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  00:24:50  9 February 2012
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he's the guy that tries to kidnap stranger during the resident evil ruckus.
  21:45:21  8 February 2012
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+ venge still alive
+ exile still alive
+ ever's partner still alive

did I miss any?

Don't think so.

Please remind me who Riet was? I ran into the same problem as the first time I read the story. When Westmoreland kills Riet at the end I have forgotten where Riet fits in and can't find him in the story. Only thing I'm pretty sure is Riet must be a bad guy in some way else the maniac Westmoreland wouldn't kill him.
  19:04:01  8 February 2012
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+ venge still alive
+ exile still alive
+ ever's partner still alive

did I miss any?
  18:32:22  3 February 2012
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I like what you did with chapter 50. It's much more important than it was before, and it makes a lot more sense. I didn't not like it before, but I like it much more now.

Also: the edits give me something to do whilst being stricken with winter depression. Winter is a hell of a lot worse without snow, especially if you're surrounded on 3 sides by impenetrable dead forest.
  07:36:02  3 February 2012
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Yeah, speeding way up. For reasons that I won't bore you all with, I decided to go ahead and take on the HD Remix/Director's Cut full time until it was finished, so I'm working at a much faster pace. I'm trying update a full arc every day. Right now I've got the blog updated with Chapters 1 - 50, so that means that Kusanagi would have to paste 35 chapters into this thread to catch up. I think that would be excessive, so let's leave it at 15 chapters here, and anyone who wants to continue reading is more than welcome to do so at the blog.

The DC isn't really going according to plan; I'm making small changes to things that I expected to make big changes to, and I'm making big changes to things that I had no intention of changing - so these updates are actually turning pretty significant. In addition to the minor fixes and improvements I'm making, several major plot points have changed. Some material has been cut, and some has been added. And so on. Bottom line: this time around, not everything happens quite the way it did before. History is changing.

I'll go into more detail on this stuff in a big news post once I've fully edited through Chapter 100.
  20:51:59  1 February 2012
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13-15 (speeding up, eh?)

Part 1: Stranger
Chapter 13 (Wish)

The maintenance crawlspace wasn’t a comfortable place to be. Not because it was so low that you couldn’t stand properly, but because it was so open. If I shined my light in one direction, it would illuminate a stretch of floor, but there would still only be gloom beyond. This also made navigation a little tricky. It was hardest on the Biker and Ever, especially Ever. They were bigger than Venge and me, so the confines of the space worked against them even more – and it would be way too awkward to try to support Ever down here, so he had to move under his own power, which clearly wasn’t easy for him.

But in spite of these difficulties, it wasn’t so bad. Aside from dirt and spiders, we were alone down there. It was dead quiet, dry, and the Biker said the radiation was much more tolerable. He would occasionally pause and examine the panels above us, trying to find something to navigate by. After we’d traveled a couple hundred meters, the effect was somewhat like being at open sea, and unable to see land. When our lights could no longer find any walls, we were essentially lost in a large, low, room.

And then for the first time, the Biker proposed an alteration to our route. We had been traveling straight – and we knew it was straight, because of the supports that we’d been following, but now he wanted to take a small detour.

“Why?” I whispered. I wasn’t aware of any particular need to whisper, but in the cramped darkness, it was sort of like a library. I’d have felt foolish talking too loudly in there.

“Hotspot,” Venge whispered from behind me. “Radiation’s seeped through the floor these panels.”
And on we went, on track, but lost. We were obviously beneath one of the factory floors, because there wasn’t anywhere else that would warrant all of this access. But we had yet to find a way up. It couldn’t have been the same floor that we’d run into the military on, because that had been on ground level, and this was clearly two or three levels lower.

“What’s this?” The Biker halted, kneeling beside a rusted plate set in the floor. Painfully, Ever knelt at his side, reaching down to brush away silt.

“Some kind of access?”

“That’s what I’m thinking – but what could be under this?” Venge asked.

“Regulators, probably.”

“Yeah.” The Biker moved his Geiger counter into the light. “Radiation’s better,” he noted.

“That’s odd,” Ever admitted. “Think it’s worth a look?”

“Yeah.” They set about loosening the handholds, which had rusted down long ago.

“You’d better do it,” Ever told Venge, moving gingerly aside.

“Right.” The smaller man positioned himself opposite the Biker, gripping the handles.

“On three,” said the Biker. “Three.” They heaved the panel aside, revealing an inky black opening. I moved up and held my light over the opening. A ladder of bent rebar set directly into the concrete led down perhaps fifteen feet, into a horribly cramped, barren corridor that gave no indication as to where it might lead.

“What is it?”

“Sublevel access, maybe.”

“Maybe an emergency exit.”

“Not this far in.”

Again, the Biker reached down and checked the readout on his wrist. “It’s healthier down there,” he said.

“So?” Venge twitched an eyebrow.

“Why not?” The Biker reached into his armor and pulled out a bolt. He dropped it unceremoniously into the corridor. It fell heavily to the concrete, and stayed there. We all watched it for several moments. Silence reigned. “Let’s go,” he said, and climbed onto the ladder. Ever followed, then I went, and Venge came down last. We left the cover off the hole in case we needed to come back. The corridor terminated after five meters in a staircase which led down two brief flights, and into another featureless corridor, which ended in a door. It was another of those strange hatch-types, and it took both the Biker and Venge to get it open. Once it was unsealed, they pulled it open a couple of inches and peered cautiously through.

“Can’t see much,” the Biker said, eyes flat. “Give me your light.” I handed it over; the one mounted on the shotgun was a little unwieldy. I couldn’t help but notice that he’d been much more talkative when it was just the two of us. Lately he was being downright monosyllabic.

He shone it through briefly, immediately covering it. He turned back to us. “I think this is the part of the Pripyat underground.”

“The trains to Chernobyl?” Venge asked. “I didn’t even know it was real.”

“It is – question is, is this it?”

“It’s possible,” Ever confirmed. “If it went to the border, the train yard would be right on the main line. It would actually make a lot of sense. Explains what a lot of those buildings up there are for.”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“It’s camouflage,” he explained. “The Pripyat underground was a supposed route for supplying all of the illegal projects in the Chernobyl ring – but there’s no way to get a train into the ring without the government coming down on you. So you take it as far as the frontier – well, what used to be the frontier – and you transfer your supplies to the underground. The government can’t touch you down here.”

“Could be a way out,” said the Biker.

“Definitely,” Ever confirmed.

“Then we should go.” Venge sounded very sure of himself.

“Well.” Ever frowned. “Big, open tunnels like this – it’s asking for trouble. We’re not very well armed. What do you think?” This was directed at the Biker.

He scowled. “Maybe twenty shells. Couple more mags.”

Venge held up his P99. “Thirteen rounds.” He glanced at me.

“Fourteen.” I touched the FNP9 at my hip. “Two mags.”

“Could be worse,” said Ever. I hadn’t noticed before, but he had been carrying a pistol. It was holstered just behind his back on the left side, at about a nine o’clock angle, though gun was so long that the holster was just a sophisticated loop that gripped the slide and trigger guard. The back of his belt was lined with magazine pouches.

The Biker handed back my flashlight. “Let’s see where it goes.” We filed out into the tunnel. It was surprisingly big, especially after the crawlspace. The arched ceiling was easily five meters above us, and it was just as wide. Two sets of tracks ran with plenty of room. Lots of space, not nearly enough light. Ever, now leaning on me again, produced a flashlight similar to mine. Venge pulled out his PDA, and dialed up the screen so that it was nearly as bright as the Biker’s light.

“Which way?” he asked.

“Flip a coin,” Ever said, shrugging, then wincing. The Biker held up his Geiger counter, took a few steps, then moved in the opposite direction. “This way,” he said, putting it away.

And so we set off, the Biker to our left, and Venge on our right. It was quiet down here. Real quiet. I don’t think I’d ever been anywhere so quiet before coming to the Ukraine. The soft crunch of gravel as we walked seemed noisy. The going was slow, on account of my pace supporting Ever – but still a lot faster than we’d been going in the crawlspace.

