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  06:54:43  18 November 2008
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you got mine though right, Reaper right...

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  05:15:06  22 November 2008
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OMG Come on we need more story!

lol, no rush, just kidding.
  12:29:58  24 November 2008
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you got mine though right, Reaper right...

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Yep, got it. More to come soon (or later - gotta find a new job :/).
  03:11:05  25 November 2008
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you got mine though right, Reaper right...

HL2 Master

Yep, got it. More to come soon (or later - gotta find a new job :/).
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OOOOOOOOHH!! (breaks in to song) I'm so excited I cant hide it!!!!!!!!!
I'm about to loose control and I think I like it!..............Okay I'll stop now...

Seriously man that was cool, I just finished Day 7, wow Enigma is a girl...who saw that coming??? Though I did think the voice change was suspicous...

So....... the troublesome trio is stuck in the Red Forest, perhaps a very hansome S.T.A.L.K.E.R. with the same taste in firearms as Enigm (cough, cough my character) may save them....... just kdding, Keep Up the good wok though!!!!!

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  10:49:45  27 November 2008
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Holy Fucking Shit! - Day 7 - Entry 4 -[Draft]!

Hey! It's that one guy who writes that one story!

Due to your ever-increasing bitching and moaning, I've finally found the time to start writing the next part again.

So, here's a little excerpt from what I've been writing so far.

It's kinda exciting that I took a little break so I feel like I have a fresh perspective on the story as a whole and I have a lot more to write about.

So here ya go:


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*Nimbus looks around him, taking in the refreshing change of scenery. He squints at a structure a hill away from them.*

Nimbus: Do you guys see that?
Virtue: That cabin over there?
Nimbus: Yeah. Is that smoke coming out of the chimney?
Enigma: He’s right. I think there’s someone living there.

*It suddenly hits the three of them at once at how tired and hungry they are.*

Virtue: Maybe we should go see if anyone’s home.
Nimbus: I hope whoever it is has food.
Enigma: And a place to sleep.

*The Stalkers get up and walk towards the cabin on the hill to their right. As they get closer they see, to their amazement, a large scythe sticking out of the ground in the front yard, which is otherwise devoid of any other “decorations”.*

Nimbus: I hope that means “welcome”.

*The Stalkers cautiously approach the front door of the cabin. No lights or movement of any sort can be seen inside – only a the dim glow of a fire somewhere inside. They look amongst themselves, unsure of how to proceed, until Enigma finally takes charge and knocks slowly on the door.

Some noises can be heard inside as it sounds like someone or something is shuffling inside, causing quite a stir inside. Finally, someone approaches the door and in a gruff, accented voice, says:*

[Unknown]: Speak in slow, clear English or I’ll make you sing for me.
Virtue: Hello? We’ve just come from the Red Forest and haven’t eaten or slept for a few days – we thought someone might live here who could help us out.
[Unknown]: I said in SLOW, clear English – or do I need to come out there and show you how to do it properly?

*Enigma chimes in.*

Enigma: Please… we’ve been through hell and back. We really need some help.

*The man behind the door quickly fiddles with whatever locking mechanism is in place, and opens the door to the two male Stalkers – and to his expectant satisfaction – one female.*

[Unknown]: Well shit on my chest and…

*He cuts himself off in the presence of a lady.*

[Unknown]: Sorry las, I didn’t mean to be rude. But you are most certainly a welcome sight.

*He glances among the three of them.*

[Unknown]: Who are you, and how did you find this place?
Virtue: We’ve come from a mission in Yantar. We got trapped in an anomaly and teleported to Limansk. We just got through a hole in the barrier surrounding the city and ended up here.

*He goes through a wide array of facial expressions as if he can’t comprehend what has just been said. Then he looks up slowly as a grin stretches across his face.*

[Unknown]: Reeeeeeeally…
Virtue: Uh… yes, really…
[Unknown]: So I suppose you don’t mind showing me where this hole of your is then?

*Virtue steps back into line of sight of the anomaly barrier and points towards where the artifact can still be seen deflecting the advances of the anomalies of the barrier.

The man glances around the door frame expectantly, then grabs a rifle off of a rack somewhere near the door and steps out, pointing it at them as he slowly rounds the front of the cabin. He glances around the corner and verifies that there is, in fact, a gaping hole in the barrier. He swings back to them and quickly returns to the front door of the cabin.*

[Unknown]: Eh… so you’re right then. How did you manage that?
Enigma: With an artifact. It’s still lodged in the field now.

*The man looks up and down Enigma with a sly grin.*

[Unknown]: Well if you ain’t the prettiest thing I ever saw…

*Enigma quickly un-holsters the rifle from her back and points it at the mans head before he can match her move.*

Enigma: Try anything and I’ll be the last pretty thing you see.

*The man, knowingly defeated, smiles mischievously.*

[Unknown]: I didn’t mean anything by it – only that you’re not the normal gutter trash that comes by ‘ere – ya know?

*The man hiccups, hinting that he is slightly drunk. Enigma lowers her weapon.*

[Unknown]: Well then, I suppose you would rather not stand around here all day, would yeh?

*His slight Irish accent starts to become more obvious as he accepts them as company, and not hostile.*

[Unknown]: You can come in. Just don’t touch my shit, o-right? Oh, and the names Reaper – by the way.

