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  19:37:14  21 July 2011
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Bladewraith
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Not bad... seems like it doesn't stop, and you character seems... a bit super human?
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I grabbed my last F1 grenade, pulled the pin, and stuck it in the bloodsuckers mouth. I brought up my SA80, put the last few rounds in the magazine into its head, hit it with the stock of the rifle, and ran past it as fast as I could. The grenade detonated with a satisfying bang.
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considering F1 grenades have between a 3 and 5 second fuse, and you manage to not enven be effected by the Shockwave... and a critism just... a notable comment

keep writing, i'd enjoy reading more

PS, i personally would've thought a Sunrise, with ceramic plates AND a ALICE rig would be a bit too bulky?
  00:11:54  22 July 2011
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The Ghost
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Thanks, Im rewriting the story to remove some of the super human parts of the story.

I cant edit the original story, so Ill delete the thread and post the revised story.
  00:16:12  22 July 2011
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SetaKat
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Not bad... seems like it doesn't stop, and you character seems... a bit super human?
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Well, at the end, there is the bit that gives me the image that this is a fan's overactive imagination at work. Wonder what he does about the controller that insists on being called 'Mother' in this case?
  03:05:13  22 July 2011
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Bladewraith
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Thanks, Im rewriting the story to remove some of the super human parts of the story.

I cant edit the original story, so Ill delete the thread and post the revised story.
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you don't have too... it's a dream, so you can be, it just didn't sit right with me is all.


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Not bad... seems like it doesn't stop, and you character seems... a bit super human?
Well, at the end, there is the bit that gives me the image that this is a fan's overactive imagination at work. Wonder what he does about the controller that insists on being called 'Mother' in this case?
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true enough... so long as it doesn't end in a spanking i'll be happy
  01:57:30  23 July 2011
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The Ghost
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Moved to a new thread for the revised story. If any moderator could delete this thread, it would be great.
  05:24:42  25 July 2011
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The Ghost
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Here is the better version of the story...

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