“How long have you been here?” Venge asked me.

“This is day two, I guess.”

He let out a low whistle. “How do you like it so far? That’s a joke, by the way.”

“What’s going on outside?” Ever asked. It took me a moment to realize he meant the world outside, as in, the real world.

“What? Like, politically?”

“Whatever you like,” he said. The Biker sighed.

“Biker doesn’t like the real world,” Venge whispered.

“Well,” I said, thinking. “The infection’s more or less over with. Turns out some corporation manufactured it, planning to step in with the cure – but somebody exposed it, and now everybody’s getting indicted. Most everybody else has the vaccine now.”

We occasionally passed doors similar to the one we’d entered the tunnel through. After some discussion, we decided not to bother with them until we’d covered some ground – the tunnel was easy going, and the doors would just take us back into the labyrinthine factory sublevels, which our previous luck notwithstanding, the Biker seemed to believe was a deathtrap. I took him at his word.

So we walked, and talked. It wasn’t exactly strolling the mall with my friends, but it was hard to believe this was a place with death around every corner. The Biker, of course, didn’t say much. We had traveled perhaps two miles before it happened. It was so faint at first, that in our conversation, we didn’t even notice it. There was a faint, echo in the distance.

“What’s that?” Venge asked, calling a halt.

“What’s what?”


It was a faint chittering. The Biker and Venge readied their weapons as the darkness ahead started to move.

They broke into our light like a wave; there were literally so many that they blacked out the ground beneath our feet.

“Don’t fire,” the Biker hissed. “Keep still.” They weren’t quite rats – but then, I wasn’t sure what else to call them. They tore by at what for them must have been top speed, flowing around our ankles like surf on a beach. It took all of my self control not to completely break down.

“The hell’s this?” Venge demanded in a whisper – he wasn’t doing much better than I was.

“Something’s got them scared,” Ever said. He sounded relaxed, but to me, he felt tense.

“Yeah, but what?” The Biker had his shotgun raised. “What are they running from? I’ve seen these things swarm stuff a lot bigger than us.”

“Infected?” Venge almost had to shout over the noise of the rodents as they poured past.

“They wouldn’t be scared of infected,” the Biker countered. The torrent began to slacken, and after another minute, they were gone. Thirty seconds later, we couldn’t even hear them anymore. For a moment, it was quiet.

“That was creepy,” said Venge. An inhuman wail, like – like in The Thing, when everybody runs outside, and their friend is there, but it’s not him, he’s like half turned – and he makes that noise – it was a noise like that. And it was scary.

Chapter 14 (Wish)

The cry echoed through the tunnel; it was impossible to tell how far away the source was. The four of us stood in a line, lights shining forward.

“How far back was that last door?” Ever asked, his eyes never leaving the blackness ahead.

“Two,” said Venge, “…maybe three hundred meters.”

“Let’s go.” And then we were running; I wasn’t even sure how it happened. Ever, who had a moment ago been leaning heavily on me, was leading me by the hand. Our lights waved frantically across the tunnel as we fled.

“You ever heard anything like that?” Venge shouted back.

“Hell no,” replied the Biker, throwing a hurried glance over his shoulder. “You all right?”

“I’ll make it.” That was Ever. I looked back; nothing but dark.

Another piercing shriek rang out, this one much louder. Presumably much closer. The alcove with the door came into view, and the Biker sprinted ahead. Maybe this was a weaker seal, or it was just adrenaline, but he had it open in one heave. Once we were through, he slammed it shut and re-sealed it. For a few seconds we just stood in the dark, panting. We were in a short corridor, and the door at the other end was closed.

The Biker was the first to speak. “Better go,” he said. Nobody protested. Beyond the door, another passage stretched off in either direction. It was lined with pipes similar to those in the service tunnel we’d entered below the factory, but was wide enough that we didn’t have to walk single file. “Can anybody get a reading in here?”

Venge produced his PDA. “Nothing,” he said. “Hotspots up top are killing the GPS, and you can forget about the compass.”

“Same here. Which way? Flip a coin?” I asked.

“Left,” said Ever. They looked at him.


“I’m left handed,” he said.

Venge and the Biker exchanged glances, then shrugged. We set off.

“Wish I’d gotten a look at that thing,” I said.

“You probably don’t,” Ever told me.

“Grue, you think?” Venge looked back briefly. “I’ve heard you get those deep underground, where it’s dark.”

“They don’t sound like that,” said the Biker.

“You’ve seen one?”

He didn’t reply.

“Then how do you know what sort of sound it makes?”

“I know what it doesn’t make. Maybe it was a Blood Demon.”

“Blood Demons aren’t real,” Venge said, waving a hand.

“Just because nobody’s ever gotten a picture of one doesn’t mean they don’t exist,” Ever countered. “People have trouble getting good shots of drinkers, too, but we all believe in them.”

“Let’s just be glad those rodents were too spooked to be hungry.”

“I’ll drink to that,” said Ever.

We emerged into a small antechamber. It was roughly octagonal, with a large pillar in the center, and four doors leading off into the dark. We paused at the mouth of the chamber.

“Which way?” Venge shifted uneasily. Ever and the Biker didn’t look too thrilled with the choices.

“Keep on straight?” I proposed, glancing at the Biker, who didn’t respond. He just stood there, looking straight ahead. Venge noticed, and waved a hand in front of his face.

“You okay?”

“What is it?” Ever asked.

“Biker,” said Venge. I turned so that Ever could see.

“Oh, dear.”


“Quiet. Don’t move.” He gently disengaged his arm from around my shoulder, straightening painfully. His flashlight was at his side, pointed at the floor. He drew the combat knife mounted on his vest. I held my breath as Ever silently scanned the darkness around us. Venge didn’t seem to have any more idea what was going on than I did.

Ever abruptly brought up his light, illuminating a vaguely man-shaped figure. It had been a man, once – but now it was dark, lumpy, horribly hunched and misshapen. It had been standing not two meters from Ever and me, hidden in shadow. Even lit, it just stood there, staring fixedly at the Biker. It took everything I had not to scream like a girl, not for the first time since getting here. It was ugly, yes, but it was ugly and it had been so close without our knowledge – that was what made it terrifying. The seconds were tense. Ever took a quiet step to its right. And another. I couldn’t take my eyes from the creature’s face. Ever slammed the blade into the base of the thing’s skull, and it fell instantly and heavily without making a sound.

The Biker dropped to his knees, gasping things too vile to repeat.

Ever slumped against the wall, then sank down beside the fallen creature.

Venge stood, dumbstruck. The Biker spat blood onto the floor, then looked over at Ever.

“Is that what I think it is?” he gasped.

“Probably,” the other man replied, wiping his knife on the monster’s trousers. He sheathed it. “Never seen one up close before,” he said lightly.

“Wow,” Venge breathed. “I thought they’d all been killed.”

“How could anybody know that?” the Biker asked, disgusted. “Idiot. I’m fine,” he snapped when I moved to check on him. He levered himself to his feet using the shotgun. Venge was examining the dead thing, whether out of scientific interest or morbid curiosity, I couldn’t guess. A minute later I had Ever back on his feet, and we were on the move again.

We found a plaque on a wall that might’ve been an emergency diagram, and after scrubbing away the silt, made an educated guess on which way to go.

“We’ve got to be outside the yard by now,” said Venge as we made our way through the sublevel. “Unless we’ve gone in a circle.”

“We covered enough ground straight in the tunnel,” Ever said.

“Then what is this place? There’s nothing in Rostov outside the yard that’s got anyplace like this.”

“There’s a lot of stuff to the southwest, no telling how deep some of those installations go, between Rostov and Yantar. We could theoretically be around there – the distance is right.” He paused. “But the underground wouldn’t run that way – so we can’t be over there. Logically, it’d have to be running south to north, so that’s where we made most of our time.”

