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  02:58:07  17 December 2009
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HL2 Master
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12/17/2009 2:58:31
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Well I for one am enjoying it, though I do agree with Snorkbait on the zombie escape, maybe the truce between Duty and Freedom may make for some exciting new good guys and alliances, maybe new factions, now that Zone is upside down it's yours to manipulate anyway you wish, maybe a geust appearance from Strelok or Scar.

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  22:25:14  16 December 2009
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EnragedOtter
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Your first story was the first one I read, i liked it alot, and i like this one too
  13:24:01  16 December 2009
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snorkbait
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I've been quiet a) because I'm trying to get on with my own story and b) because I don't have much to add.
The introduction of Doomsday and his group was interesting, but then it has all been, from the 'fleshing out' of the Monolith soldiers to the tension between Duty and Freedom (and their ongoing plans and agendas even in the face of a shared enemy/problem).
One thing that did seem a bit far-fetched (or 'Hollywood-ized') was the escape from the zombies...but it also provided a lighter 'episode' with some comic relief, so overall it was no bad thing. Have to say Enigma is doing very well for someone who was at least halfway to being dead, though.

As for other stuff...it's not for me to tell you the direction your story *should* take. I'm along for the ride and will go where thou willst, so to speak. But you also have hints above regarding what I liked and what I found less interesting (not the right word, but my brain's not working well this morning. It's what happens when the cat decides to up-end the Chrimbo tree at four a.m.).
What do I think will happen? Well, there'll be deaths of favourite, but not exactly central, characters (or the way you've set it up, perhaps even central characters can 'buy the farm'); many more scrapes; a lot more tension between the factions; and a resolution where the Russian commander either mutates or is killed by mutants...or perhaps where he is mutating and is killed by mutants for being 'too human'.
  05:56:12  16 December 2009
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Ghost_22
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comment number 1-million

iav liked it so far havent had anything to complain about other than i havent had time to sit down and read the last two chapters

i like the dooms day and virtue? like doomsday because he seems like a guy who see some stuff and virtue he reminds me sort of me do anything for his friends quality
  00:03:35  16 December 2009
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Psynexus
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Need moar commentz! Oo

I think I need about a million more comments to get me through the next chapter. It's tough to write when there's so few comments between chapters and it totally kills motivation. Tell me what you like about the book specifically so far, what you hate, who your favorite characters are and why, what you would like to see happen and what you think will happen.

So get busy, and I'll return the favor!
  21:53:21  13 December 2009
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Both new chapters are awesome as usual! Keep it up, man!
  01:12:14  12 December 2009
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Psynexus
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Chapter 7: Red Dawn

This is the first full chapter I've written in a while, so it should flow pretty smoothly. I'm still considering doing a big edit of the first few chapters though, so let me know what you think.

Linkage: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Psynexus/486584/
  09:44:10  11 December 2009
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Psynexus
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Read what there is so far. I like it. I did think sometimes the quality slipped relative to L&D (typos, word choice, etc), but that overall the style of writing was 'cleaner' than in L&D (especially the earlier chapters where POV seemed to go a bit experimental - though that did even out in the end).
It's a good setup, though. Interesting...and that's really what it's all about. The rest is just nuts and bolts.
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Yeah, I attribute that to the several-month gap mid-chapter on the last entry. I'm considering doing a massive edit of the whole thing but we'll see, the next chapter is almost done and it's pretty big so far so we'll see how things are by then. But at any rate, I'm glad you like it so far.
  04:00:32  11 December 2009
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snorkbait
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Read what there is so far. I like it. I did think sometimes the quality slipped relative to L&D (typos, word choice, etc), but that overall the style of writing was 'cleaner' than in L&D (especially the earlier chapters where POV seemed to go a bit experimental - though that did even out in the end).
It's a good setup, though. Interesting...and that's really what it's all about. The rest is just nuts and bolts.
  21:32:39  8 December 2009
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Psynexus
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BRAVO!!! Jolly Good work!

HL2
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Thank you, oh lone reader. ^_^

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