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  02:14:45  12 October 2010
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Psynexus
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I've never been an avatar guy, so I probably won't. Although I might if I get bored enough.
You can have mine if you want. I'm thinking of a new one, just not sure what exactly to do with it though.

Oh boy! One of my 3 favourite stories up here!(Snorkbait, Tiger's Spring and this) There are other good ones but this is top 3! Awesome job mate!

EDIT: Sorry, it seems you have more tories Where can I find 'em?
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy it.

All my Stalker stories can be found in the links in my signature - my other stuff is on the same site, just navigate back to my profile.
  13:48:26  19 October 2010
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Psynexus
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It's a Wilder World

Hey Stalkers - the next chapter is up, and just in time for my Fallout: New Vegas binge! The team has finally been re-united and is heading once more into the breach, only this time they find the areas they've been to before are not quite as tame as they remember them.

Preview followed by link, enjoy!:
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She takes point, compressing her body along the outside wall of the warehouse as Gremlin and the rest of the Stalkers pile up behind her. She inches her way to the corner of the building and takes a look around.

“All clear,” She announces. “But it looks like we might be exposed up ahead.”

“Be careful.” Gremlin warns her before she takes of running through the street to the next available cover. The Stalkers follow her lead one by one as she darts from cover to cover, doing her best to avoid open areas as the morning sun rises behind them. She leans around a corner a couple building away from them and quickly compresses herself back against the wall, motioning them all over.

“What is it?” Gremlin says as he stacks up next to her.

“Bandit camp, right on the tracks.” She says.

“Son of a bitch… they’ll see us for sure.” Gremlin says, sighing in frustration.

“Let’s take them out.” Nimbus offers.

“There’s got to be another way…” Gremlin insists.

“We can’t get around them and we sure as hell can’t reason with them. The only other thing to do would be try to barter but if they outnumber us they’d just take everything and make us run away naked for their own amusement. Trust me… this is the only way.”
Gremlin grits his teeth and squeezes the butt of his rifle, but gives up on trying to find another way.

“We’ll take a poll; yea " we take them out, nay " we find another way.

All say yea except Virtue. Gremlin acknowledges him saying, “At least we know one of us has a shot at not going straight to hell. Alright, let’s do this.”

He rolls out of cover, taking a grenade from his belt, pulling the pin with his teeth and tossing it directly into the middle of the camp of a dozen or so Bandits. The grenade rolls into a group sitting around a campfire. By the time one of them sees it and begins shouting in alarm as it explodes, killing him and three others instantly. The other two fall back into the camp and yell at the others who get to cover immediately.

Gremlin moves up to a train car on the track closest and motions the other over as he lays his gun down on the bed and begins blind-firing into the camp. Return fire ricochets off of the car, buildings, and ground around him.

“Fan out!” Gremlin shouts as he loads a new magazine.

The Stalkers spread out along the length of the train car, popping out and returning the Bandits fire.
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  19:27:35  19 October 2010
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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Epic, as usual. I especially like the chunky grenade bits. Very detailed and visual.
  19:28:35  19 October 2010
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The Ventriloquist
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On forum: 02/25/2010
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Long time lurker here

Just had to sign up and say i love your stories and keep it up
  21:46:00  19 October 2010
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Maiman
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As always, amazing work and where are my mutated Dinosaurs!

I guess I haven't pulled my end with the mutated tricycle artifact with the voice of Chris Tucker but it will be coming soon!
  03:08:34  20 October 2010
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Psynexus
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Epic, as usual. I especially like the chunky grenade bits. Very detailed and visual.
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Thanks - I've been working on making some scenes more detailed than others and have also expanded my vocabulary a little lately and I think it's improving things.


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Long time lurker here

Just had to sign up and say i love your stories and keep it up
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Well hello! I see the views on my story versus the comments so I know you exist and that you enjoy the story, but it's always nice to hear the words. Thanks for the support, it means everything to me.


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As always, amazing work and where are my mutated Dinosaurs!

I guess I haven't pulled my end with the mutated tricycle artifact with the voice of Chris Tucker but it will be coming soon!
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I'm waiting! I'm working to make the next few chapters more horrifying than X16 and Chernobyl combined so there's plenty of room for Psuedoraptors... but I wanna see my glorious mutated tricycle artifact first.
  12:21:11  22 October 2010
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NATOguns
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MOAR!!! psynexus ever thought of becomming a writter?
  13:14:19  23 October 2010
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100RadsBar
100RadsBar - Formerly known as LoboTheMan
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MOAR!!! psynexus ever thought of becomming a writter?
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I guess his stories, and the quality of them. solidly confirms him as a writer

Nice chapter as usual
  14:54:55  23 October 2010
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Just read all of it today, keep em coming. (Read the other parts a month or two ago but I already forgot so I had to re-read all of it haha)
  00:51:54  24 October 2010
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Psynexus
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MOAR!!! psynexus ever thought of becomming a writter?
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I just tell people I am since I do it all the time, but I've never taken any classes and I don't even read that often anymore... I really should though, I think I'm getting pretty good at it.

Thanks Lobo and welcome back Grunt.
 
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