“That’s the middle of nowhere,” said the Biker.

“Indeed,” Ever agreed. “North or south, there’s nothing on the map.”

“So what is this place?”

“Let’s not burden ourselves with unnecessary speculation.”

Venge turned and briefly shined the light from his PDA into the corridor behind us, then resumed walking. “Maybe it’s a lab.”

“You’d like that, wouldn’t you?”

A portion of the corridor ahead was collapsed, and we had to climb past the rubble one at a time. A little ways past that, I began to spot the occasional casing on the floor. The deeper we went, the more common they became. The Biker called a halt at a T-junction, holding up a fist for silence.

There was a sound from around the corner, strangely regular. Cautiously, the Biker leaned out to check. “Clear,” he said, and we moved out. The noise was caused by a ventilation cover, dangling from a single bolt in the center on the corridor. It had once covered a vent in the ceiling, but something had broken it free. The Biker shined his light into it.

“Somebody had a good fight here,” Ever said, letting go of me to kneel. He held up an enormous casing. “Fifty GI, seven of them. What can’t you kill with seven of these?”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“Well, there’d be a corpse.” The corridor was clear, save for some suspicious, ancient-looking smears on the walls. “Oh,” said Ever, looking past us. “How attractive.” We turned to look at the opposite wall.

I looked at the letters for a moment. “Last one to turn,” I read aloud.

“…turn out the lights,” finished Venge. There was a pause. “That look like blood to you?”
“Probably just pasta sauce,” said Ever.

Chapter 15 (Wish)

“Don’t let it get to you,” Ever got to his feet. “Whatever happened here happened a long time ago.”

“Yeah,” said Venge, though probably more to himself than me. I glanced at the words, then back to the Biker.

“Let’s go.” He turned, lighting up the passage ahead.

“Best get to it,” said Ever tiredly. I quickly began to support him again, and we started moving. It might’ve been my imagination, but it seemed like the Biker was setting a brisker pace. Ever and I had to struggle to keep up. Maybe he was just in a hurry, or maybe he was edgy because of the writing on the wall. Or maybe he knew something the rest of us didn’t. Eventually we ran out of options on the level we were moving through, and had to descend to avoid radiation yet again. I didn’t even want to think about how far underground we were by now; probably farther down than I’d ever been in my life.

Moving downward through the complex, air that had once been stale turned steadily toward the rancid. A little ways ahead, we found a body. Well, not so much a body as a skeleton. It was little more than bones and cloth, with some rotted, unidentifiable organic material. It made my flesh crawl. And it was getting damp down here.

But we were making good progress; there was no telling if we were moving in the right direction, or even a useful one, but we were covering ground. We found a second emergency schematic on a wall outside what had once been some kind of break room. Venge and the Biker examined it at length.

“If we can get to sanitation, there’ll have to be some kind of way to the surface,” Venge said.

“Water’s trouble,” Ever cautioned.

“Can’t stay down here forever.” Venge traced the lines on the plaque with his finger. “If only that other block wasn’t closed off, there’s an express elevator there.”

“No way it’s in service,” I said.

“We could still climb up the shaft.”


“Better than staying here.”

“It doesn’t matter – there’s no way through.”

“Any workarounds?”

“Not that I can see. Just the warehouse and the corridor entrance. If we could get into maintenance, maybe.”

“I’ve had enough of maintenance.”


Ultimately, we went for stairs that would hopefully take us down – yes, down – to somewhere less deteriorated. The Biker’s guess that sanitation would almost certainly offer an exit was enough to mobilize us for whatever might stand in between. Down here there was nothing but our footsteps, and occasionally dripping water. It was almost peaceful. Or it would have been, if we didn’t keep finding broken glass, mysterious stains, and expended cartridges. There was even a door that appeared to have been welded shut from the inside.

We made our way through the lab quarter into a block of storage, and through to some kind of undercroft. For lack of a better idea, we moved through, and into an area that was anything but scientific. Heavy lifting equipment – probably some kind of warehouse, but our flashlights could only light up so much. We hurried through.

“Shit,” said the Biker. A door leading off the corridor – presumably toward the sanitation plant – was already open. On the other side, calm, black water.

“This is the annex,” said Venge.

“It’s impassible,” said the Biker. Perhaps thirty feet away, our lights showed stairs emerging from the water, leading to another door. I glanced down – yes, there were stairs on our side, too. It was probably one of the main valves – at least ten, maybe fifteen feet down. The water wasn’t shallow, but I didn’t see what their problem with it was. Since coming this far down, we’d scarcely encountered any radiation to speak of.

“It’s the only way through,” said Ever, his eyes fixed on the far side.

“Watch out!” I cried. The Biker looked down, and jumped back in shock. The arm that had been reaching for his boot snaked back into the water without even a ripple. We stared at the water for several seconds.

“Charming,” said Ever, one eyebrow arched.

After a pause, Venge spoke. “What was that?”

“Looked like an arm.”

I glanced back into the corridor. It might have been my imagination, but the air seemed to be changing.

“Yeah, but whose?”

“Hell should I know?”

“Guys,” I said.

“Some kind of infected?”

“Guys,” I said again, this time more loudly. Venge and the Biker shut up. I looked back out across the water. It wasn’t that far. “I don’t think we have a lot of time.”

“What do you mean?”

“There’s something out there,” I said, nodding toward the corridor. “We should go.”


“Grenade,” said the Biker. “That’ll clear it up.”

“Not down here, too dangerous,” Ever countered. I shined my light upward, illuminating the ceiling.

“Pipes,” I said.


“Give me a second.” I followed them with my eyes. There. There. There, I committed them to memory. There were plenty of them. The Biker looked uneasily back at the water.

“He’s got a point,” he said, glancing over his shoulder. “Something’s coming.”

I turned off my flashlight. They looked at me in surprise as I holstered it. “Make hay while the sun shines.”

“That’s my job,” said Ever, letting go of me. I didn’t know if he meant making bad jokes or being the diversion, but it didn’t matter.

“Not this time.” I punched him lightly on the chest; he winced. “I got it. Swim fast.” I took a step back. And one more. Then ran forward, leapt from the railing, and caught a pipe. I swung forward, grabbed another, and made my way out over the water, my feet dangling about a meter from its surface. I grabbed another pipe, then another, moving out into the center of the chamber, but away from the straight shot that the boys would need to reach the far side. Another meter out, I stopped, hanging with both hands.

“Go,” I called. The Biker looked down, hesitated, then knelt and got into the water with as little of a splash as he could manage. He began to swim. Ever followed, then Venge.

The thing erupted from the water, wrapping both arms around my leg. I kicked it back in, released the pipe with one hand, drew my FNP and fired five shots down, the reports like cannon fire in the chamber.
I don’t know what I’d been expecting, but it wasn’t what I’d got. Ideally, the freak would have just been distracted. But I didn’t think he’d go all Free Willy.

The shots were still echoing when Venge was dragged under. Ever immediately turned and dived after him. This was going to hell real fast. I fumbled the pistol back into its holster and swung for another pipe, which promptly gave in a shower of rust and cockroaches. I dropped into pitch-black water, flailing wildly. Underwater, the thing hit me from behind, making a grab for my throat with what felt horribly like claws. I jerked out the FNP9 again, shoved it backward and fired into its gut. I squeezed the trigger for a second shot, but I didn’t really expect the pistol to fire. It didn’t matter; the thing’s grip loosened, and I kicked it away, then clawed my way to the surface.

With my head above water, I saw light, and that had to be the direction of the far side. I struck out for it as fast as I could. Moments later, I was being hauled out by the Biker, who immediately turned to help Ever, who held Venge’s vest in one fist, and his knife in the other.

The Biker heaved them out, and they sprawled onto the ground, Ever gasping and Venge spluttering. An arm burst from the water and made a grab for Ever, but he caught it, pulled the freak out of the water, snapped its neck, and rolled it back in, then fell back panting. “Water’s trouble,” he said. “Water’s always trouble. You ever see anything like that?” he gasped at the Biker, who shook his head.

