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  09:56:40  12 October 2008
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Maiman
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On forum: 01/22/2008
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The Zone - revamped

I recently added and am still adding a bunch of supporting content to the story as well as revamped some old stuff, so there's lots of new things to look at, including a map of the adventure so far.

Also, as part of another project but related to the story also, the encyclopedia has a few new entries.

The final part of Day 7 is coming soon.
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great job on the site, cant wait for the next part!
  04:37:23  12 October 2008
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Psynexus
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On forum: 04/15/2007
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The Zone - revamped

I recently added and am still adding a bunch of supporting content to the story as well as revamped some old stuff, so there's lots of new things to look at, including a map of the adventure so far.

Also, as part of another project but related to the story also, the encyclopedia has a few new entries.

The final part of Day 7 is coming soon.
  04:15:50  12 October 2008
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InsaneBOB
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wow, this is REALY good work! I just started reading it today and it's awesome!
  12:50:27  11 October 2008
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Maiman
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Awesome, so many plot twists it was hard to keep up, cant wait for what comes next
  10:52:17  11 October 2008
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Psynexus
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On forum: 04/15/2007
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The Zone: Life, and Death - Day 7 (Entry 2)

The next chapter in the adventure is up and ready! It's a long one, clear your schedule.

Excerpt:
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*Phantom straps his rifle over his back and trades it for his sniper rifle*

[Unknown]: Roger that. I’ll tell HQ that you’ve arrived.
Phantom: Echo team - come on boys, let’s have some fun!

*Mixed cheers from the nearby Echo team*

*Phantom, leading Echo team, jogs along the path towards the Freedom headquarters to the east.*

Phantom [outgoing]: Radio check. Sound off if you wanna kill some Military filth!
Echo 1: [incoming]: Echo 1.
Echo 2: [incoming]: Echo 2, reporting in!
Echo 3 [incoming]: You got me.
Echo 4 [incoming]: Stop the voices!
Echo 5 [incoming]: Someone call for an exterminator?
Echo 6: [incoming]: Is this thing on?
Phantom *laughs*: Alright, we’re good.

*The Stalkers continue down the road until the sound of shots in the distance interrupts them*

Phantom [outgoing]: Base? What was that – who’s shooting?
Freedom HQ [incoming]: Not us.
Freedom General: This is Bravo team! We’ve got snipers to the north! Repeat Snipers, north. Oh shit… hit the deck… [cut off]
Phantom: That’s us guys, let’s show them who the better snipers are.

*Mixed cocky responses from Echo team*

Freedom HQ [incoming]: Sir, the APCs have reached the village and have opened fire. Reports are coming in of Choppers offloading military forces. What are your orders?
Phantom [outgoing]: Take them all down. Fall back to the base if necessary. Echo is heading for the south hill on the village. We’ll engage the snipers when we get there, have our boys find cover until then.
Freedom HQ [incoming]: Roger that. Base out.
Freedom HQ [incoming]: Attention all forces. Engage Military on sight. Alpha, Bravo: assume covering positions and wait for Echo to arrive. Base out.
Phantom: Come on guys, let’s go rescue our boys.
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Linkage: http://www.randombs.net/thezone/diary/day_7_2.php
  02:46:27  11 October 2008
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AlaskanKnight
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On forum: 02/20/2008
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Epicness.


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Thoughts on next chapter *SPOILER*

Heya, just looking for a quick reply as I am in the process of writing the next part. Tell me if this piece of dialogue nails the feeling of the Zone or not. (I got giddy writing about it, so I figured I got pretty close)

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Nimbus: You guys are both right. Exactly right. It’s like… life makes so little sense and everyone wants to see you fail – why not go to the Zone? Nothing makes sense here… I mean, there’s senseless fighting, fucked up mutated shit, danger everywhere, and hundreds of Stalkers who you never know if you can trust or not. It’s like a little pocket of how the world really is, without the bullshit.

And there’s no room for anything fake – you earn exactly what you deserve, people actually communicate with one another and form relationships that actually matter. It’s like a blast from the past, back when everyone actually gave a shit about anyone else. Sure, we have our problems here too – but at least when WE fight, it’s four a cause… for US. Not for some government or corrupt politician or CEO.

Hell… people should be so lucky. If the outside knew what life was like here, they’d envy us. We’re in touch with reality… THIS is what the world really is. Look at us - we’re walking through a contaminated forest within an ever-expanding region on earth that is the direct result of the bullshit that happens out there. If ever there was a physical manifestation of all the problems in the world – this is it: The Zone. Everything that happens here is a direct result of our need to survive as a species, we’re fighting for the entire human race – and it starts with us. Stalkers are the bandage for the world’s wounds.
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What do you think?
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  02:31:29  11 October 2008
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BB_Berserk
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On forum: 04/06/2008
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Pretty much does. I think they've got too much time on thier hands to think hehehe, the need to go kill things mwahaha.
  03:05:42  10 October 2008
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Psynexus
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Thoughts on next chapter *SPOILER*

Heya, just looking for a quick reply as I am in the process of writing the next part. Tell me if this piece of dialogue nails the feeling of the Zone or not. (I got giddy writing about it, so I figured I got pretty close)

___________________________________________________________

Nimbus: You guys are both right. Exactly right. It’s like… life makes so little sense and everyone wants to see you fail – why not go to the Zone? Nothing makes sense here… I mean, there’s senseless fighting, fucked up mutated shit, danger everywhere, and hundreds of Stalkers who you never know if you can trust or not. It’s like a little pocket of how the world really is, without the bullshit.

And there’s no room for anything fake – you earn exactly what you deserve, people actually communicate with one another and form relationships that actually matter. It’s like a blast from the past, back when everyone actually gave a shit about anyone else. Sure, we have our problems here too – but at least when WE fight, it’s four a cause… for US. Not for some government or corrupt politician or CEO.

Hell… people should be so lucky. If the outside knew what life was like here, they’d envy us. We’re in touch with reality… THIS is what the world really is. Look at us - we’re walking through a contaminated forest within an ever-expanding region on earth that is the direct result of the bullshit that happens out there. If ever there was a physical manifestation of all the problems in the world – this is it: The Zone. Everything that happens here is a direct result of our need to survive as a species, we’re fighting for the entire human race – and it starts with us. Stalkers are the bandage for the world’s wounds.
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What do you think?
  14:08:13  9 October 2008
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BB_Berserk
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On forum: 04/06/2008
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Mate i have been totally engrossed in your story so far, its taken me about 3 or so hours to read it hahah, i can't wait for more!

  03:32:34  9 October 2008
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HL2 Master
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On forum: 06/28/2008
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Well I really ejoyed that, I still have a bit more to read but it is late now. Enigma seems interesting, at first when he was "unkown" I though it may have been Me/ Reaper. Im telling you man,they need Reaper, I can send you the backstory agian if you want.

Good so far, Hurry with the next bit!

HL2

No need - I've got it, and he'll be making an appearance soon.

Thanks for the feedback, and keep reading - your character cometh.
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OOOOH Wonderful!!! STALKERS BEWARE< here comes reaper...I hope...

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