go on...when you are in such place like the Zone you really must have a motive.
-Well....the everyday life in the city get boring you know.Get up,school,get back eat sleep,get up,go to school...it just sucks.And the people in school really dont like me very much...
-Just a second...how old are you.
-On 17.
-Yep...that was my second guess...Ao you want some action eh ?
-Kind of.
-Well...you may be on the right place.Who knows.Oh...you dont have any weapons right.
-No...I had only a knife...but you know I lost it.
-Never lose your knife kid.I have only one so you wont recieve anything from me right now.Wait till we get to a safe palce...
-What are the safe places around here ?
-Well...I know only two of them.
-Go on...wot you describe them better.
-Ok.The first is one ship called Skadovsk.There arent much people in there...maybe 7 or 9.We dont have a trader...just one mechanic.Once somebody finds supplies he must take them to the ship.We are one big family there...The place is pretty young but i hope that we can expand our little kingdom.And now we are going right there.
-Allright.That is enough...what about the second one ?
-It is the Yanov Railway Station.It is really far from here so dont keep it as a plan B for emergencies.That is all I can tell you about it.
-Ok...thanks for the tips.And by the way..how much time is left till we get to Sakadovsk.
-It is S-K-A-D-O-V-S-K...
-Ok,ok...dont get mad...
-Around a half an hour...once we pass that hll,we will see it
-Ok.
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  16:42:33  8 April 2010
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9:10 Iron Forest

-Leutanant...we found the entrance !!!-Feodor said to Kuznetsov.
-Excelent now seal it.
-Roger that...wait do you hear anything men ?
-Yeah..some kind of a mumble.-Sergeyevych called from the group.
-Right...hey some kind of a mini-quakes are coming from there...shit they are getting louder CLOSE THE DOOR !!!.
-It jammed.
-Push HARDER.
-The electronic lock in not working !!!
-WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT THIS...AAAA RUNN
-Shoot the bastard.

A pseudogiant appeared from the underground and then everything went in a full chaos...some where shooting...others were trying to reach the door.The pseudogiant lifted his foot and then took it down...the shockwave in those close quarters was almost lethal for some of the soldiers...but one of them noticed something:

-The shock "fixed" the door...get the card and lock the mothefucker.
-Where IS the card...
-I dont know...where is Feodor....
-No ideaaa....look out it is coming straight at...aaaaa

The sodier rolled at the last moment before the pseudogiant but that didnt helped him....The mutand hitted him with his leg causing a real blood shower...Feodor...who was thrown right next to the entrance of the undeground didnt saw anything but reallised that the card was right in front of him....He grabbed it and rushed towars the entrance...only to be stopped by the horrible things he saw....Guts,blood and bodies everywhere....one or two soldiers firing at the mutant...one of them went too deep in the underground...tripped...and falled on the floor.The giant rushed toward him and killed him...but that was not enough to settle its rage...he rushed towards the closing door...but too late...the underground was closed...
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  19:56:56  14 April 2010
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9:18

-Leutanant...Leutanant.-Feodor louldly shouted.
-What ???
-We have three soldiers down and one of us is in uncounchisnes.
-Can you walk ?
-Well...I think we can.
-Ok.Get the wounded guy and get out of there
-Roger that.

All of the surviviours had injuries and open wounds.They were shaken...but unleast alive.

-Umm...sire how should we get to you...we can't pass the anomaly field in such condition...?
-Then blow the fence Private.-Kuznetsov answered to Feodor's question.
-With what...good will wont do it.
-Dont you have grenades...?
-Only one.It wount be enough.
-Well get mine.

The Leutanant threw the unarmed grenade above the anomaly field to Feodor."Ok I got it" Feodor said and went behind the building with the two grenades.Seconds later he returned fast to the other soldiers and a loud explosion."Any effect" One of the soldiers asked."Sure...it looks like dust"

-Ok move around and get to me.-Kuznetsov ordered.-
Miloshevsky...do you hear me ???
-You have to think up better explanations for closing the undergrouns...sire.-The Corporal was now able to react to the enviroment.
-Hah...I started to worry about you.You can walk right ? Sure you can..get up the rest of the squad is coming...here have some water.....
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  19:27:40  15 April 2010
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Ok...one second.......

Should I continiue the story ? Does anyone reads it...because i have seriuos doubts ? If you have any ideas how to make it better...share them....

  20:34:21  15 April 2010
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Longer...

And I am sure it will find a place to rest it's hand.
  22:23:18  15 April 2010
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Well...that was what I needed to hear I will write the new part afther a day or two maybe bacause I wont be in home...but it will continiue

By the way...If you dont actually understand where the action is taking part just ask...I havent played the English version...so just ask if anything is unclear.And yes there are spelling mistakes.English is not my "home" language and for the dialogues I use my country's system with "-" sign...
  00:13:42  16 April 2010
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I do understand...

Go on grasshopper. Don't lose hope
 
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