I hauled myself into a sitting position against the wall, watching the calm black surface warily. The Biker drew his Pernach, cleared the chamber, and began to blow into the breech. I did the same with my FNP9. Venge rolled over, coughed up some more water, and got unsteadily to his feet. Both he and Ever had been severely clawed. The entire right arm of Ever’s gray thermal was now a deep crimson, and Venge was bleeding badly from his leg and side.

“How much farther?” he asked.

“Not far,” said the Biker, pulling off his helmet to wipe water from his eyes. “Shouldn’t be far.” I crawled to Ever and checked the wound on his arm. Long, hideous – but not seriously deep. Nowhere near the artery. Soaking wet gloves aren’t much to work with, but I put pressure on it.

There was a sound from the far side of the water, and I looked up. The Biker reflexively pointed his light at the noise, but just as he illuminated the doorway, something moved away.

“Wonder what that was,” he murmured.

“Close call,” I said, staring out across the calm water.
  01:07:23  31 January 2012
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Behind? Ha! 10-12!

Chapter 10 (Wish)

That’s one way to start a conversation. Ever went down in a heap as the sharp reports echoed through the factory. Before I could even think about reacting, the Biker stepped into the open, racked the 870 noisily, and blasted the stalker in the face. In hindsight, I’m glad the light in the factory was so bad. It wasn’t something I wanted to see in detail. As the headless body began to collapse, the Biker flung himself over the next wall as someone opened fire. Rounds struck the equipment I sheltered behind, ricocheting wildly.

A bullet struck the armor over the Biker’s knee and he buckled, then went down. There was shouting now; three, four voices – maybe more. On the floor, the Biker pumped the shotgun and rolled onto his back, extending it in one hand. Something moved on the level above, and he fired, causing a terrible scream. I heard footsteps nearby, and scrambled cover near the Biker’s, where he was struggling to his feet. The glare of a flashlight appeared at the corner, and he shoved me out of the way to fire again, this time destroying a perfectly good section of wall.

“Time to go,” he took me by the collar, dragging me to my feet. I think he meant to get me out the way we’d come, but he never got a chance. A man slid into the row ahead on his knees, firing from the hip. The Biker had no choice but to shove me away as hard as he could to keep us both from being cut in half. “Go!” he shouted after me, and I didn’t blame him. We were obviously outnumbered, and he definitely wouldn’t have a chance if he had to look after me. I stumbled into the next row, gripping Ever’s shotgun. I might not be able to turn this around, but I didn’t need to drag the Biker down with me.

I took off at full speed. I vaulted over a wall, darting into next section. Someone fired on me, and I rolled over a workbench, going flat on the other side. It figured that I’d get shot at the minute I wasn’t wearing body armor. Prone, I crawled under the bench, continuing underneath a monolithic cube of machinery. Someone rattled off another burst, but nowhere near me. A shotgun answered promptly. This was louder than any firing range I’d ever been on.

The machinery ended, and I came swiftly to my feet, scanning the area. More firing from the far side of the manufacturing equipment. Another shotgun blast. Whoever these people were, they were converging on the Biker. I’d slipped past their line. If I couldn’t fight them, I could at least distract them. I started to look at things in another way. There – workbench, equipment, pipes. I flew forward, leapt the table, took a step from the pipes and boosted off the metal grating atop a gargantuan mixer. In free fall, I flung the shotgun and caught the second-level railing. Ever’s over-under clattered heavily onto the metal grating as I heaved myself over the rail. There was a shout, and a bullet buried itself in the mortar above me.

Sadly, the catwalk offered virtually nowhere to go. I’d never been shot at before, so I blame adrenaline for the decision to grab the shotgun and roll to my feet. At that point, all I could do was hope that the rusted metal wouldn’t give out beneath me as I ran. Below, I could see the factory floor in detail. Five armored figures were moving purposefully through the rows – and there was the Biker, crouched behind a stack of crates – with a sixth stalker poised on the other side, combat knife raised. I skidded to a stop, raised the shotgun and discharged both barrels. The crates dissolved in a storm of shards, and a stunned heartbeat went by.

The stalker made a hurried slash, and the Biker blocked with the haft of his shotgun, closing the distance between them. To close for the gun, he slammed the stalker full in the face with his helmet, then flung him away bodily. There was a blue flash as the hapless stalker landed, and violent arcs of electricity exploded from him, along with shrieks so horrible that the explosion of gunfire that followed was a blessing. Invisible electrical anomalies. You had to be kidding me. Then I realized that no, they weren’t kidding me, and there were also bullets coming in this direction. With no alternative, I took the shotgun in one hand and jumped the railing. Twenty feet to the floor, but I got it right and rolled out. The Biker was thumbing shells into the 870.

“How many?” he shouted. Sparks flew from the pipes between us and the stalkers.

“Five, maybe,” I had to shout back.

“Too many.” He looked past me, then over his shoulder. Across the aisle stood a pair of rusted metal doors. “That way.”

I pushed off from the pipes as he spun into the open, whipping a Pernach from his belt and firing a protracted burst in the direction of the enemy. Someone my size can’t do much with a heel, and even less with a shoulder. I drop kicked the doors, and they burst open with enough rust in dust form to give ten people black lung. I tumbled into the corridor, and the Biker, pistol and shotgun in hand, slid in after me. And we were so dead. One of the stalkers had been coming this way, possibly making for these very doors – and he was recovering from the shock of our flashy entrance. Neither of us were in a position to do anything about it but stare at his submachine gun. Game point.

There was a flicker of red, and a shot rang out, the round burying itself in the wall behind the stalker. Another struck him in the leg. That was all the Biker needed; he brought the Pernach across his torso and shot him down.

Another stalker emerged from the shadows, a laser-mounted pistol raised in a two-hand grip. He was slender, garbed in light tactical gear, and probably not much taller than I was. He returned the P99 to a drop-leg holster, and picked up the fallen stalker’s submachine gun.

“You’re here for me, aren’t you?” Youthful voice. Good English. Unliker the Biker, I thought this fellow might actually be American, instead of just sounding like one.

“Venge?” the Biker groaned.

“Yeah.” He glanced at the open doors; the stalkers would be coming. “We should go.” I picked myself up, and Venge helped the Biker to his feet. “This way.” He didn’t need to tell us twice; we took off at a fast trot, turning right, then left, and left again – turning at every corner we found.

“Who are those guys?” the Biker gasped.

“Military. They followed me in.”

“What happened?”

Venge ducked through a doorway, and we followed him into pitch black. The Biker and I produced our lights. “Hold up here,” he said. “I don’t know what they were doing here – I haven’t heard of any helicopters going down. I think they’re looking for someone.” The chamber was some kind of storeroom, lined with bare shelves. I closed the door behind us.

“Looking for someone with Duty?”

“Impossible. But you know how twitchy the military gets when they’re inside the cordon – they’ll shoot at anything that moves.”

“I know, but that doesn’t explain why they’d come in here after you,” said the Biker, thumbing more shells into his 870, then slung it over his shoulder to reload the Pernach.

“I don’t know,” Venge said, sounding exhausted. I supposed that for someone who wasn’t normally a combatant, he’d been through a lot. So had I, come to think of it. He pulled the magazine from the MP5, scowled, and tossed the weapon aside. “Can you get me out?” he asked.

“Depends. How many of them are there? And are they going to stick around, or take off?” The Biker returned his pistol to its holster, hefting the 870.

“The guys got a few of them outside,” said Venge. “How many did you two get?”

“Three, maybe four,” said the Biker. “Five, if you count the one out there.” He looked at me.

“None,” I said, feeling a little sheepish.

“That still leaves a few. There were a bunch.”

“But do they care about us, or we just in the wrong place at the wrong time?”

“I can’t think of a reason that they would, but I just don’t know.”

