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Amoki
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On forum: 07/31/2003
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Thanks for the suggestions. I'm a young writer, so I'll blame any gripes you have with the story on that.

I worked on this story over the summer, then didn't do anything with it for months (got bored) Then in December it's like 'OH SNAP the contest is almost over!' so that explains the sudden ending. Plus the story hurts in quality because I wanted to keep it under a certain amount of pages. I didn't want my readers to get bored with tons of details, so I tried to make it right to the point as much as I could, while keeping it interesting.

Thanks to you all for the comments. Goodspeed, that's exactly how I feel about the story. Your understanding of the story is perfect... it's how I would've responded to Amonki, but you beat me to it (I've been busy) Good job.

After reading everything people said, I would revise the story, but alas, it wouldn't make any difference. I should've posted it here months ago so you guys could comment on it, but oh well. The story's fate is in the hands of the judges now.

Thanks.
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I agree with you to some extend. I am a little disillisioned with how a staler-themed story should be commented after I did the whole reading of the story. Of course, since you are a new writer.... congrats. The story is quite good.
 
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