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  09:24:10  30 October 2004
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doggydog
Tripping on waste
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On forum: 03/06/2004
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"I have been reading too much junk-mail...."
  03:46:59  31 October 2004
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Amoki
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Wha? You expect me to use a 3-syllable word (magazine) instead of a 1-syllable word (clip)? Bugger!

Embrace yourself:
Only when it's cold out.

To be serious...
Aye, this story is severely lacking in the plot and character development area. It was meant to be. Complicated plots, dialogue, etc. are beyond the scope of a short story, especially one that's finished in a day.

Also, I was mostly inspired by the stories without much plot or character development or even dialogue. They just seemed to convey the most Zone-like atmosphere of any of the stories, even if in the end you're left with the same sensation you get looking at the bottom of an empty bag of potato chips (or crisps, if you prefer).
I'm making myself hungry.

Combine that with what you said, and I guess this story is the literary equivalent of junk food. Yum!
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Fair enoughy, sport. Most of the time, when I am giving advice I mostly aim for stories with my expectations of the top ten. I have been reading tooooooo much 'junk' literary contest entries all along.
  21:13:25  31 October 2004
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Icarus Nine
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Perhaps I should've used "dessert" instead of "junk food," since you seem to have gotten the wrong idea.

Unless you really do have a problem with ice cream sundaes, in which case I must respectfully disagree! And creme brulee... *drool*
  03:08:59  1 November 2004
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Amoki
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On forum: 07/31/2003
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Perhaps I should've used "dessert" instead of "junk food," since you seem to have gotten the wrong idea.

Unless you really do have a problem with ice cream sundaes, in which case I must respectfully disagree! And creme brulee... *drool*
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Don't worry mate, I love Bluebird Sour Cream chips and Whittaker's peanut slab. I love 'junk food' too Yours are the 'good' junk.

But unfortunately, the junk food I refer too are really junk... like China-made chocolate and perhaps Asian-styled waffle, stories like "The Reason" or "HBW vs. the Luchardion Zombies" and others... give me a night mare to think of it
 
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