The Biker swore. “Any other ways out?”

“This building annexes the hangar at the south end of the yard – if we can make it past both atriums, there should be something.”

“The hangar?” The Biker closed his eyes, obviously considering some kind of inner map. “That’s a long road,” he said at last.

“It gets better,” Venge began, but I cut him off.

“Does anyone else hear that?”

“Hear what?”

“Shh.” I held up a hand. Sort of like a distant… rattling. But close by. I swept the beam of my flashlight around the room. It lit up a rusted railing; there was a spiral staircase set into the floor. Puzzled, I walked over to it and shone my flashlight down. It illuminated a mass of frenzied movement not more than thirty feet down. Suddenly the noise was a lot louder, the clanking of dozens of feet climbing ancient metal stairs, and guttural gasping that I would later learn to identify exclusively with the infected.

Chapter 11 (Wish)

Venge took one look down and pulled me away. “We have to go,” he said, motioning the Biker toward the door. “Right now.”

The three of us scrambled into the corridor as the first infected spilled from the top of the stairwell. The Biker slammed the door, and I slid Ever’s empty shotgun through the handles to brace it.

The Biker grimaced, watching the door shudder under repeated impacts. I just stared.

“Unless someone’s got a better idea, we can go east, try to make it to the other side of the compound,” gasped Venge.

“Why can’t we go south?”

“I tried. There’s a drinker out there. I saw the drained bodies.”

The Biker nodded. “No choice.” He flipped on the light on his shotgun. There was a heavy step, and we whirled as a figure lurched around the corner. I’ve never done any real shooting before, but it almost felt like instinct. I brought up my FNP9, aimed for the center of mass and fired, as did Venge in the same instant. The figure jerked and slumped heavily against the opposite wall. Then the Biker’s light fell on him, and I felt sick. I dropped my gun.

The Biker swore, brushing past me.

“You’re a real team player, “ Ever groaned, sinking down a little further before closing his eyes and slumping over.

“Well, damn.” Venge let his pistol drop to his side. “He’s with you guys?” I fell to my knees, covering my mouth in horror.

“They heard those shots,” Venge countered. “We have to go.” Something slammed into the door again, shaking dust from the ceiling.

“Vest got all of it,” the Biker reported, ignoring him. “No penetration.” That helped me snap out of it a bit; I hurried to Ever’s side.

“Why’s he unconscious?”

“You’ve never been shot, have you?”

“Can we move him?”

Even wearing a helmet, the Biker looked conflicted. I knew what he was thinking, and helped him make up his mind by pulling one of Ever’s arms around my shoulders. But there was a problem; he weighed about eighty pounds more than I did. I got upright, faltered, and Venge took the weight on the other side.

“Now can we go?” He sounded impatient. I forgave him. A light flickered in the next hall over.

“Definitely.” The Biker moved past us and started down the hall quickly, but not too quickly. Venge and I tried to keep up. We put a few turns between ourselves and where we assumed the military to be before the Biker called a halt. He and Venge convened briefly, considering their route. The corridors and offices in this part of the structure were like a maze, and it was clear that we were in trouble. We knew how to get out he way we’d come, but that was where the military was. We also knew that there were infected here, and our only choice was to continue deeper into the building, and the place was vast.

“We’ve got to get off this floor,” said the Biker. “When that door goes down, this whole place is going to be flooded with them.”

“You think they’ll find us in this?” Venge didn’t sound convinced.

“I don’t want to risk it – haven’t got the ammo.”

“There is that.” A patter of hurried footsteps began to echo through the hallways. They were coming. The Biker swore.

“This isn’t going to work,” he said.

“There were stairs back there,” Venge nodded shortly toward the junction we’d come through.

“Going down,” I pointed out.

“We don’t have a choice,” Venge said sharply.

“We won’t last long down there,” sighed the Biker.

“Longer than if we stay here.”

“Great.” He moved past us, bringing up his 870 and leading the way back. The stairs were concrete – that was nice. They only went down one flight; it was some kind of sublevel. The first thing the Biker’s light fell on in the corridor below was a huge, rust-brown arterial spray all over the wall. I struggled to keep my breathing under control. Shots echoed from the level above; the military had met the citizens that their government had pawned off on the Ukraine.

Noisy footsteps rang out behind us, and the air began to fill with the gasps and snarls of infected.

“Are they onto us?”

“If they aren’t, they will be.” Venge pulled toward a nearby doorway, and we dragged Ever through. Swearing – quietly – the Biker followed us in. The room had more of an iron hatch than a door, which was apparently why Venge had chosen it. We pulled it shut and latched it swiftly. No sooner had the bolt fallen into place than I heard movement in the corridor outside. The Biker checked the room. It was small and rectangular, with a large pile of junk that appeared to have been stacked hurriedly in one corner. Venge made as though to steer us toward a wall to sit Ever down.

“Lay him out,” I whispered. We did so, and I unstrapped his vest and pushed up his shirt. Even in the weak glow of the Biker’s flashlight, it didn’t look good. Enormous black impacts marked where Venge and I had shot him, but it was higher up that was the problem. Rifle rounds are a little harder to deal with than 9mm ones. This wasn’t heavy armor – the only reason it had stopped the first two bullets at all was they were probably cut and softened for use against mutants and infected – but their muzzle energy hadn’t been anything to sneeze at. Probing tenderly, I couldn’t find any broken ribs, but they were probably all bruised. His sternum couldn’t be shattered, which was good, but it might well be fractured. What he needed was a hospital, and he wasn’t going to get one. “We should get him sitting up,” I told Venge quietly, and we moved him against the wall.

I straightened, moving to listen at the door. They were still out there – but they weren’t banging on our door. That was worth something. I turned around. Venge held out my FNP9. I remembered dropping it.
“Thanks.” I took the gun, and looked at it. Then at Ever. It didn’t feel great; I holstered it with a bitter taste in my mouth.

“You got a name?”

I hesitated. “Stranger.”

“Venge.” He extended a hand, and I shook it as firmly as I could. It was good to see that there were males my size here; it meant I’d stick out just a little less. “How long are they going to hang around out there?” I asked.

“Until something attracts their attention,” the Biker replied. “Which is only a matter of time in here.”

“We haven’t seen anything,” I pointed out.

“We’ve been lucky.”

“So we wait?”

“For now.”

I got out my flashlight and started to look around.

“How far do you think these sublevels go?” Venge asked the Biker.

“No idea - they obviously serve a purpose, this isn’t maintenance.” They began to examine a horribly corroded control box on the far wall.

“I heard one of the earliest labs was actually under the train yard.”

“Don’t even joke about that.”

“No joke, heard it from a loner from up north. Ex-Monolith, or so he said. Wanted me to check out his Mini-14. Piece of junk.” They continued to tinker. Men.

Most of the garbage piled against the wall was what it looked like – garbage. A couple of empty ammunition boxes, wooden crates, a file cabinet. I began to systematically pull things down and check them.

“How’d you know my name, by the way?”

“You fixed my Pernach a couple months back.”

“That’s right, that’s right. Biker. How’s she holding up?”

“The bike?”

“No, the gun.”

I found a roll of moldy old bandages. If you tried to use them to treat someone, you’d do more harm than good. I tossed them aside and continued to search. I pulled out a couple of old food tins, revealing a gap. I shone my light through; there was rust on the other side. Intrigued, I reached in to examine further, but was startled as the Biker swore loudly. Too loudly. The footsteps outside grew louder, and there was a bang on the door.

I turned around, shocked. “We can’t stay here,” the Biker told Venge, and turned to me. “We’ve got to go – now.”

“Why? What’s wrong?”

“This room’s irradiated. Probably the whole level.”

“Where can we go?” The pounding on the door intensified.

“We can try to fight our way out,” said the Biker helplessly. “It’s that, or cook in here. Eventually that door’ll give.” Venge drew his P99.

“Last mag,” he said.

