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  01:21:43  18 September 2010
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Psynexus
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I know what you mean about comments, they really make writing easier, so here we go!

You are an awesome person and your story is awesome keep up the really amazing work!

And if I recall from the original story I made a special request for PseudoRaptors! I am still waiting patiently! Ooh and there should be a PseudoBear and a mutated tricycle artifact!
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Thanks! No promises on the Pseudoraptors... you already got your Pseudosaurus Rex. The mutated tricycle artifact however... now there's a concept. ^_^
  01:31:32  18 September 2010
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Maiman
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Oh yeah the Pseudosaurus Rex, that was awesome but still Mutant Tricycle Artifacts man, theres the money maker!

Make it have a bell that rings at the worst of times and alert everyone to the holders location and then drain his endurance when he tries to run away while leaving him with no bulletproof cap or rupture protection.

It will be as useful as using zombie dust on yourself in a firefight!

Or make it a working tricycle that goes abnormally fast but makes the rider look stupid!

Oh god, what about a talking artifact!
  03:16:31  18 September 2010
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Psynexus
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Oh yeah the Pseudosaurus Rex, that was awesome but still Mutant Tricycle Artifacts man, theres the money maker!

Make it have a bell that rings at the worst of times and alert everyone to the holders location and then drain his endurance when he tries to run away while leaving him with no bulletproof cap or rupture protection.

It will be as useful as using zombie dust on yourself in a firefight!

Or make it a working tricycle that goes abnormally fast but makes the rider look stupid!

Oh god, what about a talking artifact!
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WOW! Talk about a gamble. I can see it now... you're entering the Bloodsucker lair in Zaton:

"Shh... it's full of sleeping Bloodsuckers. Let's try to get by them without making any-"
"DING DING! DINGALINGALING!!!"
"You've startled them! RUN!"
*You are too exhausted to move*
"I choose you tricyclechu!"
*Choose "Run"*
*You use Tricycle to flee. You peddle at 88MPH, leaving the Bloodsuckers in a cloud of dust, but looking quite silly going so fast on a child's toy. But you live to fight another day... as long as you can deal with the shame.*
*Tricycle speaks (in Chris Tucker voice):*
"Daaaayyyyyyuuuummm! Them Bloodsuckies got beat by a tricycle! That is whack yo!" *high-pitched sequel*
*Choose: "Put gun to head"*

HAHA. HAHAHAHA. BWAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

This has gotten out of hand...
  04:14:08  18 September 2010
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Maiman
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AHHAHAHAHAHAHA

Oh god I am laughing so fucking hard right now, the minute you said the voice of Christ Tucker I litterally heard his voice speaking in my head then the squeal oh god!

That would be funny, like back when I used to play Roleplay Maps on Warcraft 3, I would narrate the story with the voice of Samuel L Jackson.

Narrator: so them heroes went to strike furious vengeance on the dark lord of the dead, they tried to fight him and he was too tough for their shiny little pocket knives, and I was like, seriously hero dudes, DOES HE LOOK LIKE A BITCH?!?!?!?!

It was quite a popular term, like when someone made up their own language for the story I would have the narrator go.

Narrator: what the hell I can't read this, WHAT COUNTRY ARE YOU FROM, WHAT AIN'T NO COUNTRY I EVER HEARD OF DO THEY SPEAK ENGLISH IN WHAT?

Anyways that got carried away!
  05:43:42  18 September 2010
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Psynexus
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AHHAHAHAHAHAHA

Oh god I am laughing so fucking hard right now, the minute you said the voice of Christ Tucker I litterally heard his voice speaking in my head then the squeal oh god!

That would be funny, like back when I used to play Roleplay Maps on Warcraft 3, I would narrate the story with the voice of Samuel L Jackson.

Narrator: so them heroes went to strike furious vengeance on the dark lord of the dead, they tried to fight him and he was too tough for their shiny little pocket knives, and I was like, seriously hero dudes, DOES HE LOOK LIKE A BITCH?!?!?!?!

It was quite a popular term, like when someone made up their own language for the story I would have the narrator go.

Narrator: what the hell I can't read this, WHAT COUNTRY ARE YOU FROM, WHAT AIN'T NO COUNTRY I EVER HEARD OF DO THEY SPEAK ENGLISH IN WHAT?

Anyways that got carried away!
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ROFLMAO! Epic.

