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Deep in The Zone.

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  23:44:24  30 October 2011
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naury
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On forum: 08/26/2010
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Deep in The Zone.

Part 1.

*memory story from stalker called - Vlad*
*some rookie stalkers are listening to it*


It's cold outside. As I remember, all of the days were cold. Every single day. Well... No... Actually one day was not so cold... It was the day when we, my team and I, went hunting. We were supposed to hunt an bloodsucker. You think easy? Guess again. This one was different... It was not like all of those other bloodsuckers, just by attacking from back and being invisible. This was serious....
About my team... We were six people. As I have heard, stalkers called us - Slayers. I don't know the real reason, but I have one idea why... But I wont tell you that - that's and old teams secret which cant be told.
The leader was me. My left hand was Sergey ''Shadow'' Fjodorof. He was a real killer I tell 'ya. He can deal on his own a whole dog lair without even being noticed by them. That's why he is Shadow. Fast and deadly.
And than the rest of the team:
Marko - expert in repairing guns and such things.
My name brother, Vladik - just an sharp shooter.
Ivan - he was dealing with the big guns. I mean really big, like rpg's, machine guns, grenade launchers and so on...
And Sniper - the word speaks for himself. No one knows the real word...

So yeah... That was my team. We were the best. I mean really - the best. Even those Duty and Freedom bastards were afraid of us.
Only some stupid bandits or Monolith dudes thought that they can kill us. But yeah.. that's not the deal...

*suddenly one stalker shouts*
''But why they wanted to kill you and your team?''

*for a moment Vlad was stoned*
''But I already told you - we were the best... If you want to be the best, you must beat the best. That's how it is.''

*Vlad continued his story*
Where was I? Ohh...

End of Part 1.

This one is just an opening part. That's why it is not longer.
Give me feedback so I know how it is.
  09:36:42  5 November 2011
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ZeroDead
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ZeroDead
11/05/2011 9:39:53
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The way I see it, you have just introduced your characters here and their roles within a team, which is nice... you can't really expect a squad that only packs machineguns to be very efficient. But what will they be doing? And what was so special about this particular bloodsucker you mention?

Let me give you an idea... I don't know if you ever watched Battlestar Galactica, but there was one particular foe that normally would not be worth half a glance who had been wounded and deprived of a chance to recover and repair its ship--and that made him cautious, sneaky, treacherous and incredibly deadly: it took the combined skills of the titular battlestar's best aces to take him down, and that after he killed pilot after pilot sent to deal with him.
  11:36:03  3 December 2011
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SCAVENGER1
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The way I see it, you have just introduced your characters here and their roles within a team, which is nice... you can't really expect a squad that only packs machineguns to be very efficient. But what will they be doing? And what was so special about this particular bloodsucker you mention?

Let me give you an idea... I don't know if you ever watched Battlestar Galactica, but there was one particular foe that normally would not be worth half a glance who had been wounded and deprived of a chance to recover and repair its ship--and that made him cautious, sneaky, treacherous and incredibly deadly: it took the combined skills of the titular battlestar's best aces to take him down, and that after he killed pilot after pilot sent to deal with him.
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good ole "scar" that was a good episode
 
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