“Guys,” I said quickly. They looked at me. “I think there’s a door behind this.”

“Where’s it go?”

“How should I know?” Venge and the Biker exchanged glances.

“What are our odds shooting our way out?” Venge asked.

“Even if we had gear, not good. Maybe if we knew the way.”

“Then what have we got to lose?”

Chapter 12 (Wish)

We set about uncovering the door, but it was heavy work. Even empty ammunition crates weigh a ton, and the file cabinets were filled with damp, moldering documents. It might have been my imagination, but the shrieks of the rusted latch on the door under assault seemed to be getting louder. It didn’t help that the Biker kept glancing at the Geiger countered mounted on his wrist. He was making me twitchy. We heaved aside another piece of ancient, heavy aluminum furniture. The door began to take shape behind the junk. Like the one at the other end of the room, it was less a door than a hatch. A rotary seal protruded from the center, beneath a small window that was opaque with grime.

And something else was bothering me. All of this junk, all this heavy stuff piled up on this side of the door – it might have just been me, but it seemed awfully similar to what I’d think of as a barricade. At least it was clearly ancient – whatever they’d been trying to hold back was hopefully long gone by now. We toppled another file cabinet, and there was enough space to open it.

“Get Ever,” the Biker said, kneeling to check the mechanism. As Venge and I heaved the injured man upright, the Biker grasped both handles of the seal and twisted. For a moment, nothing happened, and he stood, bent against the door. Then the rust screamed free, and the seal groaned. The hatch swung ponderously open. The Biker readied his shotgun, shining his light through. “Go,” he said. We made our way through awkwardly, and he closed and sealed the door behind us.

With one arm supporting Ever, I had to choose between flashlight and handgun. I went with the flashlight. We were in a narrow, rectangular chamber. The right wall was covered in what had once been monitors and computer equipment. A toppled chair lay in one corner, and old, corroded binders were scattered across the floor.

“I don’t get it,” Venge said from the other side of Ever. “Where’s it go?”

“Nowhere,” I said, shining my light on the far wall. It was just a wall. Metal grating rattled beneath our feet.

The Biker was looking over the equipment. “This was a surveillance room,” he said.

“How’s the radiation?”

“Better, but not good enough.”

“There’s nowhere to go.”

He didn’t reply. Instead, he knelt, pointing his light straight down. The door in the room behind us gave with a wail of tortured metal. A heartbeat later, pounding began on the hatch. “It’ll take them a little longer to get through that,” said the Venge. “If we go now, we might be able to put enough distance between us to lose them.”

“Go where, though?” I asked.


“Are you out of your mind?”

“He’s right.” The Biker set down his shotgun. “Light,” he told me. I did so, and he began to feel along the grating with gloved fingers. A bolt in the hatch had vibrated loose. It clattered to the grating, and fell through.

“What’s down there?” Venge asked nervously.

“Let’s see.” The Biker’s fingers threaded through the grating, and he pulled away a rectangular section of floor. He picked up the shotgun and shone the light down.

“Thought so – maintenance tunnel,” Venge observed. The Biker lowered his wrist through, peering at the Geiger counter. “It’s better down there. We should go. It might not lead anywhere, but it’s worth a shot.”
The Biker nodded. Getting to his feet, he shouldered the 870. “Go, I’ll lower him.”

Venge and I let the Biker take Ever’s weight, and I dropped lightly down, shining my light both ways. The tunnel was extremely narrow, and thickly covered in pipes and panels. Ever and the Biker would have to walk sideways down here. Venge landed awkwardly beside me, stepping out of the way. Getting Ever down was a ginger affair, but we managed, and the Biker lowered himself last. He climbed onto the pipes to pull the grating back into place.

“Think they can figure out how to get through that?” Venge asked.

“Don’t care,” said the Biker.

“It’s pretty narrow – we might be able to hold them here.”

“Depending on what’s in these pipes, that could be a bad idea.”

Venge didn’t have anything to say to that. He and I went back to supporting Ever, and the Biker took the lead. Down here it was utterly black. Not dim black, not moonless night black, it was pitch black. The Biker’s light was a soft yellow glow; my LED was harsh and white. It was slow going, due to the cramped nature of the service corridor. Venge and I didn’t have to worry, but the Biker’s helmet would frequently clip low-hanging pipes. It would have been even worse if Ever had been walking upright.

“I’ll bet nobody’s been down here in at least a decade,” Venge said, awestruck.

“Maybe,” the Biker grunted.

My shoe crunched on something; I didn’t look down. We were forced to be in single file, and I didn’t like being at the back. I kept shining my light behind us. The industrial nature of the corridor was a little sinister. At least if the infected got through, we’d definitely hear them coming – and they’d only come one at a time.

“This place is for the factory, right?” Venge asked after a little while.


“I’ve heard that a lot of the labs had their surface access points camouflaged – the local government didn’t officially endorse what went on in them, so they’d sometimes be made to look like something else.”

“I’m pretty sure this isn’t a lab,” said the Biker.

“I know, but do you think there’s really one down here?”

“No idea.”

“What’s a lab?” I asked.

“Hidden government laboratories. Extremely illegal – they were dangerous even before the disasters,” the Biker said from the front of the line. “As far as I know, we only have the locations of four of them – but their numbers indicate that there could be as many as eighteen, and people say there’s a nineteenth.”

“They’re affected more potently than the outside,” said Venge. “Sometimes you can find things nobody’s seen before – that’s why people keep going in, and searching for the others. But the best stuff always come with the worst mutants – so it’s a gamble. Best to go with a large, experienced team, or not at all.”

“So a lot of people like to go hunting for this anomalous material?”

“It’s one way to get bread.”

“I see.”

“You’re always talking about mutants, but I’ve never even seen one. What do you mean by it?” I asked. Some silt fell away from a tangle of nearby pipes, revealing sagging cobwebs.

“Lots of things,” said Venge. “Dogs, mostly. If you’re lucky, they’re all you’ll ever have to worry about if you don’t go looking for trouble.”

The Biker paused, and played his light over the ceiling. Then he resumed walking, and Venge started to talk again. “And infected,” he added. “Sooner or later you’re bound to run into them. Aren’t there people who collect pictures and things out there? Surely you’ve seen things.”

“Well, there’s a pretty famous one that’s of sort of a boar-looking thing, but it’s pretty blurry. They’re all pretty blurry, actually,” I said. “They’ve also got pictures of some really long centipedes.”

“Hate those,” said Venge. “So you really are a rookie, huh?”

“I guess.”

“Why’d you come here?”

“Oh,” I hesitated. “You know, stuff to do.”


“What about you?”

“Me? I don’t know. I guess I just wanted to try something new. I’m not cut out for all the fighting, but I pull my weight. I look out for Duty’s weapons, they look out for me. It all works out, I guess.”

Eventually, the service corridor ended in a concrete wall.

“Well, damn.”

“We’ll have to go back,” I said, my heart sinking. “It went in the other direction, too – we could try that.”

“That’ll take us past the infected,” said Venge. “They haven’t gotten down here yet, but if anything is going to make them try, it’ll be us going by. The radiation isn’t so good here, though. We can’t hold up.”

“Could try the crawlspace,” Ever suggested. It took a moment for it to sink in. He’d regained consciousness.

“Are you okay?” I asked.

“Probably not,” he told me frankly. “But I can move, and unless you guys brought a lot of radiation meds, that’s what we’ve got to do.”

Venge knelt by the large hatched-steel cover on the right seed of the corridor. “How do we know this is going to lead anywhere?” he asked.

“It’ll have to come up at least one other place,” said Ever. “You can’t have only one way out of something like that.”

“You might be giving Ukrainian engineering too much credit,” I said.

“Only a suggestion,” he replied mildly.

The Biker worked his knife behind the cover, and levered it out of the wall. It clanged to the ground loudly, echoing through the corridor. He shone the light through. “We can try it,” he said at last.
  07:52:27  30 January 2012
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Bit of a goof there - maybe I forgot for a second that rifle rounds would go through Ever's kevlar. There were a million ways to fix that, and I chose the most convoluted one possible.

