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  15:48:43  1 January 2004
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Sablehawk
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On forum: 01/01/2004
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Great story .... If the zone is anything like you describe I have a feeling I'm going to love this game
  04:06:40  2 January 2004
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Tluster
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On forum: 11/30/2003
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I will read you tomorrow..

sorry I just got back from years day party..
But I am look forware to the read tomorrow..
Thanks for the understanding!
  14:10:14  2 January 2004
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Ian_C
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Oh, and Ian C....you still owe me a review.


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Heh, sorry about that, I seem to have been promising things recently regarding feedback that I cannot deliver. Like Amoki, I am currently sweating over the last bits of my writing after having ( possibly ) gained a short extension ( Atem said he'd do what he could, so I'll go with that....if I handed in Part 4 as it was now it would have ruined the entire story ), I promise I'll comment when I've finally put 'the difference' to rest.
  01:31:32  3 January 2004
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Amoki
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On forum: 07/31/2003
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Oh, and Ian C....you still owe me a review.



Heh, sorry about that, I seem to have been promising things recently regarding feedback that I cannot deliver. Like Amoki, I am currently sweating over the last bits of my writing after having ( possibly ) gained a short extension ( Atem said he'd do what he could, so I'll go with that....if I handed in Part 4 as it was now it would have ruined the entire story ), I promise I'll comment when I've finally put 'the difference' to rest.
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JA, you got it right, Ian C. My Part 5 is about 50% (and it featured the new monster Snork- I just love last minute products ) So Probably I can finish my sketch within this week and use the whole next week for the grand finale. Of course, those don't include the tedious typing process...
  03:26:20  3 January 2004
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Tluster
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On forum: 11/30/2003
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Great Story!!!

I only have one question and I guess your story did not answer for me, John had lost his Mother and Father and did not have any ties to earth as in family or even friends for that matter what gave him the kindness or "Inspiration" to save earth from the sphere?
I loved part one and two! I think three at first confused me a little when he was drifting off into his past. But after a paragraph or two I caught the meaning and then could enjoy the rest. I liked the ending where John came to the conclusion that he had become the unseen force that had scared him in the past. It tied in nicely….
Thank you for the very moving and gripping story….
  04:59:33  19 March 2004
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Amoki
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Hey, Ian C, how about that review you had promised? technically you are still not eating your words yet.... for now, since you have not finish your story. But I really want to see what's your opinion of this story.
  13:10:05  19 March 2004
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Ian_C
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On forum: 08/02/2003
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I am rather overdue at commenting on this one, aren't I? :

I'll read it over this weekend ( I really will ) and leave some feedback, I think secretly I was a little bitter that Midnight Rambler actually managed to finish his story.
  20:55:56  19 March 2004
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Amoki
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I am rather overdue at commenting on this one, aren't I? :

I'll read it over this weekend ( I really will ) and leave some feedback, I think secretly I was a little bitter that Midnight Rambler actually managed to finish his story.
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Over the weekends? there is only two possible explaination for me:
1) you are really sweating over a new script, which means you already got the plot for your book.
2) you are feveriously trynig to end your story

or that you have just grown into a fat lazy tv-screwing couch-potato who have chips for breakfast, chips for lunch, and chips for dinner. Which is only a fiction.

And hmmm... the last comment applied to me too, huh?
  00:05:34  24 March 2004
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Ian_C
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On forum: 08/02/2003
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Alas, I am prob closer to being the couch potato than fufilling options A and B, although I have been writing some fan fiction set in the world of Hitman: Codename 47.

Just finished reading The Inhuman Condition, but I'm very tired so will just say this atm, it's very, very good. More detailed analysis to follow tommorow once I've had some sleep.

Apologies for taking so long with Part4 as well Amoki, I lost a bit of it so am currently using a file recovery program, eh.....
  07:41:55  26 March 2004
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Amoki
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Huh? Still fishing for an idea? I do have one, although it is just a random thought.
Take full advantage of the current Isreali situation. Say, what happens if Isreali really did have an effort to make peace with the Plaestinian (This is very, very unlikely- they are The Creator's Chosen, after all. Isreali belongs to them, and that include the Golan Height. :l)? Adn say the terroists don't jave a target for terror after PLA decide that terroism is no longer needed for their struggle? What happed when they decided to go to somewhere that is America's closest Ally, yet with moderate border security (which is UK?) You can make a lot of idea with this, and to add with your skill of writing... you can do well.
 
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