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  00:19:51  20 August 2008
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Commissar
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Thanks again for the feedback

And Commissar, you've reserved yourself a place in the story too. It may not be the next part, but it will be in there somewhere.
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Thanks man, I'm really looking forward to it!
  23:32:09  19 August 2008
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odyseus
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How bout
Mitch`ell Hromanik (Hromanik is Czech if you want some sort of backgorund for him)
  22:30:23  19 August 2008
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Psynexus
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Thanks again for the feedback

And Commissar, you've reserved yourself a place in the story too. It may not be the next part, but it will be in there somewhere.
  10:15:09  19 August 2008
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Commissar
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08/19/2008 10:17:30
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psynexus: Wow, the best story I've read here by far, I'm already loving the characters! And I would love if I could be in your story, it's funny because I was actually hoping of asking you if you were willing to use some names of fellow STALKERS in the story in some way, lol.

I go by 'Zombie' in most games I play, and like I said, I would be honored to be included in your story. Keep up the great work!
  06:48:33  18 August 2008
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HL2 Master
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This story rocks! Keep writing!

HL2
  18:24:03  14 August 2008
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Psynexus
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08/14/2008 18:25:02
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Thanks for the feedback

Serensius - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback.

Zaphial - Thank you. I remember you as well. After most of the Redux team moved on I took a break from Stalker and upon coming back saw the 2 new top mods AMK and OL. I switched between both for a while (yes, I am a Stalkerholic), and now I'm all about OL.

Clear Sky is only weeks away so my inspiration for the story has returned. Kany has helped with that also by making a great mod that brings how I see the Zone into the light.

odyseus - When I've played Stalker, the Flesh's tend to "home in" on me faster and more precisely than the Boars who just run, charge, and miss easily. But in my story, everything is more deadly than in the game too.

As for the PDAs, since it started out as a short story I didn't bother with the detail, so here's what happened: Sidorvich provides all new Stalkers with them so he can track them down and reclaim any merchandise in case they get killed. It's a service to both Stalkers and himself.

Yes, it does sound a bit like a story, because I think that's what it's becoming. Part 3 laid down some background for character development and also worked as a transition to the real shit that's coming up. It was necessary to have a calm before the storm.

I hope that cleared everything up. Thanks to everyone who followed up. Expect Part 4 soon
  06:47:53  14 August 2008
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odyseus
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All i have to say is, WOW, at first i was a bit intimidated by the (not so much of a) wall of text at the beginning, but then i had some time on my hands and started reading. I have a few things i would like to ask though.

In part 2. I dont think Flesh's are that intimidating, in the game im just used to them being big huge running targets, i dont think ive ever had one attack me though, maybe you shouldve used boars instead.

In this story, a rookie who has to Steal a geiger counter, and gets a "rental" gun from the group. Has a PDA, everyone has a PDA, a very good one in fact ones that have some sort of system linked in, what did they give them out as they entered the zone, i dont mean to critisize (critize? critizize? cretizise?) but ive always wondered where everyones getting these fancy PDA's.

I also cant help to think like things like these wouldnt happen in the zone, happy things like oh he saw the bandits and saved the day, or he made an ally by chance who just happened to want to join his side, it sounds too much like a story (lol even though it is a story and thats the point of it.. sry :\)

i hope im not being too honest, i really love this story and would like to see more of it.
  23:39:31  13 August 2008
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Zaphial
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Awesome read Psynexus. I wondered if you were still around. Haven't seen you since the last beta run of REDUX and EXTREME. Keep up the good work man.
  23:27:47  13 August 2008
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Serensius
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Firstly, another great episode This is getting really interesting.


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Last, but not least, I want to know what format of the story you like most - audio log, text log, "story-mode", or any combination of those. If you like them all, that's good too, I'm just looking for constructive criticism so I can continue the story using the best method possible.

I await your comments before I start on Part 4
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I like all the 'modes', but I think the audio logs are especially good for bringing out the tension in a scene. Do whatever suits you the most though!
  22:23:44  13 August 2008
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Psynexus
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The Zone: Life, and Death.

Another great installment!!!

I ove Nimbus, he seems so good natured inside, I hope he lives, him and Virtue are like best friends in the making.

HL2
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I was thinking the same thing while I was writing it. Even I don't know what will happen to him, I just write it as it comes to me. But I know for sure they're both going to get into some heavy shit soon.
 
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