In other news, the blog is updated through 11. (You're behind, Kusanagi!)

And as of Chapter 12, which will be updated on the blog soon, and the following chapters, I've begun making some more serious changes to the text.
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8 and 9

Chapter 8 (Wish)

We set off around midday. The Biker had left his dirt bike in the care of someone at the bar, and Ever didn’t seem to have much in the way of worldly belongings. He carried his shotgun over one shoulder, not so much walking as flowing beneath his voluminous black coat.

Ducking through the corrugated metal sheeting, we made our way through a low tunnel, and out into an expansive courtyard. It was impressive what fifty yards could do; once on the other side, the sounds of Rostov were hardly audible. Ever and the Biker seemed pretty relaxed, so I supposed we weren’t in any danger. Walls held the courtyard on either side, and perhaps two hundred yards down, a three-story building formed the fourth end. The Biker was eying it suspiciously.

“What’s wrong?”

“Nothing.” He adjusted his grip on the strap of his shotgun and kept walking.

“Mercs wouldn’t attack a Duty patrol – not even a small one,” said Ever.

“Probably not. Sometimes there are really serious bandits out there.”

“Sometimes.” He didn’t sound convinced. “It couldn’t have been Freedom, could it?”

“I hope not. Anywhere else, maybe, but I’ve never heard of them maintaining a presence out here. Sure as hell not poaching random Duty stuff.”

“That’s what I figured,” Ever sighed. “Rogues, then?”


As I listened, I watched an anomaly throb in a corner of the courtyard. Neither of the guys paid it any mind. A little ways away, I saw a lump that looked suspiciously like the corpse of some kind of boar.

Behind us, several bursts of automatic fire echoed. I turned back worriedly, but the Biker steered me forward without breaking step.

“Just dogs,” Ever reassured me.

“Duty has to shoot them down whenever they get brave enough to charge one of the checkpoints.”

“Oh,” I said.

“Remember when people would try to set up shop in there to nail people going west?” the Biker asked, looking at the building ahead.

“Yeah, geniuses. As if Duty would let that fly so close to home.”

“I heard Duty didn’t shut them down, it was just one stalker.”

“I heard that, too. Not sure I believe it. Ancient history either way.”


We reached the building, and held up outside a crumbling hole that appeared to be the entrance. “All right,” said the Biker. “I’ll take point. You get the rear.”


He brought up his 870, flicking on the flashlight taped to the barrel. I followed him through the hole, and Ever followed me with scarcely a rustle. The floor was dirt and gravel; the walls were ancient brick. The structure was entirely bare, save for a liberal sprinkling of casings on the ground. We clinked through at a cautious pace, the Biker’s flashlight illuminating the corridor ahead. This was it – this was what it was like to stalk in the Ukraine. I glanced back at Ever, and couldn’t even see him in the gloom.

The hallway terminated in another broken wall, and the Biker flattened himself against the bricks by the gap, switching off his light. Gray daylight spilled into the corridor ahead. Ever materialized out of the darkness at my side.

“How’s it look?”

“Looks clear.” The Biker shouldered his shotgun, and drew out a pair of digital rangefinders. He leaned out, scanning. “I got nothing,” he said. “Go.”

I stepped aside as Ever moved quietly past me, his over-under pointed at the ground. The Biker stepped back, and Ever took his place by the gap. He leaned into the light briefly, then moved out, bringing his weapon to his shoulder. I hastened to follow, emerging blinking into the light. It wasn’t so much a train yard as a train graveyard.

We rushed across a patch of open ground to take cover behind a concrete barrier. Ever and the Biker listened intently. I wasn’t sure what they were expecting; all I could hear was the groan of decaying metal in the breeze. There were wind chimes out there somewhere. Ever peered over the barrier, then ducked back.

“So if Duty’s coming through here, chaps mind their own business, they’d probably come in the open, right?” he asked.

“You’d think so, but it was only half a squad – maybe they didn’t want to try their luck,” the Biker countered.

“Let’s start with the north side.”


And we were on the move again, Ever and the Biker seamlessly falling into a simple one-two cover. Moving happens to be my specialty, so I didn’t feel like baggage, but there have been times in my life that I’ve been more useful than I was then. Gargantuan, industrial structures ringed the yard on all sides, anywhere from six to ten stories high. I noticed that the guys seemed to keep to the northern side of most cover.

“What’s down there?” I whispered, jerking a thumb in the direction that they were clearly avoiding.

“There’s a parking garage – sometimes mercs will get up there with rifles and take stalkers out, just for loot.” The Biker leaned out to check the next stretch. “They generally don’t shoot at Duty, though.”

“Well, we’re working for Duty.”

“How would they know that?”

I suddenly felt quite naked without my Kevlar. I drew my FNP and checked the magazine. All fifteen were there; I chambered one, locked it, and holstered the gun, then moved again. The Biker ducked into the corridor formed by two train cars, and Ever and I followed him in. He dropped to the ground, looking out below the cars.

“There,” he hissed, pointing. Ever and I got down to see. Past the car, in an open expanse of concrete lay several bodies. The Biker got out his binoculars again, and handed them to Ever. “What do you think?”

“They’ve already been looted.”

“Well, they have been here for nearly eight hours,” said the Biker.

“Yeah. I count four that could be Duty, about a dozen more bodies on the far side.” He passed the binoculars back.

“Gave good account of themselves,” the Biker admitted grudgingly.

“I can’t identify the others, though. Their gear’s all gone.”


“What do you reckon? The other ones shot first, the Duty guys took cover behind that pipe, there.”

“Looks right. Bad guys tried to flank – didn’t work.”

“Yes.” Ever took the binoculars again. I squinted at the scene. It just looked like a lot of dead people to me. I swallowed.

“No crows,” Ever noted.


“What’s that mean?” I asked quietly.

“It means they’d prefer starving to coming down here.” Ever looked back down the corridor, then in the other direction. “Keep watch,” he told me. I rose to a crouch to do so. “If you see anything – anything at all, say so.”

“Got it,” I said.

Ever turned back to the Biker. “Four men, that’s the escort.”

“None of the bodies are small enough to be the guy.”

“If there’s a drinker in the area, that could explain it.”

“Yeah. Looks safe enough, let’s get a closer look. Come on, Stranger.” I turned back to see them both crawling beneath the train.

Up close, the scene wasn’t pretty. Everyone had been killed with multiple gunshot wounds, most to the chest, but some to the head. I looked away.

“These guys were definitely Duty,” said the Biker, kneeling beside a corpse. Ever was looking at the other bodies, on the other side of the pavement. The trains behind us blocked the line of sight from the garage that the guys seemed to get so twitchy about. On the other end of the yard, one of the enormous buildings loomed. To the west, I could see more train tracks, and what looked like some kind of factory.

“Look,” said Ever, making his way back over to us. He held up a pair of dog tags. “Military.”

“What the hell are they doing this far in?” the Biker demanded.

“Excellent question.”

“And why would they fire on Duty?”

“Perhaps Duty fired on them.”

“No chance.” The Biker shook his head. The expended cartridges on the ground caught my eye. Behind the cover that Duty had apparently used lay mostly 5.45x39 shells, but there was something else. I got down to my hands and knees, poking through them.

“Maybe a merc took a shot, and everyone got the wrong idea?”

“That is a definite possibility.”

Ah – found it. Among the rifle shells, there were also a couple of 9x19 casings. I held one up to the light, then scanned the ground nearby. Brass gleamed in the undergrowth a few yards away.

“Twelve’s an awfully strange number for the military – probably not all of them. Maybe the survivors took the gunsmith with them.”

“You know the fellow?”

“We’ve met, wouldn’t say I know him,” said the Biker.

