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The difference between you and me - Part 3 of 3 ( uncompleted Part 4 )

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  10:35:29  1 June 2004
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Amoki
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Its getting a little cold and barren in the forum here. Just post to say that I'm not dead yet...
  19:58:14  26 May 2004
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Chansd5
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I want to finish my story by next weekend. I have alot of writing to do this weekend. I hope I can submit a second story to GSC this weekend if I can.
  12:09:53  26 May 2004
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Ian_C
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Sounds good to me, your constant energy never ceases to amaze me when it comes to writing, and it's all good for me as you've been pushing me to write on a more regular basis.

I'm currently musing over how best to approach the final 'act' of Part 4, so a week or two is prob my deadline atm. Just be careful you don't burn yourself out, much though I appreciate your efforts to keep me going. You're right after all, I am very much the Tortoise.
  07:44:18  26 May 2004
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Amoki
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hey, Ian_C, lets make a pact again. You try to finish your story, and I'll try to finish another story. Even though I had enough of writing for STALKERs... just say I am the hare and you're the tortoise, and this time the hare is definitely not trying to rest, but keep on writing so that he can earn himself bragging rights And I don't need to spice things up again, as you did last time if you remembereed
  08:42:07  24 May 2004
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Amoki
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oh man- didn't even seem like 3 page to me. Looks too good, I guess. I finish my epilogue in one day, and I think that is 3 page! But of course, I am a sore loser when it comes to style...
  20:55:28  23 May 2004
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Ian_C
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Here's a bit more, I wanted to add it to the first post above but for some reason the EDIT button has vanished, ah well.

I aim to get the rest of this finished by sometime next week, Amoki slew me in our 'we'll both have our pieces finished by xx-date comp', I'm a somewhat slow writer so I only managed three pages before the deadline ( and that's me on full-steam ahead mode ).




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  21:07:35  14 February 2004
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Amoki
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Thanks for the praise, it's reassuring to know that what I had written of Part 4 wasn't sub-par compared to the first three ( which was always my biggest fear ).

Finish it off? Hmm. I suppose I should give it a go. I could tell you what happens but it's a pretty big swing-around of events, and probably wouldn't sound convincing without showing what led up to it, plus I do owe it to whoever has read my story this far to give them a conclusion.
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Well, you do that boy .

To tell you the truth, I tried reading the previous version of Part3. No, I don't have a clue what was going on, because things were still revolving around Abram's struggle in the fog. Teh only thing I could find helpful was the DNR kill DNR part.

But hey, I am eagerly anticipating. Hopefully the next friday I can go online again, it is already there.

Oh yeah, since GSC is reading the contest themself, I suppose you can invite them to read too. When you see suddenly there is another 20 hits since you last left it, I suppose the GSC judges (20 of them, all of the game designer (theoratically) too love them... which ensure a definite win situation
  17:23:01  14 February 2004
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AK1200
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I'm still here reading your stories too Ian!

Good stuff man!
  14:47:21  14 February 2004
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Ian_C
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Thanks for the praise, it's reassuring to know that what I had written of Part 4 wasn't sub-par compared to the first three ( which was always my biggest fear ).

Finish it off? Hmm. I suppose I should give it a go. I could tell you what happens but it's a pretty big swing-around of events, and probably wouldn't sound convincing without showing what led up to it, plus I do owe it to whoever has read my story this far to give them a conclusion.
  04:19:24  13 February 2004
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Amoki
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Damnit, IAn C, I read this part twice, and still ove them everytime I see them. Yes, it is worth scraping the previous versions to write this, because with this one, you can put a lot of things in perspective while keeping your story's tension strong.

You only weakness? when I scroll my PDA's jog Dial scroller down for more action, the screen just seem to stop at "I know, I'll take the lead." So what really happened in the end? either you can continue to finsih it (so people can follow up when they finish part 3 from the official website) or you can tell me up front. BEcause it is really hard to tell how it would end. IT can't be possible that Lukin or Abrams die, but Tarn is a veteran stalker, David had the right stuff as a leader so he could die that easily, and Mishka too was an ex-army man who too cannot die easily. Unless you left the thing like this, the question mark hang in the air like a radioactive cloud...

P.S- so, NK, you meant mine sound ambituos? And what mistake did I do in the story, because I think I reedit part 1,2 and 3 just to get ride of the repeating part.
 
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