BTW, feel free to use anything here in your comic. Personally, I think an irradiated, loud, encumbering, impossibly fast, talking tricycle artifact could be the beginning of something great. I say cast it as an actual character rather than an artifact.
  05:49:41  18 September 2010
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Maiman
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My god that is a beautiful idea good sir

Actually the Comics are planned to end by Part 50

But it would be a good idea for Season 2...
  07:06:37  22 September 2010
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Psynexus
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Red Dawn

Finally, the first (mostly) new content to be written in months! As a tribute to the new stuff, I thought I'd make this post look a little more like the older ones. So here's a nice little preview if you're looking at this thread to see what the update's about but are too lazy to click on the link:
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“As you can see sir, the NPP is completely deserted now. No person or animal in sight.”

“What about ghosts?”

The soldier taps an unseen device on his helmet. “Thanks to the Ecologist we don’t have to worry about that either sir.”

“Good. Proceed then.

“Yes sir.” The soldier complies with his orders. The camera bobs up and down as he descends a large, blackened hill. Dozens of soldiers follow his lead on either side of him. A loud boom fills the room as thunder echoes through the dark cloud above. The camera swivels up to look at the sky above as a malevolent storm begins to form above them. The soldier curses in Russian, looking down at the burning power plant dominating the area in front of him. Another loud sound comes over the speakers, this one different from the first.

“What was that? Check your scanners!” He yells to one of the soldiers near him.

“Scanners show nothing, sir!” the soldier reports back.

“There has to be something there, what the fuck else could have caused that?” he says as his hand protrudes into the camera, pointing at an unnatural formation of earth, twisted into what resembles a bony hand with vertical spires of rock " with curved, sharp ridges formed around a central point. A deep humming noise emanates from the central point, reminiscent of an anomaly, though much larger than any previously encountered. Several similar anomalies surround Chernobyl, the laws of physics seemingly ignored here.

“Hold.” He orders as his Geiger counter begins to click rapidly. “Hazardous radiation levels are present here. We need to find a way around.”

“How do we do that? Our scanners are shit here!” another soldier protests.

The camera pans as the soldier opens a pocket on his breast and pulls out a handful of bolts and other small objects. “We do it the old-fashioned way.” He says as he cocks his arm back and throws the bolt in a straight line in front of him. The bolt makes it a few yards before a disturbance in the air catches it and stops it mid-flight. It hovers there for a few seconds before it suddenly explodes into tiny metal flakes. The soldier curses again, “Not that way…” he mutters to himself. The other soldiers open up their own pouches and begin tossing objects on front of them in an attempt to find a way through the field of anomalies.

Moments a deep boom rattles the camera and the soldier behind it falls to the ground, staring straight up at the sky. The clouds above the power plant begin to swirl around it like a hurricane and the ground begins to rumble. Lightning rips through the sky, striking the highest points on the power plant, especially the largest one closest to Reactor 4, which is leaning over it dangerously.

“REPORT!” the soldier yells to his comrades as they scamper back up the hill beside him, trying their best to regain their footing on the steep slope but failing horribly. They look up at the sky in confusion as the clouds continue to swirl over them, faster and faster.

“Tornado…?” one of the soldiers near him replies.

Obviously not the case as some of the soldiers around him begin to realize what’s going on and run for their lives, dropping their weapons on the ground behind them.

“Oh shit…” are the only words that can be heard from the soldier’s mouth before a violent explosion erupts in the sky over him, turning the eye of the storm a fiery red. Loose dirt and rock vibrate on the ground below him as the dark clouds begin to evaporate to reveal the same blood-red color behind them. The camera feed begins to break into static as a large shockwave begins to move out from what looks like a “crack” in the sky. The wind picks up ferociously as the shockwave approaches. The soldier, holds his arm in front of his eyes and whimpers in a futile attempt to stop the unstoppable wave of destruction headed towards him. His Geiger counter can just barely be heard over the nightmarish noise, clicking in one long sound " indicating that it is off the chart.

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Clicky clicky: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Psynexus/608307/
  11:21:14  22 September 2010
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Do0mzday-Jesus
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As I said to myself after reading the new bit: "Aww fuck yeah!"
  13:18:05  24 September 2010
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Bump. This thread needs your immediate and full attention.
  13:55:27  27 September 2010
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Just read the whole story from the beginning.

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Awesome!!

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Keep up the good work, a very good story
 
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