I stood at the top of a concrete ramp, leading down to a horribly rusted shutter. It was raised no more than two feet from the ground, revealing an ominous rectangle of darkness. At the bottom of the ramp, three more casings. It was probably some kind of loading dock. I looked up at the building; it was huge, with relatively few windows. I couldn’t even guess what its purpose was from here, just a six-story block, stained with rust and sickly ivy. You could have fit my entire police precinct inside it with ease, and I couldn’t even see how far back it stretched.

“Guys,” I said, looking over my shoulder. They turned to face me. “I think he went in here.”

Chapter 9 (Wish)

I knelt at the gap and clicked on my flashlight, leaning down to check out the gloom on the other side. Ever and the Biker made their way over, and I turned and held out one of the 9mm casings. “Fired today,” I said. “The guy with the 9mm was the only one over here – fight goes bad, he ducks in here.”

“Would’ve had to be pretty bad,” said the Biker dubiously.


“Because nobody knows what’s in any of these buildings. The mercs only use the garage because daylight can get in. I’d go toe to toe with the military before I’d take my chances in a place like this – especially alone.”

Ever accepted the casing, examining it thoughtfully. He looked back at the expanse of pavement, surveying the carnage. “It fits the dynamic,” he said at last. “Duty would have ordered their charge to cover if things looked bad – he couldn’t cut south on his own without putting himself in the mercs’ line of fire.”

“See anything in there?” The Biker asked.

“Not really.” I rose to a crouch. “Some kind of loading dock.”

He looked up, checking out the building the same way I had. “The place is huge,” he said. “He could be anywhere in there, if he’s even still alive.”

“He’ll probably keep to the outside, where he can stay near windows – and make for the upper floors. He knows Duty will come looking for him – but that’s the problem, he’s going to be expecting Duty, not us.”

“If it’s the guy I’m thinking of,” said the Biker, “…then he’s not much of a fighter.”

“And he’s only armed with a 9mm,” I added.

“He won’t last long, then. This area is a confirmed mutant hotspot. Nobody on their own could last the night out here.” Ever said this very simply, like he was passing on cricket scores.

“Then it’s time sensitive,” I cut in. I wasn’t sure what these guys were so afraid of. Ancient, crumbling buildings are dangerous in their own way, but they were a lot safer than the open. Or so I had read. “It’s our only lead, we have to check it out.”

They stared. “Enthusiastic, isn’t he?” Ever’s tone was mild. I was half afraid that he’d say she, but he didn’t. “Well, now we’ve got to go.”

The Biker groaned. “Your funerals,” he said. “I can run away while they’re eating you.” He produced his PDA and took a few shots of the aftermath of the firefight. Then he scanned the sky. “Maybe four hours of good light left,” he said. “We’ll look, but we pull out before nightfall with enough time to get back, got it?”

“Fair enough.” I shrugged.

Ever leaned his shotgun against the shutter, and pulled off his coat. He was remarkably normal beneath; black cargo trousers, a gray thermal, and a simple Kevlar vest. “This won’t do me any good in there,” he said, pulling on a pair of fingerless gloves, and rolling up his sleeves. “…so I’ll just have to trust you.” He stowed the coat behind a nearby transformer box, then removed his gas mask.

His face was ordinary, too. The hair was a little shaggy, but at least he was clean shaven. He wasn’t bad-looking, either. He didn’t have the chiseled thing that the Biker had going, but you could show him to your parents. He looked a little older than I was, but slightly younger than the Biker. Thirty, maybe, give or take.

“I don’t understand,” I said.

“He’s got a bounty on his head,” said the Biker from behind me. I turned to him, then back to Ever. He knelt to stash the gas mask as well. I blinked.

“Your shoes,” I said.

“Rockports,” he said, getting back up. “Better than your fancy Feiyues, and they cost less.”

“Why is there a bounty on you?”

“We’re losing light.” Ever picked up his shotgun. “Ready?”

I looked at him for a moment, then at the Biker, who looked back impassively. At this end of the yard, you couldn’t even hear the wind chimes. “All right.” I drew my flashlight and pistol, dropped, and rolled under the shutter, coming up in a shooting stance. The patches of the loading dock illuminated by my light were dilapidated, but bare. A second beam joined mine; the Biker and Ever were inside.

Outside, with only the wind as soundtrack, the yard was quiet. In here, it was silent. It didn’t take long to find fresh tracks in the silt that covered the floor, and we began to follow them. If I thought it had been tense moving through the yard, it had nothing on this building. Every casing, every piece of gravel crunched underfoot; combined with the rustling of fabric, it was impossible to be as stealthy as we wanted to be. A short corridor led into a cavernous chamber, which it quickly became apparent, was a factory floor. A distant, gaping hole in the roof allowed enough gray light into the place to give it a sort of grainy ambience.

“Should be a way up in here,” Ever said, turning a full circle.

“Don’t risk these stairs.” The Biker pointed with the light on his shotgun. “They won’t hold. But he should have seen us coming in – maybe he’ll come to us.”

“Perhaps he already has,” Ever said, taking in the upper levels.

“But he hasn’t got any way to know we’re on his side.”

“That’s the problem, isn’t it?” The Biker shifted uncomfortably, playing his light over some nearby factory equipment. “We’re exposed here, aren’t we?”

“The place actually seems rather laid back,” said Ever. “Perhaps he really is still alive.”

“It would take a long time to search this place from top to bottom,” said the Biker speculatively. “If he saw us coming in, then he should be watching us now, right?”

“I would be,” Ever shrugged, still watching the upper tiers, which lay in heavy shadow. They acted in the same instant, Ever dragging me to the ground, and the Biker flinging himself behind a low wall and dousing his light. Ever’s gloved hand was already over my mouth, his other switching off my flashlight. A tense moment passed, and the Biker gave some kind of signal. Ever pulled me to a crouch, and we moved to shelter behind a kiosk. He leaned out slightly, looking toward the Biker’s position.

And then I heard it, a distinct footstep – a boot on concrete. An armored figure rounded a corner past the Biker, a rifle at his shoulder, his light on the ground ahead of him. He advanced slowly, making very little noise. The Biker seemed to hear him coming, and painstakingly peered into the 870’s breach. My fingers instinctively tightened on my FNP, but Ever’s hand fell on my shoulder reassuringly. He held out his over-under to me, and with some puzzlement, I holstered my sidearm and accepted it. That done, he crept silently past me and straightened at the corner. Then with his hands raised, he stepped into the open.

“Gentlemen,” he said.

The man snapped up his rifle and shot him twice in the chest.
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Re-writing would be too strong a word. It's explained in the latest newspost on the blog. Basically, I'm going back through original 100 chapters of Zone and editing them to make them

a) better
b) consistent with current events (Freedom/Atrophy)
c) more complete

At the moment, the changes I'm making are small. As we reach more important things - like the introduction of Westmoreland, I'll make more serious edits.

I'll also add some new content - at the very least I'll re-do (maybe even from scratch) chapter 50, and flesh it out significantly. There will also be some changes to the ending.

Kusanagi is posting all the edited chapters here. (I guess.)
A log of the latest chapter to be edited is on the blog - it's on the left part of the screen. Right now it says this:

Latest Chapter Updated - ch.008

The edited chapters are still in their original locations, so if you want to read the HD Remix of chapter 8, you'd go down to the archive, click 2009, February, Chapter 8.

I know, the layout is lame, but it's blogger, it's free and it works. And I know how to use it, which is important to me.

I will announce, either here, or on the blog somewhere, when I do something big. Like adding a new chapter or short story, or new content of any kind. And there will be some, because it seems like people really like Elizabeth a lot, so I'm happy to show her some love.

And then I'm also obligated to remind folks who like Elizabeth not to miss out on the upcoming Atrophy books. WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE

Hope that alleviates some of the confusion.

Doing this is interesting to me, because I've been so steeped in Atrophy - at this point, the characters of the Biker, Ever, and Elizabeth are so different from what they are later. Over the years they developed a lot. It'll be fun to retrace those steps.
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