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 08:09:00 11 July 2004 |
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Amoki
back with a vengeance
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On forum: 07/31/2003
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Amoki
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Prey of One, Predator of another (BYPASS) - amoki
well, this is mine, and the my trademark for loooooong too is in the story. I spend three months to do this story, so hopefully it can survive the harsh assault of Goodspeed.
Sypnopsis:
Until 14th of August 2011, Daniel was just another stalker in The Zone, pursuing the dreams of rubles while dodging dangers to get the sufficient cash to pay for his daily necessity in The Zone.
Until he received The Mission.
It was suppose to be a simple task of doing a passive escorting, but he stumbled upon a terrible incident, had to fight for his life via guile and strength, and eventually discovered a dark conspiracy that happened inside the military.
This story will bring you into the life in The Camp, the danger of The Zone, the torture room of a Spetnatz base
Great, independant Iraq War journalism: http://michaelyon.blogspot.com/
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
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| 08:23:19 11 July 2004 |
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Amoki
back with a vengeance
(V.I.P.)
On forum: 07/31/2003
Messages: 1729
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Part 1 - Genesis
1400.
The Zone was a beautiful place. Often hailed by conservationist as ' The Last Frontier on Earth', The Zone was indeed itself a wonder. The greenery was uncontaminated by the Human Industrial machine. The trees were left virtually untouched after the first Explosion, free to feed on the rich soil of the country once called 'The breadbasket of Mother Russia.'
But never be confused by illusion beauty with the hidden danger behind those crooked trees, or those green fields filled with colorful grass. The Zone was a very dangerous place with Death lurking behind those lands, waiting for the right moment to bring life into its embrace. Everyday, disillusioned stalkers went past the thin red line, hoping to either sooth their curiosity for the cause of The Zone or to satisfy their greed. Some never came back.
But for Daniel Gillian, that had never been any problem to him. He was a very cautious sort of person who made his plan, asked himself what would go wrong, and tacked every alternative. He was always ready for anything.
Daniel was prone in the thick undergrowth directly across the derelict building of the given coordinates for some time now. He checked his map again. Yes, he was on the right place.
Something was wrong, he sensed. It was just too damn quiet. A trap? There were rumors of things like that happened in The Zone. But the scientist did not look like a cheat. This couldn
Great, independant Iraq War journalism: http://michaelyon.blogspot.com/
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
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| 19:59:40 11 July 2004 |
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Amoki
back with a vengeance
(V.I.P.)
On forum: 07/31/2003
Messages: 1729
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Didn't this originally have 6 parts? I've got this version with 6, but I'm not totally sure it's the completely edited finished version, but since you've now got it up, I can start reading it.
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Yes, it has 6 parts. Unfortunately, editing term specificallly for the forum takes a llllooooot of time, just like yours and Ian_C. But again, it is not like I care, as long people take a fair shot at reading them.
Great, independant Iraq War journalism: http://michaelyon.blogspot.com/
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
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| 19:47:03 28 July 2004 |
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Amoki
back with a vengeance
(V.I.P.)
On forum: 07/31/2003
Messages: 1729
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I can't find part 5 and 6 anywhere on the site, and I'm not sure my version of part 4 is the most recent. Do you think you could email me the whole series?
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Well, you did read them after all!  . I think this is part of my testing mechanism to see whether people read them or not- that's why I am so sure
There is suppose to be an old version, butI guess I deleted them because they are too messy.
I will post them within 12 hours time- part 5 and finale
Great, independant Iraq War journalism: http://michaelyon.blogspot.com/
From the halls of Montezuma To the shores of Tripoli'
We fight our countrys battles In the air', on land, and sea.
First to fight for right and freedom , And to keep our honor clean,
We are proud to claim the title Of United States Marines.
Our flags unfurl'd to every breeze From dawn to setting sun';
We have fought in every clime and place Where we could take a gun.
In the snow of far-off northern lands And in sunny tropic scenes,
You will find us always on the job - The United States Marines.
Here's health to you and to our Corps Which we are proud to serve;
In many a strife we've fought for life And never lost our nerve.
If the Army and the Navy Ever gaze on Heaven's scenes,
They will find the streets are guarded By United States Marines. - US Marines Hymn
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