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  02:41:00  24 April 2009
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Psynexus
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On forum: 04/15/2007
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While reading the story, I think I've found a typo.

memories in your brain to erase anything that could dead back to us and your life here. (The word in bold) I think "dead" is "lead"?

EDIT: It's in Day 13 Entry 2, C-Con part.

E2: ZOMG Jargon!
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1. BAH! Yes, I'll make sure it gets fixed. 23 pages is rough to go through.

2. Holy Roof-leaping Ninja skills Batman!
  02:55:43  24 April 2009
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Cake Muncher
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New typo:


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Reaper is out old again
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APC part.

"old" = "cold" I think.

E:

Day Unknown at the start:


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pitch black ox
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"ox" = "of"?

E2: Finished the story. A damn good story heh.

Ending's satisfying.
  12:20:58  24 April 2009
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Highlander999
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On forum: 11/29/2008
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SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome, truly awesome. J.K. Rowiling of the STALKER world
  21:32:04  24 April 2009
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Psynexus
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New typo:

Reaper is out old again APC part.

"old" = "cold" I think.

E:

Day Unknown at the start:

pitch black ox

"ox" = "of"?

E2: Finished the story. A damn good story heh.

Ending's satisfying.
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Thanks again, I'm on it. Glad you liked it.


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SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome, truly awesome. J.K. Rowiling of the STALKER world
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He he, maybe someday.

Well, I don't know if I can take THAT much credit, but I appreciate the compliment and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  00:49:27  25 April 2009
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Highlander999
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On forum: 11/29/2008
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Well, I don't know if I can take THAT much credit, but I appreciate the compliment and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Is it ok, if I post this story on another forum I visit (I moderate there) I'll obviously post that it is your story and everything, but we have 9,812 active members and 40,000 registered members and thousands and thousands more guests. It would probably get it a lot more publicity as well for any sequel

If you are ok with this, and don't mind (I would understand if you don't want to) if you could give me the background that you were using, that would make it look loads better. But yeah, this was stunning. I wrote a diary over at this forum and it went over 100 pages on that thread, so I know how hard it is.
  01:10:56  25 April 2009
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Zatharon
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Awesome ending, only one question though, what happened too enigma? they talked about how she had the punctured lung in the facility but she made it out with the others and such, did she die or did I miss something or what?
  02:07:39  25 April 2009
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Psynexus
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@Highlander Absolutely, spread the love! I'm not sure what you mean by background... if you mean inspiration, it started out as PDA entry for a community project to put more life into the PDAs you pick up in S.T.A.L.K.E.R.


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Awesome ending, only one question though, what happened too enigma? they talked about how she had the punctured lung in the facility but she made it out with the others and such, did she die or did I miss something or what?
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I had a real conflict for the end of the second-to-last chapter as well as the final chapter with what information to give and how to structure it. Basically, you were supposed to assume that Gremlin and the rest of them made it out OK - I left it intentionally vague, but maybe too much so. I literally had dozens of endings going through my head and I had to finally settle on one.

I hope that makes more sense and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  03:23:30  25 April 2009
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Highlander999
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I meant on the off-site link that you give with the PDA in the background
  04:22:25  25 April 2009
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Zatharon
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@Highlander Absolutely, spread the love! I'm not sure what you mean by background... if you mean inspiration, it started out as PDA entry for a community project to put more life into the PDAs you pick up in S.T.A.L.K.E.R.

Awesome ending, only one question though, what happened too enigma? they talked about how she had the punctured lung in the facility but she made it out with the others and such, did she die or did I miss something or what?

I had a real conflict for the end of the second-to-last chapter as well as the final chapter with what information to give and how to structure it. Basically, you were supposed to assume that Gremlin and the rest of them made it out OK - I left it intentionally vague, but maybe too much so. I literally had dozens of endings going through my head and I had to finally settle on one.

I hope that makes more sense and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Alright, was just wondering because from my medical knowledge (which is limited i'll admit) people USUALLY die from punctured lungs without proper treatment, and I don't think they have artificial resperatiors back at the freedom base, either way though, awesome story, enjoyed myself immensely reading it, my favorite bits where when you were meant to think solitaire and virtue shot themselves in the head, I was so dissapointed when I read that, then you came back and I was like FUCK YEAH! more so for solitaire though, cause he's my favorite character and I knew it would be more plausible to have him killed off.
  04:36:27  25 April 2009
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HoboRebellion
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Wow, I'm completely glad I followed this story, it is honestly one of the best fan fictions I have ever read.

I hope to see you write some more in the future (hopefully in the same "universe", but that is doubtful.)
 
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