Amoki's absolutely right about my story, The Inhuman Condition.
I'll admit, I'm a lazy researcher. That's why I made the main character and the army outposts american. I was caught up in a mood when I wrote it and basically finished it in 2 long writing sessions.
When I look back on it, it really could have gone through several more drafts and edits, and of course, made my reality consistent with the Ukrainian military flavour of the game.
Heh heh, thanks for the comments. And I actually thought no one was reading the reviews!
Now, if only someone would give an honest review for "Home to stay" for once in a long time... (I.e - please verify the comment I made for myself in today's review)
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
06:26:00 17 December 2004