*He opens the door fully, and steps back. Enigma enters first followed by Virtue and Nimbus. He gets a good whiff of Enigma as she passes him and nearly faints with delight.

The Stalkers gather inside near the fire as he closes the door and locks it again. He turns back to them and stares at the floor just in front of them as if he’s forgotten what he was about to do. He snaps out of it a second later and looks at them in their famished conditions.*

Reaper: Bloody hell, you all look like shit…

*Nimbus laughs slightly, invoking a smile from the other two.*

Reaper: Well! On the menu today we have Boar, Flesh, some berries that probably won’t taste too good, and some fucked up shit I found near the barrier that’ll probably kill ya.

*The Stalkers stare back at him, about to pass out from lack of food and sleep.*

Reaper: Right… I’ll just go fix us up some B and B.
Nimbus: B and B?
Reaper: Boar and booze, mate!

*He says with a grin, then bursts into laughter at his own cleverness. He recedes into the kitchen area behind a hanging blanket of some sort.

The Stalkers feel their eyes start to get heavy and their feet start to fail them. They immediately collapse next to each other near the fire and fall into a deep sleep.*
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Rate, hate, and ejaculate.... or however the hell that saying goes.
  01:22:05  28 November 2008
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Dude I am pissing my pants with excitement! GO REAPER YEAH!!!!!!
Check you email man!

NEXT PART! NEXT PART! NEXT PART!

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  06:27:51  28 November 2008
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Received your character bios.

I've recently received some new character bios from you guys (you're still around here?) and look forward to incorporating them into the story.

Some of you caught me JUST in time for the part of the story I'm writing for me to add your character in without disrupting the flow any.

Also for HL2: I'm revising the details of his character - Reaper, to better fit the bio he gave me.


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Dude I am pissing my pants with excitement! GO REAPER YEAH!!!!!!
Check you email man!

NEXT PART! NEXT PART! NEXT PART!

HL2
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Holy fucknuts, man! Just kidding, I <3 you all.
  07:08:30  28 November 2008
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Go Psynexus oo! oo!

keep it coming man I want to have an awesome week end with awesomer reading material!!


hmmm, i dont think awesomer is actually a word....oh well
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  01:07:45  29 November 2008
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Good story, but...

Your story is so full of factual holes that it's clear you did little research on things except for the Chernoybl incident. For one, A UKRANIAN OR RUSSIAN SOLDIER WOULD NOT HAVE THE LAST NAME OF STEWART. JUST NO. Secondly, there is no such thing as an AK-74S. I am assuming you meant the AKS-74U. Thirdly, neathier Hinds nor MI-17s have gatling guns. And the theory of most of the RPG shots getting through the APCs and IFVs is wistful at best. While yes, they would certaintly do damage and shake the crew inside up, none of this "WHOOOSH ONE ROUND AND YOU'RE ON FIRE" stuff. Not to mention, laser pointers mounted on assualt rifles generally do not reach out one kilometer. Also, Mi-24/35s (the assualt helicopters that I assume are being used) also have rockets, and lots of them. I am fairly sure this would be put to use in the raids on Freedom. And the concept of 1 RPG-7 round taking down a MI-24 made me laugh. Hard. Those motherfuckers were built really, really tough. One would most definatly not explode in the air. RPG-7s=/=SAMs. The spiralling to the ground is possible though, assuming the rocket took out the tail rotor. Now don't get me wrong, your story is briliant. But the Military vs. Freedom thing just had so many inaccuracies I had to lol/rage. Plus, I am assuming you mean soldiers, unless you actually mean military STALKERs as in the guy with the metal-looking suits and AS Vals.

9/10

Okay, NO. JUST, NO. He would not know how to drive a tank. AND IT TAKES FOUR MEN TO OPERATE A TANK. GUNNER, COMMANDER, LOADER, DRIVER. WHAT IS HE, SUPER TWELVE ARM MUTANT MAN? Just, no. Not to mention this is getting ridiculos. LOL I GOT KILLED BUT I'M NOT REALLY DEAD HAI GUIZ. And tanks can NOT carry any type of shell like that. Planes? Yes. BUT TANKS? NO. THEY DO NOT HAVE MAGICAL HIGH EXPLOSIVE FIRE SHELLS. They have the former, but not the two combined.

Ignore the comment about the name. Sorry, I missed the line where he told them his name was Ivan so I thought he had mysteriously dissapeared to be replaced with another charcter.

Okay, ENGLISH? WHAT? THEY ARE IN UKRAINE, NOT AMERICA OR THE UK. I DOUBT ANY OF THEM CAN SPEAK A WORD OF ENGLISH. English? Really? REALLY? .-.
  05:36:13  29 November 2008
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I see some corrections in need of correction.


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Secondly, there is no such thing as an AK-74S. I am assuming you meant the AKS-74U.
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Why not the AKS-74?


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Thirdly, neathier Hinds nor MI-17s have gatling guns.
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The Mi-24's standard gun used to be the Yakushev-Borzov 12.7mm, which is indeed a four-barreled Gatling gun. The newer models tend to carry heavier Gryazev-Shipunov 23mm and 30mm cannon, but all the Hinds seen in-game use the Yak-B.


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And the theory of most of the RPG shots getting through the APCs and IFVs is wistful at best.
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I wouldn't be so sure of that, what with the ammunition available now - since current rounds like the PG-7VR are rated for use against modern tanks, there's not much chance an APC would survive a hit in the right place.
 
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